内容正文:
We must all face the choice between what is right and what is easy .
—J.K. Rowling
我们都必须面对在正确和容易之间的选择。
——J.K. 罗琳
Growing up
主题语境:人与自我——认识自我、丰富自我、完善自我
Unit 1
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Section IV
Writing—Writing a book review
本单元写作任务是写一篇书评。书评,即评论或介绍书籍的文章,是以“书”为对象,实事求是、有见解地分析书籍的形式和内容,探求创作的思想性、学术性、知识性和艺术性,从而在作者、读者和出版商之间构建信息交流的渠道。书评是应用文写作的一种重要文体。
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
[常用词汇]
①the literary masterpiece
文学杰作
②be well worth recommending
非常值得推荐
③a heartwarming read
温暖人心的读物
④ convey an inspiring truth
传达鼓舞人心的真理
⑤be good for us teenagers
对我们青少年有好处
⑥be full of
充满着
⑦learn a lot from the book
从书中学到很多
⑧be touched by the plot
被情节感动
⑨be regarded as
被视作
⑩cause a heated discussion
引起热烈的讨论
[出彩佳句]
①He thinks to read the original works is better than to see the films based on them.
他认为读原著比看基于原著的电影好。
②Published in 2010, the book is popular among teenagers.
这本书出版于2010年,很受青少年欢迎。
③Robinson Crusoe is the work of the famous novelist Daniel Defoe, which is worth reading.
《鲁滨孙漂流记》是著名小说家丹尼尔·笛福的作品,这本书值得阅读。
④In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it.
事实上,这本小说很有意义,我可以从中学到很多东西。
⑤This book tells about a person who regards money as important as his own life.
这本书讲述了一个视钱如命的人。
⑥It is a collection of fable works,most of which give an account of some enlightening stories.
它是一本寓言故事的合集,其中大部分讲述了一些具有启发性的故事。
假定你在校英文论坛上看到大家在讨论自己最喜欢的课外书。请你根据所给提示,向同学们推荐文学读物《秘密花园》(The Secret Garden)。
作者
美国作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特(Frances Hodgson Burnett)
故事
梗概
性格孤僻的玛丽无意中发现一个废弃的花园。在新结识的朋友们的帮助下,玛丽使花园恢复了生机,同时,她也变得开朗起来。
感悟
面对挫折时,要敞开心扉,微笑面对人生。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第三人称为主
定时态
以一般现在时为主
定框架
第一部分:书本简介;
第二部分:故事梗概;
第三部分:感悟。
the growth of an isolated girl
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.文学名著《秘密花园》这本书值得推荐。
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden .
2.这部文学名著是由美国作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特所写。
The literary masterpiece American author Frances Hodgson Burnett.
[升级]请用过去分词短语作定语合并句1和句2
3.《秘密花园》描绘了一个名叫玛丽的性格孤僻的女孩的成长过程。
The Secret Garden portrays named Mary.
is well worth recommending
was written by
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
in the meanwhile
With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings the garden back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
4.她偶然发现了一个被废弃的花园。
She a deserted garden.
[升级]用定语从句合并句3和句4
5.在新朋友的帮助下,玛丽最终使花园恢复了生机。
With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately
.
6.这同时改变了她,使她成为一个快乐的女孩。
It transforms her into a cheerful girl .
[升级]用定语从句合并句5和句6
comes across
The Secret Garden portrays the growth of an isolated girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden.
brings the garden
back to life.
Armed with a positive outlook, we can face life challenges with a smile.
7.这本书不仅是一本温暖人心的读物,而且传达了一个鼓舞人心的真理。
The book is not only a heartwarming read .
8.我们明智的做法是敞开心扉,接受周围人的帮助。
It is wise of us to and embrace the support of those around us.
9.拥有积极的心态,我们可以微笑面对生活中的挑战。
If we are armed with a positive outlook, we can .
[升级]用过去分词短语作状语改写句9
but also conveys an inspiring truth
unlock the secrets of our hearts
face life challenges with a smile
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
The Secret Garden portrays the growth of an isolated girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden.With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings the garden back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
The book is not only a heartwarming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us.Armed with a positive outlook, we can face life challenges with a smile.
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