读后续写表达技巧 第6节 恐惧 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

第六节 恐惧 再胆小的人也会有鼓起勇气的时候，再勇敢的人也会有害怕的时候。当周围环境给人造成威胁时，恐惧、害怕的心理会自然而然地产生。因此，当故事中人物面临某一危险或威胁时，对角色恐惧、害怕的心理描写显得尤为重要。 一、词汇储备 名词 fear; scare; dread; shock; danger; threat; terror; courage; bravery; warning; risk; horror; alarm; boldness; coward 动词 amaze; terrify; threaten; frighten; terrorize; endanger; risk; encourage 形容词 scared; scary; dreadful; threatening; terrified; terrible; afraid; frightened; timid; frightful; fearful; alarmed; fearless; brave; courageous; bold; daring; adventurous; heroic 副词 alone; instantly; quickly; hard; badly; terribly; immediately 短语 be afraid of, be frightened of; tremble at; have one's heart in one's mouth; hair standing on end, scare to death; hold one's breath; without warning; a narrow escape 二、表达方法 我们可以使用直陈式表述、描述性表述比喻性表述、夸张性表述、拟人式表述、反语式表述和混合式表述七种方式表达恐惧的心情。 1.直陈式表述 在读后续写中我们可以直接用fear、scare、afraid、frightened等直接将恐惧表达出来。 I was scared stiff/silly. His frigid glance made me afraid. I am afraid under the vigilant eyes of the examiner. You cannot imagine how frightened I was when the wolf approached me. 2.描述性表述 人们恐惧时,会脸色苍白、睁大眼睛、呆立不动、大声尖叫、呼吸急促、不自觉地后退。人们特别恐惧时还会发抖、休克。我们可以通过角色的表现从侧面描写恐惧。 Sally said I should try Bungee, but I had cold feet. That horror movie made my hair stand on end. Mac sat in the car, his heart still fluttering with fear. He could even imagine the wolf's teeth tearing into his flesh. My heart stood still when I saw the little baby was to fall from the second floor. Rain and tears mingle on my face, salty tracks blending into the fresh sky-fallen trickles. Only the pinkness of my eyes gives some clues to my sadness. 3.比喻性表述 我们可用比喻的手法表达恐惧，带有like或 as的是明喻，不带的是暗喻或借喻。 Yes, but for their timely help, I would have been the food of the wolf. They were surprised to find Mac's bicycle lying on the road and Mac was like a drowned mouse. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 4.夸张性表述 我们也可以运用我们的想象力，将恐惧想象成有形事物进行描述，并加以放大。 He was frightened out of life. It seemed as if the world were at an end. It seemed as if his life had come to an end. The explosion really frightened the pants off me. A snake came out of the woods and scared me to death. Mac was nearly dead with fright when he thought of the wolf's bloody mouth. Scared to death as he was, Mac struggled to crawl up and threw his bicycle at the wolf with all his strength. 5.拟人式表述 我们也可以将恐惧想象成一个人或有生命的动物来描述它的言行。 A flood of fear welled up in him. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. 6.反语式表述 在读后续写中,我们也可以用正话反说的方式来表达恐惧的心理。 By this time his courage had fled. He held his breath, daring not to make a movement. 7.混合式表述 我们可将前六种表达方式的两种或多种混合使用起来表达恐惧的心理。 His voice shook with fear. I stood there quaking with fear. Being chased by an angry dog. I really had my heart in my mouth. Afraid that there might be more potential dangers ahead, Paul and Becky offered to drive them to Alaska. Rebecca, Abigail and their mother stood together, frightened, as they watched the enemy ship sail closer. 三、描写练习 A.按照括号里的要求转换句型 1. 1 thought I would die this day, though I was so young. (定语从句) This was I would die, though I was so young. 2. A statement like that would have terrified anyone else, instead, Granny saw it as a challenge. (用but 连接) A statement like that would have terrified anyone else as a challenge. 3. I nodded but inside I felt scared and helpless because our situation was desperate. (主语从句) I nodded but inside I felt scared and helpless. our situation was desperate. 4. I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. (结果状语从句) I froze with terror and I was so scared move an inch. 5. I was frozen with fear and I didn't leap out of the barrel and run away. (虚拟语气) I would have leaped out of the barrel and run away if . B.根据括号里所给的词语和句后的汉语译文完成句子 6. With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, . (faint) 我的心怦怦直跳,手掌冰冷潮湿,我感到头晕。 7. Fear slowly creeps upon her at . (sight) 看到那可怕的景象,她慢慢感到恐惧。 8. with horror when she faced with a grizzly bear so near.(shock) 当她这么近面对一头灰熊的时候，她被吓坏了。 9. At the sight of the wolf, a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.(seize) 看到那只狼，强烈的恐惧感钳住了我，手心开始冒汗。 10. 1 shouted for help but when I realized my terrible danger.(there) 我大声呼救，但没有回应，这时我意识到了我面对的可怕危险。 参考答案： 1. the day (when) I thought 2. but Granny saw it 3. It was plain/clear/obvious/apparent that 4. that I couldn't 5. I hadn't been frozen with fear 6. I felt faint 7. the terrible sight 8. She was shocked 9. I was seized by 10. there was no answer 四、牛刀小试 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Many years ago, there was a toy dinosaur that had an owner named David. David had medium dark hair, and he would always wear a pair of black jeans with a red shirt. David got his toy dinosaur when he was 3 months old from his grandma who had passed away. He named his dinosaur Dino. David month sold would take Dino from his grandma everywhere he went, but David was 18 now, David was going to head off to college in a few months. “David, what are you going to do with Dino?" asked his mom. Dino was basically part of David's family since David had always cared for it. “I don't know, Mom, It's been with me since I could remember,” responded David. Dino had a huge secret that only David knew about -- Dino could come to life. Whenever David needed help he would call for Dino to come to life. Dino helped David with tests, homework, and problems he had. But David did not want Dino to find out he wasn't going to take it to college because Dino would easily get mad like a rhino (牛). David went to his room to try to decide if maybe it wouldn't be bad to take Dino. David was planning to take Dino to a daycare center where there are many children willing to play, but David was too afraid to tell Dino. “You are hiding something from me”, David, said a mysterious voice. “What are you hiding?” asked the mysterious voice, “Who is that?” asked David. “You might know who this is but you might not,” responded the unknown voice. David thought that he was going mad, he was thinking he was in a deep dream. “David, the food is ready,” called out his mom. “Be right there, mom,” responded David. David went downstairs to eat his mom's spaghetti. “Mom, did you hear anybody talking upstairs?” asked David. “No. I only heard you," responded David's mom. 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1: Later that night, there was a knock on the door around 11:00. Paragraph 2: “Mom, what happened to you?” yelled David while going downstairs quickly. （一）原文思维导图 请根据原文绘制思维导图，完成后请向同桌展示，并相互评价。 参考： （二）续写扩展 请完成续写。 （三）续写草稿展示 请在小组内展示你写出的内容，并开展自评和互评。 （四）句子润色 请根据同学的评语修改你写出的内容，并对文章进行润色。 （五）范文赏析 请阅读范文，并借鉴。 One possible version: Later that night, there was a knock on the door around 1l: 00. After David's mom opened it, there was no one standing there. So she closed it and turned back, seeing Dino in front of her. What's more, she suddenly heard a mysterious voice saying, “Why will David send me to others?” When she saw Dino's mouth moving and heard words from it, she felt very shocked. And then, she shouted her son's name as loud as she could and she, terrified, said, “David is going to college without you”. Paragraph 2: “Mom, what happened to you?” yelled David While going downstairs quickly. Seeing Dino there, David knew their secret was let out. Seeing David, Dino asked, “Why don't you want me?” At that moment, David understood Dino and said, “No, I want to send you to a good place, where there are many children playing with you.” “Really?” “Of course.” As a result, Dino was pleased to go there and David settled the great problem he had. 五、总结本课内容 六、复习巩固与教师评阅 1. 修改续写草稿，并进行润色，并提交给老师评阅。 2. 积累行为描写的词汇和短语。 3. 摘抄默写本节课相关表达。 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $