内容正文:
应用文写作专项
“Music and Emotion”
开播致辞第二段突破
讲师:王雪冰
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考情解码
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考情解码
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学习目标
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从“事实句+扩充句”到“高级句型升级
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会写、写优、写亮第二段
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智能导览·极速定位
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考情解码
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体系构建
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核心突破
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实战演练
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目录
CONTENTS
体系构建
考情分析 第一节(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,你校英语广播站计划开设一个全新的版块“Music and Emotions”。现请你以广播站的名义写一篇开播致辞,内容包括:
1. 开播目的;
2. 版块介绍。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
写作目标 • 聚焦:开播致辞第二段(3-4句核心段)
• 掌握:“事实句+扩充句”基础结构
• 升级:用高级句型让表达更出彩
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主题短语储备
事实类短语(陈述核心信息)
• play soft music, share stories behind classic songs, invite students to talk about favorite music, collect music recommendations
扩充类短语(补充细节/效果)
• ease study pressure, carry deep emotions, connect with classmates, make the program more interesting
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训练一
基础“事实句+扩充句
1.This new section will play soft music every Wednesday.(事实句)+这些轻柔的旋律能缓解你的学习压力,帮你在忙碌一天后放松下来。(扩充句)
2.We will share stories behind classic songs. (事实句)+这些动人的故事承载着深厚的情感,能让你更好地理解音乐的力量。(扩充句)
The gentle melodies can ease your study pressure and help you relax after a busy day.
These touching stories carry deep emotions and let you better understand the power of music.
训练一
基础“事实句+扩充句
3.We will invite students to talk about their favorite music. (事实句)+分享你的感受能让你和有相同喜好的同学产生共鸣,让节目更有趣。
Sharing your feelings can let you connect with classmates who have the same taste and make the program more interesting.
结果/影响
训练二 基础版→高级句型
1.This new section will play soft music every Wednesday. The gentle melodies can ease your study pressure and help you relax after a busy day.(定从)
This new section will play soft music every Wednesday. The gentle melodies, which can ease your study pressure, will help you relax after a busy day.
2.We will share stories behind classic songs. These touching stories carry deep emotions and let you better understand the power of music.(现在分词短语)
We will share stories behind classic songs. Listening to these stories, you can better understand the power of music.
训练二 基础版→高级句型
3.We will invite students to talk about their favorite music. Sharing your feelings can let you connect with classmates who have the same taste and make the program more interesting.(with复合结构)
We will invite students to talk about their favorite music. With more students joining in, the program will become more interesting.
训练三 连句成段
1. 引出目的/原因
• 为了……(To...)
• 鉴于……(In view of...)
• 由于……(Due to...)
• 考虑到……(Considering...
2. 递进/补充信息
• 此外……(Furthermore...)
• 另外……(In addition...)
• 不仅如此……(What’s more...)
• 更重要的是……(More importantly...)
3. 转折/让步
• 然而……(However...)
• 尽管如此……(Nevertheless...)
• 虽然……(Although...)
• 相反……(On the contrary...)
4. 总结/收尾
• 综上所述……(To sum up...)
• 总之……(In conclusion...)
• 因此……(Therefore...)
• 最后……(Finally...)
训练三 范文呈现
This new section will play soft music every Wednesday. The gentle melodies, which can ease your study pressure, will help you relax after a busy day. Besides, we will share stories behind classic songs. Listening to these stories, you can better understand the power of music. Moreover, we will invite students to talk about their favorite music. With more students joining in, the program will become more interesting.
训练四 实战演练
新任务:为“Music and Emotion”板块补充一个新活动
• 事实句提示:We will hold a monthly music recommendation contest.
要求:
1. 先补充2个事实句(用前面的短语);
2. 为每个事实句加扩充句(汉译英);
3. 升级为高级句型(至少用2种);
4. 用衔接词连成完整第二段,并标注高级句型。
训练四 小组互评
同伴互评标准:
• ✅ 有3-4句(事实+扩充)
• ✅ 至少2种高级句型
• ✅ 逻辑连贯(用衔接词)
总结升华
1. 核心流程回顾
短语储备 → 事实句 → 扩充句(汉译英) → 高级句型升级 → 连句成段
2. 得分技巧
• 扩充句:从“效果、细节、情感”切入,不空洞;
• 高级句型:定语从句、非谓语、with结构优先用,用对即得分;
• 连贯度:衔接词自然插入,避免生硬。
课后任务
现在你校要举办一次英文演讲比赛,主题是关于你所在城市的变化。请根据以下要点,写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 城市变化的简介;
2. 个人的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
The changes of my city
Ladies and gentlemen,
谢谢
聆听
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