写作专题（2）读后续写 第3讲 提升续写品质的10大满分句式（课件PPT）-【正禾一本通】2026年新高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义（人教版）

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“续写品质提升”专题，涵盖非谓语作状语、倒装句、强调句等10大满分句式，对接高考书面表达对语言多样性的考查要求，分析近五年真题中这些句式的高频应用，构建系统性句式训练体系。 课件亮点在于“句式功能+真题语境+迁移运用”的实战策略，如以2023年新高考卷续写真题为例，解析无灵主语句“Warm sunlight filtered through the window, softening her anxious expression”的运用，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。特设“句式错误库”和“语境仿写”模块，学生通过每日仿写熟练掌握表达技巧，教师可据此精准指导，实现高效备考。

写作专题 英 语 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 现在分词作状语 满分句式1 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 过去分词作状语 满分句式2 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 现在分词完成式作状语 满分句式3 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 独立主格结构与with复合结构 满分句式4 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 虚拟语气 满分句式5 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 部分倒装句 满分句式6 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 全部倒装句 满分句式7 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 强调句 满分句式8 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 形容词(短语)作状语 满分句式9 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 无灵主语句 满分句式10 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 第三讲——提升续写品质的10大满分句式 [句式]　Doing..., 主语＋did sth 或者主语＋did sth, doing... [说明]　现在分词常作伴随动作状语和时间状语。doing所表示的动作与主句主语之间构成逻辑上的主谓关系。 佳句　(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)Soon, I boarded the bus and gave him a grateful smile, waving goodbye to my newest friend. 很快，我登上了巴士，给了他一个感激的微笑，然后向我的新朋友挥手告别。 仿写　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)他用他温暖的手臂抱着我，补充道：“不出所料，你真的做得很不错！” ， he added, “As expected, you really can make a good shot！” Hugging me in his warm arms [句式]　Done..., 主语＋did sth或者主语＋did sth, done... [说明]　过去分词常作伴随动作状语和原因状语。done所表示的动作与主句主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系。 佳句　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words，I simply stood there dumbfounded. 他的话让我感到了一种强烈的兴奋和自豪，我目瞪口呆地站在那里。 仿写　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)我被他的话打动了，于是我决定在写作上取得更多的进步，以达到他的期望。 , I made up my mind to make more progress in writing so as to live up to his expectations. Struck by his words [句式]　Having done..., 主语＋did sth或者主语＋did sth, having done... [说明]　该句式中，现在分词完成式所表示的动作发生在主句谓语动词之前，与主句主语之间是逻辑上的主谓关系。 佳句　(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)Having heard it(＝After hearing it), he first frowned and then just smiled, patting my shoulder. 听到后，他先是皱起眉头，然后笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀。 仿写　知道了整个故事后，马里给了我一个理解的微笑，并告诉了我他以前在丛林里的经历。 , Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences in jungle. Having known the whole story [句式]　(with＋)名词/代词＋非谓语动词(­ing形式、­ed形式或不定式)/形容词/副词/介词短语 [说明]　非谓语动词作状语，其逻辑主语须与主句主语保持一致。若不一致，非谓语动词形式须另带主语，从而构成复合结构作状语，这种结构称为“独立结构”。独立主格结构经常可以和with复合结构互换。 佳句　(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)After being told that the cash machine still did not play along, Gunter let out a long sigh, (with) his subtle expression displaying a sign of disappointment． 在被告知自动取款机还没有继续运转后，冈特长叹了一口气，他那微妙的表情透露出失望。 (with) the sponsor inviting me to attend the award presentation 仿写　①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)礼堂里回荡着热烈的掌声，我迫不及待地想和我的老师分享这一荣誉。 , scarcely could I wait to share the honor with my teacher. ②(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)突然，我发现了一封来自比赛工作人员的未读的电子邮件，主办方邀请我参加颁奖典礼。 Suddenly, I discovered an unread email from the contest official, ． (With)Thunderous applause echoing in the auditorium [句式]　①“If sb had done..., sb would have done...”或者“Had sb done..., sb would have done...”如果某人过去……，某人就…… ②“Without/But for...，sb would have done...”要不是……，某人…… [说明]　读后续写最常用到的是对过去的虚拟，表示对过去发生的事情委婉地表达后悔、遗憾、感谢等情感。 Without/But for...，sb would have done...“要不是……，某人……”句式相当于If it had not been for...，sb would have done...或者Had it not been for...，sb would have done...。 佳句　①If we hadn't adopted him，he would have lived a miserable life. 如果我们没有收养他，他就会过上悲惨的生活。 ②My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels. 我的车在高速公路上抛锚了，没有她的帮助，我不可能穿着高跟鞋回到家。 not have made it. But for/Without his training in the army, he would not have made it. If it hadn't been for your help and support, I would not have won the English Speech Contest. But for/Without your help and support, I would not have won the English Speech Contest. 仿写　①如果不是因为他在军队里接受的训练，他就不会成功。 → (if) → (but for/without) ②如果没有您的帮助和支持，我就不会赢得英语演讲比赛。 → (if) → (but for/without) If it hadn't been for his training in the army, he would that I couldn't help but join in with a bright smile [句式]　So＋adj./adv.＋be动词/助动词/情态动词＋主语．..that...如此……以至于…… 佳句　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Observing the smile on his face blooming like a flower, so moved was I that I burst into tears uncontrollably. 看到他脸上的微笑像一朵花一样绽放，我非常感动，以至于无法控制地哭了起来。 仿写　听到她的笑声像银铃一样在空气中回荡，我无比开心，忍不住也露出了灿烂的笑容。 Hearing her laughter ringing through the air like a silver bell, ． so joyful was I touched by the fact that the young man risked his life to save the drowning child [句式]　否定词位于句首＋be动词/情态动词/助动词＋主语＋剩下的谓语部分＋其他 佳句　(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually succeeded in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination. 不仅观众和其他学生对大卫最终完成比赛印象深刻，而且他们也非常钦佩他的坚定决心。 仿写　不仅村民们对那个年轻人冒着生命危险救起溺水孩子的举动感动非常，而且他们也高度赞扬了他的非凡勇气。 ，but also they praised him highly for his incredible bravery. Not only were the villagers by her mistake 句式]　①n./adj./adv.＋as/though＋主语＋谓语，主句 ②剩下的谓语部分＋as/though＋主语＋情态动词，主句“尽管……” 佳句　(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)However，astonished as I was by his generosity, I insisted on exchanging phone numbers with each other and promised to pay him back. 然而，尽管我对他的慷慨感到惊讶，但我坚持要互相交换电话号码，并答应会付钱给他。 仿写　然而，尽管她对自己的错误感到尴尬，但她真诚地向大家道歉，并承诺立刻改正。 However, , she apologized sincerely to everyone and promised to correct it immediately. embarrassed as she was [句式]　①Here/There/Out/In/Up/Down/Away/Now/Then...＋谓语(表示运动的不及物动词)＋主语(名词) ②介词短语＋谓语动词(不及物动词，如lie, stand, sit, exist, stretch, come或be动词)＋主语(名词) ③分词短语＋be动词＋主语(名词) 佳句　Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead up, talking happily with his father. 这个陌生人在房间里坐着，或者更确切地说，是他的叔叔，他抬着前额，和他的父亲愉快地交谈着。 仿写　房子外面站着一个高个子男人，或者更确切地说，是一名士兵，他挺着胸膛，热情地向每个人打招呼。 , or rather a soldier, with his chest puffed out, greeting everyone warmly. Outside the house stood a tall man realized I was so desperate for the prize to prove myself. [句式]　It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他 [说明]　强调句可以强调除谓语之外的其他成分，在读后续写中最常见的是强调主语和状语。 佳句　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)It is my considerate teacher who inspires me to face my fear bravely and positively. 是我体贴的老师激励我勇敢而积极地面对我的恐惧。 仿写　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)在那一刻，我意识到我非常渴望获得这个奖项来证明自己。 It was at that moment that I [句式]　形容词(短语), 主语＋谓语＋其他或者主语＋谓语＋其他，形容词(短语) [说明]　形容词(短语)作状语可以增强感染力，使描述更生动、形象。形容词(短语)作状语可位于句首、句末或句中。 佳句　(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Then I advanced towards the stage, full of expectation． 然后，我满怀期待地走向了舞台。 仿写　走进教室时，我注意到同学们正在讨论考试成绩，我感到既紧张又兴奋。 Walking into the classroom, I noticed my classmates discussing the exam results, ． nervous and excited [句式]　(a burst/wave/surge/sense/feeling of＋)情感名词＋有灵动词(短语)＋sb表示“某人感到……” 或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来” [说明]　①常见情感名词：happiness/joy/delight/ecstasy(高兴，快乐)，sadness/sorrow(伤心)，anger/rage(生气)，despair/hopelessness(绝望)，excitement(兴奋)，fear/scare/horror/fright(害怕，恐惧)，surprise/astonishment(惊讶，震惊)，regret(后悔)，satisfaction(满意)，confusion/puzzlement(困惑)，panic(恐慌)，relief(宽慰)，frustration(沮丧)，pride(骄傲)，guilt(内疚)，disappointment(失望)等 ②常见有灵动词(短语)：seize/take hold of(侵袭，突然控制), swallow(吞噬，淹没)，flood over(席卷)，creep over(不知不觉地产生), grip(紧抓)，give way to(被……代替), tear...into pieces(把……撕成碎片)，deprive...of...(剥夺)，sweep over/rush over(袭来，席卷)，choke(使说不出话来), fail(使无能为力), desert/abandon(抛弃)等 over me A wave of panic seized the crowd 佳句　①(2024·新高考Ⅰ卷)A look of concern washed over his face as he listened. 他听着，脸上掠过一种关切的表情。 ②A wave of sadness crept over her as she read the farewell letter from her best friend. 当她读着来自挚友的告别信时，一阵悲伤悄然袭来。 仿写　①当我走上舞台领奖时，一阵兴奋涌上心头。 as I stepped onto the stage to receive the award. ②当火警突然响起时，人群陷入一阵恐慌。 when the fire alarm suddenly went off. A surge of excitement swept [句式]　表示身体部位/音、容、笑的名词＋有灵动词(短语) [说明]　①常见名词：face, laughter, smile, tear, words等。 ②常见动词(短语)：light up/brighten (照亮，亮起来)，linger (继续存留)，well up (涌出)，flash (闪烁)，crumple (弄皱)等。 happiness when she saw her best friend after years apart. As the little girl woke up, her mother's tears gave way to laughter. 佳句　Her face brightened when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 仿写　①当她见到她分开多年的最好的朋友时，她的脸上洋溢着纯粹的喜悦和幸福。(light up) ②当小女孩醒来时，她母亲破涕为笑。(give way to) Her face lit up with sheer delight and $