主题内心的秘密读后续写讲解与练习-2026届高三英语一轮复习

高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解 读后续写5：内心的秘密 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 My family has collected bottles from sunup to sundown all year long.My mother leaves at dawn to collect cans.And when she returns 12 hours later,I help her pull the shopping cart the six long blocks to the recycling center through the street of Bushwick.Although this center has been like my second home for the past years,I have kept it mostly a secret.I couldn't bear the idea of my friends knowing our family survived on other people's garbage.What if they laughed at me?I felt guilty for being embarrassed,but I couldn't help it.Even though I had a lot of friends and was a social butterfly,I was not ready to trust someone else. Then in the summer before my senior year,I took a college essay course.The essay prompt was:“Recall a time when you faced a challenge,setbacks or failure.How did it affect you?And what did you earn from this experience?”I chose to write about the impact my neighborhood's gentrification(贵族化)had on me,and how that led me to volunteer with officials in my community who were trying to find it.At the end,there was just one sentence about can collecting. One day after class,my teacher asked me to discuss my draft.“Your story has potential.However,it is not about personal growth.How about you telling me about the can collecting?"So I was faced with sharing my secret.But he was my teacher,and I trusted him so I rewrote the essay. Two days later,I found out we were expected to read our essay loud after lunch!How could that be?I have kept the secret for so many years and reading my essay in the class meant that all I had done was in vain.I was ashamed for my peers to know. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As I headed to the cafeteria,I met up with a friend,Mason,who I always had lunch with. When we got back to class,I felt ready to read my draft out aloud. · 读后续写：内心的秘密 检测版 Paragraph 1:As I headed to the cafeteria,I met up with a friend,Mason,who I always had lunch with.当我去食堂时，我遇到了平时总是一起吃午饭朋友，梅森。 1. 然而，我只是走过他并没有和他打招呼，因为我不想和任何人说话。 ,I just passed and didn’t because . 2. 然后，我选择独自坐着吃午饭，等待着下午的黑暗时刻。 Then,I chose to , in the afternoon. 3. 过了一会儿，梅森手里拿着饭朝我走来，像往常一样坐在我旁边。 ,Mason and sat next to me . 4. 他问我发生了什么事，我不得不把多年来一直隐藏在我心底的秘密告诉他。 He and I had to that had been hidden for many years. 5. 令我出乎意料的是，他不仅没有嘲笑我，而且还鼓励我讲我的故事。 ,he not only but also . Paragraph 2:When we got back to class,I felt ready to read my draft out aloud.当我们回到课堂上时，我觉得自己已经准备好要大声朗读我的草稿了 1. 我站在讲台上，深吸了一口气，鼓起勇气，开始读。 , , and began to read it. 2. 说实话，我还是感到有点焦虑，因为我不知道其他学生在知道了我的故事后是否会看不起我。 ,I because I didn’t know after knowing my story. 3. 让我松了一口气的是，我一读完后，他们就热烈地为我的表演和故事鼓掌。 ,they and story I . 4. 一个学生欢呼道，“你是一个帮助父母谋生的超级男孩。” One of a student cheers,”You are a super boy ” 5. 只有在那一刻我才意识到没有人会嘲笑我，我不应该为我的家人和我自己感到羞耻。 that no one would laugh at me and . · 读后续写：内心的秘密 校对版 Paragraph 1:As I headed to the cafeteria,I met up with a friend,Mason,who I always had lunch with.当我去食堂时，我遇到了平时总是一起吃午饭朋友，梅森。 1. 然而，我只是走过他并没有和他打招呼，因为我不想和任何人说话。 However,I just passed and didn’t greet him because I didn’t want to talk to anyone. 2. 然后，我选择独自坐着吃午饭，等待着下午的黑暗时刻。 Then,I chose to sit alone to have lunch,waiting the dark moment in the afternoon. 3. 过了一会儿，梅森手里拿着饭朝我走来，像往常一样坐在我旁边。 After a while,Mason walked towards me with his meals in his hands and sat next to me as usual. 4. 他问我发生了什么事，我不得不把多年来一直隐藏在我心底的秘密告诉他。 He asked me what had happened and I had to tell him the secret that had been hidden at the bottom of my heart for many years. 5. 令我出乎意料的是，他不仅没有嘲笑我，而且还鼓励我讲我的故事。 Beyond my expectation,he not only didn’t laugh at me but also encouraged me to tell my story. Paragraph 2:When we got back to class,I felt ready to read my draft out aloud.当我们回到课堂上时，我觉得自己已经准备好要大声朗读我的草稿了 1. 我站在讲台上，深吸了一口气，鼓起勇气，开始读。 Standing on the platform,I took a deep breath,gathered my courage and began to read it. 2. 说实话，我还是感到有点焦虑，因为我不知道其他学生在知道了我的故事后是否会看不起我。 To be honest,I still felt a bit anxious because I didn’t know whether other students would look down on me after knowing my story. 3. 让我松了一口气的是，我一读完后，他们就热烈地为我的表演和故事鼓掌。 To my relief,they clapped warmly for my performance and story the moment I finished reading. 4. 一个学生欢呼道，“你是一个帮助父母谋生的超级男孩。” One of students cheers,”You are a super boy who helps parents to make a living” 5. 只有在那一刻我才意识到没有人会嘲笑我，我不应该为我的家人和我自己感到羞耻。 Only at that moment did I realize that no one would laugh at me and I shouldn’t be ashamed of my family and myself. · 读后续写：内心的秘密 参考范文 Paragraph 1:当我去食堂时，我遇到了平时总是一起吃午饭朋友，梅森。然而，我只是走过他并没有和他打招呼，因为我不想和任何人说话。然后，我选择独自坐着吃完午饭，等待着下午的黑暗时刻。过了一会儿，梅森手里拿着饭朝我走来，像往常一样坐在我旁边。他问我发生了什么事，我不得不把多年来一直隐藏在我心底的秘密告诉他。令我出乎意料的是，他不仅没有嘲笑我，而且还鼓励我讲我的故事。 As I headed to the cafeteria,I met up with a friend,Mason,who I always had lunch with.However,I just passed and didn’t greet him because I didn’t want to talk to anyone.Then,I chose to sit alone to have lunch,waiting the dark moment in the afternoon.After a while,Mason walked towards me with his meals in his hands and sat next to me as usual.He asked me what had happened and I had to tell him the secret that had been hidden at the bottom of my heart for many years.Beyond my expectation,he not only didn’t laugh at me but also encouraged me to tell my story. Paragraph 2当我们回到课堂上时，我觉得自己已经准备好要大声朗读我的草稿了。我站在讲台上，深吸了一口气，鼓起勇气，开始读。说实话，我还是感到有点焦虑，因为我不知道其他学生在知道了我的故事后是否会看不起我。让我松了一口气的是，我一读完后，他们就热烈地为我的表演和故事鼓掌。一个学生欢呼道，“你是一个帮助父母谋生的超级男孩。”只有在那一刻我才意识到没有人会嘲笑我，我不应该为我的家人和我自己感到羞耻。 When we got back to class,I felt ready to read my draft out aloud.Standing on the platform,I took a deep breath,gathered my courage and began to read it.To be honest,I still felt a bit anxious because I didn’t know whether other students would look down on me after knowing my story.To my relief,they clapped warmly for my performance and story the moment I finished reading.One of students cheers,”You are a super boy who helps parents to make a living”Only at that moment did I realize that no one would laugh at me and I shouldn’t be ashamed of my family and myself. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $