内容正文:
一战成名目
第一部分
写作佳句、范文诵读
一、考情概览
》考情展示
年份
标题及写作要点
话题
类别
开头句
My School Library
多彩、安全、
1.基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等);
2025
有意义的学
说明介绍
已给出
2.对你的帮助:
校生活
3.你想为它做的事。
未给出标题(无需自拟标题)】
多彩安全
1.学校课本剧比赛信息(时间、地点…);
2024
有意义的学
说明介绍
已给出
2.你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论…):
校生活
3.表达期待。
My favourite art course
1.学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧
等);
2023
艺术与体育
说明介绍
已给出
2.你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时
间、活动等):
3.喜欢的理由。
Methods of learning
1.一个科目名称;
学习体验、方
2022
做法建议
已给出半句
2.此科目的学习方法(至少两个);
法与策略
3.此科目的学习感受或期望。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
多彩、安全
1.你认为校园的哪一个地方最美?
2021
有意义的学
说明介绍
已给出
2.这个地方在校园的哪个位置?
校生活
3.你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
Learn to Do Housework
1.做家务的好处(培养生活技能;…):
劳动实践
2020
说明介绍
已给出
2.力所能及的家务(扫地;…);
与创新
3.如何坚持做家务(热爱;养成习惯:…)。
》考情概述
分析2025~2023广西统考卷及2022~2020北部湾经济区考题可知,书面表达的考情具有以下特点:
1.话题:贴近学生学习和生活,围绕校园环境、学校课程设置、校园活动、学习方法、家务等展开;
2.类别:近5年多考查说明介绍类作文;
3.考查形式:以命题作文为主[6年4考],2024年未给出标题(也无需自拟标题),2022年是半命题作文;
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4.要点:给出3个写作要点,要求考生围绕写作要点,适当发挥,表达“感受、愿望或期望、理由”为高频写作
要点:
5.开头句:给出开头句,考生尤其要注意开头句是否完整。如果开头句不完整,考生需要根据句子结构将开
头句补充完整,并保证句子正确;
6.参考词汇:2023~2025中考真题连续3年都给出了3~4个参考词汇(统考前未给出);
7.写作背景:多为向英文校刊投稿:2024年首次考查给外籍朋友写邮件:
8.词数:80词左右。
二、写作技巧点拨
依据《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》语言能力学段目标三级要求可知,书面表达要求考生能围绕
相关主题,选用不同句式结构和时态,描述和介绍身边的人、事物或事件,表达情感、态度、观点和意图等。
考生在写作时,要围绕标题和要点展开。高分书面表达要从以下四点入手:
1.审题准确
认真审题,确定文章的写作要点、文体、人称和时态。
写作要点通常在题干中已经给出,考生需要根据写作要点联想可能用到的词汇、短语和句型,并运用恰
当的衔接词将句子衔接起来,确保文章连贯、通畅。
广西中考写作常考说明介绍类。考生在写作中要注意根据写作内容判定常用时态和人称:
类别
时态
人称
①涉及人与事物的关系时,且事物与自己相关,用第一人称
事物介绍
常用一般现在时
②不涉及人与事物的关系时,常用第三人称
说明
做法建议
常用一般现在时
常用第一、二人称
介绍
计划安排
常用一般将来时
常用第一人称
①介绍自己用第一人称
人物介绍
常用一般现在时
②介绍他人用第三人称
叙事
经历与感受
一般过去时
常用第一、三人称
2.“总一分一总”结构
三段式写作:第一段:点题,说明要介绍的人或物;第二段:条理清晰地叙述或介绍与主题相关的内容:第
三段:总结或升华文章主题。
(1)说明介绍类作文通常考查事物(地点)介绍、计划安排和做法建议。常见的写作模式如下:
(what)点明介
绍的对象
-I'd like to tell you something about.../My favorite art course is...
事物(地
介绍事物的
点)个绍
特征
The library lies in.../We usually have music on...
理由:Because./That'swhy../First../Second../Third.
理由(why)/期
望/感受(how)
期望:I hope../Iwish../I look forward to./Ican't wait.
感受:Ifeel../have learned../I am thankful.
点明主题针对某事给出建议:Here is some advice about.
-Firstly.we should/had better...
做法建议分点陈述
Secondly,it's necessary to...
-Thirdly/Finally,it's a good idea to...
再次点题表达期待:Ifwe,wewill./I hope./Iwish./I look forward to..
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We are going on a trip to...this Sunday.Here is the trip plan.
点明具体活动As the summer vacation is coming,'ve made a plan for it.
-活动时间
活动地点」
The activity is going to be held in/on-+时间/地点.
计划安排
活动安排
活动内容:There are different activities such as.
-活动目的:The activity aims to.
表达希望
-I'm sure I'll have a.../I hope.../I wish.../I look forward to...
(2)叙事类作文要求考生描述个人经历及感受。常见的写作模式如下:
-某人:The person Ilove/thank most is../I'll never forget.
haL某事:Istill remember the day when.
起因:It was hard/difficult for me to.
叙事类
Why
经过:I took part in.../I spent...(in)doing sth.
结果:As a result./With one's help,I made much progress../Finally.
How
感受:Ifeel./I'm thankful to./I have learnt../I'm proud that..
3.用词得当
(1)避免用词重复;
(2)引用名言警句、俗语谚语为文章添彩:
(3)选用恰当的连接词来衔接各句,使行文连贯、逻辑清晰。常用的连接词(组)具体如下:
作用
连接词(组)》
表示并列
and;both...and...;not only...but also...;either...or...;neither...nor...;as well as
表示转折
but;yet;however;while;though;instead;unluckily;unfortunately;after all;otherwise
first(ly);second(ly);third(ly);to begin with;to start with;first of all;at last;in the end;
表示顺序
next:then;after that;finally
表示递进
besides;what's more;what's worse
when;while;as;now;at present;recently;before;after;after a while;at first;later;soon;
表示时间
suddenly;as soon as;from now on;till
表示条件
if;unless;as long as
表示原因
because;because of;as;for;since;thanks to;for the reason that
表示结果
so:therefore;as a result;so...that...
though;although;even if/though;no matter what/how/who/when;whatever;however;who-
表示让步
ever;whenever
表示目的
so that;in order that/to;so as to
表示对比
while;on the one hand...,on the other hand...
表示举例
for example;such as;like;take...for example
表示观点
in my opinion;in my view;as for me;from my point of view
表示解释说明
in fact;actually;in that case
表示强调
in fact;above all
表示概括
in a word;in short;in conclusion;on the whole;generally speaking;all in all
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4.句式丰富
(1)扩写简单句
在简单句的基础上充分利用形容词、副词、定语从句或状语从句等来充实句子,让句子体现出较高的修
辞意识。如:
He was reading.
→He was reading in class.(添加状语)
→He was reading in the English class.(添加定语)
→He was reading in the English class when the teacher came into the classroom.(添加when引导的时间状语从句)
(2)巧用特殊句式
①比较等级的特殊句型
形式
句型
例句
原级
as+形容词/副词原级+as.…和…一样…
I think history is as interesting as geography.
The more we communicate with our parents,the
the+比较级.,the+比较级..越…就越…
fewer problems we will have.
比较级
比较级+and+比较级/more and more+多音节形
Our life is becoming better and better.
容词或副词原级越来越…
This village is becoming more and more beautiful.
one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数最
Plastic pollution is one of the most serious envi-
…之一
ronmental problems in the world.
最高级
the+序数词+形容词最高级+名词+范围…
China is the third largest country in area in the
中第几最…的…
world.
②感叹句增强感情
The mooncake is delicious.How delicious the mooncake is!
Du Fu is a great poet..→What a great poet Du Fu is!
③it相关句型
句型
例句
It's+a.(+for sb.)+to do sth.做某事(对某人
Skating is easy for me.
来说)是…的。
It is easy for me to skate.
It's+ad,(+ofsb.)+to do sth.(某人)做某事
He helped me work out this problem.He is kind.
是…的。
It's kind of him to help me work out this problem.
If's time to do sth./t's time for(doing)sth.到
It's time to go to school./It's time for school.
(做)某事的时间了。
f'sone's turn to do sth.轮到某人做某事了。
It's my turn to do the dishes.
It takes/took(sb.)+一段时间+to do sth.做某
He spent two days making the kite.
事花费(某人)…时间。
>It took him two days to make the kite.
We should arrive on time.This is important.
tis+ad.+that从句…是…的。
It is important that we should arrive on time.
It seems that..似乎/好像.…
It seems that everyone likes him.
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④强调句提升档次
My mother always takes good care of me.-It is my mother who always takes good care of me.
I met him in the library.-It was in the library that I met him.
(3)巧用从句
①宾语从句
句式
例句
The moon moves around the earth.I know the truth.
陈述句式
>I know that the moon moves around the earth.
②状语从句
句式
例句
时间状语从句
I will go shopping in ten minutes.After that,I will meet my friends.
After I go shopping,I will meet my friends.
It will snow tomorrow.We will make a snowman.
条件状语从句
-If it snows tomorrow,we will make a snowman.
He was ill.He didn't go to school.
原因状语从句
-He didn't go to school because he was ill.
She is young.She has the dream of being a hero like her father.
让步状语从句
-Although/Though she is young,she has the dream of being a hero like her father.
He gets up early today.He wants to hold a birthday party for his mother.
目的状语从句
He gets up early today so that he can hold a birthday party for his mother.
The math problem was very easy.I worked it out quickly.
结果状语从句
>The math problem was so easy that I worked it out quickly.
③定语从句
先行词
例句
The man is making a speech.The man is my father.
人
-The man who/that is making a speech is my father.
I'll keep the cup forever.My mother sent a cup to me.
物
I'll keep the cup forever (that/which)my mother sent to me.
I will always remember those days.We shared happiness and sadness during those days.
时间
>I will always remember those days when we shared happiness and sadness.
This is a small town.I was born in the small town.
地点
This is the small town where I was born.
Tina was late for the sports meeting.I don't know the reason.
原因
>I don't know the reason why Tina was late for the sports meeting.
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