题型06 书面表达15篇（上海专用）（中考典例+热点话题练）-2026年中考英语总复习（上海专用）

题型06 书面表达15篇 (上海专用) 【题型知识点细目表】 题号 难度 知识点 1 适中 意见/建议,文体活动 2 较难 学校设施,计划 3 适中 文体活动,记叙文 4 适中 文体活动,爱好,应用文 5 较难 畅想未来,应用文 6 较难 教育,议论文,意见/建议 7 较难 科学技术,议论文 8 较难 中华文化,应用文,礼仪与习俗 9 适中 青少年问题,议论文 10 较难 社团/俱乐部,个人信息,应用文 11 较难 微信/微博/短视频,议论文 12 适中 计划,环境保护 13 适中 方法/策略 14 适中 阅读 15 较易 意见/建议 【中考真题】 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你所在的社区计划举办名为“时间管理 (time management)”的培训，现就培训方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下培训方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人王先生，邮件须包含以下内容： (1) 你是否会参加此培训，并简述理由； (2) 针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 培训方案 (training plan) 目的 教授时间管理的方法 对象 (participant) 13~17岁的学生 形式 (way of training) 阅读 时间 七月每周六上午7~10点 地点 社区广场 注意： 1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Mr Wang, I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. As for the activity form, I think it should be improved. For example, we can find some experienced celebrities to share their stories. Of course, we can also ask classmates or teachers around us to share their stories. Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I look forward to attending this training and gaining valuable insights that will help me manage my time more efficiently. Thank you for considering my feedback. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，想参加此次培训； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。简述自己参加培训的理由，并针对活动方案提出建议； 第三步，书写结语。期待此次培训。 [亮点词汇] ①improve提高 ②share分享 ③ask ab. to do sth.请某人做某事 ④helpful有用的 ⑤look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. (宾语从句) 2．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,      I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.      For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one. Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.      Thank you for reading my e-mail.                                                                                                                                                                          Yours,                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想； 第二步，介绍喜欢的理由； 第三步，表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer to do更喜欢做某事 ②turn to求助于 ③suffer from遭受 [高分句型] ① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句） ②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句） 【热点话题练习】 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容包括： ●照片的题目 ●照片的简要描述 ●照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Moment of School It was taken during last year’s autumn sports day, and captured our class relay team crossing the finish line. In the image, four students are passing the baton with determined expressions, while classmates cheer wildly in the background. The golden sunlight highlights our unity and energy. This moment symbolizes not only our teamwork but also the spirit of overcoming challenges together. Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks. It represents growth, friendship, and the joy of collective effort. For me, this photo is a treasure of my junior high life. It reflects the warmth of our campus community and the unforgettable memories we’ve created. It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要忽略要点提示，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍照片的标题，并简要描述； 第二步，介绍这张照片体现的精神和意义； 第三步，总结这张照片对自己的意义和校园生活的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①determined expressions坚定的表情 ②not only...but also不仅……而且 ③the spirit of……的精神 [高分句型] ①Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share.（that引导的宾语从句） 4．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. 假如你是李华，学校要组织学生参加“生活技能体验”和“博物馆探索”的项目活动，每位学生可以报名参加一个项目。你会报名参加哪个项目? 请写一封邮件给班主任张老师，告诉他你的决定，并说明理由。 Training of living skills· the last week of June · stay on a farm for a week · live with team members and local people · cook meals by yourself, feed animals... Exploration of museums· first Saturday every month from March to June · visit different museums in the city · guided by professional researchers · learn history, explore science, … 注意： 1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Mr. Zhang, I am writing to tell you that I would like to join the “Training of living skills” project. I think it is a great chance to improve my practical skills. During the week on the farm, I will learn to cook meals and feed animals by myself. This experience will help me become more independent. I also look forward to working with team members and local people. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于报名项目及理由的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“告诉老师自己想参加的项目”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“在农场一周的活动安排、自己能学到的东西、期待和团队成员及当地人合作”几个方面重点说明选择该项目的理由； 第三步，书写结语。表达“感谢老师考虑”的话语。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要做某事 ②practical skills实践技能 ③look forward to期待 ④by myself我自己 [高分句型] ①I think it is a great chance to improve my practical skills.（宾语从句） ②This experience will help me become more independent.（一般将来时表将来） 5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊 (2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动，现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开，让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你 (李华) 写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长 (Mr. Li)，信的内容应包括：你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”？它有什么功能和特点？你为何选择这件物品？ 以下物品供参考：一张纸币 (a banknote)；一支中性笔 (a gel pen)；一辆共享单车 (a shared bicycle)；一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)；一份印刷的报纸 (a printed newspaper) …… (注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Mr. Li, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to put a gel pen into the “2040 Time Capsule”. This pen writes smoothly and has a comfortable grip. It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing. I choose it because it represents our daily learning tools. In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信; ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中放入“时间胶囊”的物品的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’d like to put a gel pen into the ‘2040 Time Capsule’.”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“物品的功能和特点以及选择该物品的原因”几个方面重点介绍放入“时间胶囊”的物品的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望2040年的青少年打开胶囊后能有所了解”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②smoothly顺畅地 ③comfortable舒适的 ④represent代表 [高分句型] ①It can be used for writing notes, doing homework, or drawing.（被动语态） ②In 2040, when teenagers open the capsule, they’ll see how we studied and created with such a simple yet useful item.（时间状语从句和宾语从句） 6．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My view on going to the tutorial center” (以“补习班上课之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 由于升学的压力，现在越来越多的学生选择在课余去上补习班 (tutorial center)。有的人认为补习班上课可以弥补课堂学习的不足，帮助提升成绩和能力。而有的人认为补习班学习纯粹是浪费时间。你怎么看？请以“My view on going to the tutorial center”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 The following is for reference only. (以下问题仅供参考) *Are you for or against going to the tutorial center for extra classes? *What are your reasons? *What do you think is the best way to improve your academic performance (提升学业成绩)? 注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My View on Going to the Tutorial Center    I believe going to the tutorial center is helpful. If we are weak in a subject, it can help us understand better. The teachers there can give us more practice.      In order to improve our academic performance, we should develop good habits. It is important for us to finish homework on time and review regularly. Besides, we can ask teachers for help after class.     In a word, going to the tutorial center is useful, but we shouldn’t depend on it too much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确观点，并说明理由； 第二步：给出提高学习成绩的建议； 第三步：总结，首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①helpful有帮助的 ②improve提升 ③depend on依靠，依赖 [高分句型] ①I believe going to the tutorial center is helpful. (宾语从句) ②If we are weak in a subject, it can help us understand better. (条件状语从句) ③It is important for us to finish homework on time and review regularly. (it作形式主语) 7．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Is AI a good helper?” (请以“AI是一个好帮手吗?”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 随着科技的飞速发展，人工智能(AI)已逐渐融入我们的日常生活。像ChatGPT、Kimi、DeepSeek等AI工具的出现，让学习、工作和交流变得更加高效。你认为AI是一个好帮手吗? 请结合具体例子谈谈你的看法和感受。 注意： 1) 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       I think AI is a great helper. For example, when I do homework, AI tools like DeepSeek can quickly provide useful information. They help me learn faster and solve difficult problems. Also, AI makes our lives more convenient, such as by giving weather reports or translating languages. However, we should not depend on AI too much. We still need to think by ourselves. In short, AI is a good helper if we use it wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时（讨论普遍事实和个人观点） ③提示：需结合具体例子说明AI是否是好帮手，避免个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确观点——开头直接表明立场； 第二步：举例论证——用学习、生活等具体例子支持观点（如“help with homework”“weather reports”）。 第三步：总结建议——强调合理使用AI的重要性，并简要总结。 [亮点词汇] ①provide提供 ②convenient 方便的 ③wisely 明智地 [高分句型] ①For example, when I do homework, AI tools like DeepSeek can quickly provide useful information.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ②They help me learn faster and solve difficult problems.（运用了and连接的并列动词结构） ③AI is a good helper if we use it wisely.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the following situation. （请根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。《上海城市周报》 (Shanghai Citylife Weekly) 打算出版一期特刊，庆祝中国与加拿大建交55周年，现正要求民众叙写眼中的中国魅力。 假设你是中学生李华，请选择中国文化的某一个方面（如传统节日，传统艺术，传统手工艺，传统饮食，风俗习惯），向加拿大友人展现一个充满魅力的中国，让他们对中国文化留下深刻美好的印象。 （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Chinese traditional festivals are full of charm. The Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China, brings families together. During the festival, people clean houses, put up red couplets and enjoy big family dinners. Besides, children can get lucky money in red envelopes. How exciting it is to receive lucky money! Everyone feels happy and excited. I hope Canadian friends can come to experience this festive atmosphere. You will love it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确主题——选择春节作为代表，直接点明其重要性； 第二步，具体列举春节典型活动，展现节日氛围； 第三步，表达邀请——呼吁加拿大友人来体验，强化文化交流目的。 [亮点词汇] ①charm魅力 ②traditional传统的 ③besides除此之外 [高分句型] The Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China, brings families together. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My views on using mobile phones”. (以“我对手机使用的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 现在越来越多的学生拥有手机，而且会沉迷其中——手机购物、刷短视频、打游戏……应该如何合理使用手机？请谈谈你对这个问题的看法。 (注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Views on Using Mobile Phones    Nowadays, more and more students have mobile phones. However, some spend too much time on shopping, watching videos or playing games. I think mobile phones are useful because they help us study and communicate. But we should use them properly. Firstly, set a time limit for phone use every day. Secondly, focus on learning instead of playing. Finally, join more outdoor activities with friends. If we can do these, phones will become good tools for our life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引入话题，指出当前学生拥有手机的普遍现象，并点出部分学生滥用手机的问题，为下文表达观点做铺垫；   第二步，明确核心观点——手机兼具实用性与滥用风险，需合理使用，树立全文论述中心；   第三步，提出具体的合理使用建议，从时间限制、使用重心、户外活动三个维度展开，使观点更具说服力；  第四步，总结全文，展望合理使用手机带来的积极效果，升华主题。   [亮点词汇]   ①more and more 越来越多   ②spend time on 花费时间在……上   ③focus on 专注于   ④outdoor activities 户外活动   [高分句型]   ①If we can do these, phones will become good tools for our life. （if引导条件状语从句） ②I think mobile phones are useful because they help us study and communicate. （because引导原因状语从句）   10．Write an English composition with at least 60 words on the topic (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，你校的科学探究社团正在招募社员，以期面向校内中外师生深化科学探索精神。请你给科学探究社团写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为社团成员的理由以及你会在社团中做什么。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Science Club, I am Li Hua, a student who is passionate about science. I want to join your club to learn more and share ideas with others. I am good at doing experiments and working in a team. I can help organize activities and take notes during meetings. I will also encourage everyone to discuss scientific topics. I believe I can contribute to the club. Please give me a chance. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文，为自荐信； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考生应注意要求中的内容，不遗漏要点，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并表明写信目的； 第二步，说明个人优势及在社团中的具体计划； 第三步，表达期待并礼貌结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①passionate热情的 ②organize组织 ③contribute贡献 [高分句型] ① I am Li Hua, a student who is passionate about science. (运用了who引导的定语从句) ② I believe I can contribute to the club. (运用了宾语从句) 11．Write a composition with at least 60 words according to the context given. (根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 微信朋友圈 (WeChat Moments) 已经成为社交平台中广受欢迎的一部分，人们可以在上面与朋友分享生活的点滴。最近，学校青少年论坛上就“是否应该允许父母查看自己的朋友圈”这一话题展开了热烈讨论。不同学生持有不同观点，有人认为应开放，有人则倾向于屏蔽父母。 对此，你是怎么看的呢？请结合自身经历或所见所闻谈谈你的观点。(注意：短文中不得出现个人姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Should Parents Be Allowed to View Our WeChat Moments? WeChat Moments is a popular platform to share daily life with friends, and the discussion about whether parents can view it has attracted students’ attention. In my opinion, we shouldn’t fully block parents but keep our Moments open properly. Parents care deeply about us, and viewing WeChat Moments is an easy way for them to know our recent life. Last term, I shared my exam stress on it. My mom saw it, talked to me gently and prepared my favorite snacks to cheer me up, which made me feel warm. We all need some privacy, so we can choose not to share certain personal thoughts. But full blocking will hurt parents’ feelings. Proper communication with them can balance privacy and their care. Thus, Moments can be a bridge between us and our parents, not a wall. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“父母是否可看朋友圈”的话题，亮明“适当开放、不屏蔽”的观点； 第二步，以自身经历为据，说明适当开放能让父母了解我们、给予关爱； 第三步，承认隐私需求，反对完全屏蔽，强调沟通可平衡隐私与父母关爱。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s opinion在某人看来 ②care about关心，在意 [高分句型] ①My mom saw it, talked to me gently and prepared my favorite snacks to cheer me up, which made me feel warm. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②We all need some privacy, so we can choose not to share certain personal thoughts. (含so的并列复合句) 12．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 学校打算开展以“建设绿色校园”(“Building a Green Campus”)为主题的环保周系列活动，目前正在向全校师生征集活动计划。假设你是李华，请你从以下两种系列活动中挑选一种，并为其写一份详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排(时间、地点、人员及活动准备等)。 植树护绿(Planting Trees) 垃圾分类(Trash sorting) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I choose “Trash sorting” for the Green Campus Week. The purpose is to help students master recycling skills. Activities will be held from March 12th to 16th. On Monday, teachers will give lectures in the auditorium to explain sorting methods. From Tuesday to Thursday, volunteers will guide classmates to sort lunch boxes in the cafeteria. On Friday, we’ll hold a sorting game on the playground with prizes. All students and teachers should prepare reusable gloves and read the sorting guidebook in advance. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己选择垃圾分类活动； 第二步，根据题干的要点，给出详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排等； 第三步，补充其他信息，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①from…to从……到 ②in advance提前 [高分句型] ①Activities will be held from March 12th to 16th. （被动语态） 13．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Less pressure, better life” (以“更少压力，更好生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 现代社会随着生活节奏的加快，来自生活、学习等各方面的压力越来越大，所以只有学会舒缓压力，才能更好地生活。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考) ●What’s the pressure in your daily life? ●How do you reduce the pressure? (Give at least 2 ways) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Less pressure, better life Pressure is one of the most serious problems in today’s world. Students are also under much pressure. As a result, some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. As a middle school student, I’m under pressure as well. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. I’m so busy that I have little time to relax or go over lessons myself. Last Monday evening, I had a long talk with my parents. I told them that I needed freedom to plan my time. After hearing all my reasons, they finally agreed. So I think good communication sometimes is the key to solving the problem. What’s more, finding a hobby is helpful in reducing pressure. I’m keen on sports. Playing basketball with my classmates after school for a while always makes me relaxed so that I can focus better on my study later. So there is no need to be afraid of pressure. Find some ways to deal with it, and we will be fine. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍压力是现代社会的严重问题，列举学生的压力； 第二步，介绍自己的压力以及减轻压力的方法； 第三步，呼吁积极应对压力。 [亮点词汇] ① under pressure 承受压力 ② go over lessons 复习功课 ③ be keen on 热衷于 [高分句型] ①I’m so busy that I have little time to relax or go over lessons myself.（结果状语从句） ②I told them that I needed freedom to plan my time.（宾语从句） ③Playing basketball with my classmates after school for a while always makes me relaxed so that I can focus better on my study later.（目的状语从句） 14．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 时代的进步改变我们阅读经典的方式，除了纸质阅读 (read paper books) 经典以外，还有在线阅读 (read books online) 、视频阅读 (read books with videos) 等等。请你谈谈你喜欢用哪个方式阅读，并说明理由 (至少两个) 。 (注意：1、不得抄阅读文本。2、短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I prefer reading books with videos. Firstly, videos make classic stories more lively and interesting. For example, when I read Journey to the West, the video showed the Monkey King’s actions clearly, which helped me understand the story better. Secondly, videos often explain difficult parts in simple ways. Sometimes I feel confused while reading alone, but the video’s explanations solve my problems quickly. Although paper books are good, video reading brings classics closer to modern life. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：需围绕“阅读经典的方式”展开，说明个人偏好及至少两个理由，避免抄袭或泄露个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确表达偏好的阅读方式（如在线阅读、纸质阅读等）； 第二步：分点阐述理由（至少两点）； 第三步：总结观点，强调偏好方式的优势或对阅读体验的提升。 [亮点词汇] ①confused困惑的 ②lively生动的 [高分句型] ①For example, when I read Journey to the West, the video showed the Monkey King’s actions clearly, which helped me understand the story better. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②Although paper books are good, video reading brings classics closer to modern life.（although引导的让步状语从句） 15．Write a letter according to the give situation with at least 60 words (根据所给情境，写一封至少60个单词的回信。标点符号不占格。) 花园中学最近成立了一个“青少年建议专栏”，为学生提供在生活中遇到问题的解决建议。学生陆遥在上周给专栏的求助信中描述了她遇到的问题，如：因为她弄丢了朋友的书而失去朋友的信任、因学习成绩下降而失去信心、因同学的误解而感到伤心。假如你是专栏的负责人李明，请你选择其中一个方面给陆遥写封回信，说说你的建议并结合自己的经历进行说明。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Lu Yao, I’m sorry to hear about the misunderstanding between you and your friend. I understand how upsetting this must be. Here’s my advice: First, sincerely apologize and offer to replace the book. A small gesture, like writing a note or helping them with something, can also show your care. I once accidentally broke a friend’s favorite mug. After replacing it and spending time together, our bond grew stronger. Second, give them time. Trust takes effort to rebuild. Meanwhile, focus on being reliable in small things—like returning borrowed items promptly. Don’t lose hope! Friendships can heal with patience and honesty. Best wishes, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据所给题干进行写作。注意书信格式，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：对陆遥的遭遇表示遗憾； 第二步：给出自己解决问题的建议； 第三步：鼓励陆遥不要放弃希望。 [亮点词汇] ①between you and your friend你和你朋友之间 ②offer to replace the book主动提出把书换掉 ③focus on 专注于…… [高分句型] ①I understand how upsetting this must be. (how引导的宾语从句) ②Don’t lose hope! (祈使句) 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 题型06 书面表达15篇 (上海专用) 【题型知识点细目表】 题号 难度 知识点 1 适中 意见/建议,文体活动 2 较难 学校设施,计划 3 适中 文体活动,记叙文 4 适中 文体活动,爱好,应用文 5 较难 畅想未来,应用文 6 较难 教育,议论文,意见/建议 7 较难 科学技术,议论文 8 较难 中华文化,应用文,礼仪与习俗 9 适中 青少年问题,议论文 10 较难 社团/俱乐部,个人信息,应用文 11 较难 微信/微博/短视频,议论文 12 适中 计划,环境保护 13 适中 方法/策略 14 适中 阅读 15 较易 意见/建议 【中考真题】 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 你所在的社区计划举办名为“时间管理 (time management)”的培训，现就培训方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下培训方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人王先生，邮件须包含以下内容： (1) 你是否会参加此培训，并简述理由； (2) 针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 培训方案 (training plan) 目的 教授时间管理的方法 对象 (participant) 13~17岁的学生 形式 (way of training) 阅读 时间 七月每周六上午7~10点 地点 社区广场 注意： 1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【热点话题练习】 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容包括： ●照片的题目 ●照片的简要描述 ●照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. 假如你是李华，学校要组织学生参加“生活技能体验”和“博物馆探索”的项目活动，每位学生可以报名参加一个项目。你会报名参加哪个项目? 请写一封邮件给班主任张老师，告诉他你的决定，并说明理由。 Training of living skills· the last week of June · stay on a farm for a week · live with team members and local people · cook meals by yourself, feed animals... Exploration of museums· first Saturday every month from March to June · visit different museums in the city · guided by professional researchers · learn history, explore science, … 注意： 1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊 (2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动，现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开，让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你 (李华) 写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长 (Mr. Li)，信的内容应包括：你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”？它有什么功能和特点？你为何选择这件物品？ 以下物品供参考：一张纸币 (a banknote)；一支中性笔 (a gel pen)；一辆共享单车 (a shared bicycle)；一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)；一份印刷的报纸 (a printed newspaper) …… (注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My view on going to the tutorial center” (以“补习班上课之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 由于升学的压力，现在越来越多的学生选择在课余去上补习班 (tutorial center)。有的人认为补习班上课可以弥补课堂学习的不足，帮助提升成绩和能力。而有的人认为补习班学习纯粹是浪费时间。你怎么看？请以“My view on going to the tutorial center”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 The following is for reference only. (以下问题仅供参考) *Are you for or against going to the tutorial center for extra classes? *What are your reasons? *What do you think is the best way to improve your academic performance (提升学业成绩)? 注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Is AI a good helper?” (请以“AI是一个好帮手吗?”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 随着科技的飞速发展，人工智能(AI)已逐渐融入我们的日常生活。像ChatGPT、Kimi、DeepSeek等AI工具的出现，让学习、工作和交流变得更加高效。你认为AI是一个好帮手吗? 请结合具体例子谈谈你的看法和感受。 注意： 1) 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the following situation. （请根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。《上海城市周报》 (Shanghai Citylife Weekly) 打算出版一期特刊，庆祝中国与加拿大建交55周年，现正要求民众叙写眼中的中国魅力。 假设你是中学生李华，请选择中国文化的某一个方面（如传统节日，传统艺术，传统手工艺，传统饮食，风俗习惯），向加拿大友人展现一个充满魅力的中国，让他们对中国文化留下深刻美好的印象。 （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My views on using mobile phones”. (以“我对手机使用的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 现在越来越多的学生拥有手机，而且会沉迷其中——手机购物、刷短视频、打游戏……应该如何合理使用手机？请谈谈你对这个问题的看法。 (注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Write an English composition with at least 60 words on the topic (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，你校的科学探究社团正在招募社员，以期面向校内中外师生深化科学探索精神。请你给科学探究社团写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为社团成员的理由以及你会在社团中做什么。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Write a composition with at least 60 words according to the context given. (根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 微信朋友圈 (WeChat Moments) 已经成为社交平台中广受欢迎的一部分，人们可以在上面与朋友分享生活的点滴。最近，学校青少年论坛上就“是否应该允许父母查看自己的朋友圈”这一话题展开了热烈讨论。不同学生持有不同观点，有人认为应开放，有人则倾向于屏蔽父母。 对此，你是怎么看的呢？请结合自身经历或所见所闻谈谈你的观点。(注意：短文中不得出现个人姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 学校打算开展以“建设绿色校园”(“Building a Green Campus”)为主题的环保周系列活动，目前正在向全校师生征集活动计划。假设你是李华，请你从以下两种系列活动中挑选一种，并为其写一份详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排(时间、地点、人员及活动准备等)。 植树护绿(Planting Trees) 垃圾分类(Trash sorting) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Less pressure, better life” (以“更少压力，更好生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 现代社会随着生活节奏的加快，来自生活、学习等各方面的压力越来越大，所以只有学会舒缓压力，才能更好地生活。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考) ●What’s the pressure in your daily life? ●How do you reduce the pressure? (Give at least 2 ways) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 时代的进步改变我们阅读经典的方式，除了纸质阅读 (read paper books) 经典以外，还有在线阅读 (read books online) 、视频阅读 (read books with videos) 等等。请你谈谈你喜欢用哪个方式阅读，并说明理由 (至少两个) 。 (注意：1、不得抄阅读文本。2、短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．Write a letter according to the give situation with at least 60 words (根据所给情境，写一封至少60个单词的回信。标点符号不占格。) 花园中学最近成立了一个“青少年建议专栏”，为学生提供在生活中遇到问题的解决建议。学生陆遥在上周给专栏的求助信中描述了她遇到的问题，如：因为她弄丢了朋友的书而失去朋友的信任、因学习成绩下降而失去信心、因同学的误解而感到伤心。假如你是专栏的负责人李明，请你选择其中一个方面给陆遥写封回信，说说你的建议并结合自己的经历进行说明。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $