内容正文:
话题
写作指导
[2018沈阳
说明养成好习惯的重要性]
⑦佳句积累
开头
1.Progress is a life-long thing.If you stop your step,others will overtake you.
2.Good behavior plays an important role in our life.It can make the world a peaceful place.
3.As the saying goes,"Failure is the mother of success.We need to learn lessons from failure.When
another chance comes,we will get closer to success.
4.Don't be afraid of pressure.It's sometimes the power that pushes us forward.
中间
1.As students,it's important for us to behave well at school.
2.Some students may think the school rules are too strict,but they really do good for us.Following the
school rules is helpful for us to be more self-disciplined(自律的).
3.Besides,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
4.We should believe in ourselves,because confidence is the key to success.
5.You should always look on the bright side of life,and imagine that you will have a happy and
successful future.
6.Difficulties are everywhere,but do not be afraid of them.Never give up and do your best.You will get
a completely different result.
7.I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest time.
结尾
1.No efforts,no progress.Put efforts into all your things,and I believe you can make great progress.
2.The earlier we learn to be independent,the better it is for our future.So begin with the tiny
things now.
3.Time and tide wait for no man.Take action and make good use of your every minute.
4.Believe that you are stronger than you seem and you are smarter than you think.
⑦典例精讲
生活中充满变化,我们唯有积极地面对并做出改变,才能收获更多的成长。假定你是李辉,你校
英文网站正在开展以“改变的力量”为主题的征文活动。请你结合自己的亲身经历,用英语写一篇
短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)你遇到的问题;
(2)你做出的改变;
(3)你的收获。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Life is full of changes.
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话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
一战成名新中考
Step1细审题
审内容:以“改变的力量”为主题写一篇短文。
审人称:讲述自己遇到的问题、做出的改变和自己的收获,全部应用
人称。
审时态:讲述自己遇到的问题和做出的改变均为讲发生在过去的事情,应用
时;讲述自己的收
获,相当于讲述一个道理,应用
时。
Step2搭框架,扩要点
★开头:要点1→你遇到的问题(fail,exam,grade,poor)
★中间:要点2→你做出的改变(make a change,ask..for advice,make a plan,set goals)
①
②
③
★结尾:要点3→你的收获(changes are important,never give up,make changes)
①
②
Step3连接成篇
初阶范文
高阶范文
Life is full of changes.Last term,I
Life is full of changes.Last term,I failed an
failed an important English exam.The grade
important English exam and felt really down.Looking at
was poor.And I felt really down.I thought I
the poor grade,I knew I had to make up my mind to
had to do something different to make a
do something different to make a change.I turned to
change.I asked my teacher for advice.Then
my teacher for advice.Then I started to develop good
I made a study plan and set some goals.I
learning habits,such as making a study plan,setting
spared thirty minutes to read English and
goals,and keeping reviewing my lessons every day.
kept reviewing my lessons every day.After a
After a month,I was glad to find my efforts pay off.
month,I made great progress.
From this experience,I have learned that changes
From this experience,I have learned
can play an important role in our growth.No matter
that changes are important in our growth.
what difficulties we meet,we should never give up
When we meet difficulties,we should never
easily,but make changes actively.
give up easily,but make changes actively.
?写作攻关
写作1
[2025泰安改编]假定你是李辉,你的英国笔友Lida发来邮件说她经常感到很压抑,总是处于负
面情绪中。请你结合以下图表提示,给她回一封邮件,给她提出合理建议。
话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语
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Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
Your Experience
The Ways
The Importance
◆What happened?
communicate with others
help solve the problems
How did you deal with it?
◆take exercise
avoid causing more trouble
◆…
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Linda,
I'm so sorry to hear that you are in negative emotions.Don't worry.I can help you.
Yours,
Li Hui
写作2
市英文网站正在开展以“承诺一青春的担当”为主题的征文此赛。假定你是李辉,请你用英
语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)你做出过什么样的承诺:
(2)你为什么要做这个承诺;
(3)你是如何履行这个承诺的。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Every promise means responsibility and action.
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话题读写思维训练·辽宁英语【写作攻关】
Hope you can handle the negative emotions and live a
写作1
pleasant life.
Dear Linda,
Yours,
I'm so sorry to hear that you are in negative
Li Hui
emotions.Don't worry.I can help you.
写作2
Last term,I couldn't understand some basic points in
Every promise means responsibility and action.
Last year,I made a promise to my mum that I would
chemistry,and made several mistakes in an exam.I felt
improve my grades at least 30 scores in total.
down and worried for a week.Later,I communicated with
So,it was time for me to keep my promise.First,I
话
my teacher.She was patient and gentle.She gave me useful
made a study plan in detail and stuck to it every day.
advice on how to study effectively.So you can turn to
Second,I tried to work out every problem by asking my
someone you trust,who can lead you to the bright side.
teachers or friends for help.Third,I reviewed all my
写
Besides,you can do more sports,like running or swimming,
subjects I had learned every week,especially the key
思
which can make you relaxed and help you regain energy.
points.It was hard,but I didn't give up.
By the end of the year,I had made great progress.I
练
Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.It
became more confident than before.At the same time,
helps you solve problems and avoid causing more trouble.
keeping a promise benefited me a lot.
话题6职业启蒙,职业精神
Passage 1
【正文】1-5 ACBDB6-10 ADABD
【核心词句预知】1.跟随某人的步伐2.让某人发疯
【拓展设问】1.D
3.闲坐着4.失去兴趣5.不可能6.参加考试
2.Yes,I dream of being a doctor in the future,because I
7.使某人退缩8.长话短说9.在某事上有天赋
want to help people who are sick to recover.Saving lives
10.到…为止
and making others feel better will bring me joy and
【正文】1-4ADAC
satisfaction..(开放性设问,言之有理、言之有物即可。)
Passage 2
【写作攻关】
【核心词句预知】1.随着…的快速发展2.为…提
My Dream Job
供…3.走进,步入4.满足某人的特殊需求
Everyone has his dream job.And mine is to be an
5.带领某人做某事6.而不是7.同时
environmental engineer in the future.
【正文】1-4BCBD
I choose this job because our planet is facing more and
Passage 3
more environmental problems.Last year,I watched a
【核心词句预知】1.问题的答案2.一…就…
documentary about rivers being polluted,which made me
3.梦想;梦见4.根据,按照5.横渡6.似乎…;
realize how important it is to protect the environment.As an
看起来好像…7.另一方面8.坚持你的梦想
environmental engineer,I will come up with ways to clean
9.对某人来说做某事是不可能的。
polluted water and reduce waste.
【正文】1-4CAEB
To achieve this dream,I will study hard in science and
Passage 4
math now,since they are important for engineering.I also
【核心词句预知】1.紧张地摇头2.用低沉的声音
plan to join the school's environmental club to learn more
3.把…加到…里4.实现某人的梦想5.用…
skills.I believe with hard work,my dream will come true.
填满…6.拥抱真正的自己
话题7劳动实践与创新
Passage 1
Passage 3
【核心词句预知】1.介意做某事2.够不着的地方
【核心词句预知】1.喜欢做某事2.过去常常做某事
3.从开始到结尾4.(时间等)流逝5.收拾,整理
3.以…为食4.跑开5.安装6.被…接受
6.期望…7.一个小小的奖励8.集中于…
L正文】1-5 BACDB6-10 DACBC
【正文】1-4EDCB
【拓展设问】1.D
Passage 2
2.I learn that we should pay attention to the little things
【核心词句预知】1.快节奏的生活2.一种无私的表现
around us.If we are interested in something,we should
3.与…联系/连接4.即使5.亲近感6.增强某
keep to it.Maybe we can use our interests to solve
人的自信心7.把…加到…里8.出错
realistic problems in the future.(开放性设问,言之有
【正文】1-4BAED
理、言之有物即可。)
【拓展设问】I think I can do some house cleaning and Mom
Passage 4
can have a good rest after work.I can also cook some food
【核心词句预知】1.从…掉下来2.想出3.确保
for her,such as fish,tomato noodles,or some juice.(开放
4.如此…以至于…5.从事…6.迫不及待要
性设问,言之有理、言之有物即可。)
做某事7.梦想着…8.毕竟
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参考答案·辽宁英语