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高考英语作文增分训练一
一、应用文增分练
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇
短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。
【完成句子刊
l.我相信,被誉为“杂交水稻之父”的袁隆平是中国农业发展中最具影响力的人物之一。(convince)
2.他毕生致力于研发高产水稻品种,这些品种极大地增加了中国的粮食产量,并帮助许多发展中国家
缓解了饥饿。(devote;alleviate;定语从句)
3.面对研究经费和先进研究设备的短缺,他没有放弃,而是竭尽全力逐个克服这些困难。(shortage:
overcome)
4.鉴于他已经实现了自己想要的,很多人可能会认为他会退休过悠闲的生活,但他没有。(given that.)
5.即使在晚年,他仍在不断地追求梦想,研发产量更高的品种,这对我们所有人都是一种激励。(strain;
yield;定语从句)
【组句成篇】
把以上句子用适当的过渡词语和过渡句组成一篇80词左右的短文。
二、读后续写增分练
1.按要求利用与eye有关的表达补全以下各句,并背诵
①约翰坐在窗边,目光紧盯着一本书。
(普
通
表达)
John
sat
beside
the
window,
(并列句)
(满
分
表
达)》
John
sat
beside
the
window,
(with复合结构)
②他看完书后,抬眼向窗外望去。
When he finished the book,
③他高兴地唱着歌,用天真无邪的眼睛注视着周围的一切。
Singing happily,
④约翰注意到有个男人靠近,他的眼睛注视着他的一举一动。
John noticed a man approaching,
⑤当认出来来人是谁时,约翰张大了嘴巴,眼里闪着兴奋的光芒。
When he recognised who the visitor was,John opened his mouth wide,
(独立主格)
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
2.动作描写之eye动眼(二)
①keep an eye on注视;②look sb.in the eye直视某人的眼睛;③narrow
短语
ones eyes眯起眼睛;
④turn ones eyes to转向;⑤shut one☐s eyes闭上眼睛;⑥squeeze
one☐s eyes shut紧闭双眼
1.按要求用与eye相关的表达补全下面各句,并背诵
①安妮的父亲听到门把手转动的声音,向门那边看去。
when he heard the handle turning.
②看到安妮进来,他困惑地上下打量着她。
(eye用作动词,形容词作状语)
③他眯起眼睛,思忖着她发生了什么事。
wondering what had happened to
her.
④她蓝色的眼睛里满是泪水,却留意着她父亲的神情。
(让步状语从句)
⑤安妮直视父亲的眼睛,告诉了他真相。
⑥得知真相后他紧闭双眼,咬了咬嘴唇,泪水滑下脸颊。
(普
通
表
达
When
he
learned
the
truth,
Tears
ran/rolled/streamed/flowed
down his cheeks.(简单句)
(满分表达)
(分词作状语+with复合结
构)
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇I am convinced that Yuan Longping,known as the“Father of Hybrid Rice”,is one of the most influential figures in China’s agricultural development.
He devoted his entire life to developing high-yield rice varieties,which have greatly increased China’s food production and helped alleviate hunger in many developing countries.He was a person of high perseverance and determination.Faced with the shortage of research funds and advanced research equipment,he didn’t give up but spared no effort to overcome them one by one.Without his efforts,many people in the world might still stay in hunger.
Given that he had achieved what he wanted,many people might think he would have retired to a life of leisure,but he didn’t.He kept on dreaming up and developing strains with higher yields even in his later years,which serves as an inspiration to us all.
1.按要求利用与“eye”有关的表达补全以下各句,并背诵
①约翰坐在窗边,目光紧盯着一本书。
(普通表达) John sat beside the window, and fixed/focused his eyes on a book. (并列句)
(满分表达) John sat beside the window, with his eyes fixed/focused on a book. (with复合结构)
②他看完书后,抬眼向窗外望去。
When he finished the book, he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out of the window.
③他高兴地唱着歌,用天真无邪的眼睛注视着周围的一切。
Singing happily, he gazed at the surroundings with innocent eyes.
④约翰注意到有个男人靠近,他的眼睛注视着他的一举一动。
John noticed a man approaching, and his eyes followed his every move.
⑤当认出来来人是谁时,约翰张大了嘴巴,眼里闪着兴奋的光芒。
When he recognised who the visitor was, John opened his mouth wide, his eyes sparkling/shining/twinkling with excitement. (独立主格)
【参考范文】
John sat beside the window, with his eyes fixed/focused on a book. When he finished the book, he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out of the window.Singing happily, he gazed at the surroundings with innocent eyes. John noticed a man approaching, and his eyes followed his every move. When he recognised who the visitor was, John opened his mouth wide, his eyes sparkling/shining/twinkling with excitement.
1.按要求用与“eye”相关的表达补全下面各句,并背诵
①安妮的父亲听到门把手转动的声音,向门那边看去。
Anne’s father turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.
②看到安妮进来,他困惑地上下打量着她。
Eyeing Anne come in, he eyed her up and down, confused. (eye用作动词,形容词作状语)
③他眯起眼睛,思忖着她发生了什么事。
He narrowed his eyes, wondering what had happened to her.
④她蓝色的眼睛里满是泪水,却留意着她父亲的神情。
Though her blue eyes were full of/filled with tears, she kept an eye on her father’s expression. (让步状语从句)
⑤安妮直视父亲的眼睛,告诉了他真相。
Anne looked her father in the eye and told him the truth.
⑥得知真相后他紧闭双眼,咬了咬嘴唇,泪水滑下脸颊。
(普通表达) When he learned the truth, he squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip. Tears ran/rolled/streamed/flowed down his cheeks. (简单句)
(满分表达) Learning the truth, he squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip, with tears running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his cheeks. (分词作状语+with复合结构)
【参考范文】
Anne’s father turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning. Eyeing Anne come in, he eyed her up and down, confused. Then, he narrowed his eyes, wondering what had happened to her. Though her blue eyes were full of/filled with tears, she kept an eye on her father’s expression. Anne looked her father in the eye and told him the truth. Learning the truth, he squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip, with tears running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his cheeks.
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