专题10 英语作文（期末真题汇编，上海专用）高一英语上学期

命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 专题10英语作文 基础 必练 主题01人与自我 Passage 1 (24-25学年高一上.上海市松江区·期末) 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poems into English)”社 团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团： 2)陈述你的理由。 Passage 2 (24-25学年高一上·上海市闵行区·期末) 假设你是高一年级学生李明，国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟(Oriental Land)进行了 为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章，给校报“My Impressive Military Training Experience'”板块投稿，内容 需包括： ●军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动； ●该活动后你的感受。 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Passage 3 (24-25学年高一上·上海市嘉定区·期末) 假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢 旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须： 1.指出李华的认识误区， 2.结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。 注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 主题02人与社会 Passage 1 (24-25学年高一上·上海市行知中学期末) 假设你是明启中学英语校报专栏作者李华，你计划在下一期into China栏目做一期关于传统冬季习俗的专栏， 专栏内容包括： 1)介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗； 2)该习俗的意义与传承。 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Passage 2 (24-25学年高一上·上海市建平中学期末) 当下，越来越多的人认为，体育课应该与其他传统文化课占据同等重要的位置，因此，建议把体育成绩纳 入高考总分。你是否赞同这种建议？请阐述你的观点并说明理由。 Passage 3 (23-24学年高一上·上海市松江区·期末) 你是明启中学的高一学生吴磊。下学期高一年级将进行社会实践，校学生会正就活动地点征求大家建议， 请你在信中写出： (1)推荐的地点： (2)推荐的理由。 主题03人与自然 Passage 1 (24-25学年高一上·上海市青浦区·期末) / 命学科网 www zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文Li Wen),你们校刊的“A sight on campus'栏目正在举办征文活动，征文 主题为The Beauty of Nature'”,要求用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。你的征文必须包括： 1.简要描写该校园一景： 2.你置身其中的感受 (文中不得出现真实校名或姓名) 进阶 提升 主题01人与自我 Passage 1 (24-25学年高一上·上海市育才中学期末) 学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。（字数150） 内容包括： 1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介； 2、说明理由 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Passage 2 (24-25学年高一上·上海市金山区·期末) 近日，学校正举办主题为The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你 敬佩的人，内容包括： 1.描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点； 2.阐述此人对你的影响。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。) 主题02人与社会 Passage 1 (24-25学年高一上·上海市徐汇区·期末) 近日，校园内流浪猫homeless cats)增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter),供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。 假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括： 1.你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍； 2.你的理由。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名) 学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 专题10 英语作文 主题01 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·上海市松江区·期末） 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poems into English)”社团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团； 2)陈述你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr. Zhu, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my thoughts on the newly proposed “Translating Tang Poems into English” club for first-year students at Mingqi High School. As an avid reader of Tang poetry and someone who has always been fascinated by the art of translation, I would definitely consider joining this club. I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. Moreover, I find the idea of bridging cultural gaps through translation incredibly appealing and think it would be a rewarding experience to share the beauty of Tang poems with others in a different language. Thank you for considering my feedback. I look forward to hearing more about the club’s development. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邮件给负责人朱老师，表明是否会加入“唐诗英译”社团以及陈述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 加强：enhance→strengthen 机会：opportunity→chance 此外：moreover→besides 考虑：consider→take into account 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for considering my feedback. 拓展句：I would appreciate it if you can consider my feedback. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Thank you for considering my feedback. (运用了动名词作宾语) Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·上海市闵行区·期末） 假设你是高一年级学生李明，国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟（Oriental Land）进行了为期一周的封闭式军训。请写一篇文章，给校报“My Impressive Military Training Experience”板块投稿，内容需包括： ● 军训过程中让你印象深刻的活动； ● 该活动后你的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During the National Day holiday, our school organized a week-long military training at Oriental Land for all senior one students. One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. This challenging course required our team to climb walls, crawl under nets, and carry heavy loads. It was tough, and at times, I felt like giving up. However, the encouragement and support from my teammates motivated me to push through. In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance. After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought. The experience boosted my confidence and made me appreciate the strength found in unity. It was truly memorable and has left a lasting impact on me. 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。国庆假期后学校安排高一年级集体前往上海东方绿舟（Oriental Land）进行了为期一周的封闭式军训，要求考生以“My Impressive Military Training Experience”为题写一篇作文投稿。   【详解】1. 词汇积累： 难忘的：memorable→ unforgettable 活动：activity → event 激励：motivate→ stimulate 完成：complete → accomplish 2. 句式拓展： 同义句替换 原句：One activity that left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. 拓展句：What left a deep impression on me was the team obstacle course. 【点睛】[高分句型1]After this activity, I realized that I am capable of much more than I originally thought.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]In the end, we completed the course together, which taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·上海市嘉定区·期末） 假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须： 1. 指出李华的认识误区; 2. 结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。 注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Hua,   I hope this email finds you well. I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.   Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons. Just think of the countless historical landmarks and cultural artifacts you encountered during your European trip. These experiences help us understand the world better and appreciate its diversity.   For instance, when you visited the Eiffel Tower, didn’t you feel a sense of wonder and excitement? That same feeling is what travel is all about. It’s about experiencing new things, meeting new people, and learning about different ways of life.   Moreover, travel is a great way to de-stress and recharge. Getting away from the familiar environment and routine can rejuvenate our minds and bodies. I know you mentioned you would rather stay at home and play games, but I believe the benefits of travel far outweigh the comforts of home.   I hope my words resonate with you, and maybe even inspire you to embrace travel more fully in the future. Remember, the world is a big place full of history, culture, and beauty waiting to be discovered. Yours, Wang Ming 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏，要求考生给他回复一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 表达：express→show 欣赏：appreciate→admire 另外：moreover→furthermore 激励：inspire→encourage 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. 拓展句：I was disappointed to read your recent email, which expressed your dislike for traveling. 【点睛】[高分句型1]While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.(while引导的让步状语从句) [高分句型2]Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons.(that引导的定语从句) 主题02 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·上海市行知中学·期末） 假设你是明启中学英语校报专栏作者李华，你计划在下一期into China栏目做一期关于传统冬季习俗的专栏，专栏内容包括： 1）介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗； 2）该习俗的意义与传承。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Title: Embracing the Warmth of Winter: The Tradition of Eating Laba Porridge In the heart of Chinese winter traditions, the custom of eating Laba porridge stands out as a cherished and time-honored practice. Celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, this tradition involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. The Laba Festival, as it is known, marks the beginning of the preparations for the Chinese New Year. The significance of eating Laba porridge extends beyond its delicious taste. It symbolizes a time of family reunion and gratitude for the harvest. The custom is deeply rooted in Buddhist culture, commemorating the enlightenment of the Buddha. Families gather to cook and enjoy the porridge, sharing stories and warmth. In modern times, the tradition is passed down through generations, with schools and communities organizing activities to make Laba porridge, ensuring the custom thrives and adapts to contemporary life. This simple yet profound tradition continues to foster a sense of togetherness and cultural identity during the cold winter months. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗以及该习俗的意义与传承。 【详解】1.词汇积累 美味的：delicious→tasty 象征：symbolize→stand for 感激：gratitude→appreciation 标志：mark→signal 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, this tradition involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. 拓展句：This tradition, which is celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The Laba Festival, as it is known, marks the beginning of the preparations for the Chinese New Year. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] In modern times, the tradition is passed down through generations, with schools and communities organizing activities to make Laba porridge, ensuring the custom thrives and adapts to contemporary life. (运用了现在分词作状语) Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·上海市建平中学·期末） 当下，越来越多的人认为，体育课应该与其他传统文化课占据同等重要的位置，因此，建议把体育成绩纳入高考总分。你是否赞同这种建议？请阐述你的观点并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The suggestion to include physical education (PE) scores in the college entrance examination’s total score has garnered increasing support. I fully endorse this proposal. Firstly, PE plays a crucial role in fostering a healthy body, which is the foundation for academic pursuits and lifelong achievements. By integrating PE into the exam system, we emphasize the importance of physical health from an early age, encouraging students to develop a balanced lifestyle. Secondly, it addresses the prevalent issue of student neglect towards physical exercise due to academic pressures, promoting a holistic educational approach. Lastly, this change aligns with the global trend of prioritizing physical well-being and can potentially inspire innovative teaching methods in PE, making learning more engaging and effective. Thus, incorporating PE scores into the college entrance exam is a step towards a healthier and more comprehensive education system. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。当下，越来越多的人认为，体育课应该与其他传统文化课占据同等重要的位置，因此，建议把体育成绩纳入高考总分，要求考生阐述自己的观点并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion → advice 重要性：importance → significance 至关重要的：crucial → vital 强调：emphasize → stress 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The suggestion to include physical education (PE) scores in the college entrance examination’s total score has garnered increasing support. I fully endorse this proposal. 拓展句：The suggestion to include physical education (PE) scores in the college entrance examination’s total score has garnered increasing support, which I fully endorse. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, PE plays a crucial role in fostering a healthy body, which is the foundation for academic pursuits and lifelong achievements.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】By integrating PE into the exam system, we emphasize the importance of physical health from an early age, encouraging students to develop a balanced lifestyle.（运用了动名词integrating作宾语、现在分词encouraging作状语、不定式to develop作宾补） Passage 3 （23-24学年高一上·上海市松江区·期末） 你是明启中学的高一学生吴磊。下学期高一年级将进行社会实践，校学生会正就活动地点征求大家建议，请你在信中写出： (1) 推荐的地点； (2) 推荐的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Student Union,     On hearing that our school is going to conduct social practice next semester for us senior one students, I’m writing to offer my personal suggestion on the site arrangement. I think the school field the most suitable place. Because it is large enough to hold all the whole students participating in the activity. What’s more, there are various regions for our students to take part in many kinds of activities, which can make us experience life fully.       I do hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and that the activity site will be well received by all of the students.                                                                                                                                                                   Yours,                         Wu Lei 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生对下学期高一年级将进行的社会实践活动地点给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 一…就…：on→upon 举办：conduct→throw 容纳：hold→accommodate 给与：offer→give 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I think the school field the most suitable place. 拓展句：I think the school field is the most suitable place. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On hearing that our school is going to conduct social practice next semester for us senior one students, I’m writing to offer my personal suggestion on the site arrangement.（由that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, there are various regions for our students to take part in many kinds of activities, which can make us experience life fully.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句） 主题03 人与自然 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·上海市青浦区·期末） 假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文(Li Wen)，你们校刊的“A sight on campus”栏目正在举办征文活动，征文主题为“The Beauty of Nature”，要求用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。你的征文必须包括： 1. 简要描写该校园一景； 2. 你置身其中的感受 (文中不得出现真实校名或姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A sight on campus One of the most appealing sights on our campus is the Lotus Pond. As you step into this quiet corner, you are greeted by a breathtaking view of vibrant lotus flowers blooming in all their glory. The pond lies amid lush greenery, with willow trees gently swaying in the breeze, adding to the peace of the scene. When I find myself in the presence of this amazing sight, I am immediately transported to a place of pure peace. The vibrant colors of the lotus flowers create a sense of joy and serenity. Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. It teaches us to appreciate the simple things in life and the importance of finding moments of peace amidst our busy schedules. In conclusion, the Lotus Pond on our campus is a sight to behold, which serves as a perfect reminder for us to slow down, appreciate the beauty of nature, and find comfort in its presence. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语介绍自己学校的校园一景。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引人的：appealing→attractive 乐趣：joy→ happiness 重要性：importance→ significance 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 倒装句变陈述句 原句：Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. 拓展句：The Lotus Pond not only provides a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does the Lotus Pond provide a peaceful retreat, but it also serves as a reminder of the beauty and resilience of nature.（运用了not only…but also…连接两个句子，第一个句子运用部分倒装） 【高分句型2】In conclusion, the Lotus Pond on our campus is a sight to behold, which serves as a perfect reminder for us to slow down, appreciate the beauty of nature, and find comfort in its presence.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 主题01 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·上海市育才中学·期末） 学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。（字数150） 内容包括： 1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介； 2、说明理由 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The person I respect There are a lot of people around us, who are respectable. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person who I respect most in my heart. My father is a teacher, who loves his work and his students very much and devotes himself to his work and students. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to keep me company and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. With his help and encouragement, I do well in my lessons. He achieved a lot in his work, and thus was respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person who I respect most and I love him deeply. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，要求考生按照要求写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很多：a lot of → a great many of 值得尊敬的：respectable→ venerable 尊敬：respect→ honour 陪伴某人：keep sb. company→ accompany sb. 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：He achieved a lot in his work, and thus was respected by his students. 拓展句：Because he achieved a lot in his work, he was respected by his students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】There are a lot of people around us, who are respectable. （运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句） Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·上海市金山区·期末） 近日，学校正举办主题为“The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文， 介绍一位你敬佩的人，内容包括： 1. 描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点； 2. 阐述此人对你的影响。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 The Person I Admire In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. He is a man of medium height with a bald head and a pair of sparkling blue eyes. Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. He faced a tough time in the recent economic downturn, yet he never lost hope. He used the opportunity to learn new skills and started his own small business. His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The person I admire”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位敬佩的人。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter→meet 非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary 机会：opportunity→chance 挫折：setback→frustration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. 拓展句：Mr. Smith never gives up, no matter what challenges he faces. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. (运用了who引导定语从句) [高分句型2] His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 主题02 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·上海市徐汇区·期末） 近日，校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括： 1. 你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍； 2. 你的理由。 (注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Student Union, I strongly support the initiative to establish a shelter for homeless cats on our campus. The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings. Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence. Furthermore, such an act of kindness and compassion will set a positive example for the entire community, fostering a culture of care and respect for all life. I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment. Thank you for considering my thoughts on this matter. Sincerely, A Concerned Student 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校园内流浪猫(homeless cats) 增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫，要求考生就此事写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 建立：establish→set up 提供：provide→offer 另外：furthermore→additionally 重要的：significant→important 2. 局势拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Providing a safe haven for them will ensure their well-being and also prevent any potential issues arising from their unmanaged presence. 拓展句：Providing a safe haven for the homeless cats will not only ensure their well-being but also prevent any potential issues that may arise from their unmanaged presence on campus. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The presence of these cats not only enriches our campus life but also reminds us of our responsibility towards all living beings.(运用了not only...but also...句型) [高分句型2]I believe that with our collective effort, we can make a significant difference in the lives of these cats and contribute to a more humane and sustainable campus environment.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $