Unit4 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册教用课件(人教版)

该高中英语课件聚焦旅行经历类邮件写作与场景微续写，以主题引领情境写作导入，通过审题谋篇明确结构时态，遣词造句提供单元词汇句式，衔接成篇呈现范文，搭建从基础到应用的写作学习支架，帮助学生掌握写作脉络。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，应用文写作通过“审题-遣词-成篇”三步法训练语言组织，如用定语从句改写句子提升表达准确性，场景微续写积累环境心理词汇并结合西藏旅行场景仿写，增强语言运用灵活性。学生能系统提升写作技能，教师可借助结构化模块高效开展教学。

Period 4　Writing 1 主题引领 情境写作 PART 01 第一部分 2 写作一　应用文写作(旅行经历类邮件) 假定你是李华，去年暑假期间，你和父母一起去四川乐山旅游，你想给你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)写一封信，分享你的这次旅游经历。要点包括： 1.旅游过程； 2.邀请他下次一起去那里旅游。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 参考词汇：巨大的石佛(the Giant Stone Buddha)；峨眉山(Mount Emei 返回首页 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 返回首页 审题谋篇 返回首页 巧妙对接单元词汇 遣词造句 1．__________ adv.　　　　　字面上；真正地 2．_______________________ 令人惊叹 3．________ n. 风景；景色 4．____________ adj. 壮观的 5．_____ n. 山峰 6．___________ adj. 震惊的 7．________ 在黄昏 literally take sb.'s breath away scenery spectacular peak astonished at dusk 返回首页 巧用单元句式、语法 [第一段]　写信目的 1．我很高兴与你分享我去年暑假的一次真正迷人的旅行经历。 I'm glad ____________________________________________________ during my last summer holiday with you. to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had 返回首页 [第二段]　详述自己的旅行经历 2．七月七日，我和父母乘公共汽车去了四川乐山，一个以巨大的石佛闻名的地方。 On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province. Leshan ______________ the Giant Stone Buddha. 3．我们惊讶地发现佛像真的很大。 We ________________________ the Buddha is ______________． is famous for were astonished to find literally big 返回首页 4．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么的渺小。(现在分词短语作状语) _________________________________________________，I felt I was so small. 5．第二天，直到爬上了峨眉山的顶峰我们才欣赏到山上壮观的景色。(not...until) The next day，______________________________________________ _______________ we climbed to ____________ Mount Emei. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet we didn't appreciate the spectacular scenery of the mountain until the peak of 返回首页 6．那儿的风景令我们惊叹。 ________________________________________ 7．黄昏时分，我们踏上了归途。 __________，we made our way back. 8．我们都很累，但我们的乐山之旅确实令人难忘。 We were all tired，but our trip to Leshan _____________________. The scenery there took our breath away. At dusk was really unforgettable 返回首页 [第三段]　期待下一次旅行 9．我期待下次和你一起去那里。 I'm looking forward to _______________________________． going there with you next time 返回首页 靓化表达促提升 10．用定语从句改写句2 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．用强调句型改写句5 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. The next day, it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the spectacular scenery of the mountain. 返回首页 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 衔接成篇 返回首页 One possible version： Dear Tom， I'm glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. 返回首页 On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally big. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the spectacular scenery of the mountain. At dusk，we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable. I'm looking forward to going there with you next time. Yours， Li Hua 返回首页 假定你是李华，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游，你们玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历与你的英国笔友彼得(Peter)分享，请根据下列要点给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1.介绍你游览的地方； 2.旅游后的收获； 3.邀请他一起去那里旅游。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 返回首页 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 返回首页 One possible version： Dear Peter， I'm writing to share my travel experience with you. During this summer holiday, my parents and I went on a trip to Lhasa, which is located in the central Qinghai-Xizang Plateau, 3，650 metres above sea level and there are many places of interest in the downtown and suburb, including Potala Palace, Jokhang Temple and 返回首页 so on. We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century. And then, we appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Xizang Museum where we learnt some useful historical knowledge about Xizang. During our visit, we were all astonished by the natural scenery there, making us feel peaceful and quiet. 返回首页 I strongly suggest that you travel to Xizang with me next time and I'm sure you will have a wonderful time.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 返回首页     第一段 写信目的 1.Knowing that you want to know my last travel to Shanghai，I'm writing to share my travel experience with you. 我知道你想了解我上次去上海的旅行，所以我写邮件与你分享我的旅游经历。 2.I'd like to share my travel experience with you.I went on a seven-day trip to Beijing last winter vacation, which is really an unforgettable memory. 我想跟你分享我的旅行经历。去年寒假我去北京旅行了七天，这真是一段难忘的记忆。 返回首页     第二段 详述自己 的旅行 经历 1.Last week, my parents and I visited/paid a visit to Shanghai，and we stayed there for three days.　上周，我和父母去参观了上海，我们在那里待了三天。 2.So on the night before we started, I was so excited that I couldn't fall asleep. 所以在我们出发前一天晚上，我太激动了以至于都睡不着了。 3.On our flight's arrival, we headed straight for our hotel. 飞机到达后，我们径直去宾馆。 返回首页     第二段 详述自己 的旅行 经历 4.After lunch，we went to the aquarium，where we were impressed by a wide variety of amazing marine life. 午饭后，我们去了水族馆。在那里，我们对各种各样神奇的海洋生物印象深刻。 5.After supper, we admired the fascinating night scenes of the city from a cruise ship. 晚饭后，我们在游船上欣赏了城市迷人的夜景。 6.Not only did it entertain me, but it also broadened my horizons. 它不仅让我开心，而且也拓宽了我的视野。 返回首页     第三段 表示感受 和期待 1.I'm looking forward to your reply at your convenience. 我期待着你方便时给我回复。 2.It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories. 这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。 返回首页 写作二　场景微续写(西藏旅行分享)     词汇 积累 [环境描写]　bay，scenery，spectacular，peak，freezing，thunder, frost，border，harbour，shore，mist，dusk [心理描写]　take sb.'s breath away，awesome，astonish [动作描写]　arise，bound，highlight，drill，anticipate，enrol，proceed to sth.，owe sth. to sb.，toast 返回首页 佳句积累 [动作描写]　The next morning，the two girls arose early to take the train to Lake Louise，passing through the Canadian Rockies. [环境描写]　1.Seen from the train window，the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive. 2.Edmonton is freezing cold in winter，with daily temperatures averaging －10℃. 返回首页 佳句积累 3.The train thundered on，through the rolling hills.The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red，gold, and orange，and there was frost on the ground，confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada. 4.Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea. [情感描写]　1.However，they did not anticipate seeing such an open country，and were truly amazed. 2.Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls. 返回首页 [场景呈现]　暑假期间，汤姆去了西藏旅游，这是他期待已久的地方。那里的风景简直壮观。从到达的那一刻起，他就被令人惊叹的景色所震撼。高耸的雪山、广阔的草原和清澈的湖泊让他屏息。无论他看向哪里，西藏的自然美景都让他感到敬畏。他旅行的一个亮点是参观布达拉宫，这座建筑奇迹是西藏丰富历史和文化的见证。宜人的天气和宁静的氛围增添了整体体验，使其更加难忘。 返回首页 During the summer vacation, Tom traveled to Xizang, 1.______________________________________________(名词作同位语；定语从句). The scenery there was spectacular. From the moment he arrived, he 2.______________________________________________. The towering snow-capped mountains, vast grasslands, and crystal-clear lakes 3._____________________. Everywhere he looked, a place that he had long anticipated visiting was astonished by the breathtaking landscapes took his breath away 返回首页 4._____________________________________________ (leave＋宾语＋宾语补足语). 5.__________________________________ was visiting the Potala Palace, an architectural wonder that stood as a testament to Xizang's rich history and culture. 6.______________________________ ___________________ added to the overall experience, 7.______________________________(现在分词作状语). the natural beauty of Xizang left him in awe One of the highlights of his trip The pleasant weather and the quiet making it even more memorable atmosphere 返回首页 短语必记 1.be full of joy　　　　　充满喜悦 2.feel delighted 　　　　感到高兴 3.be overjoyed 　　　　欣喜若狂 4.be in high spirits 　 情绪高昂；精神饱满 5.jump for joy 　 高兴地跳起来 6.grin from ear to ear　　笑得合不拢嘴 7.be on top of the world 非常快乐；感到无比幸福 8.burst into laughter 　　突然大笑起来 9.laugh one's head off 　　笑得非常厉害 返回首页 必背金句 1.The children were full of joy when they received their presents. 孩子们收到礼物时满心欢喜。 2.The team was in high spirits after winning the match.　球队赢得比赛后士气高昂。 3.She's been on cloud nine since she got engaged.　她订婚以来一直非常高兴。 返回首页 必背金句 4.The kids jumped for joy when they saw the surprise party. 孩子们看到惊喜派对时高兴得跳了起来。 5.Everyone burst into laughter when he told the joke. 他讲笑话时，大家都笑了起来。 6.We laughed our heads off watching that comedy show. 我们看那部喜剧节目时笑得前仰后合。 返回首页 $