内容正文:
专题09 书面表达
主题01 人与自我——个人信息、生活习惯、家庭关系及自我感受
Passage 1(畅想未来)
(24-25八年级上•安徽省黄山市歙县•期末)假设你是李华,将参加学校举行的有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛,请你以 “My Life in 10 Years” 为题,根据下面的图片写一篇演讲稿,为此次比赛做准备。
要求:1. 词数:不少于80词。短文的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括导图中所有要点,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Life in 10 Years
Hello, everybody! My name is Li Hua. My life in 10 years will be fantastic and wonderful. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s my life in 10 years. I hope it will come true. Thank you!
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·安徽蚌埠市·期末)未来的校园生活是什么样的?假设你是李明,你校英语杂志正举行以“School Life in 10 Years”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文,想象一下十年后的校园生活。
要求:(1)所写内容必须包括提示中所有的信息,并适当发挥;
(2)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
School Life in 10 Years
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Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省安庆市大观区·期末)我们中国农历新年即将来临,制订新年计划对于提高和完善自我有着重要的意义。请根据表格内容提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下李华一家的新年计划。
父亲
加强锻炼;读更多的书籍
母亲
学习跳舞;学做更多美味的菜肴
李华
更加努力学习;继续练习钢琴
弟弟
少吃垃圾食品,和同学处好关系
要求:1.句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确;
2.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Chinese New Year is coming soon. Everyone in Li Hua’s family has made resolutions for the new year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·安徽合肥·期末)随着短视频的兴起,越来越多的人丢掉了阅读的习惯,如何在喧嚣的世界中静下心来阅读是现在很多人面临的难题。假如你们班下节英语口语课的主题是“How to make a habit of reading”,请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文为口语课做准备。
要点如下:
1.读有趣的书;
2.每天花一些时间阅读;
3.读完一本书后奖励自己;
4.……
注意:
1.短文须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100 (短文的开头和结尾已为你写好在答题卷,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:reward (v.奖励)
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主题02 人与社会——社交互动、学校互动、社会规则及公共事务
Passage 1
新年伊始,《英语周报》面向中学生征集稿件,邀请大家以“My 2024 and 2025”为题回顾2024年的生活经历以及展望新的一年。
要求:短文必须包含右图要点,可适当发挥。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(2)词数:80左右。标题和开头已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:unforgettable难忘的;make progress in…在某方面取得进步;take up doing…开始学习;…make up sb’s mind to do…下定决心做…
My 2024 and 2025
2025 is around the corner. It’s time to share my experiences in 2024 and show my resolutions in 2025. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·安徽省芜湖市无为市·期末)假如你是李华,最近有很多人得了流感,请你以“How to prevent the flu”为题目,写一篇文章。
提示词:wash hands, do sports, eat healthy food, have enough sleep, go to see a doctor, prevent (预防)
要求:1.要点齐全,书写工整,卷面干净;
2.作文中不能出现真实的学校,班级和姓名。
3.语言表达准确,内容完整,可适当补充,80个词左右。
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Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省淮北市五校联考·期末)假设你是李徽,请给你的英国笔友Peter写一封e-mail,谈谈你在新的一年里打算做什么,并简单说明理由。
学习
多读书、加强英语读写方面的训练 ……
健康
多锻炼、吃健康食品 ……
人际关系
多与父母沟通、多交朋友 ……
注意:
1.内容必须包含表格所给信息,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I would like to share my plans for the new year with you.
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Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 4
(24-25八年级上·安徽省芜湖市繁昌区·期末)寒假即将到来,如何让我们的寒假生活过得快乐而有意义呢?请根据以下信息给学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的寒假计划,并说明理由。
Aspects (方面)
Activities
Study
read some books;
…
Health
play basketball with friends;
…
Housework
…
…
…
要求:
1. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含所给内容,并适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
The winter vacation is coming. How can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my plan.
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Passage 5
(23-24八年级上•安徽省宿州市泗县•期末)假如你叫李华,你的好朋友 Jackson邀情你本周日下午参观他的花园(garden),但是你不能接受邀请。请根据一下提示,给他发一封电子邮件说明原因。
时间
要做的事情
本周六上午
帮助妈妈做家务,洗衣服…
本周六下午
和爸爸一起踢足球, 做作业…
本周日上午
看望在乡下的奶奶…
本周日下午
为下周的英语考试做准备…
要求:1) 词数:70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2)文章中不能出现本人的真实身份信息,可以适当拓展。
Dear Jackson,
Thanks for asking me to visit your garden. I’d love to, but I am afraid I can’t. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
(23-24八年级上•安徽省黄山市•期末)寒假即将到来,请根据以下思维导图以李华的名义给英国的笔友Michael发一封电子邮件,谈谈你这一学期的校园生活并制定寒假计划。
要求:
1.内容必须包含思维导图中的提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3.词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Take care. Look forward to your email.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Passage 7
假如你是Li Hua,请你根据下面的表格信息,写一篇不少于70词的英语短文来介绍你和你的好朋友Bob。
姓名
相同点
不同点
Bob
1.喜欢音乐和运动;
2.喜欢阅读,周末常常一起去图书馆;
3.学习努力,学习成绩好;
4.都喜欢喝牛奶,认为是健康的,对身体有好处。
1.更高,更开朗;
2.天天锻炼;
3.喜欢看电影。
Li Hua
1.喜欢玩游戏;
2.每周锻炼一次;
3.喜欢吃汉堡。
注意:
1.短文必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
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主题01 人与自我——个人信息、生活习惯、家庭关系及自我感受
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上•安徽淮北市•期末)假设你叫李华,寒假即将来临,你的朋友Peter正在为假期计划而犯愁。为此,他向你写了一封邮件,询求你的帮助。请根据Peter担心的问题,给他回一封电子邮件,提一些合理的建议。
问题:
1.有很多作业要完成,但又想和朋友出去逛;
2.想买一台平板电脑(iPad),但没有足够的钱;
3.希望帮助一些有需要的人,但不知该怎么做。
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to get your e-mail. Now let me give you some advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you and you’ll have a wonderful holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽阜阳实验中学·期末)根据以下提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容:
1. 过去我将钱花在衣服和玩具上;
2. 老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上学;
3.从那以后,到儿童医院做志愿活动,帮助那里的儿童洗衣服,打扫房间;
4.做一些有趣的活动,给那里的儿童带去欢乐。
5. 为能帮助别人而高兴。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右(不含所给词)。
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help.
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Passage 5
(23-24八年级上·安徽省安庆市·期末) 新年伊始,你将自己的新年决心写在便利贴上,并把它们贴在墙上来鼓励自己。请你写一篇短文来介绍自己的新年目标,并谈谈你将如何实现这些目标。词数80~100。
I made three resolutions at the beginning of the year. Here they are.
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Passage 6
(23-24八年级上•安徽省六安市金寨县•期末)新年快到了,同学们一定有很多的计划。请结合下面的提示内容谈谈自己在学习、运动与健康、家务、旅行等方面的计划与安排,并针对自身的不足之处,写一篇短文说说你打算怎么做。
注意:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 意思连贯,符合逻辑,词数80左右(短文首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
New Year is coming soon and I have some plans for the new year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题02 人与社会——社交互动、学校互动、社会规则及公共事务
(23-24八年级上·安徽合肥·期末)走进安徽,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加安徽旅游活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格及文字提示,邀请他们走进合肥,品味合肥文化。
Welcome to Hefei
Location (地理位置)
in the center of Anhui Province (省)
Population
over 10, 000, 000
History
the hometown of Lord Bao (包公), over 2000 years old
Famous places
the Garden Expo Park(园博园), Sanhe Ancient Town
River
between Yangtze River and Huaihe River
注意:
1. 词数:80左右。
2. 内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现本人真实信息。
Welcome to Hefei
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Passage 2
(23-24八年级上•安徽省亳州市利辛县•期末)2023年的寒假即将到来,请根据以下思维导图以David的名义给英国的笔友Michael 发一封电子邮件,谈谈你这一学期的学习生活并制定寒假计划。
注意:
(1)习作须根据思维导图展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)词数60~80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:surf the Internet网上冲浪
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省宣城市·期末) 假如你是李华,为了提高同学们的身体素质,助力同学们健康成长,学校准备组织课后体育锻炼活动,现向同学们就活动内容征集意见。请你根据以下内容要点和写作要求,用英语给学校校长写一封邮件,向学校提出建议。
内容要点:
(1) 你建议学校在课后开展哪些体育活动? (至少2条)
(2) 你的理由是什么?
写作要求:
(1) 文中须包含以上提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:跳绳rope skipping; 羽毛球badminton; 体操gymnastics; 太极Tai Chi
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
主题03 人与自然——自然情景、动植物相关活动及人与自然的互动
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上•安徽合肥市新站区•期末)假如你是李辉,你校正举办一场“Green City Better Life”为主题的英文演讲比赛,倡议大家为创建环保型城市继续努力。请你围绕以下要点,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, I am happy to give a talk to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all Thank you for listening.
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专题09 书面表达
主题01 人与自我——个人信息、生活习惯、家庭关系及自我感受
Passage 1(畅想未来)
(24-25八年级上•安徽省黄山市歙县•期末)假设你是李华,将参加学校举行的有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛,请你以 “My Life in 10 Years” 为题,根据下面的图片写一篇演讲稿,为此次比赛做准备。
要求:1. 词数:不少于80词。短文的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括导图中所有要点,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Life in 10 Years
Hello, everybody! My name is Li Hua. My life in 10 years will be fantastic and wonderful. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s my life in 10 years. I hope it will come true. Thank you!
【例文】
My Life in 10 Years
Hello, everybody! My name is Li Hua. My life in 10 years will be fantastic and wonderful.
In 10 years, I’ll be a teacher in a school. Being a teacher will be fun because I will meet lots of lovely students. I’ll try my best to help my students. I will live in my hometown because it’s a very beautiful city. I love it and hope to do something for it. When I’m free, I will travel to other cities with my family or go hiking with my students. I will have more free time because there will be a robot in my home and it will help me with the housework.
That’s my life in 10 years. I hope it will come true. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇讲稿。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接给出的开头,另起一段介绍未来的生活;
第二步,介绍自己未来的职业,住所以及进行的活动;
第三步,承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①try my best尽我最大的努力
②travel to other cities去其他城市旅行
③go hiking去远足
[高分句型]
①Being a teacher will be fun because I will meet lots of lovely students. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I’m free, I will travel to other cities with my family or go hiking with my students. (When引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·安徽蚌埠市·期末)未来的校园生活是什么样的?假设你是李明,你校英语杂志正举行以“School Life in 10 Years”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文,想象一下十年后的校园生活。
要求:(1)所写内容必须包括提示中所有的信息,并适当发挥;
(2)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
School Life in 10 Years
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【例文】
School Life in 10 Years
School life in 10 years will be quite different from the one now.
Learning online will be part of the school life. There will not be much homework and it will be very easy. Students can use emails to send their homework to the teacher. During the rest time, the after-school activities will be more colorful. There will be all kinds of clubs in the school. Students can join their favorite clubs. They can also spend more time with their parents or best friends. What’s more, they can go on a school trip and have a lot of fun every month. In this way, they can know more about the world. All teachers and classmates will be very helpful and kind. Students will help each other both in life and in study.
All in all, school life in 10 years will be more and more meaningful and colorful.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、总述10年后的学校生活将与现在大不相同;
第二步、从学习方式、课后活动以及老师和同学们这三个方面来讲述未来的校园生活是什么样的;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different from不同于
②all kinds of各种各样的
③go on a school trip进行一次学校旅行
④both…and…既……又……;两者都
⑤all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
1 All in all, school life in 10 years will be more and more meaningful and colorful.(比较级)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省安庆市大观区·期末)我们中国农历新年即将来临,制订新年计划对于提高和完善自我有着重要的意义。请根据表格内容提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下李华一家的新年计划。
父亲
加强锻炼;读更多的书籍
母亲
学习跳舞;学做更多美味的菜肴
李华
更加努力学习;继续练习钢琴
弟弟
少吃垃圾食品,和同学处好关系
要求:1.句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确;
2.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Chinese New Year is coming soon. Everyone in Li Hua’s family has made resolutions for the new year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【例文】
The Chinese New Year is coming soon. Everyone in Li Hua’s family has made resolutions for the new year.
Li Hua’s father is going to do more exercise and read more books in his free time. His mother is going to take up dancing as her hobby and learn to cook more delicious food. Li Hua plans to study harder and keep on practicing playing the piano. As for Li Hua’s brother, he is going to eat less junk food and also plans to get on well with classmates.
All in all, Li Hua’s family are all going to improve themselves in the coming new year. I hope their plans will come true.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:根据所给提示,介绍李华一家4口人的新年计划,不要遗漏,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图,引出下文;
第二步,按照表格,具体阐述每个人的计划;
第三步,书写结语,表明期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take up dancing as her hobby 爱好跳舞
②keep on practicing playing the piano 坚持练习弹钢琴
③As for 至于
④get on well with classmates 和同学好好相处
[高分句型]
①I hope their plans will come true. (that引导的宾语从句,that省略。)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级下·安徽合肥·期末)随着短视频的兴起,越来越多的人丢掉了阅读的习惯,如何在喧嚣的世界中静下心来阅读是现在很多人面临的难题。假如你们班下节英语口语课的主题是“How to make a habit of reading”,请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文为口语课做准备。
要点如下:
1.读有趣的书;
2.每天花一些时间阅读;
3.读完一本书后奖励自己;
4.……
注意:
1.短文须包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100 (短文的开头和结尾已为你写好在答题卷,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:reward (v.奖励)
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【优秀满分范文】
How to make a habit of reading
It’s important to make a habit of reading. Here are some ways to help.
First, choose interesting books. If the book is boring, you’ll find it hard to keep reading. Second, spend some time reading every day. Even 15 to 20 minutes is enough. You can read before going to bed or during breakfast. Third, reward yourself after finishing a book. You can watch a movie or eat your favorite snack. What’s more, join a reading club. Sharing ideas with others makes reading more fun.
I hope the advice is helpful. Let’s start reading and enjoy the journey.
【知识点】方法/策略、阅读、应用文
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:根据所给要点完成写作,不能遗漏信息,适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明“养成阅读习惯很重要”,总起全文,引出下文将要介绍的具体方法;
第二步,分点阐述养成阅读习惯的四项核心方法;
第三步,结尾呼吁读者行动,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
① make a habit of doing sth 养成做某事的习惯
② spend some time doing sth 花费时间做某事
③ reward oneself 奖励自己
④ share ideas with others 与他人分享想法
[高分句型]
① If the book is boring, you’ll find it hard to keep reading.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② Sharing ideas with others makes reading more fun.(动名词短语作主语)
主题02 人与社会——社交互动、学校互动、社会规则及公共事务
Passage 1
新年伊始,《英语周报》面向中学生征集稿件,邀请大家以“My 2024 and 2025”为题回顾2024年的生活经历以及展望新的一年。
要求:短文必须包含右图要点,可适当发挥。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(2)词数:80左右。标题和开头已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:unforgettable难忘的;make progress in…在某方面取得进步;take up doing…开始学习;…make up sb’s mind to do…下定决心做…
My 2024 and 2025
2025 is around the corner. It’s time to share my experiences in 2024 and show my resolutions in 2025. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【例文】
My 2024 and 2025
2025 is around the corner. It’s time to share my experiences in 2024 and show my resolutions in 2025.
2024 is a year full of memories. I made great progress in my study. I studied hard and got good grades in most of my exams. I remember the feeling of excitement when I saw my scores. I also went on a wonderful trip with my family. We went to a beautiful beach. The sand was soft, and the sea was blue. We played beach volleyball and built sandcastles. It was an unforgettable experience.
However, I didn’t pay enough attention to my health. I often stayed up late to study or read. In 2025, I am determined to change this. I plan to do more exercise, like running and playing basketball. I want to be healthier and more energetic. As for my hobby, I will take up reading. I am going to read many interesting books, like adventure stories and science fiction. Reading will make me think more and will broaden my horizon.
I hope that 2025 will bring me more joys and growth.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,回顾2024年的经历并展望2025年的计划;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点,即2024年的经历和2025年的计划,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“2025年即将到来,是时候分享2024年的经历和2025年的计划了”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“2024年的学习、旅行经历和2025年的健康、爱好计划”几个方面重点介绍具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望2025年带来更多快乐和成长”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①around the corner 即将来临
②be full of 充满
③make great progress 取得巨大进步
④get good grades 取得好成绩
⑤stay up late 熬夜
⑥be determined to 决心做某事
⑦take up 开始从事
⑧broaden one's horizon 拓宽某人的视野
[高分句型]
①I made great progress in my study. I studied hard and got good grades in most of my exams. (两个简单句并列描述学习情况)
②I remember the feeling of excitement when I saw my scores. (when引导时间状语从句)
③In 2025, I am determined to change this. I plan to do more exercise, like running and playing basketball. (两个简单句并列阐述2025年的计划)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·安徽省芜湖市无为市·期末)假如你是李华,最近有很多人得了流感,请你以“How to prevent the flu”为题目,写一篇文章。
提示词:wash hands, do sports, eat healthy food, have enough sleep, go to see a doctor, prevent (预防)
要求:1.要点齐全,书写工整,卷面干净;
2.作文中不能出现真实的学校,班级和姓名。
3.语言表达准确,内容完整,可适当补充,80个词左右。
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【例文】
How to prevent the flu
I’m sorry to hear that many people have the flu these days. The flu is very common in winter and people get it easily. What should we do to prevent the flu?
First, we should wash our hands and change clothes often. Second, doing some sports is necessary for us. Such as running and cycling on Sundays. They are good ways to make us healthy. It’s important for us to eat healthy food every day. We also need to have enough sleep. It helps us keep active and we can study better. Finally, we’d better go to see a doctor at once when we have the flu. We’ll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor’s advice.
We don’t need to be afraid of the flu. Do you think so?
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从卫生、运动、睡眠等方面阐述;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②had better最好
③at once立刻
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to eat healthy food every day. (it作形式主语)
2 We’ll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor’s advice. (时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省淮北市五校联考·期末)假设你是李徽,请给你的英国笔友Peter写一封e-mail,谈谈你在新的一年里打算做什么,并简单说明理由。
学习
多读书、加强英语读写方面的训练 ……
健康
多锻炼、吃健康食品 ……
人际关系
多与父母沟通、多交朋友 ……
注意:
1.内容必须包含表格所给信息,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I would like to share my plans for the new year with you.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【例文】
Dear Peter,
I would like to share my plans for the new year with you.
First, I am going to read more books because I can learn something new about the world. I will practice reading English every morning and do some writing every evening, because I want to improve it to get good grades. Next, I am going to exercise more and eat healthy food because I want to keep fit. Finally, I am going to talk with my parents more. What’s more, I will make more friends, so I can be happier and learn more from them.
All in all, the new year is a new start of our lives. We should make a good preparation.
Yours,
Li Hui
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”为主;
③ 提示:根据表格中的要点提示完成写作,介绍新的一年你有什么打算,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图(已给出);
第二步,从“学习、健康、人际关系”几方面介绍新的一年的打算;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① read more books多读书
② exercise more多锻炼
③ keep fit保持健康
④ in all in总之
[高分句型]
First, I am going to read more books because I can learn something new about the world. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级上·安徽省芜湖市繁昌区·期末)寒假即将到来,如何让我们的寒假生活过得快乐而有意义呢?请根据以下信息给学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的寒假计划,并说明理由。
Aspects (方面)
Activities
Study
read some books;
…
Health
play basketball with friends;
…
Housework
…
…
…
要求:
1. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含所给内容,并适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
The winter vacation is coming. How can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my plan.
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【例文】
The winter vacation is coming. How can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my plan.
For study, I will read some books to improve my knowledge. I think reading is a good way to relax and learn at the same time. In terms of health, I plan to play basketball with friends regularly. Playing sports can not only keep me fit but also enhance my teamwork skills. As for housework, I will help my parents do some chores, such as cleaning the room and washing the dishes. This can reduce their burden and also teach me the importance of responsibility.
I believe that by following this plan, I will have a wonderful winter vacation.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据所给提示,介绍自己的寒假计划及理由;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②in terms of…在……方面
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④as for至于
⑤do some chores做家务
[高分句型]
1 Here is my plan.(倒装句)
Passage 5
(23-24八年级上•安徽省宿州市泗县•期末)假如你叫李华,你的好朋友 Jackson邀情你本周日下午参观他的花园(garden),但是你不能接受邀请。请根据一下提示,给他发一封电子邮件说明原因。
时间
要做的事情
本周六上午
帮助妈妈做家务,洗衣服…
本周六下午
和爸爸一起踢足球, 做作业…
本周日上午
看望在乡下的奶奶…
本周日下午
为下周的英语考试做准备…
要求:1) 词数:70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2)文章中不能出现本人的真实身份信息,可以适当拓展。
Dear Jackson,
Thanks for asking me to visit your garden. I’d love to, but I am afraid I can’t. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Jackson,
Thanks for asking me to visit your garden. I’d love to, but I’m afraid I can’t. This Saturday morning, I have to help my mother do housework such as washing clothes and cleaning the floor. In the afternoon I am going to play football with my father and do my homework. On Sunday morning I have to go to see my grandma in the countryside. In the afternoon I am going to study for the English test.
Write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍周末的活动,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍周六上午下午的活动;
第二步,介绍周日上午下午的活动;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②such as例如
③in the countryside在乡下
[高分句型]
①This Saturday morning, I have to help my mother do housework such as washing clothes and cleaning the floor. (and连接并列结构)
Passage 6
(23-24八年级上•安徽省黄山市•期末)寒假即将到来,请根据以下思维导图以李华的名义给英国的笔友Michael发一封电子邮件,谈谈你这一学期的校园生活并制定寒假计划。
要求:
1.内容必须包含思维导图中的提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3.词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Take care. Look forward to your email.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about my school life and my plan for the winter holiday.
I was really busy this term. I had a lot of homework to do. I felt too tired. However, I did better in math than before with the help of my math teacher. I am fond of playing the piano. So I played it in my free time, especially when I felt sad.
For the coming vacation, I plan to do more reading and sports. Reading brings me a bigger world. Doing sports keeps me healthy. On weekends, I am going to join the singing club. I can learn a lot from it.
Take care. Look forward to your email.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接邮件开头,引出话题;
第二步,详细地介绍自己这一学期的校园生活和寒假计划;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②be fond of喜欢
③in my free time在我空闲时间
[高分句型]
Reading brings me a bigger world. (动名词作主语)
Passage 7
假如你是Li Hua,请你根据下面的表格信息,写一篇不少于70词的英语短文来介绍你和你的好朋友Bob。
姓名
相同点
不同点
Bob
1.喜欢音乐和运动;
2.喜欢阅读,周末常常一起去图书馆;
3.学习努力,学习成绩好;
4.都喜欢喝牛奶,认为是健康的,对身体有好处。
1.更高,更开朗;
2.天天锻炼;
3.喜欢看电影。
Li Hua
1.喜欢玩游戏;
2.每周锻炼一次;
3.喜欢吃汉堡。
注意:
1.短文必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
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【例文】
My name is Li Hua. Bob is my good friend. We share many common interests. We both like music and sports. We also enjoy reading and often go to the library on weekends. Besides, we study hard and get good grades. We both think milk is healthy and good for our bodies, so we drink it often.
However, we are different in some ways. Bob is taller and more outgoing than me. He exercises every day and likes watching movies. I like playing games and only exercise once a week. Also, I enjoy eating hamburgers.
Even though we are different, we are still good friends.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“朋友的个人信息”、“相同点”以及“不同点”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①share分享
②enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事
③on weekends 在周末
④be good for 对……有好处
⑤every day 每天
⑥like doing sth 喜欢做某事
⑦Even though 虽然,尽管
[高分句型]
①We both think milk is healthy and good for our body, so we drink it often. (so引导的结果状语从句)
②Even though we are different, we are still good friends. (Even though引导的让步状语从句)
主题01 人与自我——个人信息、生活习惯、家庭关系及自我感受
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上•安徽淮北市•期末)假设你叫李华,寒假即将来临,你的朋友Peter正在为假期计划而犯愁。为此,他向你写了一封邮件,询求你的帮助。请根据Peter担心的问题,给他回一封电子邮件,提一些合理的建议。
问题:
1.有很多作业要完成,但又想和朋友出去逛;
2.想买一台平板电脑(iPad),但没有足够的钱;
3.希望帮助一些有需要的人,但不知该怎么做。
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to get your e-mail. Now let me give you some advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you and you’ll have a wonderful holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to get your e-mail. Now let me give you some advice.
First, I advise you to finish your homework before you hang out with your friends. If you just want to play and don’t do your homework, your parents will be angry. Second, if you truly look forward to buying an iPad, you’ll probably ask your parents for help. But remember you should use the iPad in a right way. Don’t spend too much time on it. Third, if you still don’t know what to do to help some people in need, I think going to an old people’s home will be a good idea. You can also help look after your neighbor’s kids.
I hope my advice can help you and you’ll have a wonderful holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示问题给出相应的建议,可适当发挥,注意逻辑清晰,表达合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出给出建议的主题;
第二步,根据对方提出的问题给出具体的建议;
第三步,书写结语,希望自己的建议能帮助到对方并祝对方有一个愉快的假期。
[亮点词汇]
①hang out with sb和某人闲逛
②look forward to期待
③ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①If you just want to play and don’t do your homework, your parents will be angry. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②But remember you should use the iPad in a right way. (宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽阜阳实验中学·期末)根据以下提示,以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容:
1. 过去我将钱花在衣服和玩具上;
2. 老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上学;
3.从那以后,到儿童医院做志愿活动,帮助那里的儿童洗衣服,打扫房间;
4.做一些有趣的活动,给那里的儿童带去欢乐。
5. 为能帮助别人而高兴。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右(不含所给词)。
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help.
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【例文】
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to buy clothes and snacks with my pocket money, but sometimes it was a waste of money. One day, our teacher told us that in some places in the world, there were many poor children who didn’t have enough clothes and food. They even couldn’t go to school. Hearing that, I felt sorry for them and decided that I should do something for them.
From then on, I started volunteering at a children’s hospital. I helped the children wash clothes and clean their rooms. Also, I organized some interesting activities to bring them joy. Now, I feel really happy to be able to help those in need. Helping others makes my life more meaningful.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己过去将钱花在衣服和玩具上,以及老师告知很多儿童缺衣少食的事实;
第二步,介绍是如何帮助他人的;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②a waste of money 浪费钱
③from then on 从那时起
④be able to 能够
⑤in need 处于困境中
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher told us that in some places in the world, there were many poor children who didn’t have enough clothes and food. (定语从句)
②Hearing that, I felt sorry for them and decided that I should do something for them.(宾语从句)
Passage 5
(23-24八年级上·安徽省安庆市·期末) 新年伊始,你将自己的新年决心写在便利贴上,并把它们贴在墙上来鼓励自己。请你写一篇短文来介绍自己的新年目标,并谈谈你将如何实现这些目标。词数80~100。
I made three resolutions at the beginning of the year. Here they are.
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【答案】例文:
I made three resolutions at the beginning of the year. Here they are.
The first resolution is about my study. I want to get better grades, so I’m going to study harder than before. I’m going to spend more time on my weak subjects. The second resolution has to do with my physical health. I’m going to take more exercise and eat less junk food. Only in good health can I focus on my lessons. My last resolution is about my dream. I want to be an actor when I grow up. To make my dream come true, I plan to take acting lessons.
Although it is difficult to keep the resolutions, I will try my best to do it.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般将来时”;
③提示:围绕“新年目标”,从三方面展开;三个要点已经给出,需具体描写如何实现三个目标。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出设立新年目标(已给出);
第二步,具体描写三个目标,以及分别如何实现;
第三步,总结点题。
[亮点词汇]
①spend more time on 花更多时间
②have to do with 与……有关
③focus on 专注于
④make my dream come true 使得梦想实现
[高分句型]
①Only in good health can I focus on my lessons.(倒装句)
②Although it is difficult to keep the resolutions, I will try my best to do it.(it的固定句型、although引导让步状语从句)
Passage 6
(23-24八年级上•安徽省六安市金寨县•期末)新年快到了,同学们一定有很多的计划。请结合下面的提示内容谈谈自己在学习、运动与健康、家务、旅行等方面的计划与安排,并针对自身的不足之处,写一篇短文说说你打算怎么做。
注意:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 意思连贯,符合逻辑,词数80左右(短文首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
New Year is coming soon and I have some plans for the new year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【例文】
New Year is coming soon and I have some plans for the new year.
I am going to study hard and get good grades. I will make an effort to come up with some ideas about study. I will read more books. It can help me improve myself. I will have some exercise in the New Year. A good body is the source of everything. I should get rid of junk food and eat healthy food, such as fish, water, vegetables, fruits and so on. When I am at home, I plan to help with housework because my parents can relax. Travelling with my best friends may be a good idea because it can make us happy.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在学习方面的计划;
第二步,介绍自己在健康方面的计划;
第三步,介绍自己在家务劳动方面的计划;
第四步,介绍自己在旅游方面的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①get rid of摆脱
②come up with提出
③make an effort努力
[高分句型]
When I am at home, I plan to help with housework because my parents can relax. (时间状语从句)
主题02 人与社会——社交互动、学校互动、社会规则及公共事务
(23-24八年级上·安徽合肥·期末)走进安徽,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加安徽旅游活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格及文字提示,邀请他们走进合肥,品味合肥文化。
Welcome to Hefei
Location (地理位置)
in the center of Anhui Province (省)
Population
over 10, 000, 000
History
the hometown of Lord Bao (包公), over 2000 years old
Famous places
the Garden Expo Park(园博园), Sanhe Ancient Town
River
between Yangtze River and Huaihe River
注意:
1. 词数:80左右。
2. 内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现本人真实信息。
Welcome to Hefei
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【例文】
Welcome to Hefei
My hometown is HeFei. It is a beautiful city in AnHui province. And the population of it is over 10, 000,000. HeFei located in the centre of AnHui province. Also, two famous rivers in China, one is Yangtze River and the other is Huaihe River, both run through the city, which makes the city more different from other cities in the country. Besides the special location, there are quite a few scenic sports in the city too, the Garden Expo Park and Sanhe Ancient Town are two of the famous places. In addition, HeFei is a city with a history of more than 2000 years. HeFei also gave birth to the historical people who was called Lord Bao.
If you come to HeFei, do not miss the scenic sports and local snacks. And if you are willing to take a holiday, it is a good choice.
HeFei is my favourite city. I hope it will be better and better, and more and more people come to visit it.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是篇材料作文;
②时态:本文时态以一般现在时为主;
③提示:本文要点已全部给出,注意描述时要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细介绍合肥的地理位置,人口,历史及著名地方和流经的河流;
第二步,邀请大家去合肥旅行;
第三步,结束语,希望合肥越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①In addition to此外
②are willing to愿意
③different from与……不同
[高分句型]
①HeFei also gave birth to the historical people who was called Lord Bao.(定语从句)
②If you come to HeFei, do not miss the scenic sports and local snacks.(条件状语从句)
③I hope it will be better and better, and more and more people come to visit it.(宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上•安徽省亳州市利辛县•期末)2023年的寒假即将到来,请根据以下思维导图以David的名义给英国的笔友Michael 发一封电子邮件,谈谈你这一学期的学习生活并制定寒假计划。
注意:
(1)习作须根据思维导图展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)词数60~80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:surf the Internet网上冲浪
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
【例文】
Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about my school life and my plan for the winter holiday. I was really busy this term. I had a lot of homework to do. I felt too tired. However, I did better in math than before with the help of my math teacher. I am fond of playing the piano. So I played it in my free time, especially when I felt sad. For the coming vacation, I plan to do more reading and sports. Reading brings me a bigger world. Doing sports keeps me healthy. On weekends I am going to surf the Internet. I can learn a lot from it.
Take care. Look forward to your email.
Yours,
David
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文的主题;
第二步,介绍自己学校生活以及寒假计划;
第三步,期待对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②with the help of sb在某人的帮助下
③in my free time在我闲暇的时间
[高分句型]
①For the coming vacation, I plan to do more reading and sports.(动词不定式作宾语)
②Reading brings me a bigger world. Doing sports keeps me healthy.(动名词作主语)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·安徽省宣城市·期末) 假如你是李华,为了提高同学们的身体素质,助力同学们健康成长,学校准备组织课后体育锻炼活动,现向同学们就活动内容征集意见。请你根据以下内容要点和写作要求,用英语给学校校长写一封邮件,向学校提出建议。
内容要点:
(1) 你建议学校在课后开展哪些体育活动? (至少2条)
(2) 你的理由是什么?
写作要求:
(1) 文中须包含以上提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:跳绳rope skipping; 羽毛球badminton; 体操gymnastics; 太极Tai Chi
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities after class. First, we can organize ball games like basketball, football and ping-pong. We are always excited when we play such ball games. We can build a strong body and learn teamwork spirit at the same time. Second, we can choose gymnastics, Tai Chi and rope skipping because these activities won’t make us so tired. And they can help some shy students make more friends. Third, we can line up and run together on the playground. After running, we will be more energetic in class.
I really hope our school can organize these activities to make us healthier and stronger.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给内容要点和写作要求完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己的建议及理由;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①teamwork spirit团队合作精神
②at the same time同时
③line up排队
[高分句型]
①We are always excited when we play such ball games.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I really hope our school can organize these activities to make us healthier and stronger.(省略that的宾语从句)
主题03 人与自然——自然情景、动植物相关活动及人与自然的互动
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上•安徽合肥市新站区•期末)假如你是李辉,你校正举办一场“Green City Better Life”为主题的英文演讲比赛,倡议大家为创建环保型城市继续努力。请你围绕以下要点,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, I am happy to give a talk to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all Thank you for listening.
【答案】Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, I am happy to give a talk to you. Building a green city is essential for our health and future. A green city reduces pollution, conserves resources, and provides a better living environment. To achieve this, we can start by using public transportation, recycling waste, and planting more trees. Everyone’s effort counts in making our city greener and our lives better. Let’s work together to create a sustainable and eco-friendly city.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述建立环保型城市的必要性;
第二步,阐述如何创立环保城市;
第三步,书写结束语,号召大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be essential for对……有必要
②conserves resource保存资源
③recycle waste回收垃圾
[高分句型]
①Let’s work together to create a sustainable and eco-friendly city.(动词不定式作目的状语)
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