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专题09应用文写作
基础
必练
征文投稿
(24-25高二上·广东广州天河区·期末)
假设你是李华,你校英文报正举办以“My Dream Theme Park”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,
介绍你的设计及其意图。
词数:150词左右。
推荐信
(23-24高二上广东肇庆期末)
假定你是李华,你校交换生Bn希望向你学做一道有代表性的中国美食,以便他回国时做给家人品尝。
请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐美食;
2.推荐理由;
3.制订计划(学做美食的时间、地点等)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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邀请信
(一)
(23-24高二上·广东河源期末)假如你是李华,你校成立了一个网球社团。请给你校的英国交换生Hny
写一封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.发出邀请:
2.介绍社团:
3期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
(二)
(23-24高二上·广东东莞·期末)
假定你是李华,你们年级将于下周二晚上举行英语戏剧比赛。请你给外教Dr.Nicholson写封邮件,邀
请他担任比赛评委(judge),内容包括:
1.简单介绍比赛;
2.邀请他对比赛进行点评并提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear Dr.Nicholson,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
告知信
(23-24高二上·广东湛江·期末)
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Maia发来邮件询问你近期的旅游经历。请你写一封邮件回复她,内容
包括:
1.旅游目的地;
2.目的地特点;
3.难忘的经历。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Maria.
Yours,
LiHua
进阶提升
建议信
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(24-25高二上广东广州越秀区·期末)
假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom即将来中国,作为交换生在你校学习一年。他向你询问有关事宜,
请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.适应交换生学习生活的建议及理由;
2.期待与祝福。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom.
Yours,
LiHua
新闻报道
(2425高二上·广东清远期末)
假定你是校英文报社记者李华,上周你校主办了第二届中国文化节,请你为校英文报写一篇英文报道,
内容包括:
1.举办时间和地点;
2.活动内容及意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可适当补充细节,使行文连贯;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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征文投稿
(一)
(24-25高二上广东广州番禺区·期末)
随着科技的进步,越来越多人开始使用移动支付(mobile payment),有人认为其十分便捷,也有人担
忧存在风险。请根据以下要点写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.移动支付的优缺点:
2.你的看法。
参考词汇:微信WeChat;支付宝Alipay;二维码QR code
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(二)
(24-25高二上·广东湛江·期末)
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or original work.
which do you prefer?"为题,按照下列要点写一篇英文短文。
要点:1.看电影:省时、有趣、易懂;
2.读原著:细节更多,语言优美:
3.我的看法及理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Film or original work,which do you prefer?
(三)
24-25高二上·广东梅州期末)
校报的“英文在线”专栏组织同学们分享自己切身体验过的“微笑的力量”的故事。请你以此为主题写一篇
短文投稿,内容包括:
1简述事情经过:
2.你的体验和感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of Smiling
(四)
(24-25高二上广东佛山期末)
上周末,你从学校乘坐公交车返回家中时遭遇交通拥堵。请你写一篇短文,给学校英文报专栏“Beyond
the Classroom”投稿,分享本次经历,内容包括:
1.交通拥堵情况;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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A Long Ride Home
通知
(24-25高二上广东肇庆期末)
假定你是李华。为迎接一年一度的科技节,你校将举办科技小发明比赛。请你代表学生会在校英语报
上发布一则活动通知,邀请同学们积极参与。内容包括:
1.比赛目的:
2.参赛要求、提交时间等具体安排:
3.呼吁同学们参与。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
Students'Union
道歉信
(24-25高二上·广东潮州·期末)
假定你是李华,计划今年寒假和笔友Tom去杭州西湖游玩,但现在因故不得不取消这一计划。请你给
Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
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2.说明原因;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom
I hope this letter finds you well.
Yours,
LiHua
告知信
(一)
(24-25高二上·广东部分学校期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom是一个美食爱好者,他来信希望你介绍一下你们当地的传统美食。
请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍一种传统美食;
2.它的特点及你喜欢的原因;
3,邀请他前来中国亲自体验。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Best wishes.
LiHua
(二)
(24-25高二上广东珠海·期末)
假定你是李华,你校新建的图书馆已投入使用。请写信给曾经在你校学习的英国交换生Chrs,并介绍
你们学校新的图书馆。内容包括:
(1)图书馆的基本情况:如设计、设备、藏书等;
(2)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
Yours,
LiHua
(三)
(24-25高二上·广东汕尾·期末)
假定你是李华,上周四学校邀请了汕尾市剪纸艺术家给你们班上了一堂关于剪纸的美术课,请你给你
的加拿大朋友Peter写一封邮件介绍这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍上课情况以及你完成的剪纸作品;
(2)这次活动的影响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours
LiHua
(四)
(24-25高二上·广东深圳宝安区·期末)
假定你是李宝安,本学期你班开展了英文整本书课内外阅读Anne of Green Gables,品读文学经典名著,
加强阅读素养。请你给英国外交Bob写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1英文整本书阅读活动介绍;
2.你的收获和感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
I'm writing to share with you the reading program our class had this term
Yours,
Li Bao'an
专题09 应用文写作
征文投稿
(24-25高二上·广东广州天河区·期末)
假设你是李华,你校英文报正举办以“My Dream Theme Park”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的设计及其意图。
词数:150词左右。
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【答案】
My Dream Theme Park
My dream theme park, named “Wonderland”, is designed to offer visitors a unique and unforgettable experience.
The park is divided into several themed zones. The “Fairy Tale Forest” is filled with replicas of iconic scenes from classic stories, where visitors can meet life sized fairy tale characters. It aims to bring people back to their childhood and let them relive the magic of those tales. The “Adventure Valley” is for thrill seekers. It features exciting roller coasters and challenging rope courses. I designed this zone to encourage people to step out of their comfort zones and experience the joy of adventure.
There’s also the “Cultural Expo Area”. Here, different cultures from around the world are showcased through architecture, food, and performances. This zone is intended to promote cultural understanding and appreciation among visitors.
In addition, the park pays great attention to environmental protection. All facilities are built with eco-friendly materials, and there are plenty of green spaces for visitors to relax. I hope “Wonderland” can not only provide entertainment but also raise people’s awareness of environmental protection.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。学校英文报正举办以《我的梦想主题公园》为题的征文活动,要求考生按照要求写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
独特的:unique → distinctive
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
充满:be filled with → be full of
令人兴奋的:exciting → thrilling
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My dream theme park, named “Wonderland”, is designed to offer visitors a unique and unforgettable experience.
拓展句:My dream theme park, whose name is “Wonderland”, is designed to offer visitors a unique and unforgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The “Fairy Tale Forest” is filled with replicas of iconic scenes from classic stories, where visitors can meet life sized fairy tale characters.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope “Wonderland” can not only provide entertainment but also raise people’s awareness of environmental protection.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
推荐信
(23-24高二上·广东肇庆·期末)
假定你是李华,你校交换生Ben希望向你学做一道有代表性的中国美食,以便他回国时做给家人品尝。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐美食;
2.推荐理由;
3.制订计划(学做美食的时间、地点等)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ben,
Hearing you are interested in Chinese cuisine, I am very proud and more than willing to help you with that. Without any doubt, dumplings will be a perfect choice I recommend. That’s because it is a typical Chinese food and a symbol of Chinese culture. Besides, it is also relatively easy to learn to make dumplings, as all you need is practice and patience. Why not come to my home this Saturday morning, when we can start with basic ingredients and techniques?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给交换生Ben介绍一道有代表性的中国美食。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对…感兴趣:be interested in→have an interest in
非常:more than→very
乐意做某事:be willing to do→be glad to do
推荐:recommend→suggest
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Without any doubt, dumplings will be a perfect choice I recommend.
同义句:There is no doubt that dumplings will be a perfect choice I recommend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing you are interested in Chinese cuisine, I am very proud and more than willing to help you with that.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】That’s because it is a typical Chinese food and a symbol of Chinese culture.(由because引导的表语从句)
邀请信
(一)
(23-24高二上·广东河源·期末)假如你是李华,你校成立了一个网球社团。请给你校的英国交换生Henry写一封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 介绍社团;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m writing to tell you that a tennis club has been newly founded in our school, the purposes of which are to enrich students’ after-school activities and help with their all-round development. Club members will gather at 5:00 pm and practice tennis for two hours every Tuesday and Friday.
As far as I know, you have a great interest in tennis, so this club is perfect for you. The number of club members is limited to only forty. Therefore, if you want to join it, you should sign up as early as possible.
I do hope that you can join the club with me. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校交换生Henry写一封信,邀请他参加学校新成立的网球社团。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
告知:tell→inform
促进:help with→improve
对……感兴趣:have a great interest in→be greatly interested in
因此:therefore→thus
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I do hope that you can join the club with me.
拓展句:I will be more than delighted if you can join the club with me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that a tennis club has been newly founded in our school, the purposes of which are to enrich students’ after-school activities and help with their all-round development. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, if you want to join it, you should sign up as early as possible. (运用if引导的条件状语从句)
(二)
(23-24高二上·广东东莞·期末)
假定你是李华,你们年级将于下周二晚上举行英语戏剧比赛。请你给外教Dr.Nicholson写封邮件,邀请他担任比赛评委(judge),内容包括:
1.简单介绍比赛;
2.邀请他对比赛进行点评并提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dr. Nicholson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Dr.Nicholson,
I’m writing to invite you to be a judge of an English drama competition, which will be held on the evening of next Tuesday. The competition is from 8:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m. in the lecture hall with some other activities. The purpose of this competition is to spark students’ imagination and creativity as well as enrich our school life. In the competition, you are expected to comment on the plays and make suggestions.
Your honorable presence will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求考生给外教Dr.Nicholson写封邮件,邀请他担任下周二晚上举行的英语戏剧比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→take place
目的:purpose →aim
比赛:competition→match
期待:expect→anticipate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The purpose of this competition is to spark students’ imagination and creativity as well as enrich our school life.
拓展句:This competition whose purpsoe is to spark students’ imagination and creativity is to enrich our school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to be a judge of an English drama competition, which will be held on the evening of next Tuesday.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Your honorable presence will be highly appreciated.(运用了将来时的被动语态)
告知信
(23-24高二上·广东湛江·期末)
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Maria发来邮件询问你近期的旅游经历。请你写一封邮件回复她,内容包括:
1.旅游目的地;
2.目的地特点;
3.难忘的经历。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Maria,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Maria,
I went on a trip with my cousins to Xinjiang recently.
Arriving in Wulumuqi, we hired a car and the driver, Mr. Huang, who drove us to many beautiful places. Xinjiang is such a huge place with splendid culture and natural beauty. However, the most impressive part of our trip was its people who are kind and warm-hearted.
I’m so lucky to have chosen Xinjiang as our destination. By the end of the trip, we had enjoyed so much breathtaking scenery and learned a lot about Xinjiang.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Maria发来邮件询问你近期的旅游经历。请你写一封邮件回复她。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旅行:trip→journey
友好:kind→friendly
美丽的:beautiful→picturesque
非常好的:splendid→wonderful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Xinjiang is such a huge place with splendid culture and natural beauty.
拓展句:Xinjiang is such a huge place, which has splendid culture and natural beauty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Arriving in Wulumuqi, we hired a car and the driver, Mr. Huang, who drove us to many beautiful places. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By the end of the trip, we had enjoyed so much breathtaking scenery and learned a lot about Xinjiang. (运用了过去完成时)
建议信
(24-25高二上·广东广州越秀区·期末)
假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom即将来中国,作为交换生在你校学习一年。他向你询问有关事宜,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 适应交换生学习生活的建议及理由;
2. 期待与祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re coming to China as an exchange student! Here are a few tips to help you settle in smoothly.
First, try to learn some basic Chinese phrases. It will make daily communication much easier and help you connect with locals. Second, be open to trying new foods and participating in cultural activities. This will enrich your experience and help you understand Chinese culture better. Lastly, don’t hesitate to ask for help if you need it — our school community is very supportive.
I’m really looking forward to meeting you and showing you around. I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable year here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【难度】0.65
【来源】广东省广州市越秀区2024-2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题
【知识点】申请/请求/建议、学校生活
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给即将来中国作交换生的外国笔友Tom写一份回信,需为他提供适应交换生学习生活的建议,并解释建议背后的原因,最后对他的到来表示期待与祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:tip→suggestion, advice
与……建立联系:connect with→bond with
参与:participate in→take part in, engage in
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable, indelible
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:First, try to learn some basic Chinese phrases. It will make daily communication much easier and help you connect with locals.
拓展句:First, try to learn some basic Chinese phrases, which will make daily communication much easier and help you connect with locals.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear that you’re coming to China as an exchange student! (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Lastly, don’t hesitate to ask for help if you need it — our school community is very supportive. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
新闻报道
(24-25高二上·广东清远·期末)
假定你是校英文报社记者李华, 上周你校主办了第二届中国文化节, 请你为校英文报写一篇英文报道, 内容包括:
1.举办时间和地点;
2.活动内容及意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可适当补充细节, 使行文连贯;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Last week, our school held the 2nd Chinese Cultural Festival in the auditorium, which turned out to be a great success.
The festival featured various cultural activities. To begin with, students demonstrated Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting skills at different booths, allowing them to experience the charm of traditional art. Visitors also had the opportunity to try on traditional Chinese costumes and enjoy tea ceremony demonstrations. The highlight was a spectacular performance including Chinese folk dance, martial arts, and traditional musical instruments.
The event not only helped students better understand and inherit Chinese traditional culture, but also enhanced their cultural self-confidence and national pride.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就上周学校主办了第二届中国文化节为校英文报写一篇报道。其内容包括:举办时间和地点以及活动内容及意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:various→distinct
首先:to begin with →first of all
机会:opportunity →chance
理解:understand→comprehend
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To begin with, students demonstrated Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting skills at different booths, allowing them to experience the charm of traditional art.
拓展句:To begin with, students demonstrated Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting skills at different booths, which allowed them to experience the charm of traditional art.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Last week, our school held the 2nd Chinese Cultural Festival in the auditorium, which turned out to be a great success.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 The event not only helped students better understand and inherit Chinese traditional culture, but also enhanced their cultural self-confidence and national pride.(运用not only ... but also…引导的并列句)
征文投稿
(一)
(24-25高二上·广东广州番禺区·期末)
随着科技的进步,越来越多人开始使用移动支付(mobile payment),有人认为其十分便捷,也有人担忧存在风险。请根据以下要点写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 移动支付的优缺点;
2. 你的看法。
参考词汇:微信 WeChat;支付宝 Alipay;二维码 QR code
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
With the development of technology, mobile payment is gaining popularity. It has obvious advantages. It is convenient as we can pay with WeChat or Alipay by scanning a QR code, saving time. Also, we don’t need to carry cash.
However, it has risks. Our personal information might be leaked, and there are cases of fraud.
In my view, mobile payment is a great innovation. The benefits outweigh the risks. As long as we take precautions like setting strong passwords, we can enjoy its convenience safely.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。越来越多的人开始使用移动支付,要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,阐述移动支付的优缺点以及自己的看法
【详解】1. 词汇积累
明显的:obvious → apparent
节省:save → spare
现金:cash → money
创新:innovation → creation
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the development of technology, mobile payment is gaining popularity.
拓展句:As technology develops, mobile payment is becoming more and more popular.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is convenient as we can pay with WeChat or Alipay by scanning a QR code, saving time. (运用了it作形式主语,以及as引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】As long as we take precautions like setting strong passwords, we can enjoy its convenience safely. (运用了as long as引导条件状语从句的结构)
(二)
(24-25高二上·广东湛江·期末)
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or original work, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英文短文。
要点:1. 看电影:省时、有趣、易懂;
2. 读原著:细节更多,语言优美;
3. 我的看法及理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Film or original work, which do you prefer?
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【答案】One possible version:
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
However, others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own. What’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Film or original work, which do you prefer?”为题,按照提示的要点写一篇英文短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外:besides →in addition
生动的:lively → vivid
就个人而言:personally →as far as I’m concerned
总之:in a word →in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
拓展句:In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film which is based on it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
(三)
(24-25高二上·广东梅州·期末)
校报的“英文在线”专栏组织同学们分享自己切身体验过的“微笑的力量”的故事。请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简述事情经过;
2.你的体验和感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of Smiling
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【答案】 The Power of Smiling
Smiling is a small act but can make a big difference. Last week, I took part in an English speech contest. Standing on the stage, I felt very nervous, nearly forgetting my words. Just then, I spotted my teacher Miss Zhang in the audience, who gave me a warm smile. That smile was like a beam of light, encouraging me to perform well in the contest.
The experience made me realize how powerful a simple smile can be. It has the ability to convey support, provide comfort and give people the courage to face challenges.
So, let’s embrace the power of smiling, see the good in life and share it with those around us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 请求考生就校报的“英文在线”专栏组织同学们分享自己切身体验过的“微笑的力量”的故事为主题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in → participate in
鼓励,激发:encourage → inspire
强有力的:powerful → impelling
拥抱:embrace → hug
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Standing on the stage, I felt very nervous, nearly forgetting my words.
拓展句:When I stood on the stage, I felt very nervous, nearly forgetting my words.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Just then, I spotted my teacher Miss Zhang in the audience, who gave me a warm smile.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The experience made me realize how powerful a simple smile can be.(运用了how连接的宾语从句)
(四)
(24-25高二上·广东佛山·期末)
上周末,你从学校乘坐公交车返回家中时遭遇交通拥堵。请你写一篇短文,给学校英文报专栏“Beyond the Classroom”投稿,分享本次经历,内容包括:
1.交通拥堵情况;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Long Ride Home
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【答案】
A Long Ride Home
Last weekend, I experienced a frustrating traffic jam on my way home from school.
The bus was moving at a snail’s pace due to the heavy congestion, and it took us more than two hours to cover a distance that would normally take just thirty minutes. The streets were packed with vehicles, and the honking of horns was incessant. I felt exhausted and impatient, realizing how disruptive traffic jams can be to our daily lives.
This experience has taught me the importance of planning ahead and considering alternative routes or transportation methods to avoid such delays in the future.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你从学校乘坐公交车返回家中时遭遇交通拥堵,写一篇短文给学校英文报专栏“Beyond the Classroom”投稿,分享本次经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由于:due to→because of
疲惫的:exhausted→tired
令人恼火的:frustrating→annoying
考虑:consider→take into account
2. 句式拓展
同意句替换
原句:The bus was moving at a snail’s pace due to the heavy congestion, and it took us more than two hours to cover a distance that would normally take just thirty minutes.
拓展句:The bus was moving at a snail’s pace because the roads were heavily congested, and it took us more than two hours to cover a distance that would normally take just thirty minutes.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The bus was moving at a snail’s pace due to the heavy congestion, and it took us more than two hours to cover a distance that would normally take just thirty minutes.(that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]I felt exhausted and impatient, realizing how disruptive traffic jams can be to our daily lives. (how引导的宾语从句)
通知
(24-25高二上·广东肇庆·期末)
假定你是李华。为迎接一年一度的科技节,你校将举办科技小发明比赛。请你代表学生会在校英语报上发布一则活动通知,邀请同学们积极参与。内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 参赛要求、提交时间等具体安排;
3. 呼吁同学们参与。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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Students’ Union
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
In line with annual School Science and Technology Festival, the Students’ Union is going to launch the Tech Invention Competition, providing a platform for students to showcase their talents and passion for science and technology.
To win the competition, your tech inventions should be original, show lots of creativity, and have practical uses. Besides, please include a vivid description of your invention, such as its appearance, functions and how it works. We encourage everyone to think outside the box and come up with inventions that can make a difference. A gentle reminder: the deadline for handing in your invention is September 30th.
We sincerely invite all students to participate in this exciting event, exploring the wonders of science and technology. Let’s make the Science and Technology Festival a memorable one!
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为迎接一年一度的科技节,学校将举办科技小发明比赛。要求考生代表学生会在校英语报上发布一则活动通知,邀请同学们积极参与。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛:competition → contest
此外:besides → in addition
真诚地:sincerely → heartfeltly
提出:come up with → put forward
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To win the competition, your tech inventions should be original, show lots of creativity, and have practical uses.
拓展句:If you want to win the competition, your tech inventions should be original, show lots of creativity, and have practical uses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To win the competition, your tech inventions should be original, show lots of creativity, and have practical uses. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】 We encourage everyone to think outside the box and come up with inventions that can make a difference. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
道歉信
(24-25高二上·广东潮州·期末)
假定你是李华,计划今年寒假和笔友Tom去杭州西湖游玩,但现在因故不得不取消这一计划。请你给Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my deepest apologies for not being able to visit West Lake in Hangzhou with you this winter vacation as we have planned.
The reason for this unexpected turn of events is that I have been selected to participate in a contest on behalf of our school, which requires plenty of preparations and practice. This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me and I hope you can support my decision. Your friendship means a lot to me, and it is with a heavy heart that I share this news.
However, I do hope that we can resume our plan in the future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给笔友Tom写邮件,表达因事取消寒假和他去杭州西湖游玩的计划表达歉意、说明原因并期待回复。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达:express → convey
计划:plan → schedule
选择:select → choose
参加:participate in → take part in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me and I hope you can support my decision.
拓展句:This represents a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me, and I earnestly hope that you will lend your support to my decision.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my deepest apologies for not being able to visit West Lake in Hangzhou with you this winter vacation as we have planned. (运用了as引导的方式状语从句)
【高分句型2】The reason for this unexpected turn of events is that I have been selected to participate in a contest on behalf of our school, which requires plenty of preparations and practice. (运用了连接词that引导的表语从句和关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型3】However, I do hope that we can resume our plan in the future. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句以及强调句)
告知信
(一)
(24-25高二上·广东部分学校·期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom是一个美食爱好者,他来信希望你介绍一下你们当地的传统美食。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍一种传统美食;
2.它的特点及你喜欢的原因;
3.邀请他前来中国亲自体验。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking me about our traditional delicacies in my hometown. Now let me introduce dumplings to you.
Dumplings are an essential food during festivals and family gatherings. They have various fillings like pork, beef, vegetables and seafood. The wrappers are thin and chewy. What I like most about them is that they symbolize reunion and happiness. Every time I eat dumplings with my family, I feel a strong sense of warmth and love.
I sincerely invite you to come to China and taste the delicious dumplings yourself. I’m sure you will love them.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】这篇写作是一篇介绍信,要求考生介绍自己喜欢的传统美食。考生要注意题目要求的三个要点都要包含在文中,还要补充合理细节。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
美食:delicacies → specialties, cuisines
象征:symbolize → represent
团聚:reunion → gathering, get-together
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely, wholeheartedly
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:They have various fillings like pork, beef, vegetables and seafood.
拓展句:They have various fillings that include pork, beef, vegetables and seafood.
【点睛】【高级句型1】What I like most about them is that they symbolize reunion and happiness. (what引导的主语从句,that引导的表语从句)
【高级句型2】Every time I eat dumplings with my family, I feel a strong sense of warmth and love. (every time引导的时间状语从句)
(二)
(24-25高二上·广东珠海·期末)
假定你是李华,你校新建的图书馆已投入使用。请写信给曾经在你校学习的英国交换生Chris,并介绍你们学校新的图书馆。内容包括:
(1)图书馆的基本情况:如设计、设备、藏书等;
(2)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m really excited to tell you that our school’s new library has been put into use. It is a remarkable place with a modern and elegant design. The interior is spacious and filled with natural light.
The library is furnished with advanced facilities and comfortable seating. There are numerous computers available for efficient searching. It boasts an extensive collection of books, including not only textbooks for various subjects but also a wide range of literature, science, and art works.
I love spending time there. It’s a great place for learning and relaxation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封信,介绍学校新的图书馆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→ thrilled
充满了:(be) filled with→ (be) full of
许多的:numerous→ a great number of
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It boasts an extensive collection of books, including not only textbooks for various subjects but also a wide range of literature, science, and art works.
拓展句:It boasts an extensive collection of books, which include not only textbooks for various subjects but also a wide range of literature, science, and art works.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m really excited to tell you that our school’s new library has been put into use.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The interior is spacious and filled with natural light.(运用了and连接的并列谓语)
(三)
(24-25高二上·广东汕尾·期末)
假定你是李华,上周四学校邀请了汕尾市剪纸艺术家给你们班上了一堂关于剪纸的美术课,请你给你的加拿大朋友Peter写一封邮件介绍这次经历,内容包括:
(1)介绍上课情况以及你完成的剪纸作品;
(2)这次活动的影响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I hope you’re doing well! I want to tell you about a special art class we had last Thursday. Our school invited a paper-cutting artist from Shanwei City to teach us. The artist showed us how to create beautiful paper-cutting designs, explaining the traditional techniques and the cultural significance behind them.
As for my project, I made a paper-cutting of a pair of fish. In Chinese culture, fish symbolize abundance and good luck, so I chose this design for its positive meaning. It was a bit challenging, but I felt great when I finished it!
This experience was amazing and made me appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese art more. It also inspired me to explore more about our cultural heritage.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Peter写一封邮件,介绍上周四学校邀请汕尾市剪纸艺术家上了一堂关于剪纸美术课的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
技能:technique →skill
就……而言:as for → in terms of
象征,代表:symbolize →stand for
激励:inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school invited a paper-cutting artist from Shanwei City to teach us.
拓展句:Our school invited a paper-cutting artist, who is from Shanwei City, to teach us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I want to tell you about a special art class we had last Thursday.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The artist showed us how to create beautiful paper-cutting designs, explaining the traditional techniques and the cultural significance behind them.(运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构以及现在分词短语作状语)
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(24-25高二上·广东深圳宝安区·期末)
假定你是李宝安,本学期你班开展了英文整本书课内外阅读 Anne of Green Gables,品读文学经典名著,加强阅读素养。请你给英国外交 Bob写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1.英文整本书阅读活动介绍;
2.你的收获和感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
I’m writing to share with you the reading program our class had this term.
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Yours,
Li Bao’an
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m writing to share with you the reading program our class had this term. We read the English book Anne of Green Gables both in and out of class. We had group discussions and shared our thoughts. We also wrote book reviews and made presentations about our understanding of the story and the characters.
I gained a great deal from this activity. Not only did my English proficiency improve significantly, especially in terms of vocabulary and comprehension skills, but I also developed a deeper appreciation for literature. Moreover, through discussions with my classmates, I learned to view the story from different perspectives and appreciate the diversity of thoughts. It was truly a wonderful and enriching experience.
Yours,
Li Bao’an
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给Bob写封信,分享自己班级开展的英文整本书阅读活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得:gain→ acquire
提高:improve→ enhance
此外:moreover→ what’s more
精彩的:wonderful→ fantastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, through discussions with my classmates, I learned to view the story from different perspectives and appreciate the diversity of thoughts.
拓展句:Moreover, when I had discussions with my classmates, I learned to view the story from different perspectives and appreciate the diversity of thoughts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share with you the reading program our class had this term.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only did my English proficiency improve significantly, especially in terms of vocabulary and comprehension skills, but I also developed a deeper appreciation for literature.(运用了部分倒装)
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