Unit 1 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册教用Word(人教版)

本高中英语讲义聚焦人物介绍类应用文写作与赛途逆袭场景微续写核心知识点，通过审题谋篇、单元词汇句式对接（如obtain, acknowledge等词汇及分词作状语语法）、靓化表达（句子合并）、三段式结构模板、实战演练，以及续写的语料积累和场景锤炼，构建完整学习支架。 该资料以“主题引领 情境写作”为特色，通过邓稼先典例与罗温·艾金森实战演练，对接单元词汇句式，培养语言能力。续写部分积累教材动作、人物描写语料，锤炼失败后分析错误、坚持练习的场景，提升思维品质与学习能力。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后助力学生利用模板和语料自主练习，查漏补缺。

Period 4 Writing 主题引领 情境写作 写作一 应用文写作（人物介绍类记叙文） 典例呈现 请你用英语写一篇短文介绍一位你最钦佩的中国科学家，内容包括： 1.生平简介； 2.主要成就。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Step 1 审题谋篇 Step 2 遣词造句 巧妙对接单元词汇 1．_ _ _ _ _ _ vt. 获得；赢得 [答案]obtain 2．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ vt. 承认 [答案]acknowledge 3．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ adj. 科学（上）的 [答案]scientific 4．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 致力于 [答案]commit oneself to 5．_ _ _ _ vt. 创建；建立 [答案]found 6．_ _ _ _ _ _ n. 理论；学说 [答案]theory 7．_ _ _ _ _ _ n. 酷爱；激情 [答案]passion 8．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ n. 机构 [答案]institute 9．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 担任；任职 [答案]take up a position 10．_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ adj. 非凡的；显著的 [答案]remarkable 巧用单元句式、语法 ［第一段］ 简要介绍人物的生平 1．邓稼先被誉为“中国核弹之父”。 Deng Jiaxian _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]is acknowledged as “the father of China's nuclear bomb” 2．邓稼先是我最钦佩的科学家。（who引导定语从句） Deng Jiaxian is the scientist _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]who I admire most ［第二段］ 介绍人物的经历、事迹以及取得的成就 3．他于1924年出生于安徽省。 He _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ in Anhui Province. [答案]was born in 1924 4．他热爱学习，并于1950年在美国普渡大学获得博士学位。 He _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ from Purdue University in America in 1950. [答案]had a passion for study； obtained his doctor's degree 5．一回到国内，他就在一所科研机构任职，致力于中国核弹和氢弹的研发。（Upon/On doing...；非限制性定语从句） _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ， he _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ， _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ of China's nuclear and hydrogen bombs. [答案]Upon/On returning to China； took up a position at a scientific research institute； where he committed himself to the development 6．他在物理学领域创立了许多开创性的理论。 He _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ in the field of physics. [答案]founded many groundbreaking theories ［第三段］ 简要评价人物 7．邓稼先为我国的发展作出了卓越的贡献，作为杰出的科学家，他将永远被铭记。 Deng Jiaxian _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and will always be remembered as an outstanding scientist. [答案]made remarkable contributions to the development of our country 靓化表达促提升 8．用分词短语作状语合并句1和句2 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ [答案]Acknowledged as “the father of China's nuclear bomb”, Deng Jiaxian is the scientist who I admire most. 9．用分词短语作状语合并句3和句4 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ [答案]Born in 1924 in Anhui Province, he had a passion for study and obtained his doctor's degree from the Purdue University in America in 1950. Step 3 衔接成篇   [答案] One possible version： Acknowledged as“the father of China's nuclear bomb”, Deng Jiaxian is the scientist who I admire most. Born in 1924 in Anhui Province, he had a passion for study and obtained his doctor's degree from Purdue University in America in 1950. Upon/On returning to China, he took up a position at a scientific research institute, where he committed himself to the development of China's nuclear and hydrogen bombs. He founded many groundbreaking theories in the field of physics. He died in Beijing in 1986. Deng Jiaxian made remarkable contributions to the development of our country and will always be remembered as an outstanding scientist. 实战演练 假如你最喜欢的喜剧演员是英国的罗温·艾金森（Rowan Atkinson），请根据下面的提示写一篇短文介绍这位喜剧演员。 1.英国著名喜剧演员，1955年出生于英格兰，毕业于牛津大学（University of Oxford）； 2.他所扮演的憨豆先生风靡世界，其丰富的肢体语言使人发笑； 3.他出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项，被誉为继查理·卓别林（Charlie Chaplin）之后的又一位喜剧大师。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。   [答案] One possible version: Born in 1955， Rowan Atkinson is a comedian who graduated from the University of Oxford. He is famous for many wonderful characters， among which the most well-known one is Mr. Bean. Mr. Bean is an internationally recognized comedy character on TV and in films， whose rich and funny body language can always make people roar with laughter. As a comedian， Mr. Atkinson's witty humour not only amuses people but also makes people think. People all over the world are impressed by his unique acting style. His outstanding acting skills have won him many awards and he is regarded as another comedian master after Charlie Chaplin. As far as I am concerned， he does deserve our respect and admiration. 笔尖粮仓 应用文写作赋能站——人物介绍 第一段 开门见山，简要介绍人物的个人信息 1.Born on 10 December， 1960， Lang Ping is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. 郎平出生于1960年12月10日，被广泛认为是一位杰出的排球教练。 2.Known as a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty， Li Shizhen was born in 1518. 李时珍生于1518年，是明代著名的医学家。 3.Having a gift for writing， he made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up. 他有写作的天赋，下定决心长大后要成为一名作家。 第二段 介绍人物的经历、事迹以及取得的成就 1.She studied at a local high school and graduated from Peking University.她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 2.In order to finish the task， he visited mountains， called on ordinary people， tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.为了完成这项任务，他翻山越岭，走访百姓，品尝各种药草，甚至亲自做实验。 3.It took him 37 years to finish the task， and his book is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine.他花了37年才完成这一任务，他的著作被认为对中医药的发展作出了巨大贡献。 4.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important part in scientific research.由于在科学研究中发挥了重要作用，他于1998年获奖。 5.After graduating from Xi'an Jiaotong University， he received a doctor's degree in computer science.从西安交通大学毕业后，他获得了计算机科学博士学位。 第三段 简要评价人物 1.She will be in the hearts of the people forever. 她将永远活在人民的心中。 2.She devoted her whole life to scientific research and her scientific findings benefited people all over the world. 她毕生致力于科学研究，她的科学成果造福了全世界人民。 3.Madame Curie made great contributions to the development of science， which paved the way for further research.居里夫人对科学的发展作出了巨大的贡献，为进一步的研究铺平了道路。 写作二 场景微续写（赛途逆袭） 积累教材续写语料——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 ［动作描写］ commit oneself to， acknowledge， defeat， analyse， flee， found， insist on， come to power， encounter， mourn ［人物描写］ committed， academic， property， novelist， politician， genius， gentle， passion→passionate， extraordinary， moustache， peculiarity， professor， remarkable 佳句积累 ［人物描写］ 1.Tu Youyou， a committed and patient scientist， was born in Ningbo， China， on 30 December 1930， and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. 2.Einstein was not only a genius；he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people. 3.To the public， he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man. ［比喻］ He had a thick moustache and long white hair， which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. ［主旨升华］ It is indeed an honour for China's scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world. 重拳锤炼续写场景——积累内化应用提升 ［场景呈现］ 在数学竞赛中遭遇失败后，汤姆感到沮丧，但他没有放弃。他决心弄清楚自己的错误，并花了几个小时分析自己的表现。尽管遇到了许多挑战，但对数学的热情激励着他，他依然坚持每天练习。几个月的努力得到了回报，他不仅提升了自己的能力，还对复杂问题有了更深的理解。他的努力使他在下一次竞赛中赢得了最高奖项，证明了失败只是通往成功的垫脚石。 After 1.   in the math competition， Tom felt upset but refused to give up. He 2.   and spent hours 3.   . Despite encountering numerous challenges， he 4.   every day， 5.   （过去分词短语作状语）. Months of hard work paid off when he not only improved his skills but also developed a deeper understanding of complex problems. His efforts led him to win the top prize in the next competition， 6.   （现在分词短语作状语）. [答案] 1．experiencing a defeat 2．committed himself to understanding his mistakes 3．analysing his performance 4．insisted on practicing 5．fueled by his passion for maths 6．proving that failure is just a stepping stone to success 笔墨延展 读后续写多元话题库——毅力与奉献 短语必记 1.dedicate oneself to 致力于 5.devote time and energy to 投入时间和精力于 2.give one's all倾尽全力 6.selfless dedication无私奉献 3.go above and beyond全力以赴 7.work tirelessly for...不辞辛劳地为……工作 4.put one's heart and soul into全心全意投入 8.sacrifice personal interests for牺牲个人利益以换取 必背金句 1.He works tirelessly day and night to improve the community's living conditions. 他不分昼夜、不知疲倦地工作，以改善社区的居住条件。 2.He has devoted his entire career to finding a cure for the disease. 他整个职业生涯都致力于寻找这种疾病的治疗方法。 3.The teacher gave her all to ensure that every student received a quality education， which in turn helped students achieve their full potential. 这位老师倾尽全力确保每个学生都能获得优质教育，这反过来帮助学生充分发挥他们的潜力。 4.Because she dedicated her life to improving the lives of poor children， she has become a role model for many. 因为她致力于改善贫困儿童的生活，她已经成为许多人的榜样。 5.He put his heart and soul into helping those in need， often sacrificing his own time. 他全心全意帮助那些有需要的人，常常牺牲自己的时间。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $