内容正文:
一战成名目
第一部分写作佳句、范文分层诵读
一、云南书面表达芳情概览
》考情展示
年份及地市
标题
话题
命题形式
积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法
2025云南
An Unforgettable Class
全命题
多彩、有意义的学校生活
热爱大自然(研学、郊游、旅游、爬山、劳
2024云南
Getting Close to Nature
全命题
动实践等)
2023云南
Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life
身心健康
全命题
积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法/
2022云南
I Learned How to
半命题
自我认识与自我提升
2021云南
Doing Housework Makes Me
劳动实践
半命题
2020云南
My After-school Life
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
全命题
2019云南
A Weekend to Remember
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
全命题
2018云南
Doing Something Nice to
志愿服务
半命题
》近3年真题范文展示
★2025云南中考参考范文
An Unforgettable Class
As students,we have many classes on weekdays.There is one that has left the deepest impression on me.
Last Friday,our teacher,Ms.Wang,asked us to tell stories in English in class.When it came to my turn,my
heart raced and my voice shook.But instead of correcting my mistakes immediately,Ms.Wang smiled and said,
"Good imagination!Go on!"Being encouraged by her words,I spoke more freely.In the end,my story was inter-
esting and creative,and the whole class laughed and clapped.
What an unforgettable class!It not only helped me improve spoken English but also gave me more confidence.
★2024云南中考参考范文
Possible version 1
Getting Close to Nature
I still remember my last school trip to a local strawberry farm,which provided me with an opportunity to have
fun by getting close to nature.
On May 21,we had a guided tour to the farm with excitement.After learning how strawberries grow,our guide
led us to the fields.The minute we saw the lovely strawberries,we got extremely thrilled.The sweet smell also temp-
ted us to have a bite.Each of us couldn't help picking ripe fruits and tasting them.Then,we made jams with the
freshly picked ones under the guidance.
What a meaningful experience I had!Let's walk out and have fun in nature.
晨读册·云南英语
Possible version 2
Getting Close to Nature
Getting close to nature is of great benefit to us physically and mentally,making our life more colorful
and meaningful.
To begin with,not only does it exercise our body,but it also helps us enjoy the beauty of nature around us.
Secondly,it's a good way to relax ourselves after a tiring day.What's more,getting close to nature is full of fun and
can enrich our knowledge.We can learn some interesting facts about plants and animals.Last but not least,it makes
us realize the importance of protecting the environment and begin to take action.
In a word,getting close to nature helps us to be healthy in body and mind,rich in knowledge and responsible
in action.
★2023云南中考参考范文
Possible version 1
Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.It always makes me relaxed and full of energy.
It was sunny last Saturday morning.After finishing my schoolwork,I felt a little bit tired.So I went cycling
along the road in a forest not far from my home.What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it!Colorful
flowers were smiling at me.Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing.Soft wind
touched my face when I rode a little faster.I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is!I enjoy my life by doing sports.
Possible version 2
Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life
As a saying goes,"Knowledge makes a wiser man,and sports make a stronger man."Sports benefit us a lot in
our life.
First of all,doing sports can make us feel relaxed and energetic after a tiring day.What's more,it can help
make our body stronger and stronger.In addition,we can also learn how to cooperate with others by doing sports.
Furthermore,doing sports teaches us that patience and perseverance are important in our lives.
Let's take part in doing sports!Only by doing sports,can we live a healthier and happier life.
二、写作技巧点拨
1.认真审题:确定文章的主题、人称和时态。
2.“总—分—总”结构:三段式写作:第一段点题,第二段详细叙述或者介绍相关内容,第三段总结。
3.用词得当
(1)避免用词重复,尽量做到用词准确:
(2)引用名言警句,为文章添彩:
(3)恰当选用连接词(组)来衔接各句,使行文连贯,逻辑清晰。常用的连接词(组)具体如下:
作用
连接词(组)
表示并列
and;both...and...;not only...but also...;either...or...;neither...nor...;as well as
表示转折
but;yet;however;while;though;instead;unluckily;unfortunately;after all;otherwise
first(ly);second(ly);third(ly);to begin with;to start with;first of all;next;then;after that;
表示顺序
finally;at last;in the end
表示递进
besides;what's more;what's worse;in addition;more importantly
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晨读册·云南英语