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考前押题08 英语作文题(期末专项训练) 话题1 求助信 话题4 记叙文 话题2 建议信 话题5 投稿 话题3 推荐信 话题6 表达想法 话题1 求助信 Passage 1 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假定你是李华，是校英文报 “中国传统文化” 栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍针灸 (acupuncture) 的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师 Mr. Roger 写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括: 写信事由； 求助内容； 表达感谢。 注意: 写作词数应为 80 个左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Roger, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 话题2 建议信 Passage 1 假定你是李华，外教 Chris计划周一至周五在你班开展课外英语拓展阅读(supplementaryreading)。你对此活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.你的看法； 2.你的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share my thoughts on the supplementary reading activity.. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 假设你是明启中学学生李华，你的学校最近在征集如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣的建议。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封信给校长。信件内容包括： 1)你对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提供的建议： 2)提出这些建议的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题3 推荐信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到你英国笔友Mike 的来信(内容如下)。请你给Mike 写一封回信，提供建议。你的回信须包含以下内容： (1)你推荐的博物馆或美术馆，以及其中的某件展品； (2)你去该场所的经历以及推荐的理由。 Hi Li Ming, I'm going to visit China this summer. I'm particularly interested in exploring some of the museums or galleries you've enjoyed. Could you recommend one?Looking forward to your suggestions! Thanks, Mike ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 你是明启中学的高一学生吴磊。下学期高一年级将进行社会实践，校学生会正就活动地点征求大家建议，请你在信中写出： (1) 推荐的地点； (2) 推荐的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题4 记叙文 Passage 1 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校学生会于上周成功举办了以“Zero Waste”为主题的爱心义卖活动。请你给英国朋友Hanson写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 活动介绍； 2. 你的感悟。 参考词汇：爱心义卖 charity sale 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右，文章首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Hanson, I hope this e-mail finds you well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文(Li Wen)，你们校刊的“A sight on campus”栏目正在举办征文活动，征文主题为“The Beauty of Nature”，要求用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。你的征文必须包括： 1. 简要描写该校园一景； 2. 你置身其中的感受 (文中不得出现真实校名或姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题5 投稿 Passage 1 近日，学校正举办主题为“The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文， 介绍一位你敬佩的人，内容包括： 1. 描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点； 2. 阐述此人对你的影响。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，在一本英语文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知(内容如下)。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇短文。 Call for Submissions: Essays on “A Tradition in My Family” We invite you to share your thoughts on the theme “A Tradition in My Family.” Submission Guidelines: 1. Introduce the most valued family tradition. 2. Explain why this tradition is important for your family. We look forward to your contributions! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题6 表达想法 Passage 1 近日，校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括： 1. 你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍； 2. 你的理由。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假设你是李华，你所在班的班长正向全班征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意，目前有金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors)三个古迹作为备选。给班长写信提出自己的想法，内容必须包括： 1. 你所选择的一处古迹以及你的理由。 2. 简要介绍海报的主要内容。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $考前押题08 英语作文题(期末专项训练) 话题1 求助信 话题4 记叙文 话题2 建议信 话题5 投稿 话题3 推荐信 话题6 表达想法 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 求助信 Passage 1 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Wangliang, Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to give you my suggestions on your making a short video about your school.I feel delighted since I have made some researches about making videos . To begin with,I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention.In this way ,you can make your school known to more people.What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city. In conclusion, you should show your foreign friends the strong reading atmosphere in your school.It is reading that makes you so outingstanding. I believe you will complete the task perfectly.I am looking forward to your decision and good news. 【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封建议信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封建议信。要求如下：假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 第2步：确定人称、时态。人称以第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 第3步：根据要求确定关键词，如：give you my suggestions；making a short video；it has gained public attention；make your school known to more people；is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city； complete the task perfectly；I am looking forward to。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衍接与过渡，如To begin with；What’s more；In conclusion。书写要规范清晰，保持整洁美观。 【点睛】本文是一则建议信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。同时文中使用高级句子。Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to …现在分词做原因状语；I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention原因状语从句和so…that结构的完美结合； What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city.非限制性定语从句；It is reading that makes you so outingstanding.强调句。 Passage 2 假定你是李华，是校英文报 “中国传统文化” 栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍针灸 (acupuncture) 的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师 Mr. Roger 写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括: 写信事由； 求助内容； 表达感谢。 注意: 写作词数应为 80 个左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Roger, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr. Roger, I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m in charge of the “Chinese Traditional Culture” column in our school’s English newspaper, and I’ve recently written an article about acupuncture. However, I’m not quite confident about the language and structure. Could you please help me review and polish the article? Your expertise would be of great value. I’d be extremely grateful for your time and effort. Thank you very much! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师 Mr. Roger 写一封邮件，内容包括写信事由、求助内容以及表达感谢。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 修改：review → revise 润色：polish → refine 价值：value → significance 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’ve written an article about acupuncture and I’m not confident about the language. 拓展句：I’ve written an article about acupuncture, but I’m not confident about the language and structure. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m in charge of the “Chinese Traditional Culture” column in our school’s English newspaper, and I’ve recently written an article about acupuncture.（运用了现在分词短语作状语，说明写信背景） 【高分句型2】 Could you please help me review and polish the article? Your expertise would be of great value.（运用了虚拟语气和名词性短语，礼貌地提出请求并强调对方的帮助的重要性） 话题2 建议信 Passage 1 假定你是李华，外教 Chris计划周一至周五在你班开展课外英语拓展阅读(supplementaryreading)。你对此活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.你的看法； 2.你的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share my thoughts on the supplementary reading activity.. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris, I’m writing to share my thoughts on the supplementary reading activity. I believe it’s a fantastic opportunity for us to improve our English skills and gain insights into different cultures. It will also help us develop critical thinking by exploring various themes beyond textbooks. To maximize its effectiveness, I suggest incorporating a mix of fiction and non-fiction texts that cater to our interests and levels. Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates based on the readings could greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities. Lastly, perhaps we can have a weekly sharing session where students present their favorite parts or reflections on the readings. Looking forward to this enriching experience. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Chris写一封邮件，就他计划周一至周五在班上开展课外英语拓展阅读活动发表看法并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：opportunity →chance 各种各样的：various →all kinds of 建议：suggest →advise 此外：additionally → in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates based on the readings could greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities. 拓展句：Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates, which are based on the readings, could greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To maximize its effectiveness, I suggest incorporating a mix of fiction and non-fiction texts that cater to our interests and levels.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语以及that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Lastly, perhaps we can have a weekly sharing session where students present their favorite parts or reflections on the readings.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句） Passage 2 假设你是明启中学学生李华，你的学校最近在征集如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣的建议。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封信给校长。信件内容包括： 1)你对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提供的建议： 2)提出这些建议的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Headmaster, I’m Li Hua, a junior student in our school. Student physical exercise has become a focus of attention for governments around the world. Hearing our school is currently soliciting suggestions on how to enhance students’ interest in physical exercise, I’m so thrilled. Here are my suggestions. First, I suggest including a variety of sports events that cater to different interests and skill levels. This would encourage more students to participate and enjoy the festival. Additionally, I propose that we organize workshops or seminars on sports safety and health, as these are crucial aspects of sports participation that are often overlooked. By offering a diverse range of sports events, we can ensure that every student has the chance to do their preferred sport and feel included. For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写一封电子邮件，对如何提高学生体育锻炼兴趣提建议，并陈述提出这些建议的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 迎合：cater to→ meet 鼓励：encourage→ motivate/inspire 确保：ensure→ make sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. 拓展句：For another, that we should emphasize sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing our school is currently soliciting suggestions on how to enhance students’ interest in physical exercise, I’m so thrilled. (使用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】For another, emphasizing sports safety and health will help create a safer environment for all participants and prevent potential injuries.. (使用了动名词充当主语) 话题3 推荐信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，收到你英国笔友Mike 的来信(内容如下)。请你给Mike 写一封回信，提供建议。你的回信须包含以下内容： (1)你推荐的博物馆或美术馆，以及其中的某件展品； (2)你去该场所的经历以及推荐的理由。 Hi Li Ming, I'm going to visit China this summer. I'm particularly interested in exploring some of the museums or galleries you've enjoyed. Could you recommend one?Looking forward to your suggestions! Thanks, Mike ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mike, I'm thrilled to hear that you're planning a visit to China this summer! Given your interest in museums and galleries, I would highly recommend the Palace Museum in Beijing, also known as the Forbidden City. It's a treasure trove of Chinese history and culture, housing a vast collection of artifacts from the Ming and Qing dynasties. One exhibit that you absolutely must see is the Hall of Supreme Harmony, which is adorned with intricate carvings and paintings that narrate the stories of ancient emperors. My visit to the Palace Museum was an awe-inspiring journey through time, where I gained a deep appreciation for the architectural and artistic achievements of China's past. I recommend this place not only for its historical significance but also for the immersive experience it offers. Walking through the halls, you can almost feel the pulse of history and the weight of the decisions made within those walls. It's a must-visit for anyone interested in understanding the depth of Chinese culture and heritage. I hope this recommendation helps, and I look forward to hearing all about your adventures in China! Best regards, Li Ming 引言：表达对Mike来信的高兴，并提到他对中国博物馆和画廊的兴趣。 推荐博物馆：介绍推荐的博物馆或美术馆，以及其中的某件展品。 个人经历：分享自己去该场所的经历。 推荐理由：解释为什么推荐这个地方，以及它的历史和文化价值。 结束语：表达希望Mike在中国旅行愉快，并期待他的回信。 选择一个具体的博物馆或美术馆：选择一个具有代表性的博物馆，并确保它有足够的吸引力。 描述推荐的展品：详细说明推荐的展品，以及它的特点和意义。 分享个人经历：讲述自己参观博物馆的经历，以及它给自己带来的感受。 解释推荐理由：解释为什么认为这个地方值得一去，以及它对中国文化和历史的重要性。 使用连词和过渡语：使用适当的连词和过渡语来连接句子和段落，使文章更加流畅和连贯。 审查和修改：仔细检查文章中的语法错误和拼写错误，并进行必要的修改和润色。 Passage 2 你是明启中学的高一学生吴磊。下学期高一年级将进行社会实践，校学生会正就活动地点征求大家建议，请你在信中写出： (1) 推荐的地点； (2) 推荐的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Student Union,     On hearing that our school is going to conduct social practice next semester for us senior one students, I’m writing to offer my personal suggestion on the site arrangement. I think the school field the most suitable place. Because it is large enough to hold all the whole students participating in the activity. What’s more, there are various regions for our students to take part in many kinds of activities, which can make us experience life fully.       I do hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and that the activity site will be well received by all of the students.                                                                                                                                                                   Yours,                         Wu Lei 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生对下学期高一年级将进行的社会实践活动地点给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 一…就…：on→upon 举办：conduct→throw 容纳：hold→accommodate 给与：offer→give 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I think the school field the most suitable place. 拓展句：I think the school field is the most suitable place. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On hearing that our school is going to conduct social practice next semester for us senior one students, I’m writing to offer my personal suggestion on the site arrangement.（由that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, there are various regions for our students to take part in many kinds of activities, which can make us experience life fully.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句） 话题4 记叙文 Passage 1 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校学生会于上周成功举办了以“Zero Waste”为主题的爱心义卖活动。请你给英国朋友Hanson写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 活动介绍； 2. 你的感悟。 参考词汇：爱心义卖 charity sale 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右，文章首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Hanson, I hope this e-mail finds you well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Hanson, I hope this e-mail finds you well. Last week, our Students' Union successfully held a charity sale themed “Zero Waste.” Students brought unwanted items like books, toys, and clothes, and sold them at low prices. All the money raised was donated to a local charity. I was deeply moved by everyone's enthusiasm and sense of responsibility. It was amazing to see how small actions can make a big difference in reducing waste and helping those in need. I felt proud to be part of such a meaningful event. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Hanson 写一封邮件，分享上周学校举办的“Zero Waste”主题爱心义卖活动的经历，内容包括活动介绍和个人感悟。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 爱心义卖：charity sale → charity fair 主题：themed → themed around 捐赠：donated → given to 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Students brought unwanted items and sold them at low prices. 拓展句：Students brought unwanted items like books, toys, and clothes, and sold them at low prices. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 Last week, our Students' Union successfully held a charity sale themed “Zero Waste.”（运用了过去分词短语作后置定语，简洁地介绍了活动主题） 【高分句型2】 I was deeply moved by everyone's enthusiasm and sense of responsibility.（运用了被动语态，表达了自己对活动的感受） Passage 2 假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文(Li Wen)，你们校刊的“A sight on campus”栏目正在举办征文活动，征文主题为“The Beauty of Nature”，要求用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。你的征文必须包括： 1. 简要描写该校园一景； 2. 你置身其中的感受 (文中不得出现真实校名或姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A sight on campus One of the most appealing sights on our campus is the Lotus Pond. As you step into this quiet corner, you are greeted by a breathtaking view of vibrant lotus flowers blooming in all their glory. The pond lies amid lush greenery, with willow trees gently swaying in the breeze, adding to the peace of the scene. When I find myself in the presence of this amazing sight, I am immediately transported to a place of pure peace. The vibrant colors of the lotus flowers create a sense of joy and serenity. Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. It teaches us to appreciate the simple things in life and the importance of finding moments of peace amidst our busy schedules. In conclusion, the Lotus Pond on our campus is a sight to behold, which serves as a perfect reminder for us to slow down, appreciate the beauty of nature, and find comfort in its presence. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引人的：appealing→attractive 乐趣：joy→ happiness 重要性：importance→ significance 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 倒装句变陈述句 原句：Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. 拓展句：The Lotus Pond not only provides a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature.（运用了not only…but also…连接两个句子，第一个句子运用部分倒装） 【高分句型2】In conclusion, the Lotus Pond on our campus is a sight to behold, which serves as a perfect reminder for us to slow down, appreciate the beauty of nature, and find comfort in its presence.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 话题5 投稿 Passage 1 近日，学校正举办主题为“The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文， 介绍一位你敬佩的人，内容包括： 1. 描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点； 2. 阐述此人对你的影响。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 The Person I Admire In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. He is a man of medium height with a bald head and a pair of sparkling blue eyes. Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. He faced a tough time in the recent economic downturn, yet he never lost hope. He used the opportunity to learn new skills and started his own small business. His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The person I admire”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位敬佩的人。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter→meet 非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary 机会：opportunity→chance 挫折：setback→frustration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. 拓展句：Mr. Smith never gives up, no matter what challenges he faces. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. (运用了who引导定语从句) [高分句型2] His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，在一本英语文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知(内容如下)。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇短文。 Call for Submissions: Essays on “A Tradition in My Family” We invite you to share your thoughts on the theme “A Tradition in My Family.” Submission Guidelines: 1. Introduce the most valued family tradition. 2. Explain why this tradition is important for your family. We look forward to your contributions! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Tradition in My Family In my family, celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival is the most valued tradition. This festival, held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. We gather under the full moon to enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the beauty of the night sky. This tradition is important to my family for several reasons. Firstly, it provides a rare opportunity for all family members, regardless of where they are, to reunite and spend quality time together. In today’s fast-paced world, it’s often challenging to find time for family, making these moments even more precious. Moreover, the Mid-Autumn Festival allows us to honor our ancestors and reflect on our family roots and heritage. It fosters a sense of belonging and continuity, connecting us to our past while shaping our future. This cherished tradition strengthens our family bonds and preserves our cultural identity for generations to come. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“我家的传统”为题给一本英语文化类杂志投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 整个的：entire→whole 欣赏：appreciate→admire 重要的：important→significant 提供：provide→offer 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This festival, held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. 拓展句：This festival, which is held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, brings our entire family together. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, it provides a rare opportunity for all family members, regardless of where they are, to reunite and spend quality time together.(where引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]In today’s fast-paced world, it’s often challenging to find time for family, making these moments even more precious.(现在分词作结果状语) 话题6 表达想法 Passage 1 近日，校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括： 1. 你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍； 2. 你的理由。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Student Union, I strongly support the initiative to establish a shelter for homeless cats on our campus. The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings. Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence. Furthermore, such an act of kindness and compassion will set a positive example for the entire community, fostering a culture of care and respect for all life. I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment. Thank you for considering my thoughts on this matter. Sincerely, A Concerned Student 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫，要求考生就此事写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 建立：establish→set up 提供：provide→offer 另外：furthermore→additionally 重要的：significant→important 2. 局势拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence. 拓展句：Providing a safe haven for the homeless cats will not only ensure their well-being but also prevent any potential issues that may arise from their unmanaged presence on campus. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings.(运用了not only...but also...句型) [高分句型2]I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) Passage 2 假设你是李华，你所在班的班长正向全班征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意，目前有金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors)三个古迹作为备选。给班长写信提出自己的想法，内容必须包括： 1. 你所选择的一处古迹以及你的理由。 2. 简要介绍海报的主要内容。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     I strongly recommend the Terracotta Warriors to you, which are in the list of UNESCO. Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier. The statues fill only one part of the emperor’s huge tomb, which still has not been completely unearthed. More than 700,000 people worked for nearly 40 years to build this tomb. However, no one in modern times knew about the tomb or the terracotta statues until 1974, when some farmers discovered the tomb while they were digging a well! Come and enjoy the grand and unbelievable wonders. 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生选择金字塔(the pyramids of Egypt)，巨石阵(Stonehenge)，兵马俑(the Terra Cotta Warriors) 三个古迹之一做一份海报，参加班即征集主题为“探索世界文明古迹”的海报创意比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 推荐：recommend→propose 超过：more than→over 保卫：guard→defend 挖掘：unearth→dig out 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! 拓展句：Located to the northeast of Xi’an, there are more than 8,000 statues that were made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! 【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly recommend the Terracotta Warriors to you, which are in the list of UNESCO.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier.（由that引导的宾语从句） $