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Period 5 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
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写作一 应用文写作(个人简介)
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写作二 场景微续写(意料之外的实验搭档)
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写作一 应用文写作(个人简介)
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假定你是李华,学校英语社团(English Club)现要招募新成员,你有意参加该社团。请用英语给社长怀特(White)写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人情况介绍;
3.表达期望。
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注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
__________________________
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&1& 审题谋篇
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&2& 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1.____________________ 渴望做某事
2._________ adj. 爱交际的;外向的
3._____ n. 小伙子;男人;家伙
4._________ adj. 自信的;有把握的
5._______________ 盼望;期待
6.___________ n. 性格;个性
be anxious to do sth.
outgoing
guy
confident
look forward to
personality
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巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 点明写信目的
1.我很高兴听说学校英语社团需要新成员,我渴望加入。
I am glad to hear that ________________________ in the school English club, and ____________________.
new members are wanted
I'm anxious to join it
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[第二段] 简要介绍个人情况
2.我是一个外向并且自信的小伙子,性格坚强。
I'm ____________________________ and _______________________.
an outgoing and confident guy
have a strong personality
3.十年的英语学习使我能流利地用英语与他人交流。(动词-ing形式作主语)
________________________________ makes me communicate with others in English fluently.
Having learnt English for ten years
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4.我有一些特殊的技能,比如唱歌和演讲,而且我也容易相处。
I have some special skills, ____________________________________
________, and I am also _____________________.
such as singing songs and making speeches
easy to get along with
5.我有信心能在未来的社团活动中发挥积极的作用。
I'm confident that I can __________________ in the future activities of the club.
play an active part
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[第三段] 表达期望
6.我期望早日收到您的答复。
_______________________ your early reply.
I am looking forward to
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靓化表达促提升
7.用“not only...but also...”改写句4
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I not only have some special skills, such as singing songs and making speeches, but I am also easy to get along with.
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&3& 衔接成篇
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One possible version:
Dear White,
I am glad to hear that new members are wanted in the school English Club and I'm anxious to join it.
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Firstly, I'm an outgoing and confident guy and have a strong personality. Having learnt English for ten years makes me communicate with others in English fluently. Besides, I not only have some special skills, such as singing songs and making speeches, but I am also easy to get along with. I'm confident that I can play an active part in the future activities of the club.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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假定你是红星高中高一新生李华, 你的英语老师在第一堂英语课上要求学生做自我介绍,并用英语写一篇发言稿。你的发言稿应包括以下内容:
1.个人基本信息(姓名、年龄、班级等);
2.个性及学习方式;
3.爱好和将来的打算。
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注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua aged 15.I'm a senior one student at Hongxing Senior High School.
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I'm outgoing and I love sports. I like discussing problems with my classmates, and I take notes while reading. My favourite subject is physics because I find physics experiments very interesting and some physics problems are worth studying. Playing basketball and swimming are my hobbies. Many students like me because of my good performance on the sports field. I plan to become a physicist in the future, which I think I can make contributions to our country.
That's all. Thank you!
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第一段
自我介绍 1.I'm Li Hua, a senior one student of Xinhua Middle School.
我是李华,是新华中学的一名高一学生。
2.I have been learning English for nearly ten years, so I have a good knowledge of English.
我学习英语已经近十年了,因此我精通英语。
3.I'd like to make full use of free time to take part in sports activities.
我想充分利用空闲时间参加体育活动。
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第一段
自我介绍 4.I often help my teacher manage the class and I think I am a good helper.
我经常帮助我的老师管理班级,我认为我是一个好帮手。
5.I'm an outgoing girl and I'm easy to get along with. 我是一个外向的女孩,很容易相处。
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第一段
自我介绍 6.I'm open-minded and easy-going. I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like making friends.
我心胸开阔,性格随和。我认为我的英语足够好,能与外国人交流,而且我喜欢交朋友。
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第二段
性格、爱好 1.Last but not least, I am warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
最后但同等重要的是,我很热心并愿意帮助有需要的人。
2.I'm fond of dancing but travelling is my favourite.
我喜欢跳舞,但旅游是我的最爱。
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第三段
表达期望 1.My dream is to be an excellent teacher in the future.
我的梦想是在未来成为一名优秀的老师。
2.I hope my dream of going to a key university can come true.
我希望我上一所重点大学的梦想能够实现。
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PART
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写作二 场景微续写(意料之外的实验搭档)
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词汇积累 [情感描写] anxious, annoyed, frightened, confident, look forward to
[动作描写] exchange, lecture, concentrate on, leave...alone, explore, organise, improve, revise
[人物描写] female, male, nationality, designer, senior, outgoing, make an impression, guy, junior, curious, personality
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佳句积累 [主旨升华] A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
[情感描写]1.I'm not outgoing so I'm a little anxious right now.
2.This morning, I was worried that no one would talk to me. But I was wrong. I didn't feel awkward or frightened at all. I miss my friends from junior high school, but I believe I will make new friends here, and there's a lot to explore at senior high.
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佳句积累 [心理描写]1.I want to make a good first impression. Will I make any friends?What if no one talks to me?
2.I feel much more confident than I felt this morning. I think that tomorrow will be a great day!
[人物描写] My name is Ann Wells and I'm a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.
[排比] I look good, think fast, and play hard.
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[场景呈现] 我们都在忐忑不安地等待实验搭档的宣布。我一直期待一个性格外向、易于相处的女生搭档。但令我失望的是,我的搭档是一个非常严肃的小伙子,他总是穿着深色的衣服,对别人的工作总是不满意。得知这一点,恐惧的洪流涌上我的心头。尽管焦虑又紧张,我别无选择,只好集中精力和他一起设计我们的项目。然而,我逐渐发现他有着极好的个性。我相信我们的努力会有回报的。
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1._______________________________(分词短语作状语),we were all waiting for the announcement of our experiment partner. 2.___________________________________________ who was outgoing and easy to get along with. To my disappointment, my partner was an extremely serious guy 3._____________________________________________________________________________________(定语从句). Learning that, a flood of fear welled up in me.4.____________________(形容词短语作
Having butterflies in our stomachs
I had been looking forward to a female partner
who always wore dark clothes and was always not satisfied with others' work
Anxious and nervous
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状语),I had no choice but 5.______________________________ our project with him. However,I gradually 6.____________________________________________.I was confident that our efforts would pay off.
to concentrate on/upon designing
found that he had an excellent personality
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短语必记 1.rub one's hands restlessly 不安地搓手
2.full of anxiety满怀焦虑
3.one's heart races/beats wildly/violently with fear恐惧使人心跳加速
4.with uneasiness不安地
5.one's heart in one's mouth心提到嗓子眼
6.hands shake手发抖
7.feel one's throat tight and one's mouth dry感到喉咙发紧、嘴发干
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必背金句 1.Full of anxiety, he reached for his cellphone, only to find it out of power.
他满怀焦虑地伸手去拿手机,却发现它没电了。
2.She looked at the clock with growing uneasiness—he was already two hours later.
她看着钟表,心里越来越不安——他已经迟到两个小时了。
3.His heart beat/raced wildly and his legs trembled. 他的心狂跳着,双腿颤抖。
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必背金句 4.She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身发抖,感觉如坐针毡。
5.He was very anxious to be hired, but as for the interview, he was too nervous to show his true ability.
他非常渴望被录用,但就面试来说,他太紧张了而不能发挥出自己的真实水平。
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