读后续写表达技巧 第3节 愤怒 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

第三节 愤怒 怒作为“喜怒哀乐”四大情绪之一，随处可见。每个人都有愤怒的时候。熟悉掌握愤怒的各种英文表达，不仅有助于我们准确表达故事角色的情绪，更有利于我们准确生动地描述角色的心理。 一、词汇储备 名词 anger; scowl; glare; annoyance; fury; temper; resentment; outrage; hostility; fist; irritation; rage; crossness; passion; shout; burst; flash; control; thunder 动词 anger; annoy; irritate; shout; stare; rage; stamp; frown; complain; roar; smack; burst; slam; bow; storm; fuel; pulse; contain; control; charge 形容词 angry; annoyed; bad-tempered; bitter; mad; fiery; furious; cross; choleric; irate; ill-tempered; forceful; powerful; breathless 副词 furiously; threateningly; angrily; aggressively; breathlessly; crossly; forcefully 短语 hot under the collar; in a burst of anger; get mad at; explode with fury; glare at 二、表达方法 我们在读后续写中可以使用直陈式表述、描述性表述、比喻性表述、夸张性表述、拟人式表述、反语式表述和混合式表述七种方式来表达生气与愤怒。 1.直陈式表述 我们可以直接表达主人翁当时生气和愤怒或变得生气和愤怒的情绪。 I'm mad at what Jack said yesterday. Don't be cross with him after all, he is a child. Mrs. Sterling got so angry that she ran after them. She was angry and told me how upset she was without it. He looked very angry, "Now you get out of here, all of you!" he shouted. They were talking loudly. l got very angry because I could not hear the actor. So angry was the wolf that it roared and smacked the window violently. The officer in the control tower was very angry when he heard the news, because balloons can be a great danger to the aircraft. 2.描述性表述 常识告诉我们：人们生气时，会抱怨、大喊大叫、咬牙切齿、步伐匆匆、脸色难看。人们特别愤怒时还会发抖、跺脚和摔东西。我们可以通过描述角色愤怒时的行为来表现愤怒。 He trembled with rage. Sam stamped his foot in anger. She was breathless with anger. He kept his frustration in check. He swallowed down his frustration. She tamped down her irritation. Boiling with rage. Tom shook his fist at me. Filled with fury, Tom was unable to utter a single word. She let out a cry of anger, with her eyes glaring at her son. Unable to contain his disbelief and anger, he turned around roaring with rage. She stood there for a few seconds, and then stormed off to her own bedroom. Hot air was blowing from her nostrils; her face turned into apple red. She threw the painting on the table, slammed the door and threw herself on her bed. 3.比喻性表述 将愤怒比喻成flash, sparks, flames lava等，带like或as的是明喻，不带的是暗喻。 Anger rose in him like tide. He felt a flicker of irritation. He felt a flash of irritation. Anger rushed through her. Raw anger shot through him. Rage flowed through her like lava. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano. 4.夸张性表述 我们也可以动用我们的想象力，将生气和愤怒的情绪想象成有形事物进行描述，并加以放大，以加强语气。 Her temper sparked. Anger poured through her. Anger stirred within her. Rage nearly consumed her. 5.拟人式表述 我们也可以将生气的情绪想象成一个人或有生命的动物来描述它的言行。 Rage pulsed through his veins. Anger flooded his veins. Fury roared through her mind. Anger welled up in his chest. 6.反语式表述 我们可以在否定句中用happy，pleased, satisfied 等表示生气，也可以用双重否定的句式来表达生气。 Tom could hardly contain his rage. 7.混合式表述 将前六种表达方式的两种或多种混合使用起来表达就是混合式表述。 Tom felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. 三、描写练习 按照括号里的要求转换句型 1. They were all giving attention to Nick Ricky was mad. (用原因状语从句连接) they were all giving attention to Nick. 2. I was overcome with anger and I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. (-ed 分词作状语) , I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. 3.“Don't you have enough to do? I can take care of myself,” I stormed out, not even kissing him goodbye. (without 短语) "Don't you have enough to do? I can take care of myself, “I stormed out, . 4. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (倒装句) So angry he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. 5. His voice trembled with anger.(强调句) that his voice trembled. 6. He picked himself up and angrily went away. (非人称主语句) him up and sent him away. 7. I was overcome with a sudden surge of anger at the sight. (主语从句) contain was a sudden surge of anger at the sight. 8. All at once I charged at him, as I was burning with anger. (-ing分词作状语) All at once I charged at him, . 9. I felt rage build up inside me at the thought of this and suddenly I could bear it no longer. Fierce anger shook my body. (被动语态) inside me when I thought of this and suddenly I could bear it no longer. Fierce anger shook my body. 10. He turned to her, his eyes ablaze with anger. (with 复合结构) He turned to her, with anger. 参考答案： 1. Ricky was mad because; 2. Overcome with anger 3. even without kissing him goodbye; 4. did Sheldon feel that; 5. It was with anger; 6. Anger picked; 7. What I couldn't; 8. burning with anger; 9. Rage was built up; 10. with his eyes ablaze 四、牛刀小试 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A man who had gone out of his town came back and found that his house was on fire. It was one of the most beautiful houses in the town, and the man loved the house the most! Many were ready to give a double price for the house, but he never agreed for any price and now it was just burning before his eyes. And thousands of people gathered, but nothing could be done. The fire spread so fast that even if you tried to put it out, nothing would be saved. So he became very sad. His son came running and whispered something in his ear, “Don’t be worried. I sold it yesterday at a very good price. The offer was so good, and I could not wait for you. Forgive me.” The father said, “Thank God, it's not ours now!” Then he became relaxed and stood as a silent watcher just like other watchers. Then the second son came running, and he said to the father, “What are you doing? The house is on fire and you are only watching it burn?" The father said, “Don’t you know your brother has sold it?" He said, “We have taken only advance amount, not settled fully. I doubt now whether the man is going to purchase it.” Tears which had disappeared came back to the father's eyes, and his heart started to beat fast. And then the third son came, and he said, “That man is a man of his word, have just come from him. He said, ‘It doesn’t matter whether the house is burnt or not. It is mine. And I am going to pay the price that have settled for. Neither you nor I knew that the house would catch fire.’” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph l: Then they all just stood and watched the house burn without worry. Paragraph 2: Shortly the man who bought the house came. （一）原文思维导图 请根据原文绘制思维导图，完成后请向同桌展示，并开展自评和互评。 参考： （二）续写扩展 请完成续写。 （三）续写草稿展示 请在小组内展示你写出的内容，并相互点评。 （四）句子润色 请根据同学的评语修改你写出的内容，并对文章进行润色。 （五）范文赏析 请阅读范文，并借鉴。 One possible version: Then they all just stood and watched the house burn without worry. The father thought he would get much money from it soon. The three sons were thinking how to distribute the money when the house was sold out. At that moment, the house broke down and the fire was dying away. It looked as if it were in ruins. The father with full tears in his eyes thought of his wife and their hard work in building the house. Suddenly he wondered whether the man buying the house would keep his word or not. Paragraph 2: Shortly the man who bought the house came. When he saw the house burnt down entirely and the father and sons only stood there as silent watchers, he became very angry. When they went up and said hello to him, he said nothing, glaring at them. What's more, he turned back and left quickly, making them dumbfounded. To their regret, when the house was on fire, why didn't they put it out? 五、总结本课内容 六、复习巩固与教师评阅 1. 修改续写草稿，并进行润色，并提交给老师评阅。 2. 积累行为描写的词汇和短语。 3. 摘抄默写本节课相关表达。 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $