摘要:
该高中英语课件聚焦应用文写作与读后续写核心训练,课堂导入结合真题情境(如“Fly Your Dream”英语周建议、地铁助人故事),通过“情境任务呈现—范文结构示范—写作要点提炼”的学习支架,衔接应用文交际功能与记叙文情感表达逻辑,帮助学生掌握写作规范与内容构思。
其亮点在于融合真实交际与情感体验,通过给外教提建议的应用文情境提升语言运用能力,读后续写中人物内心冲突(自我挣扎、助人行为)的描写培养思维品质(分析与推断)和文化意识(同理心与分享精神)。实例包括应用文范文的活动建议表述(主题班会、演讲比赛)和读后续写中流浪汉分享食物的细节(“cupping his hands around the bowl”“stopped to help the elderly”)。采用“真题情境+范文剖析”教学法,学生能高效掌握写作技巧,教师可直接借助真题与范文提升教学针对性。
内容正文:
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Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2025·河南适应性测试)假定你是李华,你校计划举行以“Fly Your Dream”为主题的英语周活动。现就活动的内容、形式征集建议,请你给负责本次活动的外教克里斯(Chris)写一封信,提出你的想法。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Hua,a senior 3 student in our school. I feel greatly privileged and excited to show my opinions on the approaching activity week with the theme of “Fly Your Dream”.
Personally, a theme class meeting, “I Have a Dream”, may be a good alternative, offering us students an opportunity to share our dreams freely. Additionally, each class can recommend a
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representative to join in a speech contest titled “Fly Your Dream”, which will serve as an inspiration for us to dream big and fight for a better future.
I'm really expecting the coming of the significant week. Sincere gratitude for your consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·南京六校联合调研)Walking on the street, the bitter cold of a December day in Washington, D.C.was ruining my mood. The temperature was below zero so I ducked into the subway station, hoping to get warm.
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Warmth came to my body as I settled onto a bench with a cup of hot coffee. Now I was ready to relax and do some serious people-watching. I noticed a homeless man seated nearby. The pleasant smell of delicious food from the subway food court (餐饮区) was tempting me to consider an early dinner. From the longing look in my neighbor's eyes it was obvious that he, too, noticed the good smell. I wondered how long it had been since he had eaten anything, expecting he would approach me for a handout (施舍
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物). But he never did. My head and heart were battling it out: the former telling me to mind my own business, and the latter urging me to make an immediate trip to the food court for him.
While this inner debate was fierce, a well-dressed young couple suddenly approached. “Excuse me, sir,” began the husband. “We just finished eating and our appetite wasn't as big as we thought. We hate to waste food. Can you help us out and put this to good use?” The kind stranger handed a large container with food. “Thank you.”
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came the grateful reply. Feeling good about what I had seen, but disappointed by my own lack of action, I observed my neighbor's response to his sudden good fortune.
He lifted the soup, cupping his hands around the steaming bowl. It was obvious that he was going to enjoy this miracle meal. He opened his mouth and suddenly, he stopped.
The reason for this unexpected behavior soon became clear. Entering the hall was a new arrival, in his seventies, hatless and
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gloveless. His lightweight jacket was a poor protection against cold. His face and hands were red and damaged. People around focused on him with pity and whispered at this sad sight.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
My neighbor was the only one taking action.____
Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food at the food court.____
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My neighbor was the only one taking action.Quickly pulling aside his miracle meal,my neighbor leaped up and guided the elderly man to share the seat. Numb with cold, the old man didn't expect the invitation,moving clumsily. Hardly had he seated himself when my neighbor tenderly put his down jacket over the older man's shoulders,slipping his arms into sleeves. Finally,he said, “Can you help me out? ”pointing to the meal and placing the steaming cup of
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soup in the stranger's hands. Seeing this, my head and heart stopped battling and I had my decision.
Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food at the food court.What my neighbor said exactly spoke my mind. With regret,I felt obliged to do the same. Respectfully and cautiously, I approached them with steaming soup and a sandwich. People around cast an approving smile in my direction.“Can you help me out?” I asked.“Why not?” he added jokingly,“But only if you go halfway
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with me on that sandwich,which is too much for a man of my age.” It wasn't until that day that I truly learned the meaning of sharing. I left the subway station feeling warmer than I had ever thought possible.
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