Unit 2 Period 3 Writing-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册教用word（译林版）

Period 3 Writing 主题引领 情境写作 写作一 应用文写作（处理亲子关系的建议信） 典题呈现 假定你是李华，你的笔友苏珊（Susan）最近与她妈妈发生了争吵，好几天不说话了。为此她非常烦恼，希望你帮她出主意。请你用英语给她写一封建议信，要点如下： 1.认真考虑自己的行为； 2.尽量理解妈妈，明白她所做的都是为自己好; 3.找个机会主动和妈妈聊天，了解妈妈的真实想法； 4.适当赞美妈妈并道歉。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Step 1 审题谋篇 Step 2 遣词造句 字斟句酌添细节，写作框架雏形现 ［第一段］ 表明目的 1．我很遗憾听到你与你妈妈发生了争执并且你现在感到很难过。 I'm sorry to hear that _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and you're feeling sad now. [答案]you have argued with your mother 2．我理解你的感受。这里有一些我认为会对你有帮助的建议。 I understand your feelings. Here is some advice _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]which I think will help you ［第二段］ 给出具体、合理的建议 3．仔细想想，你会发现很可能你做错了什么。 Think it over, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]and you'll find you're likely to have done something wrong 4．你应该学会理解你妈妈。毕竟，她愿意做任何让你开心的事。 You should learn to understand your mother. After all, she's willing to do anything _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]that will make you happy 5．找个机会和你的妈妈谈一谈，这会有助于你们更好地理解对方。 Find a chance _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ and it will help you understand each other better. [答案]to have a talk with your mother 6．适当地赞美妈妈并向她道歉，这会使她高兴。 Praise your mother appropriately and apologize to her, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . [答案]and it will make her happy ［第三段］ 表达祝愿或期望 7．我祝你一切顺利！ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ [答案]I wish you all the best! 巧用单元句式，靓化表达促提升 8．［读教材原句］ （教材P20）If your problem is a new one, write a post about it. ［记句式］ if引导条件状语从句 ［学仿写］ 用if引导条件状语从句改写句3 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ [答案]If you think it over, you'll find you're likely to have done something wrong. 9．［读教材原句］ （教材P26）Adapted from Kathryn Forbes's Mama's Bank Account, which has 17 short stories and describes the struggles and dreams of a family in San Francisco in the early 1900s. ［记句式］ which引导非限制性定语从句 ［学仿写］ 用which引导非限制性定语从句分别改写句5和句6 [答案] （1） Find a chance to have a talk with your mother， which will help you understand each other better. （2） Praise your mother appropriately and apologize to her, which will make her happy. Step 3 衔接成篇   [答案] One possible version: Dear Susan， I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and you're feeling sad now. I understand your feelings. Here is some advice which I think will help you. First of all, if you think it over, you'll find you're likely to have done something wrong. Secondly, you should learn to understand your mother. After all，she's willing to do anything that will make you happy. Thirdly, find a chance to have a talk with your mother，which will help you understand each other better. Last but not least,praise your mother appropriately and apologize to her, which will make her happy. I wish you all the best！ Yours， Li Hua 笔尖粮仓 应用文写作赋能站——建议信 第一段 表明目的 1.Learning that you have difficulty/trouble in communicating with your parents, I'm writing to give you some suggestions/advice. 得知你在与父母沟通方面有困难，我写信给你一些建议。 2.I'm sorry to know that you're studying far away from your parents and often feel lonely. 很遗憾知道你远离父母在外求学并且经常感到孤独。 第二段 给出具体、合理的建议 1.First（ly）, I recommend that you （should） talk to your friend about his behaviour face to face. 首先，我建议你和你的朋友面对面谈谈他的行为。 2.What's more， it is also a good choice/idea for you to express sincere thanks to your parents. 另外，向你的父母表达诚挚的感谢对你来说也是一个不错的选择/主意。 3.In my opinion/From my point of view， it would be wise for you to do some voluntary work. 在我看来，做一些志愿工作对你来说是明智的。 4.More importantly， you can turn to your teachers for help. 更重要的是，你可以向你的老师寻求帮助。 5.Why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 第三段 表达祝愿或期望 1.I firmly believe, through your efforts, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 我坚信，通过努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。 2.I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I really hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我确实希望我的建议对你有益。/我真的希望你会发现这些建议有用。 写作二 场景微续写（汤姆悔悟弃游戏） 积累续写语料——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 ［情感描写］ prefer， content， confused， responsible， be attracted to， addicted， addicted to ［动作描写］volunteer, debate, challenge, graduate, recommend, sign up （for sth.）, quit, focus on ［活动描写］ ballet, movement, suitable for, advance, extra-curricular, adventure, survival, behaviour 佳句积累 ［情感描写］1.Obviously， I was unhappy， but I won't quit. 2.I'm a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course. 3.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. ［动作描写］ Every Wednesday， we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community. ［主旨升华］ Studying hard isn't always fun， but I'll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future. 锤炼续写场景——积累内化应用提升 ［场景呈现］ 整个学期，汤姆都沉迷于电脑游戏。然而，对当时的他来说，放弃电脑游戏很难。后来他的期末考试结果出来了，他对此不满意。一想到他犯了那么多愚蠢的错误，他非常羞愧和内疚。并且当他想到父母失望的表情时，他产生了一种深深的羞愧感。他羞愧得快要哭了。他几乎失去了信心，打算彻底放弃。幸运的是，他的父母来安慰他，鼓励他对自己和未来负责。他最终决定从此停止玩电脑游戏，专心学习。 1.   the whole semester. However, 2.   （it+be+adj.+for sb.to do sth.） playing computer games at the time. Then came the result of his final examination and 3.   . The thought of making so many silly mistakes made him extremely ashamed and guilty．And when he thought of the disappointed expression of his parents，4.   （无生命名词作主语）．5.   （倒装句） he was about to cry. He almost lost heart and intended to give up completely. Luckily, his parents came to comfort him, 6.   （现在分词短语作状语）．He finally decided to 7.   from then on. [答案] 1．Tom was addicted to computer games 2．it was difficult for him to give up 3．he was not content with it 4．a deep sense of shame spread into his mind 5．So ashamed was he that 6．encouraging him to be responsible for himself and his future 7．quit playing computer games and focus on his study 笔墨延展 读后续写多元话题库——羞愧、自责 短语必记 1.lower/drop/bow one's head in shame 羞愧地低下头 2.be struck dead with shame 羞愧得要死 3.feel embarrassed and guilty about... 对……感到尴尬和羞愧 4.with a deep sense of shame/guilt 带着深深的羞愧/自责感 5.feel one's face burning 感觉脸发烫 6.feel the blood rushing to one's face 感到血液涌到脸上 必背金句 1.An expression of shame crossed his face. 他面露愧色。 2.She was so ashamed that she was close to tears. 她羞愧得快要哭了。 3.His face was hot with shame/guilt. 他羞愧/愧疚得脸上火辣辣的。 4.So ashamed was he that he could feel his face burning. 他羞愧难当，感觉脸发烫。 5.I felt embarrassed and guilty about my silly mistake. 我为自己愚蠢的错误感到尴尬和羞愧。 6.She stood still, head bowed, hands put in front of her. 她一动不动地站着，低着头，双手放在身前。 课后巩固 多维提能 Ⅰ.阅读理解 [（2025·江苏南通高一统考）]A Conflict between parents and children is normal. It is part of family life. But conflict that goes on for a long time and gets worse over time can cause stress and can hurt relationship. It is important to communicate with each other and bring conflict to a peaceful solution. You can do this through compromise （让步） or by agreeing to disagree. No matter what else you do, communicate with your children and make sure they know that you love them. This can make dealing with conflict easier and more effective. In some cases, you may have to change your behaviour to settle a conflict with your child. Some of your child's behaviour may be a copy of your behaviour. So, if you want your child to behave in a certain way, one way may be to change your behaviour so that your child will follow your model. But children should be responsible for their own actions—and the results. All parents want to protect their children. But in some cases, unless the child is in physical danger, it may be best to let the child deal with the negative results of things they do. Work together to develop specific rules and write them down. These may include statements such as how much time they can spend on electronics and when homework must be completed. Have clear results for misconduct. Thus, if your child doesn't follow the rules, make it clear that the right to use the toy will be taken away because of his inability to play with it responsibly. Additionally, create a schedule so that they know when they have free time to themselves after they have completed tasks set out for them. These could include helping feed the family pet, taking a shower, or finishing homework. 1．What's the key to solving the conflict between parents and children? A. Advising children to give in. B. Changing behaviour. C. Reaching an understanding. D. Developing rules. 2．Why do parents need to change their behaviour first in the conflict? A. To compromise with their children. B. To be responsible for their actions. C. To find a reason to punish children. D. To set a good example for children. 3．What should parents do if the child causes something bad to happen? A. Teach him how to solve it. B. Handle the situation for him. C. Let him deal with it himself. D. Share the solutions with him. 4．What does the underlined word “misconduct” in paragraph 5 mean? A. Improper behaviour. B. Strict rules. C. Good performances. D. Frank words. [答案] 1．C 2．D 3．C 4．A [解析] 1．细节理解题。根据第一段中的“It is important to communicate ... to a peaceful solution.”和“No matter what else you do ... that you love them.”可知,解决父母和孩子冲突的关键是互相沟通和理解。 2．细节理解题。根据第二段中的“So, if you want your child to ... will follow your model.”可知,父母首先需要在冲突中改变自己的行为,这是为了给孩子树立好的榜样。 3．细节理解题。根据第三段内容可知，如果孩子造成不好的事情发生,父母应让孩子自己去处理。 4．词义猜测题。根据画线词后一句“Thus, if your child doesn't follow the rules... play with it responsibly”可知，本段是说明确告知孩子不当行为的后果。由此可推知，misconduct 意为“不当行为”。 【解题导语】 本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了如何解决父母和孩子之间的冲突。 [（2025·烟台一中高一期末）]B When I was growing up,my grandparents bought a second home in a small forest in Arkansas and would bring me there every single summer. I would spend a lot of time outside there following my grandfather around while he did yard work. We would collect cool-looking rocks and refill the hummingbird feeders. I always remember my grandparents calling me over to the window when a deer family was in the yard or a few hummingbirds were at the feeders so that I could watch them. I would explore around in the yard by myself sometimes to look for interesting rocks and if I was lucky, I would find a turtle （龟）. If I did find a turtle, my grandfather would put it in the kiddy pool for me to observe for a few minutes. I was always amazed by these creatures. After I finished observing the turtle, my grandfather would pick it up and return it to the bush where I found it. I would watch in amazement as it slowly stuck its legs out and went back. I always felt very at peace at my grandparents' home. It was quiet and full of interesting natural things I never got to see in Illinois. They disturbed the land around them as little as possible and didn't see it as a nuisance （讨厌的东西）， but rather a beautiful view. As Aldo Leopold, an American scientist, puts it, we should take time to enjoy and observe the natural world around us. When we do this,we find it brings us happiness and has a great value beyond just that of resources. Protection of the natural world is important because we are dependent upon it for life. We cannot worsen such a bountiful provider at such a speed because it will never return to anything like what it once was. Whenever I get lost in the lights and noises in this forest of cement （水泥） high-rises,the memories will calm me down and make me smile. 5．What does the author mainly talk about in paragraph 2? A. His interest in rocks and animals. B. His connection with the natural world. C. His daily activities during the summer vacation. D. His close relationship with Grandparents. 6．Why did the author feel peaceful at Grandparents' home? A. Because of the company of his grandfather. B. Because of the time spent in the small forest. C. Because of the undisturbed natural environment. D. Because of the interesting hummingbirds and the turtle. 7．What does the underlined part in paragraph 4 refer to? A. Nature. B. Illinois. C. The small forest. D. Grandparents' home. 8．What can we infer about the author from the passage? A. He is living in a city at present. B. He always gets lost in the forest. C. He grows up with his grandparents. D. He feels sad about the disappearing forest. [答案] 5．B 6．C 7．A 8．A [解析] 5．段落大意题。根据第二段内容可知,作者在窗前看鹿、蜂鸟,寻找有趣的小石块,找到龟并观察龟,然后看着龟被放归自然。因此本段主要谈论的是作者与自然世界的联系。 6．细节理解题。根据第三段中的“It was quiet and...around them as little as possible”可知,祖父母尽可能少地打扰周围的土地,他们家是有趣而安静的,因此作者感到平静。 7．词义猜测题。根据第四段中的“Protection of the natural world...anything like what it once was.”可知,保护自然世界很重要,因为我们的生命都依赖它,我们不能以这样的速度使这样一个慷慨的供应者变得更糟,因为它永远不会恢复到以前的样子。由此可推知，画线部分指代上文中提到的the natural world。 8．推理判断题。根据最后一段内容可知,每当作者迷失在高楼林立的城市的灯光和喧嚣中时,回忆会让作者冷静下来。由此可推知，作者现在生活在城市里。 【解题导语】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在成长过程中,在祖父母家里观察周围的自然世界的美好回忆。 Ⅱ.应用文写作 假定你是李华,最近你的美国朋友克里斯（Chris）在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通问题。他心情不佳,来信寻求你的帮助,请根据以下要点给他回信,内容包括: 1.安慰朋友; 2.提出建议（尊重理解、分享交流等）; 3.表达希望。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。   [答案] One possible version： Dear Chris, I am sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I've had similar experiences before. Here are my suggestions. First, let's put ourselves in their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes. However, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart, not a solution. Therefore, tell them about the difference and share your ideas. I hope my advice will help and that things can get better soon. Yours, Li Hua Ⅲ.读后续写 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At the beginning of this year,my daughter Helen spent a month in the hospital fighting for her life. Since then, she has had to deal with the disease as well as many side effects. She has met each challenge， disappointment and setback with courage. With her 16th birthday coming, Helen dreamt of a party and a campfire at the beach with friends, relatives,and her beloved dog, Ginger. It took a while, but I finally found a good beach that allowed dogs and campfires. However, a week before her party, Helen's disease worsened. Our friend Ian called the night before the party and turned our plans upside down. The small beach we'd selected and the surrounding beaches which can host a 30,000-person event on the party night would be closed. It was a disaster because we found no other nearby beach would work. Helen had her heart set on having her dog and a campfire at the beach,but as usual, she didn't complain （抱怨）. In her young life, she had dealt with much worse things than a destroyed birthday party. She sat down and began to quietly cry. After a while Helen decided she'd rather have the party at our home so she could have her dog and a campfire. We called the invitees with the changed plans. How to design a party at home with dogs and campfires was a challenge. It occurred to us that we could make full use of our yard. Ian's wife Jayme came first with some small signs,which read, “Welcome to Campbell Beach, where dogs and campfires are welcome. Where the beach is small and the waves are so far away, you must close your eyes to see them, but not so the love for Helen and her little dog. Happy Birthday, Helen!” 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 An hour later,Ian arrived with a truck loaded with the “beach”.   Helen and her friends couldn't wait to play on the sand with the toys.   [答案] One possible version An hour later, Ian arrived with a truck loaded with the “beach”. Hardly had Ian arrived when we began to unload things from the truck，which was filled with plenty of sand, palm trees, beach toys, and other necessities for the party. I was surprised and grateful. We made an effort to set everything up in the yard, small signs hanging. Although the “beach” was small， Helen was full of excitement. With all the things arranged well，the guests arrived. Helen and her friends couldn't wait to play on the sand with the toys. Not only did they build their sand castles, but they also enjoyed the campfire. With the dogs barking joyfully，the children heartily laughed. When the birthday cake was ready, all the friends sang songs together to express their best wishes to Helen. The birthday girl was in high spirits. It was the “beach” built with so much love that made her pleased with an unforgettable birthday. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $