内容正文:
英语
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写作技巧点拨
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一、巧用衔接词
作用 连接词(组)
表示并列 and; both…and…; not only…but also…; either…or…;
neither…nor…; as well as
表示转折 but; yet; however; while; though; instead; unluckily;
unfortunately; after all; otherwise
表示顺序 first(ly); second(ly); third(ly); to begin with; to start with; first
of all; at last; in the end; next; then; after that; finally
表示递进 besides; what's more; what's worse; in addition
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作用 连接词(组)
表示时间 when; while; as; now; at present; recently; before; after; after
a while; at first; later; soon; suddenly; as soon as; from now
on; till
表示条件 if; unless; as long as
表示原因 because; because of; as; for; since; thanks to; for the reason
that
表示结果 so; therefore; as a result; so…that…
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作用 连接词(组)
表示让步 though; although; even if; no matter what/how/who/when;
whatever; however; whoever; whenever
表示目的 so that; in order that/to; so as to
表示对比 while; on the one hand…, on the other hand…
表示举例 for example; for instance; such as; like; take…for example
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作用 连接词(组)
表示观点 in my opinion; in my view; as for me; from my point of
view; as far as I'm concerned
表示解释
说明 in fact; actually; in addition; in that case
表示强调 in fact; above all
表示概括 in a word; in short; in conclusion; on the whole; generally
speaking; all in all
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二、句式丰富
1.巧用it相关的句型
(1)It's + adj.(+ for/of sb.)+ to do sth. 做某事(对某人来说)是……的。/
(某人)做某事是……的。
It's so kind of you to help me work out this problem.
(2)It is of great importance/help/use/… (for sb.) to do sth. 做某事
(对某人来说)是很重要的/有帮助的/有用的/……
It is of great importance for us to develop good study habits.
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(3)It's time to do/for/that… 是(做)……的时间了。
It's time to take action.
(4)It's one's duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的责任。
It's our duty to keep and spread our traditional culture.
(5)It is reported/said/believed/expected that… 据报道/据说/人们相信/预
计……
It is believed that good habits help us make more achievements.
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2.巧用比较等级句型
在写作中恰当运用形容词和副词的比较等级,可以使句型结构更丰富,
表达更多样化。
常用的句型有以下几种:
(1)原级:as + 形容词/副词原级 + as…
He thinks math is as difficult as English.
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(2)比较级:“the + 比较级…, the + 比较级…”表示“越……,就越……”
“比较级 + and + 比较级/more and more + 多音节形容词/副词原级”表示
“越来越……”
①The more we communicate with our parents, the fewer problems we
will have.
②Online payment makes our lives more and more convenient.
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(3)最高级:one of + the + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词复数,表示
“最……的……之一”
“the + 序数词 + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词单数 + 比较范围”表示“……
中第……最……的……”
①Plastic pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in
the world.
②China is the third largest country in area in the world.
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3.巧用There be句型
(1)Our school has lots of rules, and all of us should follow them.
→There are lots of rules in our school and all of us should follow
them.
(2)We hope that every student will have a computer on their desks in the
future.
→We hope that there will be a computer on every student's desk in the
future.
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4.巧用感叹句
(1)Looking back at the days we spent together, we were happy.
→Looking back at the days we spent together, how happy we were!
(2)The astronaut in Tiangong Classroom has taught us a lot of useful
knowledge.
→What useful knowledge the astronaut in Tiangong Classroom has
taught us!
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5.巧用主从复合句
(1)状语从句
①It is impolite of children to cut in. Their parents are talking.
→It is impolite of children to cut in when their parents are talking.(时间)
②I think you'd better relax. You finish the two days' work.
→I think you'd better relax after you finish the two days' work.(时间)
③It will rain tomorrow. We will stay at home.
→If it rains tomorrow, we will stay at home.(条件)
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④He is young. He has the dream of being a hero like his father.
→Although he is young, he has the dream of being a hero like his
father.(让步)
⑤Lily decides to learn Chinese well. She wants to work in China in the
future.
→Lily decides to learn Chinese well because she wants to work in
China in the future.(原因)
⑥We should keep on protecting the environment. We can have a better
earth.
→We should keep on protecting the environment so that we can have a
better earth.(目的)
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⑦Mike studied very hard. He improved much in all his subjects this
term.
→Mike studied so hard that he improved much in all his subjects this
term.(结果)
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(2)定语从句#5.2
先行
词 例句
人 The man is making a speech. The man is my father.
→The man who/that is making a speech is my father.
(先行词作主语)
事物 I'll never forget those days. We spent those days together.
→I'll never forget those days that/which we spent together.
(先行词作宾语)
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先行
词 例句
时间 I remember the day. We met on that day for the first time.
→I remember the day when we met for the first time.
(先行词作状语)
地点 This is a small town. I was born in the small town.
→This is the small town where I was born. (先行词作状语)
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6.巧用倒装句
(1)In this way, we can learn English well.
→Only in this way can we learn English well.
(2)We didn't have supper until he returned home.
→Not until he returned home did we have supper.
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三、评分标准
档次 分值 语言要求
五档 13~15分 较好地完成了规定的写作任务。
包含了所有内容要点,能围绕要点适当发挥,内容具
体、丰富,词数符合要求;应用了较丰富的语言结构和
词汇,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯,表达清楚,书
写规范;没有或几乎没有语言错误。
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档次 分值 语言要求
四档 10~12分 基本完成了规定的写作任务。
包含了所有内容要点,并有一定发挥,内容比较丰富,
词数符合要求;应用的语言结构和词汇能满足任务要
求,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,书写较为规范;有少量
语言错误。
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档次 分值 语言要求
三档 7~9分 完成了部分写作任务。
包含了多数内容要点,并有所发挥,内容不够丰富、具
体,词数较少;句子不够通顺,行文不够连贯,书写不
够规范;语言错误稍多。
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档次 分值 语言要求
二档 4~6分 仅完成少数写作任务。
只包含了少数内容要点,内容过少;多数语句不完整,
表达不清晰,行文不连贯,书写不规范;语言错误较
多。
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档次 分值 语言要求
一档 0~3分 未能完成写作任务。
只包含了1个内容要点或所写内容与题目要求几乎无
关,内容过少;语言不通顺,用词很不准确,书写难
辨;错误过多,几乎难以读懂。
评分说明:相同的错误不重复计算。#1.1
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