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该初中英语讲义聚焦中考书面表达核心考点,涵盖应用文等主流体裁,紧扣真实情境、文化浸润、价值引领的命题趋势,通过题型解析表格梳理考情,以“夯实基础-优化流程-精练反思”策略构建复习体系,结合真题及模拟题训练,实现考点梳理、方法指导与实战提升的系统衔接。 亮点在于以话题为纲的语料库积累与分体裁结构训练,如“文化传承”话题下手工扇制作发言稿的写作指导,培养学生语言能力与文化意识。通过“审题-提纲-撰写-检查”四步流程强化思维品质,配合分层练习与真题范文研读,助力学生高效提升表达准确性与逻辑性,为教师把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供清晰路径。

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焦点10 书面表达 备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之题型特训面面到 【题型解析】 为了帮助你更好地备战2026年江苏苏州中考英语书面表达,为你梳理了核心的考情特点和备考建议。下面这个表格可以让你快速抓住重点。 考查维度 具体特点与备考提示 试题形式 控制性+半开放性写作:题目会提供明确的要点提示,但留有发挥空间,鼓励结合个人经历表达真实想法。 常见体裁 应用文是绝对主流,如发言稿、书信/邮件、征文投稿等。也可能考查记叙文或简单的议论文。 命题趋势 1. 情境真实:话题紧密围绕学生真实的个人经历、校园生活和社会实践。 2. 文化浸润:注重对中国传统文化(如节日、手艺)和苏州本地特色文化的介绍与理解。 3. 价值引领:强调积极向上的价值观,如社会责任、坚韧不拔、解决冲突、感恩等。 评分标准 内容:要点齐全、内容充实、有细节支撑。 • 语言:准确性是基础,丰富性是提分关键(词汇、句式)。 • 结构:分段清晰,逻辑连贯,合理使用连接词。 一、高效备考策略 掌握科学的备考方法能让你的复习事半功倍。 1. 夯实写作基础 建立语料库:按“文化传承”、“个人成长”、“环保科技”等高频话题,有意识地积累相关的高级词汇、经典句型和实用例句。 掌握核心结构: 应用文:熟悉不同文体(书信、发言稿)的基本格式。正文通常采用“开头(表明目的/主题)→ 主体(分点阐述)→ 结尾(总结/呼吁/希望)”的结构。 段落内部:运用“主题句 + 支撑细节(事例、原因)+ 结论句”的模式,使段落内容充实、逻辑清楚。 2. 优化写作流程 在平时练习和考场上,建议遵循以下步骤: 审题立意(约3-5分钟):仔细读题,圈出关键词,明确文体、时态、人称和内容要点,确保不跑题。 列出提纲(约2-3分钟):用关键词或短语简要规划每段内容,确保要点全覆盖,逻辑顺畅。 初步撰写(约10-12分钟):依据提纲,选用有把握的词汇和句型进行表达。遇到不会写的词,学会用简单词或换个方式表达,保证写作流畅。 检查修改(约3-5分钟):通读全文,重点检查要点是否齐全、时态是否一致、主谓是否一致、单词拼写和标点是否正确。 3. 精练与反思 分阶段训练:可以先按不同体裁(如本周重点练习书信,下周重点练习演讲稿)进行专项突破,然后再按话题进行综合练习。 善用真题范文:认真研读苏州历年中考真题的范文,学习其结构、思路和语言亮点。 重视批改反馈:完成作文后,可以按照“自我检查清单” 进行核对,或者与同学互换作文进行互评,如果能请老师面批,是提升的黄金机会 A 假如你是李华,你的英国好友Jenny将在下学期作为交换生来中国学习,请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她说明在中国学习和生活时需要注意的规章制度,并给出相关理由或建议。 Rules Reasons or advice ◇Don’t be late for class. ◇Don’t use smartphones. ◇Keep the room tidy. ◇Be careful to cross the road. ◇… ◇show respect for others, ◇focus on learning …. 注意: (1)邮件中需包含3~4条规则,规则可选用表格中提供的,也可自己写; (2)邮件中还需写明相关的理由或建议; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (4)词数80左右;邮件首尾和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny, I’m excited to hear you’re coming to China. I think it’s necessary for you to know some rules here.______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua B 我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,中小学开设了各式各样的课后活动。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你校的课后活动情况,谈谈你的感受,并提出建议。 写作要点: 1. What kind of after-school activities does your school have? 2. What’s your feeling about the after-school activities? 3. Your advice on the after-school activities. 要求: 1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3.词数80-120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Since the “Double-Reduction” Policy was carried out, our school has offered all kinds of after-school activities._____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 作为一名初三毕业生,你将迎来两个月左右的暑假。如何提升自己的时间管理能力,让这个假期充实而有意义?请结合以下思维导图,分析假期中时间管理的问题和原因,并给出你的建议。 参考词汇:irregular 不规律的,lack of self-discipline缺乏自律,stay focused 保持专注 要求: 1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范; 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。 How to Improve Time Management Skills Good time management is the key to a happy and well-organized holiday, but many students face challenges. __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。 内容包括: (1)扇子制作过程(如图); (2)扇面设计内容和寓意; (3)你的感受与愿望。 要求: 1)词数100左右; 2)适当展开想象,增加细节; 3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分; 4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔 Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made. _________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A (2025·江苏苏州·三模) 英语杂志Sunny Teens正在征集中学生对体育运动的看法。你校开展了调查,下图是“Why do you play sports?”这一问题的调查结果。请用英语向杂志投稿。 内容包括: 1. 简要介绍调查结果(不少于三条)。 2. 结合个人经历谈谈你对该问题的看法。 注意: (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (2)词数100左右;文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Our school did a survey among students last week, asking why we play sports. The results are quite interesting.______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B (2025·江苏苏州·模拟预测) 以 Life is full of discoveries 为题,内容包括: 1.你对这句话的理解; 2.结合实际生活举例说明; 3.你得到的启发。 注意: 1.词数:100左右; 2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章; 3.照抄阅读语篇不得分; 4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 After reading The Nautilus, I have really understood a lot about the sentence ____________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C (2025·江苏苏州·二模) 你校英文报的“Make your voice heard”专栏向全校学生发起主题图片征文活动。请你根据下面两张图片, 以“Plan or Plant”为题写一篇短文,发表你的看法并进行投稿。 内容包括: 1. 你对两幅图片内容的描述。 2. 两种方式中你更支持的做法,并结合图片阐述原因。 注意: 1. 词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数: 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥: 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息: 4. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 参考词汇: acorn n. 橡果;sprout v. 发芽;planting schedule 种植计划表 Pumo:  First, I need to make a perfect plan.      Ali Plan or Plant The two squirrels in the pictures both want to plant acorns, but they take quite different ways. _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D (2025·江苏苏州·二模) “水滴石穿”常用来比喻坚持不懈、持之以恒。在三年的初中生涯中,你一定有这样的印记。英文周报拟举行征文比赛,请以“Persistence(坚持) Makes Me Grow”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容包括: 1. 你对这句话的理解; 2. 结合你的实际生活举例说明(从下图中选择一个话题); 3. 你得到的启发。 注意: 1.词数:100左右。 2.内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分) 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Persistence makes me grow Persistence has played an important role in my growth. It helps me ___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 焦点10 书面表达 备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之题型特训面面到 【题型解析】 为了帮助你更好地备战2026年江苏苏州中考英语书面表达,为你梳理了核心的考情特点和备考建议。下面这个表格可以让你快速抓住重点。 考查维度 具体特点与备考提示 试题形式 控制性+半开放性写作:题目会提供明确的要点提示,但留有发挥空间,鼓励结合个人经历表达真实想法。 常见体裁 应用文是绝对主流,如发言稿、书信/邮件、征文投稿等。也可能考查记叙文或简单的议论文。 命题趋势 1. 情境真实:话题紧密围绕学生真实的个人经历、校园生活和社会实践。 2. 文化浸润:注重对中国传统文化(如节日、手艺)和苏州本地特色文化的介绍与理解。 3. 价值引领:强调积极向上的价值观,如社会责任、坚韧不拔、解决冲突、感恩等。 评分标准 内容:要点齐全、内容充实、有细节支撑。 • 语言:准确性是基础,丰富性是提分关键(词汇、句式)。 • 结构:分段清晰,逻辑连贯,合理使用连接词。 一、高效备考策略 掌握科学的备考方法能让你的复习事半功倍。 1. 夯实写作基础 建立语料库:按“文化传承”、“个人成长”、“环保科技”等高频话题,有意识地积累相关的高级词汇、经典句型和实用例句。 掌握核心结构: 应用文:熟悉不同文体(书信、发言稿)的基本格式。正文通常采用“开头(表明目的/主题)→ 主体(分点阐述)→ 结尾(总结/呼吁/希望)”的结构。 段落内部:运用“主题句 + 支撑细节(事例、原因)+ 结论句”的模式,使段落内容充实、逻辑清楚。 2. 优化写作流程 在平时练习和考场上,建议遵循以下步骤: 审题立意(约3-5分钟):仔细读题,圈出关键词,明确文体、时态、人称和内容要点,确保不跑题。 列出提纲(约2-3分钟):用关键词或短语简要规划每段内容,确保要点全覆盖,逻辑顺畅。 初步撰写(约10-12分钟):依据提纲,选用有把握的词汇和句型进行表达。遇到不会写的词,学会用简单词或换个方式表达,保证写作流畅。 检查修改(约3-5分钟):通读全文,重点检查要点是否齐全、时态是否一致、主谓是否一致、单词拼写和标点是否正确。 3. 精练与反思 分阶段训练:可以先按不同体裁(如本周重点练习书信,下周重点练习演讲稿)进行专项突破,然后再按话题进行综合练习。 善用真题范文:认真研读苏州历年中考真题的范文,学习其结构、思路和语言亮点。 重视批改反馈:完成作文后,可以按照“自我检查清单” 进行核对,或者与同学互换作文进行互评,如果能请老师面批,是提升的黄金机会 A 假如你是李华,你的英国好友Jenny将在下学期作为交换生来中国学习,请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她说明在中国学习和生活时需要注意的规章制度,并给出相关理由或建议。 Rules Reasons or advice ◇Don’t be late for class. ◇Don’t use smartphones. ◇Keep the room tidy. ◇Be careful to cross the road. ◇… ◇show respect for others, ◇focus on learning …. 注意: (1)邮件中需包含3~4条规则,规则可选用表格中提供的,也可自己写; (2)邮件中还需写明相关的理由或建议; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (4)词数80左右;邮件首尾和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny, I’m excited to hear you’re coming to China. I think it’s necessary for you to know some rules here.______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jenny, I’m excited to hear you’re coming to China. I think it’s necessary for you to know some rules here. First, don’t be late for class. Being on time shows respect for your teachers and classmates. Second, don’t use smartphones during class, so you can focus on learning. Also, always keep your room tidy. A clean place helps you study better and feel more comfortable. Finally, be careful when crossing the road. Look both ways and use crosswalks, because traffic can be busy here. I believe you’ll have a wonderful time in China. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】守则、应用文 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封电子邮件; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步:引出话题; 第二步:介绍在中国学习和生活时需要注意的规章制度,并给出相关理由或建议; 第三步:书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①on time准时 ②focus on集中注意力 ③feel free to do sth.随意做某事 [高分句型] ①Being on time shows respect for your teachers and classmates. (动名词作主语) ②Look both ways and use crosswalks, because traffic can be busy here. (because引导的原因状语从句) B 我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,中小学开设了各式各样的课后活动。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你校的课后活动情况,谈谈你的感受,并提出建议。 写作要点: 1. What kind of after-school activities does your school have? 2. What’s your feeling about the after-school activities? 3. Your advice on the after-school activities. 要求: 1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3.词数80-120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Since the “Double-Reduction” Policy was carried out, our school has offered all kinds of after-school activities._____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Since the “Double-Reduction” Policy was carried out, our school has offered all kinds of after-school activities. There are sports clubs like the basketball club. Besides, English speech and science experiment groups are very popular among students. These after-school activities help us relax and keep healthy. Among them, my favorite is the basketball club. It makes me stronger and traches me how to work with my teammates. I also have some suggestions. First, it would be better if we could have some outdoor activities, like hiking or cycling. Second, the school can organize more competitions or shows. I hope these ideas can make our after-school activities more interesting and meaningful. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】文体活动、说明文、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:以“一般现在时”与“现在完成时”为主; ③ 提示:需覆盖三点要求(活动类型、感受、建议),开头已给出。 [写作步骤] 第一步:列举学校具体的课后活动。 第二步:描述个人感受。 第三步:提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out实施,执行 ②outdoor activities户外活动 ③meaningful有意义的 [高分句型] ① I hope these ideas can make our after-school activities more interesting and meaningful. (省略that的宾语从句) C 作为一名初三毕业生,你将迎来两个月左右的暑假。如何提升自己的时间管理能力,让这个假期充实而有意义?请结合以下思维导图,分析假期中时间管理的问题和原因,并给出你的建议。 参考词汇:irregular 不规律的,lack of self-discipline缺乏自律,stay focused 保持专注 要求: 1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范; 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。 How to Improve Time Management Skills Good time management is the key to a happy and well-organized holiday, but many students face challenges. __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文: How to Improve Time Management Skills Good time management is the key to a happy and well-organized holiday, but many students face challenges. Common problems include putting things off, spending too much time on screens, and having irregular sleep. These issues often come from a lack of self-discipline, unclear goals, or not using planning tools. To solve these problems, here are some tips. First, find a study partner or ask family members to remind you to stay focused. Second, make a daily to-do list to organize tasks clearly. Third, use time-saving tools like apps or calendars to track your progress. Lastly, focus on one task each time. By setting small goals and sticking to a plan, you can manage time better. Remember, good habits today will lead to a brighter tomorrow! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主; ③ 提示:需结合思维导图分析问题、原因及建议,可适当拓展细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,指出中学生假期时间管理的常见问题以及分析问题成因;; 第二步,分点提出解决方案; 第三步,总结提升时间管理的意义,强调习惯的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①put off拖延 ②a lack of self-discipline缺乏自律 ③track progress追踪进展 ④stick to a plan坚持计划 [高分句型] ①Common problems include putting things off, spending too much time on screens, and having irregular sleep.(用动名词短语并列列举问题,结构清晰) ②Third, use time-saving tools like apps or calendars to track your progress.(动词不定式作目的状语,体现建议的实用性) (2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。 内容包括: (1)扇子制作过程(如图); (2)扇面设计内容和寓意; (3)你的感受与愿望。 要求: 1)词数100左右; 2)适当展开想象,增加细节; 3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分; 4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔 Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made. _________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made. To make this fan, I first prepared materials like paper, scissors, a brush, and ink. Next, I carefully cut out two circular pieces of paper for the fan’s surface. Finally, I used the brush to paint my design on one side. The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity. This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化、传统工艺 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇发言稿,描述了作者亲手制作中国扇子的过程以及其背后的意义; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍主题和背景,引出自己制作的扇子; 第二步,详细描述制作过程、材料及设计特点; 第三步,总结经验与感悟,表达对作品的喜爱和分享的喜悦。   [亮点词汇] ①practical tools 实用工具   ②works of art 艺术品    ③traditional Chinese landscape 中国传统山水画    ④harmony between nature and humanity 自然与人类之间的和谐     [高分句型] ①Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art.(使用both...and结构,突出了扇子的功能性与艺术性) ②The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity.(通过具体描写设计元素,生动表达了主题意义) ③This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity.(运用not only...but also结构,强调了收获) A (2025·江苏苏州·三模) 英语杂志Sunny Teens正在征集中学生对体育运动的看法。你校开展了调查,下图是“Why do you play sports?”这一问题的调查结果。请用英语向杂志投稿。 内容包括: 1. 简要介绍调查结果(不少于三条)。 2. 结合个人经历谈谈你对该问题的看法。 注意: (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (2)词数100左右;文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Our school did a survey among students last week, asking why we play sports. The results are quite interesting.______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Our school did a survey among students last week, asking why we play sports. The results are quite interesting. According to the survey, 35% of students play sports simply to have fun, making it the most popular reason. Another 30% exercise to keep fit, while 20% use sports as a way to reduce stress. Only 10% take part in learning new skills, and 5% have other reasons. Personally, I play sports for multiple reasons. Like many classmates, I enjoy the excitement of basketball games with friends—it’s truly fun! At the same time, as a student facing daily homework pressure, I find running helps clear my mind, just as the 20% stress-relievers reported. Most importantly, through consistent practice, I’ve realized sports aren’t just about health or mood; they teach teamwork and perseverance. These valuable lessons aren’t shown in the survey, but they’re why I’ll keep playing sports forever. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ② 时态:主要使用一般现在时; ③ 提示:需包含调查结果的三条信息和个人看法,注意词数控制。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍调查结果; 第二步,结合自身经历谈谈你对该问题的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参与 ② consistent practice 持续练习 ③ valuable lessons 宝贵的经验 [高分句型] These valuable lessons aren’t shown in the survey, but they’re why I’ll keep playing sports forever.(表语从句) B (2025·江苏苏州·模拟预测) 以 Life is full of discoveries 为题,内容包括: 1.你对这句话的理解; 2.结合实际生活举例说明; 3.你得到的启发。 注意: 1.词数:100左右; 2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章; 3.照抄阅读语篇不得分; 4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 After reading The Nautilus, I have really understood a lot about the sentence ____________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Life is full of discoveries After reading The Nautilus, I have really understood a lot about the sentence. This means every day brings chances to learn something new. I found this out in simple ways. Last year, I got a small puppy. At first, I thought I just had to feed her. But soon, I discovered she needed walks, playtime, and training. I learned about responsibility and care. Then, last month, I tried cooking fried rice for the first time. I followed the recipe carefully. When it tasted good, I was so surprised! I discovered I could cook! These small moments taught me a big lesson: trying new things, even little ones, helps us learn about the world and ourselves. Now I know discoveries aren’t just about big adventures, they happen every day. I want to keep my eyes open for more! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:根据内容提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主,可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍对这句话的理解; 第二步,结合实际生活举例说明; 第三步,书写结语,表达你得到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ①chances to do 做某事的机会 ②responsibility 责任 ③learn about 了解 [高分句型] ①This means every day brings chances to learn something new.②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. (that省略的宾语从句) ②When it tasted good, I was so surprised! (when引导时间状语从句) ③Now I know discoveries aren’t just about big adventures, they happen every day. (that省略的宾语从句) C (2025·江苏苏州·二模) 你校英文报的“Make your voice heard”专栏向全校学生发起主题图片征文活动。请你根据下面两张图片, 以“Plan or Plant”为题写一篇短文,发表你的看法并进行投稿。 内容包括: 1. 你对两幅图片内容的描述。 2. 两种方式中你更支持的做法,并结合图片阐述原因。 注意: 1. 词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数: 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥: 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息: 4. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 参考词汇: acorn n. 橡果;sprout v. 发芽;planting schedule 种植计划表 Pumo:  First, I need to make a perfect plan.      Ali Plan or Plant The two squirrels in the pictures both want to plant acorns, but they take quite different ways. _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Plan or Plant The two squirrels in the pictures both want to plant acorns, but they take quite different ways. Pumo believes in crafting a perfect plan before planting acorns. It sits there, carefully thinking through every detail, aiming for an ideal scenario. In contrast, Ali dives right into action. It plants acorns without over-thinking, learning from each attempt. In my view, I prefer Ali’s way. Planning is important, but without action, plans are just dreams. Ali learns from the failures of the two plants. She can adjust and improve through practice. If we only plan and never act, we’ll never know if our ideas work. So, let’s not just plan, but also take action and start planting. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇看图作文。 ②时态:时态以一般现在时为主。 ③提示:写作要点围绕图片中两只松鼠的不同行为,表达对 “行动优先于过度计划” 观点的看法,并结合生活实际进行论证。 [写作步骤] 第一步,描述图片中两只松鼠种橡果的不同方式,展现 Pumo 重计划、Ali 重行动的差异。 第二步,阐述自己支持 Ali 方式的理由,从计划与行动的关系,以及行动带来的实践经验等方面展开论述。 第三步,总结强调行动的重要性,呼吁大家不要只停留在计划层面,要付诸行动。 [亮点词汇] ①focus on 专注于 ②in contrast 相比之下 ③trial and error 反复试验 [高分句型] ①Planning is important, but without action, plans are just dreams.(but 连接的并列句,清晰呈现计划与行动的关系) ②If we only plan and never act, we’ll never know if our ideas work.(if 引导的条件状语从句,进一步强调行动的必要性) D (2025·江苏苏州·二模) “水滴石穿”常用来比喻坚持不懈、持之以恒。在三年的初中生涯中,你一定有这样的印记。英文周报拟举行征文比赛,请以“Persistence(坚持) Makes Me Grow”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容包括: 1. 你对这句话的理解; 2. 结合你的实际生活举例说明(从下图中选择一个话题); 3. 你得到的启发。 注意: 1.词数:100左右。 2.内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分) 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Persistence makes me grow Persistence has played an important role in my growth. It helps me ___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Persistence Makes Me Grow Persistence has played an important role in my growth. It helps me overcome difficulties and make great progress. In my junior high school life, learning English grammar was a tough challenge. I often got confused about complex sentence structures and forgot rules easily. However, I decided to overcome this by studying systematically.   Every day, I dedicated 30 minutes to analyzing sentence patterns in textbooks and taking detailed notes. I also practiced writing short essays using the grammar points I learned, even if they were full of mistakes at first. Whenever I felt discouraged, I reminded myself that small steps add up. After months of consistent practice, my grammar skills improved significantly. In the recent mock exam, I scored full marks in the grammar section.   This experience taught me that persistence is the key to growth. It not only helps us conquer difficulties, but also builds confidence. Just as water dripping wears away stone, steady effort over time creates meaningful change. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,主题为“坚持使我成长”; ②时态:主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时; ③提示:根据思维导图,选取一个话题,结合个人经历,体现“坚持”的品质对成长的帮助。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出主题,提出“坚持”的意义; 第二步,讲述个人经历,体现“坚持”对成长的帮助; 第三步,总结全文,升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②make great progress 取得极大的进步 ③small steps add up积少成多 [高分句型] ①I also practiced writing short essays, using the grammar points I learned, even if they were full of mistakes at first.(动名词短语作状语;even if引导让步状语从句) ②Just as water dripping wears away stone, steady effort over time creates meaningful change.(as引导方式状语从句;采用谚语water dripping wears away stone) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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