摘要:
该高中英语课件围绕“给未来的人写一封信”的应用文写作展开,从文体感知明确写作目的与语气,通过科技发展相关写作素材积累表达,再以典题示例为依托,分审题谋篇(明确类型、人称时态、要点)、基础句训练、高级句升级(如with复合结构合并句子)、衔接成篇四步搭建学习支架,帮助学生从理解文体到完成写作。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养,以“写给未来的朋友”征文为例,通过审题表格梳理要点,基础句到高级句的分层训练提升语言表达准确性与丰富性,课时精练中完形填空(陈金英故事)和读后续写(Mrs. Long的礼物)结合真实情境,培养学生逻辑思维与共情能力。教学方法上采用任务驱动和实例示范,学生能提升应用文写作与语言运用能力,教师可借助系统流程和素材高效开展教学。
内容正文:
UNIT 4 Living with technology
Section Ⅲ Integrated skills
——给未来的人写一封信
内容索引
课时精练
文体感知
本文要求给未来的人写一封信,写信的目的主要介绍自己所处时代的状况,另外由此可以设想未来,但语气不宜过于肯定。
写作素材
1.The development of science and technology makes our life more comfortable and convenient.
科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和方便。
2.Modern telecommunication shortens the distance between people and makes communication much easier.
现代电信缩短了人们之间的距离,使沟通更容易。
3.Internet is widely used now not only for collection of abundant information but also for correspondence.
互联网现在被广泛使用,不仅用于收集丰富的信息,而且用于通信。
4.Email,the most effective communication device now,is becoming very popular.
电子邮件,现在最有效的通讯工具,正变得非常流行。
5.Telephone and mobile phone make contact more convenient than before.
电话和手机使联系比以前更方便。
6.The journey to outer space and other planets is not a dream any more.
到外太空和其他行星的旅行不再是一个梦想。
7.I hope that in your time, life will be more convenient.
希望在你的时代,生活会更方便。
典题示例
假定你是李华,在国际科学与和平周到来之际,校刊英语栏目举行征文比赛,请你以“写给未来的朋友”为题写一篇征文稿,内容包括:
1. 写信的目的;
2.介绍科技发展现状;
3.你的愿望。
注意: 1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型 应用文
人称时态 第一人称为主和一般现在时
写作要点 1.写作目的;
2.详细描述地球上当前的科技状态;
3.提出期望。
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.国际科学与和平周即将到来。
International Week of Science and Peace _______________.
2.我写信是想告诉你地球上科学技术的现状。
______________________the current state of science and technology on earth.
3.人工智能正在深入到各个方面,它正在帮助我们完成很多工作。
AI is going deep into all aspects,and _______________________________
_______.
is approaching
I'm writing to tell you
it is helping us to complete lots of
work
4.这项工作以前是不能做的。
The work _______________________.
5.我希望在你的时代,生活将会更加方便,人们可以在许多星球之间自由旅行。
I hope that in your time,__________________________and people can travel freely between many planets.
could not be done before
life will be more convenient
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
6.用with复合结构合并句1和2,并对句1进行词汇升级。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.用定语从句合并句3和句4。
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With International Week of Science and Peace around the corner,I'm writing to tell you the current state of science and technology on earth.
AI is going deep into all aspects,and it is helping us to complete lots of work that could not be done before.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
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Dear friends,
With International Week of Science and Peace around the corner,I'm writing to tell you the current state of science and technology on earth.
Nowadays,we use machines or robots for almost everything.AI is going deep into all aspects,and it is helping us to complete lots of work that could not be done before.Our spacecraft can reach the moon and Venus. Our underwater vehicles can reach every place under the sea.
I hope that in your time,life will be more convenient and people can travel freely between many planets. How fascinating it will be!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Ⅰ.完形填空(每小题1分,共15分)
Over the past 10 years,Chen Jinying,90,has paid off 20.77 million yuan to her lenders. Chen used to be a doctor and she discovered there was a 1 market for down coats for elderly people,so after she retired in the early 1990s,she 2 her own company. Her business went well for the first few years and Chen was also 3 in public welfare, 4 570,000 yuan for elderly people. But in 2011,the company 5 poor sales. She was forced to 6 her factories.
In 2012,Chen rented a factory to produce down coats, 7 sales would turn better. But the stock piled up and she even had no money to pay her workers,so she stopped 8 in 2016. Some people suggested she 9 bankruptcy (破产) to avoid going into debt,but she 10 to do so. “I will try my best to pay off the debt, 11 I won't feel at ease,” Chen said.
Chen's story gained media 12 . People were moved and came to her 13 . When asked if she worried about having so much debt,she replied with a smile.“I have to keep myself healthy so I have the 14 to pay back the loans. People cared for me,and I want to 15 that care.”
语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了陈金英女士的创业故事。在她的事业低谷期,很多人慷慨帮助了她,现在她想把人们对她的这份善心传递下去。
1.A.promising B.terrible
C.challenging D.attractive
2.A.took up B.put up
C.set up D.picked up
根据后文“Her business went well”可知,此处指她退休后成立了她自己的公司。故选C。
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根据后文“so after she retired in the early 1990s,she her own company”可知,她退休后建立了公司,说明此处指她看到老年人的羽绒服市场是有前途的。故选A。
3.A.interested B.active
C.expert D.fortunate
4.A.paying B.making
C.saving D.donating
根据前文“Chen was also active in public welfare”可知,她积极参与公益事业,所以此处指她给老年人捐赠了57万元。故选D。
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根据后文“570,000 yuan for elderly people”可知,此处指她在公益事业方面很积极。故选B。
5.A.encountered B.watched
C.controlled D.stimulated
6.A.destroy B.build
C.design D.sell
根据前文“the company encountered poor sales”可知,面对销售不佳的情形,她被迫卖了工厂。故选D。
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结合前文“the company”和后文“poor sales”可知,此处指公司遇到了销售不佳的情形,故选A。
7.A.predicting B.hoping
C.advertising D.imagining
8.A.production B.preparation
C.progress D.order
根据前文“the stock piled up and she even had no money to pay her workers”可知,因为库存积压,她甚至没钱支付工人工资,所以此处指她停止了生产。故选A。
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根据后文“would turn better”可知,此处指她希望销售量能好转,故选B。
9.A.argue for B.look for
C.apply for D.fight for
10.A.agreed B.refused
C.urged D.hesitated
根据后文“I will try my best to pay off the debt”可知,此处指她拒绝了一些人的建议。故选B。
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根据前文“Some people suggested she”和后文“bankruptcy (破产) to avoid going into debt”可知,此处指有人建议她申请破产来避免负债。故选C。
11.A.while B.thus
C.otherwise D.instead
12.A.attention B.resistance
C.attraction D.exposure
根据后文“People were moved”可知,此处指她的故事获得了媒体的关注。故选A。
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根据前文“I will try my best to pay off the debt”和后文“I won't feel at ease”可知,后文和前文之间是转折关系,设空处表示“否则”,故选C。
13.A.apartment B.mind
C.store D.aid
14.A.luck B.ability
C.idea D.courage
根据后文“to pay back the loans”可知,此处指保持健康从而有能力偿还贷款。故选B。
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根据后文“People cared for me”可知,此处指人们来帮助她。故选D。
15.A.pass on B.give away
C.pass up D.give up
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根据前文“People cared for me”可知,此处指她想把这种关心传递下去。故选A。
Ⅱ.应用文写作(共15分)
假定你是李华,下周你校将举办一场科技展,希望所有学生积极参与。请你发邮件告知因病请假的外国交换生Andy,内容包括:
1.展会目的、时间和地点;
2.展会内容;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Andy,
How are you doing these days?_______________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
To promote the students' interest in the scientific technology,our school will hold a science and technology exhibition from 9 am to 5 pm next Saturday in the school hall.
The exhibition involves the following:the first of which are some videos and pictures on how the science and technology affect people and how they are applied in various areas. And then a documentary movie about AI will be on. Moreover,we'll look around excellent works from students,presenting their outstanding talent,creativity and imagination.
I'm confirmed you will love the exhibition. Hope you won't miss the chance.
Ⅲ.读后续写(共25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The average present merely satisfies a temporary desire; the great one becomes more precious with time going by.
When I was a boy of fourteen, I needed to have 80 hours of community service per year and I used to take care of Mrs Long's garden, which was near the Presbyterian Church. As a junior high school student, I devoted myself to it, sweeping the fallen leaves and mowing the lawn(修剪草坪). There I learnt how to cut away dry branches and even helped to plant a sapling(小树苗). Tired as I was every time I finished my work, I did enjoy the time there for learning something new. I clearly remembered that Mrs Long, a nice and caring elder, always treated me to delicious meals and drinks. She also loved taking photos, always with an old camera in hand.It was said that the camera was passed down from her father and she cherished it a lot.
Several days before Christmas, she whispered to me,“When Christmas comes, I shall have a present for you. ” I spent much time wondering what it would be.The boys I played with had baseball gloves, ice skates and bicycles, and I was so eager to acquire any one of these that I convinced myself that she intended to choose from among them. But at the same time, I had some doubts whether she would buy me such things because she was not that well-off.
The day before Christmas, I went there as before.With the work done, I was going to leave when she pulled me aside.“Kid, wait for a minute, ” she said, leading me into her living room. She seated me on a chair, went to another room, and in a moment stood before me holding a small package that under no circumstances could hold a bicycle or a pair of skates or even a baseball glove.It weighed almost nothing.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph1:
I took the package with disappointment.______________________________
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It was so light that I guessed there must be something unimportant. I had been looking forward to the present for so long but I had never expected the result like this! There was no doubt that on no account could Mrs Long understand what I desired.Carrying the package, I tried to contain my facial expression but obviously, Mrs. Long noticed my emotion. Smiling, she gently patted on my shoulder and encouraged me to open the package.Slowly, I untied the well-wrapped lace, wondering what on earth the present would be.She told me to open the package after arriving home.Thanking her with a knowing smile, I headed home.The moment I was back home, curiosity drove me to untie the well-wrapped lace.
Paragraph 2:
Opening the package, I was totally astonished.______________________
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Lying there were several photos of me! I picked up one of them which presented the hard-working me sweeping the fallen leaves with sweat wetting all over my T-shirt. I was so shocked that it was Mrs. Long who carefully recorded such precious moments for me.Never before had I realized how attentive I was and the scene was elaborately recorded.Deeply touched, I expressed how meaningful I considered the present was. Now the photo is still in my album, reminding me of the wonderful days I spent on Mrs. Long's lawn.
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