2026届高三英语专项复习 读后续写讲解与练习11：给父亲的惊喜音乐会导学案

该高中英语读后续写导学案系统覆盖高考书面表达核心考点，围绕情节逻辑发展、人物情感描写、语言连贯表达构建知识体系，通过原文情节铺垫、续写要点提示、语言规范校对到范文示范的递进式架构，引导学生自主梳理续写线索与情感脉络，形成从理解到创作的完整认知链。 亮点在于诊断性自测与分层指导设计，如检测版分点提示续写关键情节（人物集合、场景准备、情感反应等），帮助学生自主定位续写方向，校对版提供规范语言表达范例，培养语言能力与思维品质。学案结合家庭亲情主题，通过任务驱动（如“用合适借口引导父亲”“合作演奏回忆”）提升学生情感表达与逻辑创造能力，教师可通过学生初稿与范文对比精准指导，助力因材施教。

高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解 读后续写11：给父亲的惊喜音乐会 Dad's Old Guitar Tom was a teenager who loved exploring the old and dusty corners of his house. One day, while digging through the attic, he found something that caught his eye. It was a guitar, which was old, with signs of wear. However, it seemed to tell a story. Tom rushed downstairs with the guitar in hand. "Dad, look what I've found!" he exclaimed, showing the guitar to his father. Dad's eyes widened, and a smile slowly spread across his face. "Ah, my old guitar," he said, taking it gently from Tom. "You played the guitar?" Tom asked, surprised. Dad chuckled, "Yes, a long time ago. I was in a band with some of my best friends when I was about your age." Tom's eyes lit up with excitement. "You were in a band? That's so cool! Tell me more!" Dad settled into a chair, the old guitar resting on his lap. "We called ourselves 'The Sunset Strummers'. We played at small events, parties, and even some local cafes. Those were some of the best days of my life. Music, friendship, and endless fun" Days went by, and Tom couldn't stop thinking about his dad's musical past. He spoke to his mother and learned more. Old photos were brought out, showing a young dad with long hair, rocking out with his band. Tom felt proud and interested. He wanted to do something special for his dad to let him relive those days, even if just for a moment. With the help of his mom and younger sister, Lucy, Tom came up with a plan. They would organize a surprise concert in their backyard and invite some of Dad's old band members and friends. Lucy was good with tech, so she took charge of sending out digital invites and setting up the stage. Tom practiced on the old guitar, hoping to play alongside his dad. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 个左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The day of the surprise concert arrived. As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly. · 读后续写：给父亲的惊喜音乐会 检测版 Paragraph 1:The day of the surprise concert arrived.惊喜音乐会的日子终于到来。 1. 除了汤姆爸爸,所有家庭成员，爸爸的老乐队成员、朋友们提前在后院集合，内心充满激动。 All , Tom’s dad, with . 2. 已经为音乐会做好了了充分的准备，汤姆去房间用一个合适的借口请求父亲到后院去。 ,Tom went to the room to . 3. 一看到这装饰华丽的舞台，老乐队成员和朋友们时，汤姆的父亲脸上露出了惊讶的表情，且喜悦和兴奋的眼泪涌上了他的眼睛。 the beautifully decorated stage,old band members and friends, and 4. 然后，汤姆的父亲和他的老乐队成员以及汤姆一起演奏了一首歌，回忆他们的美好记忆。 Then,Tom’s dad,some of his old band members and Tom , . Paragraph 2:As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly.随着夜色渐深，音乐渐渐停息，爸爸紧紧地拥抱着汤姆。 5. 爸爸用哽咽的声音对汤姆低语道：“谢谢你，我的孩子。这是我收到的最珍贵的礼物。” Dad ,“Thank you,my son. .” 6. 汤姆脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，回答说：“是妈妈、露西和我一起组织了这场音乐会。(强调句)” Tom ,“ . ” 7. 爸爸拍了拍露西的头，给了妈妈一个大大的拥抱。 Dad and . 8. 在那一刻，一种幸福感淹没了汤姆的父亲。 , . 9. 这场音乐会不仅唤起了爸爸过去的记忆，也为在场的每个人创造了一段新的美好回忆。 The concert , . · 读后续写：给父亲的惊喜音乐会 校对版 Paragraph 1:The day of the surprise concert arrived.惊喜音乐会的日子终于到来。 1. 除了汤姆爸爸,所有家庭成员，爸爸的老乐队成员、朋友们提前在后院集合，内心充满激动。 All the families and old band members and friends of Tom 's Dad's,except Tom’s dad,gathered in the backyard in advance/ahead of time with excitement filling their hearts. 2. 已经为音乐会做好了了充分的准备，汤姆去房间用一个合适的借口请求父亲到后院去。 Having completely prepared for the concert,Tom went to the room to ask his father to the backyard with an appropriate excuse. 3. 一看到这装饰华丽的舞台，老乐队成员和朋友们时，汤姆的父亲脸上露出了惊讶的表情，且喜悦和兴奋的眼泪涌上了他的眼睛。 At the sight of the beautifully decorated stage,old band members and friends,an astonished look crossed Tom’s father’s face and tears of delight and excitement welled up in his eyes. 4. 然后，汤姆的父亲和他的老乐队成员以及汤姆一起演奏了一首歌，回忆他们的美好记忆。 Then,Tom’s dad,some of his old band members and Tom played a song together,recalling their sweet memories. Paragraph 2:As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly.随着夜色渐深，音乐渐渐停息，爸爸紧紧地拥抱着汤姆。 5. 爸爸用哽咽的声音对汤姆低语道：“谢谢你，我的孩子。这是我收到的最珍贵的礼物。” Dad whispered to Tom in a choked tone, “Thank you,my son.This is the most precious gift that I have ever received.” 6. 汤姆脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，回答说：“是妈妈、露西和我一起组织了这场音乐会。(强调句)” Tom replied with a wide smile on his face, “It was mom,Lucy and I that worked together to organize the concert. ” 7. 爸爸拍了拍露西的头，给了妈妈一个大大的拥抱。 Dad patted Lucy on her head and gave mom a big hug. 8. 在那一刻，一种幸福感淹没了汤姆的父亲。 At that moment,a sense of happiness overwhelmed Tom’s Dad. 9. 这场音乐会不仅唤起了爸爸过去的记忆，也为在场的每个人创造了一段新的美好回忆。 The concert not only aroused Dad’s past memories,but also created a new and beautiful memory for everyone present/on the spot. · 读后续写：给父亲的惊喜音乐会 参考范文 Paragraph 1:惊喜音乐会的日子终于到来。除了汤姆爸爸,所有家庭成员，爸爸的老乐队成员、朋友们提前在后院集合，内心充满激动。已经为音乐会做好了了充分的准备，汤姆去房间用一个合适的借口请求父亲到后院去。一看到这装饰华丽的舞台，老乐队成员和朋友们时，汤姆的父亲脸上露出了惊讶的表情，且喜悦和兴奋的眼泪涌上了他的眼睛。然后，汤姆的父亲和他的老乐队成员以及汤姆一起演奏了一首歌，回忆他们的美好记忆。 The day of the surprise concert arrived.All the families and old band members and friends of Tom 's Dad's,except Tom’s dad,gathered in the backyard in advance/ahead of time with excitement filling their hearts.Having completely prepared for the concert,Tom went to the room to ask his father to the backyard with an appropriate excuse.At the sight of the beautifully decorated stage,old band members and friends,an astonished look crossed Tom’s father’s face and tears of delight and excitement welled up in his eyes.Then,Tom’s dad,some of his old band members and Tom played a song together,recalling their sweet memories.(90) Paragraph 2:随着夜色渐深，音乐渐渐停息，爸爸紧紧地拥抱着汤姆。爸爸用哽咽的声音对汤姆低语道：“谢谢你，我的孩子。这是我收到的最珍贵的礼物。”汤姆脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，回答说：“是妈妈、露西和我一起组织了这场音乐会。(强调句)”爸爸拍了拍露西的头，给了妈妈一个大大的拥抱。在那一刻，一种幸福感淹没了汤姆的父亲。这场音乐会不仅唤起了爸爸过去的记忆，也为在场的每个人创造了一段新的美好回忆。 As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly.Dad whispered to Tom in a choked tone ,“Thank you,my son.This is the most precious gift that I have ever received.” Tom replied with a wide smile on his face, “It was mom,Lucy and I that worked together to organize the concert. ”Dad patted Lucy on her head and gave mom big hug.At that moment,a sense of happiness overwhelmed Tom’s Dad.The concert not only aroused Dad’s past memories,but also created a new and beautiful memory for everyone present/on the spot.(80) 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $