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高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解
读后续写14:修车奇缘
On a sweltering (闷热的) August day in Savannah,Georgia,I was completely unaware that a life- changing moment was about to occur.After I loaded fresh peaches into my car and was about to leave the lively farmers' market,my car decided to play a cruel joke on me—it refused to start.
I had no choice but to have my car towed (拖车) to a garage nearby.Standing there,the intense heat beating down on me,I felt a lump forming in my throat.Just then,an elderly woman with a warm smile approached me."Car trouble,too?" she asked,her voice filled with concern.I nodded,frustration evident in my expression."I have no idea what's wrong.It was working fine earlier."
What began as a simple exchange soon turned into a sincere conversation.She listened attentively as I complained about my car,and then we found ourselves chatting comfortably.We shared stories about my travels,her cozy hometown,her husband's recent fishing hobby,and my parents' plans for a beach vacation.
"Your car is all set,ma'am," the mechanic called out to the woman.She thanked him with a gracious smile and turned to me.As she was about to walk away,she paused,as if in deep thought."I need to tell you something," she said,her tone serious."My daughter passed away a couple of years ago.Even now,small things can set me off.But every so often,I meet someone who reminds me of her,and today,you did.I believe that maybe it's a sign,that she's still with me in some ways.Talking to you has been a real pleasure." She smiled,her eyes glistening."When you get home,give your parents a big hug.They're lucky to have you."
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.
A few hours later, I pulled into the driveway at my parents' house.
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Paragraph 1:I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.我感到自己的眼泪在眼里涌了出来。
1. 我暗自思忖,她一定非常想念她的女儿。我很开心的是我让她暂时想起了她的女儿。(宾语从句)
I that she must miss her daughter very much and
.
2. 我强忍泪水,直视她的眼睛,然后脸上面带灿烂的笑容回应道:“谢谢你的建议,我坚信你的女儿成为你的孩子,一定感到骄傲和幸运。”
I , , and ,"Thanks for your advice and
."
3. 在听到我的话后,她眼中泛起一丝慰藉的光芒。/一丝慰藉在她的眼里闪烁着。
After , .
Paragraph 2:A few hours later, I pulled into the driveway at my parents' house.几小时后,我将车驶入父母家的车道。
4. 一到达父母家,我便下车,走向父母,给了他们一个大大的拥抱,说:“我很幸运和开心能成为你们的孩子。感谢你们养育和培养我。”
On ,I , and
, ,"I . and cultivating me".
5. 虽然父母惊讶地睁大了眼睛,但听到这话后,他们的泪水便不受控制地流了下来。
Although , after hearing my words.
6. 那一刻,仿佛我们是世界上最幸福的家庭。
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7. 正是那位年长的女士让我意识到,我应该珍惜与家人在一起的幸福时光,勇敢地表达我的爱。(强调句)
the elderly woman I should
and .
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Paragraph 1:I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.我感到自己的眼泪在眼里涌了出来。
1. 我暗自思忖,她一定非常想念她的女儿。我很开心的是我让她暂时想起了她的女儿。(宾语从句)
I thought to myself that she must miss her daughter very much and I was so delighted that I had reminded her of her daughter for a while.
2. 我强忍泪水,直视她的眼睛,然后脸上面带灿烂的笑容回应道:“谢谢你的建议,我坚信你的女儿成为你的孩子,一定感到骄傲和幸运。”
I held back my tears,looked straight into her eyes and replied to her with a broad smile on my face,"Thanks for your advice and I firmly believe your daughter must feel proud and lucky to be your child."
3. 在听到我的话后,她眼中泛起一丝慰藉的光芒。/一丝慰藉在她的眼里闪烁着。
After hearing my words, a trace of relief shone in her eyes.
Paragraph 2:A few hours later, I pulled into the driveway at my parents' house.几小时后,我将车驶入父母家的车道。
4. 一到达父母家,我便下车,走向父母,给了他们一个大大的拥抱,说:“我很幸运和开心能成为你们的孩子。感谢你们养育和培养我。”
On arriving at my parents' home,I stepped out of the car,walked up to my parents and gave them a big hug, saying ,"I am lucky and happy to be your child. Thank you for raising and cultivating me".
5. 虽然父母惊讶地睁大了眼睛,但听到这话后,他们的泪水便不受控制地流了下来。
Although they widened their eyes in surprise,their tears flowed down their cheeks uncontrollably after hearing my words.
6. 那一刻,仿佛我们是世界上最幸福的家庭。
At that moment,it was as if we were the happiest family in the world.
7. 正是那位年长的女士让我意识到,我应该珍惜与家人在一起的幸福时光,勇敢地表达我的爱。(强调句)
It was the elderly woman that made me realize I should cherish the happy time with my family and express my love bravely.
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Paragraph 1:我感到自己的眼泪在眼里涌了出来。我暗自思忖,她一定非常想念她的女儿。我很开心的是我让她暂时想起了她的女儿。我强忍泪水,直视她的眼睛,然后脸上面带灿烂的笑容回应道:“谢谢你的建议,我坚信你的女儿成为你的孩子,一定感到骄傲和幸运。”在听到我的话后,她眼中泛起一丝慰藉的光芒。/一丝慰藉在她的眼里闪烁着。
I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.I thought to myself that she must miss her daughter very much and I was so delighted that I made her remind her of her daughter for a while.I held back my tears,looked straight into her eyes and replied to her with a broad smile on my face,"Thanks for your advice and I firmly believe your daughter must feel proud and lucky to be your child."After hearing my words, a trace of relief shone in her eyes.(77)
Paragraph 2:几小时后,我将车驶入父母家的车道。一到达父母家,我便下车,走向父母,给了他们一个大大的拥抱,说:“我很幸运和开心能成为你们的孩子。感谢你们养育和培养我。”虽然父母惊讶地睁大了眼睛,但听到这话后,他们的泪水便不受控制地流了下来。那一刻,仿佛我们是世界上最幸福的家庭。正是那位年长的女士让我意识到,我应该珍惜与家人在一起的幸福时光,勇敢地表达我的爱。
A few hours later, I pulled into the driveway at my parents' house.On arriving at my parents' home,I stepped out of the car,walked up to my parents and gave them a big hug, saying,"I am lucky and happy to be your child. Thank you for raising and cultivating me".Although they widened their eyes in surprise,their tears flowed down their cheeks uncontrollably after hearing my words.At that moment,it was as if we were the happiest family in the world. It was the elderly woman that made me realize I should cherish the happy time with my family and express my love bravely.(89)
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