读后续写讲解与练习10：从未放弃过的画家梦-2026届高三英语一轮复习

该高中英语读后续写导学案系统梳理了高考读后续写的核心考点，包括情节发展逻辑、人物情感描写及语言表达准确性，按“赛前准备-创作过程-结果反馈”的故事脉络构建考点网络，通过分点任务单（如购买材料、创作场景描写）引导学生自主推导情节推进规律，形成完整的续写思维框架。 亮点在于自测诊断与范文对比设计，如检测版设置句子填空任务（“他怀着激动的心情去商店...”）帮助学生自我检测语言表达准确性，培养语言能力，通过情节逻辑提示（创作场景、获奖反应）提升思维品质。每个段落配有校对版与范文对照，学生可自主分析差距，教师可依据学情精准指导，助力因材施教，提升学生自主复习能力。

高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解 读后续写10：从未放弃过的画家梦 In a house far from the city lived John and his mother. John’s only hobby was wandering in the nearby picturesque forest. In its center was a shiny clear lake with schools of fish dancing in it. Lovely animals such as deer or rabbits were playing around and cute birds were singing in trees. Fascinated by the beauty and liveliness of nature, he desired to become a great artist and present all the breath - taking scenes to the world. John studied in the local primary school. Life was not easy for John and his mom after his father died. Knowing what hard work his mother did to make ends meet, John really didn’t want his mother to worry. His mother knew the significance of education in life but she was against his dream of becoming an artist. “The profession of artist can’t aid a person in meeting his daily expenses,” she would say. But as each day passed, John became more passionate about his dream. Due to the living circumstances, even buying some new colors would be a luxury. John only used the worn drawing file and limited colors for his daily practice. Though lacking fine painting materials, he never gave up drawing. He spent a significant amount of time staying in the forest, secretly perfecting his craft. With continuous hard work and a distinct gift for art, he drew beautifully. One day John read about a competition being held in the town, whose deadline was only two days away. He got the perfect opportunity to fulfill his desire but he was in a dilemma (两难境地) as for the competition he needed special paints and some brushes.He didn’t have the courage to ask his mother for money as he knew her prejudice against art. That evening his mom returned from work and handed him a few paper notes, saying, “This is for your lunch at school next month.” The money was enough for his desired materials! John’s face lit up. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money. A week later, a phone call came to John’s home. · 读后续写：从未放弃过的画家梦 检测版 Paragraph 1:Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money.第二天一早，约翰带着钱悄悄地离开了家。 1. 他怀着激动的心情去商店买比赛所需的特殊颜料和画笔，并立即报名参加比赛。 ,he and . 2. 在那一刻，任何言语都无法准确地描述他的心情，因为他离他的梦想更近了。 , because . 3. 约翰像往常一样来到森林，开始创作他的杰作，努力展现所有令人惊叹的场景，比如一个闪闪发光的清澈湖泊，可爱的动物。 John and , present all the breath-taking scenes like a shiny clear lake,lovely animals. 4. 看着他的作品，满意和自信在他的眼中闪耀着。 , . Paragraph2:A week later, a phone call came to John's home.一周后，约翰家响起了电话。 5. 听到声音，约翰感到相当紧张和担忧，因为他知道这可能是比赛组织者的来电。 ,John because . 6. 的确，是比赛组织者打来的，他被告知自己的画作获得了第一名。 , and he . 7. 约翰欢呼雀跃，发出激动的叫声。 John , . 8. 起初，约翰的母亲非常震惊，但当她看到约翰脸上的幸福，最终她为儿子感到骄傲。 John's mother but when . 9. 从此以后，约翰的母亲不再反对他成为艺术家的梦想，并支持他。 ,John’s mother and . · 读后续写：从未放弃过的画家梦 校对版 Paragraph 1:Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money.第二天一早，约翰带着钱悄悄地离开了家。 1. 他怀着激动的心情去商店买比赛所需的特殊颜料和画笔，并立即报名参加比赛。 With excitement filling his heart,he went to a shop to buy the special paints and brushes he needed for the competition and signed up for the competition instantly. 2. 在那一刻，任何言语都无法准确地描述他的心情，因为他离他的梦想更近了。 At that time,no words could exactly describe his feelings because he was closer to his dream. 3. 约翰像往常一样来到森林，开始创作他的杰作，努力展现所有令人惊叹的场景，比如一个闪闪发光的清澈湖泊，可爱的动物。 John came to the forest as usual and started to create his masterpiece,trying to present all the breath-taking scenes like a shiny clear lake,lovely animals. 4. 看着他的作品，满意和自信在他的眼中闪耀着。 Looking at his work,satisfaction and confidence shone in his eyes. Paragraph2:A week later, a phone call came to John's home.一周后，约翰家响起了电话。 5. 听到声音，约翰感到相当紧张和担忧，因为他知道这可能是比赛组织者的来电。 Hearing the sound,John felt equally nervous and concerned because he knew it may be a call from the competition organizer. 6. 的确，是比赛组织者打来的，他被告知自己的画作获得了第一名。 Indeed,it was from the competition organizer and he was told that his painting had won first place. 7. 约翰欢呼雀跃，发出激动的叫声。 John jumped with joy,uttering a cry of excitement. 8. 起初，约翰的母亲非常震惊，但当她看到约翰脸上的幸福，最终她为儿子感到骄傲。 John's mother was very shocked in the beginning but proud of his son eventually when she saw the happiness on John’ s face. 9. 从此以后，约翰的母亲不再反对他成为艺术家的梦想，并支持他。 From then on,John’s mother wasn’t against his dream of becoming an artist and supported him. · 读后续写：从未放弃过的画家梦 参考范文 Paragraph1:第二天一早，约翰带着钱悄悄地离开了家。他怀着激动的心情去商店买比赛所需的特殊颜料和画笔，并立即报名参加比赛。在那一刻，任何言语都无法准确地描述他的心情，因为他离他的梦想更近了。约翰像往常一样来到森林，开始创作他的杰作，努力展现所有令人惊叹的场景，比如一个闪闪发光的清澈湖泊，可爱的动物。看着他的作品，满意和自信在他的眼中闪耀着。 Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money.With excitement filling his heart,he went to a shop to buy the special paints and brushes he needed for the competition and signed up for the competition instantly.At that time,no words could exactly describe his feelings because he was closer to his dream.John came to the forest as usual and started to create his masterpiece,trying to present all the breath-taking scenes like a shiny clear lake,lovely animals.Looking at his work,satisfaction and confidence shone in his eyes.(76) Paragraph2:一周后，约翰家响起了电话。听到声音，约翰感到相当紧张和担忧，因为他知道这可能是比赛组织者的来电。的确，是比赛组织者打来的，他被告知自己的画作获得了第一名。约翰欢呼雀跃，发出激动的叫声。起初，约翰的母亲非常震惊，但当她看到约翰脸上的幸福，最终她为儿子感到骄傲。从此以后，约翰的母亲不再反对他成为艺术家的梦想，并支持他。 A week later, a phone call came to John's home.Hearing the sound,John felt equally nervous and concerned because he knew it may be a call from the competition organizer.Indeed,it was from the competition organizer and he was told that his painting had won first place.John jumped with joy,uttering a cry of excitement.John's mother was very shocked in the beginning but proud of his son eventually when she saw the happiness on John’ s face.From then on,John’s mother wasn’t against his dream of becoming an artist and supported him. 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