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Period 4 Writing
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主题引领 情境写作
PART
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第一部分
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写作一 应用文写作(关于出国学习的议论文)
最近,某英语报社通过网上论坛举办了一场讨论,话题为“Should high school students be encouraged to have international study tours?”。作为一名读者,你参与了此次讨论,请你根据此次讨论的结果用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.参加国际游学的好处;
2.可能遇到的问题;
3.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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审题谋篇
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巧妙对接单元词汇
遣词造句
1.___________ n. 适应
2._________ vt. 激励
3.______________ 体验……
4.______________________ (使)花一大笔钱
5.______________ 举止规范
6._____________ n. [pl.]环境
7._______ adj. 成熟的
adaptation
motivate
be exposed to
cost an arm and a leg
behave onself
surroundings
mature
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8.___________ vi.& vt. 增强
9._____ v. 否认
10.____________ n. (思考问题的) 角度;观点
11.___________ n. 能力
12.________ n. 前景
strengthen
deny
perspective
competence
outlook
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巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 引出话题
1.最近,家长送孩子出国游学越来越受欢迎。
___________________________ for parents to send their kids to have international study tours recently.
It is increasingly popular
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[第二段] 陈述国际游学的好处和弊端
2.国际游学确实给高中生带来了很大的益处。
International study tour ______________________________________
_________.
3.体验外国文化有助于获得国际视野,增强语言能力。(动词-ing短语作主语)
_____________________________ helps to _____________________ and _______________________________.
does bring great benefits to high school
Being exposed to foreign cultures
students
gain a global perspective
strengthen language competence
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4.不可否认,这将花费一大笔钱。
________________________________________________________
5.如果学生不够成熟,他们就不知道如何表现行为得体。 (“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构)
Students don't know _________________________ if ___________________________.
There is no denying that it will cost an arm and a leg.
how to behave themselves
they are not mature enough
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6.他们找不到任何亲戚或朋友来安慰和激励他们。
They can't find any relatives or friends _____________________________.
7.他们将很难适应陌生的环境。
They will ___________________________________________________
___________________________.
to comfort and motivate them
have great difficulty making an adaptation to the unfamiliar surroundings
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[第三段] 表明自己的观点
8.我认为这对高中生来说是一个绝佳的机会,因为它能帮助他们培养国际视野并学会独立。
I think it is such a good opportunity for high school students that it can ___________________________________________ and learn to be independent.
help them develop an international outlook
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9.因此,如果家长能负担得起,应该鼓励高中生参加国际游学。
So high school students ________________________________________
_______________________ if their parents can afford it.
should be encouraged to go on international study tours
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靓化表达促提升
10.用not only...but also...和倒装改写句3
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Not only does being exposed to foreign cultures help to gain a global perspective,but it also helps to strengthen language competence.
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11.用with复合结构合并句6和句7
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With no relatives or friends comforting and motivating them, they will have great difficulty making an adaptation to the unfamiliar surroundings.
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____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
衔接成篇
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One possible version:
It is increasingly popular for parents to send their kids to have international study tours recently.
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Indeed,international study tour does bring great benefits to high school students. Not only does being exposed to foreign cultures help to gain a global perspective,but it also helps to strengthen language competence. However,there is no denying that it will cost an arm and a leg. Moreover, students don't know how to behave themselves if they are not mature enough. With no relatives or friends comforting and motivating them,they will have great difficulty making an adaptation to the unfamiliar surroundings.
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Personally,I think it is such a good opportunity for high school students that it can help them develop an international outlook and learn to be independent. So high school students should be encouraged to go on international study tours if their parents can afford it.
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假定你是李华,你的美国笔友杰克逊(Jackson)最近在考虑是否要出国留学,他来信征求你的意见。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,阐述你的观点,并给出理由(不少于三个)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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Dear Jackson,
__________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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One possible version:
Dear Jackson,
I'm more than delighted to share my opinion on whether you should go to study abroad.Frankly, I hold the view that it makes good sense to study abroad.The reasons are as follows.
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To begin with, while we are studying abroad,being exposed to a foreign language setting makes the learning process engaging and effective.Moreover,bathed in a different culture of a foreign country,we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective.Last but not least, studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and makes us become better,which is the most important from my perspective.
All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一段
引出话题
1.I'm writing to tell you a discussion in our school about whether to study at home or abroad.
我写信是要告诉你我们学校一场关于是在国内还是出国学习的讨论。
2.A heated debate has been held in our class about whether to study at home or abroad.Opinions vary on this topic. 关于是在国内学习还是出国学习,我们班进行了一场激烈的辩论。关于这个话题众说纷纭。
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第一段
引出话题
3.Different people have different opinions about going abroad to study.
不同的人对出国留学有不同的看法。
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第二段
列举出国
学习的优
缺点
1.Studying abroad is often considered as a great opportunity which will lead to a bright future. 出国留学经常被认为是一个通向光明未来的好机会。
2.There is no better opportunity to improve a second language than studying abroad.
没有比出国留学更好的机会来提高第二语言水平了。
3.Living in a new environment,you can experience the new local conditions and customs,and broaden personal horizons.
生活在一个新的环境里,你可以体验全新的风土人情,拓宽个人视野。
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第二段
列举出国
学习的优
缺点
4.Some students may not be able to adapt to a new environment of studying and living.
一些学生可能无法适应新的学习和生活环境。
5.They have to deal with many unexpected hardships since they are away from their parents and homeland. 因为远离了父母和家乡,他们不得不应付许多意想不到的困难。
6.We will experience culture shock if we study abroad.
如果我们在国外学习,我们将经历文化冲击。
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第三段
个人观点
1.As the old saying goes,every coin has two sides.
俗话说得好,任何事物都有两面性。
2.Therefore,whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual. So take more factors into careful consideration.
因此,出国留学无论是好还是坏取决于个人。所以要仔细考虑更多的因素。
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写作二 场景微续写(导师助力留学之旅)
词汇
积累
[人物描写] recall, qualification, ambition→ambitious, tutor, messenger, advisor, behave, mature, competent, envoy, cooperate
[情感描写] feel at home,overwhelming,homesickness,motivated,expectation,depressed,optimistic, sincerely
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词汇
积累
[动作描写] comfort,participate in,speak up,engage in,get involved in,motivate,expose,grasp, strengthen, deny, gain, side with
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佳句积累 [动作描写] Six months ago,19-year-old Xie Lei said goodbye to her family and friends and boarded a plane for London.
[情感描写] 1.I was very excited but also quite nervous.
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佳句积累 2.Xie Lei was confused because she thought she knew less than other people.
3.Now halfway through her exchange year, Xie Lei feels much more at home in the UK.
4.British people are fascinated by our culture and eager to learn more about it, so I'm keen to share my culture with them.
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佳句积累 [主旨升华] 1.There are no great difficulties for a person who is brave, optimistic, and willing to work hard!
2.All in all, studying abroad helps to build character and increase people's understanding of cultural diversity while strengthening China and building a shared future for all.
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[场景呈现] 汤姆的导师在他国外留学期间提供了宝贵的支持。首先,导师通过指导汤姆完成具有挑战性的研究项目,帮助他提升了学术能力。为了让汤姆不拘束,导师真诚地鼓励他与同学合作并参与校园活动,这减轻了他的思乡之情。导师还让汤姆接触新的视角,鼓励他批判性地思考。通过教导汤姆如何在社交场合自信地表现,导师帮助他适应了新环境。此外,导师乐观的态度激励汤姆即使在困难时期也保持积极。
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Tom's tutor provided invaluable support during his study abroad journey. First, the tutor 1.______________________________________
________________________ by guiding him through challenging research projects. 2.___________________________,the tutor sincerely motivated him to cooperate with classmates and engage in campus activities, 3._________________________________(which引导非限制性定语从句). The tutor also exposed Tom to new perspectives, 4.____________________________________(现在分词短语作状语).
helped Tom strengthen his academic
To help Tom feel at home
which decreased his homesickness
encouraging him to think critically
qualifications
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By teaching Tom 5.__________________________(“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构) in social settings, the tutor helped him adapt to the new surroundings. Additionally, the tutor's optimistic attitude inspired Tom to stay positive even during tough times.
how to behave confidently
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短语必记 1.lend/give sb. a hand 伸出援手;帮忙
2.go out of one's way to help 不遗余力地帮助
3.be ready to help 乐于助人
4.assist sb. in doing sth. 帮助某人做某事
5.do sb. a favor 帮某人的忙
6.be there for sb. 支持某人;陪伴某人
7.help sb. out of a jam 帮助某人摆脱困境
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必背金句 1.He always lends a hand to his neighbors when they need help.
当邻居们需要帮助时,他总是伸出援手。
2.She always goes out of her way to help others, even if it means sacrificing her own time.
她总是尽力帮助别人,即使这意味着要牺牲自己的时间。
3.Can you do me a favor and pick up my package from the post office?
你能帮我个忙,去邮局取一下我的包裹吗?
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必背金句 4.He is always there for his friends when they need someone to talk to.
当朋友们需要找人倾诉时,他总是陪在他们身边。
5.She helped him out of a jam when he lost his job. 他失业时,她帮他摆脱了困境。
6.He is a warm-hearted man who always helps strangers in need.
他是个热心肠的人,总是帮助有需要的陌生人。
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