内容正文:
Sport has the power to change the world. It has the power to inspire, it has the power to unite people in a way that little else does.
—Nelson Mandela
体育运动拥有改变世界的力量,其激励人心、团结众人的力量,在某种程度上难以匹敌。
——纳尔逊·曼德拉
Faster,higher, stronger
主题语境:人与社会——体育精神
UNIT 3
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Section Ⅳ
Writing—Writing about a sporting moment
本单元的写作任务是 “描述一个运动时刻”。描述一个体育运动时刻属于记叙文文体,写作时,可以从事件的起因、经过、结果以及情感等方面作简单介绍。文章以第一、第三人称为主,常用一般过去时对过往事件进行描述。
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
[常用词汇]
①fight for...
为……拼搏
②dream of
梦想
③compete with
与……竞争
④win honor for
为……赢得荣誉
⑤take part in
参加
⑥cheer on
加油
⑦fulfill one's dream
实现某人的梦想
⑧pass the finishing line
冲过终点线
⑨strengthen one's friendship
增进友谊
⑩improve one's skill
提高技能
[出彩佳句]
1.首段常用句式
①I watched the final of the 4×100m relay at our sports meeting held on Monday.
在星期一举行的运动会上,我观看了4×100米接力赛的决赛。
②A sports meeting was held in my school on 15 September.Some joined in the competitions while some just watched them.
9月15日,我校举行了一场运动会。有些人参加了比赛,有些人只是观看了比赛。
③What impressed me most was the football match.
让我印象最深刻的就是足球比赛了。
④It is one of the unforgettable moments that I have ever experienced.
这是我所经历过的难忘的时刻之一。
⑤We held a sports meeting in the school stadium,during which we were in high spirits.
我们在学校体育场举行了一场运动会,运动会期间我们都情绪高昂。
2.中段常用句式
①Before the race,every competitor was quiet and still.I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense.
比赛前,每位选手都静止不动。我从未想到一项体育赛事的气氛会如此紧张。
②He stood at the starting line,looking relaxed and confident.
他站在起跑线上,看上去轻松又自信。
③When the runners set off,everyone went wild!
当赛跑运动员们起跑时,大家都疯狂起来!
④I could see the runners running as fast as they could.
我看到赛跑运动员们都尽力奔跑。
⑤Unfortunately,he fell down and his left foot was badly hurt.
不幸的是,他摔倒了,左脚严重受伤。
⑥Everyone was on their feet,cheering.I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst!
大家都站起来欢呼。我也沉浸在兴奋之中,用力欢呼,我觉得自己的肺都快要爆裂了!
3.尾段常用句式
①I believe this moment will remain a precious memory for all of us.
我相信这一时刻将成为我们所有人的珍贵回忆。
②It was such a wonderful moment that I enjoyed its speed and passion.
这是如此精彩的时刻,我享受这一刻的速度和激情。
③Though he didn't win the race,he won our admiration.
尽管他没有赢得赛跑,但他赢得了我们的赞赏。
④The sports meeting is successfully completed.Not only do we have fun,but we learn to take pride in our partners,cheer for them and help them when they are in need.
运动会圆满结束。我们不仅玩得开心,而且学会了为我们的伙伴骄傲,为他们欢呼,并在他们需要时帮助他们。
上周,你校举办了运动会。你班的李华同学报名参加了100米短跑比赛,他在运动会中的表现让全班非常感动。请你用英语为校报写一篇短文。要点如下:
1.赛场上的情景;
2.你的感受。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第一+和第三人称为主
定时态
以一般过去时为主
定框架
第一段:总体介绍比赛项目;
第二段:详细介绍比赛过程;
第三段:你的感受。
their eyes were filled with determination and selfbelief
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.上周,一场运动会在我们学校的操场上举行了。100米短跑比赛让我印象深刻。
Last week, on our school's playground.
And the 100meter dash .
[升级] 用what引导主语从句升级第二句
2.比赛前,所有运动员都站在起跑线上,他们的眼中充满了决心和自信。
Before the race, all the athletes stood at the starting line and .
a sports meeting was held
left a deep impression on me
What impressed me most was the 100meter dash.
which was truly beyond
our expectations
[升级] 用with的复合结构升级句子
3.随着发令枪响,他们如箭般向前冲去。
As the starting gun fired, they .
4.其中最出色的选手之一是我班的李华。他在激烈的竞争中奋力拼搏。
One of the most remarkable runners was Li Hua from my class, who
.
5.他一个接一个地超越对手,这真的出乎我们的意料。
He surpassed his opponents one after another,
.
Before the race, all the athletes stood at the starting line, with their eyes filled with determination and selfbelief.
dashed forward like arrows
fought his way in the fierce competition
In the end, it was a display of not only speed but also the spirit of never giving up, leaving a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
6.虽然他没有击败所有其他对手,但他的表现仍然很出色。他的队友张鹏赢得了第一名。
Although he , his performance was still outstanding.His teammate, Zhang Peng, .
7.这不仅是速度的展示,更是永不放弃精神的体现,给每一个目睹这场激动人心比赛的人都留下了深刻的印象。
It was a display of ,
which left a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
[升级] 用现在分词作状语升级句子
didn't defeat all the other opponents
won the first place
not only speed but also the spirit of never giving up
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
Last week, a sports meeting was held on our school's playground.What impressed me most was the 100meter dash.
Before the race, all the athletes stood at the starting line, with their eyes filled with determination and selfbelief.As the starting gun fired, they dashed forward like arrows.One of the most remarkable runners was Li Hua, who fought his way in the fierce competition.He surpassed his opponents one after another, which was truly yond our expectations.Although he didn't defeat all the other opponents, his performance was still outstanding.His teammate, Zhang Peng, won the first place.
In the end, it was a display of not only speed but also the spirit of never giving up, leaving a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
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