2025-2026学年高二上学期英语天一期中读后续写 课件

读后续写 学习目标 1、能翻译出原文中的长难句及关键句； 2、能根据原文及提示句理清故事续写思路； 3、读背范文中描写句。 I first started wearing glasses at age five. They were thick, black-framed, and many friends said that I looked like Ralphie, a boy in the movie A Christmas Story, always wearing thick glasses.Sadly, they were right. Over the years, my nearsightedness worsened, and my lenses(镜片）became heavier. An obvious depression formed on the bridge of my nose from the weight. I often joked that if the sun shone just right, I could start forest fires. In my twenties, I got my first pair of thinner lenses. Wearing them felt like wearing nothing at all. Later, polarized （偏光的）sunglasses made the world's colors clearer than ever before. I thought I had finally seen life fully until my father went blind. Diagnosed （诊断）with macular degeneration, he ignored treatment advice and soon lost most of his vision. Once active, now he could only sit in his chair. 阅读原文，分析并翻译画线句 导 我五岁的时候就开始戴眼镜了。那眼镜很厚，是黑色边框的，很多朋友都说我看起来像电影《圣诞故事》里那个总是戴着厚厚眼镜的瑞普利。很遗憾，他们说得没错。随着时间的推移，我的近视愈发严重，镜片也变得越来越重。鼻梁上明显形成了因重量而形成的凹陷。我经常开玩笑说，如果阳光照射的角度恰到好处，我甚至能引发森林火灾。 在我二十多岁的时候，我戴上了第一副较薄的镜片。戴上它们的感觉就像是什么都没戴一样。后来，偏光太阳镜让世界的色彩比以往任何时候都更加清晰。我以为自己终于能完整地看待这个世界了，直到我的父亲失明。他被诊断出患有黄斑变性，却拒绝接受治疗建议，很快大部分视力都丧失了。曾经活跃的他现在只能坐在椅子上。 An eye exam showed a small spot of degeneration in my eyes as well. At first, it seemed minor, but the next year it affected both eyes. Then came a cataract operation, which helped, but my vision problems were far from over. Just before retirement, I was diagnosed with mvasthenia gravis, a disease that weakens muscles including those controlling the eyes. My eyelids became too tired to stay open, and unclear vision struck several times a day. 原文 一次眼科检查发现我的眼睛也有轻微的退化现象。起初，这看起来不算严重，但第二年这种状况影响到了双眼。随后我接受了白内障手术，这有所帮助，但我的视力问题远未解决。就在退休前夕，我被诊断出患有重症肌无力，这是一种会削弱包括控制眼睛的肌肉在内的肌肉的疾病。我的眼皮变得过于疲劳而无法睁开，而且每天会有好几次视力模糊的情况发生。 The final warning came at a neuro-ophthalmologist's office. Covering my left eye, I read the chart- but a large black shadow blocked most of my vision. Overnight, I became legally blind in that eye. My fear of injections (注射） was greater than the fear of blindness, yet the only way to save my sight was through eye injections. Both eyes needed treatment, and I would face four injections in total. My heart raced as I imagined the process. I felt a mix of fear, determination, and hope, knowing that these injections were my only chance to keep seeing the world I loved. 原文 最后的警告是在一位神经眼科医生的诊室里发出的。我用左手遮住眼睛，读着那张图表--但一大块黑色阴影遮挡了我大部分的视线。一夜之间，我的那只眼睛就完全失明了。我对注射的恐惧超过了对失明的恐惧，然而拯救我视力的唯一方法就是进行眼部注射。 双眼都需要治疗，总共我得接受四次注射。当我想象这个过程时，我的心跳加速。我既感到恐惧，又充满决心和希望，因为我深知这些注射是我能继续看清我所热爱的世界的唯一机会。 思 一、叙事脉络 原文以视力衰退为核心线索，按时间线展开：5岁戴厚重眼镜→20多岁近视加重+戴偏光镜短暂改善→父亲黄斑变性失明的经历→自身出现眼部病变（黄斑变性+白内障手术+重症肌无力）→左眼视力骤降→面临眼部注射治疗，核心冲突是“对失明的恐惧”与“挽救视力的决心”的对抗。 二、铺垫与伏笔 父亲黄斑变性的经历为自身患病做铺垫；“only chance to keep seeing the world I loved”为续写“注射治疗的决心”埋下线索。 三、主题内核 表层是“眼部疾病与视力抗争”的个人经历，深层指向“面对不可逆的身体衰退时，恐惧与求生欲的博弈”，以及“对平凡视觉体验的珍视”（如阳光、色彩、清晰的世界）。 议与展 小组讨论写作段落分析，回答下列问题 ①由第一段首句内容“I made up my mind finally.”（最终我下定了决心。)可知，第一段可描写？ 1. 核心动作：聚焦“下定决心后的行动+首次注射的体验” ◦ 先写“克服恐惧预约注射”，用“without hesitation”“pushing aside overwhelming fear”体现决心； ◦ 再描写注射场景：细节（手抖但意志坚定、医生的安抚）+ 注射后的情绪变化（恐慌→释然）； ◦ 补充心理支撑：联想到父亲失明的痛苦、自己想留住的美好事物（阳光、色彩、亲人），强化“必须坚持”的动机。 2. 情感逻辑：恐惧→坚定→自我激励，贴合原文“fear + determination”的核心冲突。 议与展 小组讨论写作段落分析，回答下列问题 ②由第二段首句内容“I began to notice small improvements in my vision.”(我开始注意到自己的视力有了些许改善。)可知，第二段可描写？ 1. 核心内容：“视力改善的具象化细节+结果与情感升华” ◦ 先写具体改善：左眼黑影消退、能长时间看书、看清花园色彩等（呼应原文“colors clearer”的细节）； ◦ 再写复查结果：医生确认病情得到控制，形成“付出有回报”的闭环； ◦ 升华主题：对比“恐惧差点阻碍自己”与“勇气夺回视力”，点出“珍惜眼前世界”的核心。 2. 细节呼应：复用原文“color”“vision”“world I loved”等关键词，保持文本连贯性。 I made up my mind finally. I would face the injections without letting fear control me. On the day of the first treatment, my hands trembled, but I reminded myself that courage was not the absence of fear, but acting despite it. The doctor explained each step carefully, and the nurses offered gentle encouragement. As the needle approached my eye, I focused on my breathing, imagining the vibrant colors of a sunset I might still see. One by one, I endured all four injections, my determination carrying me through the hardest moments. 我终于下定决心了。我要勇敢地接受注射，不让恐惧控制自己。在第一次治疗的那天，我的双手颤抖不已，但我提醒自己，勇气并非没有恐惧，而是即便面对恐惧也要勇往直前。医生详细地解释了每一个步骤，护士们也给予我温柔的鼓励。当针头靠近我的眼睛时，我专注于自己的呼吸，想象着我可能还能看到的绚烂日落的色彩。一次又一次，我忍受着所有的四次注射，我的决心支撑着我度过了最艰难的时刻。 评 I began to notice small improvements in my vision. Shapes grew sharper, colors brighter, and shadows less threatening. With each subsequent improvement, my confidence grew alongside my eyesight. Simple joys, like reading a book or watching leaves dance in the wind, became celebrations of persistence and hope. I realized that my journey with vision problems had taught me patience, resilience, and the value of facing challenges head-on. Life, I understood, was about truly seeing the beauty in every moment rather than perfect sight. 我开始注意到自己的视力有了些许改善。形状变得更清晰，色彩更鲜艳，阴影也不再那么令人恐惧。随着每次视力的逐步改善，我的信心也与之一同增长。简单的快乐，比如阅读一本书或者看着树叶在风中舞动，都成为了坚持和希望的庆祝。我意识到，与视力问题的斗争教会了我耐心、坚韧以及直面挑战的价值。我明白了，生活在于真正地在每一个瞬间中看到美好，而不仅仅是拥有完美的视力。 堂清背诵 1. On the day of the first treatment, my hands trembled, but I reminded myself that courage was not the absence of fear, but acting despite it. 在第一次治疗的那天，我的双手颤抖不已，但我提醒自己，勇气并非没有恐惧，而是即便面对恐惧也要勇往直前。 2.I realized that my journey with vision problems had taught me patience, resilience, and the value of facing challenges head-on. 我意识到，与视力问题的斗争教会了我耐心、坚韧以及直面挑战的价值。 3.Life, I understood, was about truly seeing the beauty in every moment rather than perfect sight. 我明白了，生活在于真正地在每一个瞬间中看到美好，而不仅仅是拥有完美的视力。 1. 在第一次治疗的那天，我的双手颤抖不已，但我提醒自己，勇气并非没有恐惧，而是即便面对恐惧也要勇往直前。 2.我意识到，与视力问题的斗争教会了我耐心、坚韧以及直面挑战的价值。 3.我明白了，生活在于真正地在每一个瞬间中看到美好，而不仅仅是拥有完美的视力。 检 翻译下列句子 $