Unit4 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册教用Word(人教版)

本高中英语讲义聚焦旅行经历类应用文写作与场景微续写核心知识点，通过审题谋篇、遣词造句、衔接成篇的学习支架，系统梳理邮件格式规范、旅行过程描述、邀请表达等内容，辅以句型模板、词汇积累及改写练习，帮助学生从基础表达过渡到连贯写作。 该资料特色在于以真实情境驱动写作，通过提供“李华分享乐山旅行”范文及西藏旅行场景描写实例，培养学生语言组织与细节表达能力（语言能力）。融入定语从句、强调句型等语法运用及环境心理动作描写词汇积累，提升学生逻辑思维与创新表达（思维品质）。课中教师可依托支架引导分层教学，课后学生可借助范文与练习自主巩固，有效查漏补缺。

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(旅行经历类邮件) 假定你是李华，去年暑假期间，你和父母一起去四川乐山旅游，你想给你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)写一封信，分享你的这次旅游经历。要点包括： 1.旅游过程； 2.邀请他下次一起去那里旅游。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 参考词汇：巨大的石佛(the Giant Stone Buddha)；峨眉山(Mount Emei) ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．literally adv.　　　　　字面上；真正地 2．take__sb.'s__breath__away 令人惊叹 3．scenery n. 风景；景色 4．spectacular adj. 壮观的 5．peak n. 山峰 6．astonished adj. 震惊的 7．at__dusk 在黄昏 [第一段]　写信目的 1．我很高兴与你分享我去年暑假的一次真正迷人的旅行经历。 I'm glad to__share__a__truly__fascinating__travel__experience__that__I__had during my last summer holiday with you. [第二段]　详述自己的旅行经历 2．七月七日，我和父母乘公共汽车去了四川乐山，一个以巨大的石佛闻名的地方。 On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province. Leshan is__famous__for the Giant Stone Buddha. 3．我们惊讶地发现佛像真的很大。 We were__astonished__to__find the Buddha is literally__big． 4．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么的渺小。(现在分词短语作状语) Looking__up__at__the__large__head__and__down__at__the__large__feet,__I felt I was so small. 5．第二天，直到爬上了峨眉山的顶峰我们才欣赏到山上壮观的景色。(not...until) The next day，we__didn't__appreciate__the__spectacular__scenery__of__the__mountain__until we climbed to the__peak__of Mount Emei. 6．那儿的风景令我们惊叹。 The__scenery__there__took__our__breath__away. 7．黄昏时分，我们踏上了归途。 At__dusk,__we made our way back. 8．我们都很累，但我们的乐山之旅确实令人难忘。 We were all tired，but our trip to Leshan was__really__unforgettable. [第三段]　期待下一次旅行 9．我期待下次和你一起去那里。 I'm looking forward to going__there__with__you__next__time． 10．用定语从句改写句2 On__July__7，my__parents__and__I__took__a__bus__to__Leshan,__Sichuan__Province，which__is__famous__for__the__Giant__Stone__Buddha. 11．用强调句型改写句5 The__next__day,__it__was__not__until__we__climbed__to__the__peak__of__Mount__Emei__that__we__appreciated__the__spectacular__scenery__of__the__mountain. 　衔接成篇 ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Dear Tom， I'm glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally big. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the spectacular scenery of the mountain. At dusk，we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable. I'm looking forward to going there with you next time. Yours， Li Hua 假定你是李华，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游，你们玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历与你的英国笔友彼得(Peter)分享，请根据下列要点给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1.介绍你游览的地方； 2.旅游后的收获； 3.邀请他一起去那里旅游。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Dear Peter， I'm writing to share my travel experience with you. During this summer holiday, my parents and I went on a trip to Lhasa, which is located in the central Qinghai-Xizang Plateau, 3，650 metres above sea level and there are many places of interest in the downtown and suburb, including Potala Palace, Jokhang Temple and so on. We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century. And then, we appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Xizang Museum where we learnt some useful historical knowledge about Xizang. During our visit, we were all astonished by the natural scenery there, making us feel peaceful and quiet. I strongly suggest that you travel to Xizang with me next time and I'm sure you will have a wonderful time.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 写信目的 1.Knowing that you want to know my last travel to Shanghai，I'm writing to share my travel experience with you. 我知道你想了解我上次去上海的旅行，所以我写邮件与你分享我的旅游经历。 2.I'd like to share my travel experience with you.I went on a seven-day trip to Beijing last winter vacation, which is really an unforgettable memory. 我想跟你分享我的旅行经历。去年寒假我去北京旅行了七天，这真是一段难忘的记忆。 详述自己的 旅行经历 1.Last week, my parents and I visited/paid a visit to Shanghai，and we stayed there for three days.　上周，我和父母去参观了上海，我们在那里待了三天。 2.So on the night before we started, I was so excited that I couldn't fall asleep. 所以在我们出发前一天晚上，我太激动了以至于都睡不着了。 3.On our flight's arrival, we headed straight for our hotel. 飞机到达后，我们径直去宾馆。 4.After lunch，we went to the aquarium，where we were impressed by a wide variety of amazing marine life. 午饭后，我们去了水族馆。在那里，我们对各种各样神奇的海洋生物印象深刻。 5.After supper, we admired the fascinating night scenes of the city from a cruise ship. 晚饭后，我们在游船上欣赏了城市迷人的夜景。 6.Not only did it entertain me, but it also broadened my horizons. 它不仅让我开心，而且也拓宽了我的视野。 表示感受和期待 1.I'm looking forward to your reply at your convenience. 我期待着你方便时给我回复。 2.It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories. 这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。 写作二　场景微续写(西藏旅行分享) 词汇积累 [环境描写]　bay，scenery，spectacular，peak，freezing，thunder, frost，border，harbour，shore，mist，dusk [心理描写]　take sb.'s breath away，awesome，astonish [动作描写]　arise，bound，highlight，drill，anticipate，enrol，proceed to sth.，owe sth. to sb.，toast 佳句积累 [动作描写]　The next morning，the two girls arose early to take the train to Lake Louise，passing through the Canadian Rockies. [环境描写]　1.Seen from the train window，the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive. 2.Edmonton is freezing cold in winter，with daily temperatures averaging －10℃. 3.The train thundered on，through the rolling hills.The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red，gold, and orange，and there was frost on the ground，confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada. 4.Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea. [情感描写]　1.However，they did not anticipate seeing such an open country，and were truly amazed. 2.Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls. [场景呈现]　暑假期间，汤姆去了西藏旅游，这是他期待已久的地方。那里的风景简直壮观。从到达的那一刻起，他就被令人惊叹的景色所震撼。高耸的雪山、广阔的草原和清澈的湖泊让他屏息。无论他看向哪里，西藏的自然美景都让他感到敬畏。他旅行的一个亮点是参观布达拉宫，这座建筑奇迹是西藏丰富历史和文化的见证。宜人的天气和宁静的氛围增添了整体体验，使其更加难忘。 During the summer vacation, Tom traveled to Xizang, 1.a__place__that__he__had__long__anticipated__visiting(名词作同位语；定语从句). The scenery there was spectacular. From the moment he arrived, he 2.was__astonished__by__the__breathtaking__landscapes. The towering snow-capped mountains, vast grasslands, and crystal-clear lakes 3.took__his__breath__away. Everywhere he looked, 4.the__natural__beauty__of__Xizang__left__him__in__awe (leave＋宾语＋宾语补足语). 5.One__of__the__highlights__of__his__trip was visiting the Potala Palace, an architectural wonder that stood as a testament to Xizang's rich history and culture. 6.The__pleasant__weather__and__the__quiet__atmosphere added to the overall experience, 7.making__it__even__more__memorable(现在分词作状语). 短语必记 1.be full of joy　　　　　充满喜悦 2.feel delighted 感到高兴 3.be overjoyed 欣喜若狂 4.be in high spirits 情绪高昂；精神饱满 5.jump for joy 高兴地跳起来 6.grin from ear to ear　　　　　笑得合不拢嘴 7.be on top of the world 非常快乐； 感到无比幸福 8.burst into laughter 突然大笑起来 9.laugh one's head off 笑得非常厉害 必背金句 1.The children were full of joy when they received their presents. 孩子们收到礼物时满心欢喜。 2.The team was in high spirits after winning the match.　球队赢得比赛后士气高昂。 3.She's been on cloud nine since she got engaged.　她订婚以来一直非常高兴。 4.The kids jumped for joy when they saw the surprise party. 孩子们看到惊喜派对时高兴得跳了起来。 5.Everyone burst into laughter when he told the joke. 他讲笑话时，大家都笑了起来。 6.We laughed our heads off watching that comedy show. 我们看那部喜剧节目时笑得前仰后合。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $