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高中英语 读后续写练习与讲解
读后续写3:护送Sara上幼儿园路上遇到凶猛的狗
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Hurry up you guys, or you will be late for school!” called Mom. We went downstairs and had a quick breakfast. I was eating my favorite-very sweet porridge, and Sara was having eggs. When I rose to have my bowl washed, Mom whispered, “You know you need to be cautious today when you're walking Sara to school. It's your job to assure(保证)me she gets there all right. " Then she cast me a very serious look. I thought to myself, wondering why Mom was making such a big deal out of this. It was Sara's first day of Kindergarten, but I could manage it. I wish Mom would treat me like an adult.
Then Sara ran out of the house, and I went behind her, skipping down the front walkway to the sidewalk. Along the way, I could feel Mom's gaze on us.
I grabbed Sara's hand. “ Are you eager and excited for your first day of school?" I asked, trying to sound like a grown-up. Sara smiled and nodded her head yes. Meanwhile, my mom was staring at us through the window. “When will she treat me like an adult?"I thought. “I will show you the way. " I said. I felt proud to be the elder sister. We walked past beautiful gardens and big, leafy trees. Suddenly, I heard a growl(低吼)and saw a dog walking towards us. He was big and fierce looking with long sharp teeth.“GRRRR!!!” the dog barked. I didn't see its owner or anyone who could help us. My hand became sweaty and Sara stopped walking. “I'm scared, Julie," she said. I didn't want her to be scared. I wanted to appear brave. “Everything will be okay," I said.
“GRRRR!!!” The dog stepped closer and we could see it was the size of a small horse-with red eyes and sharp teeth.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
I was trying to make my voice sound calm.
I told Mom what had happened.
· 读后续写:护送Sara上幼儿园路上遇到凶猛的狗
检测版
Paragraph 1:I was trying to make my voice sound calm. 我试图让我的声音听起来平静下来。
1. 感到害怕和紧张,我用温柔而坚定的声音对Sara说:“不要害怕!我和你在一起。”
, I said to Sara ,“Don't be afraid!I am here with you.”
2. 虽然在那一刻我的双腿有点颤抖,但我知道我必须勇敢地去面对目前的情况,为Sara树立一个好榜样。
Although I was a little sacred ,I knew I must be brave to and Sara.
3. 看到那只大而凶猛的狗慢慢地向我们走来,我立刻紧握着她的手,我们准备站着一动不动并一言不发,以免吸引狗的注意。
the big and fierce dog ,I immediately and we were ready to to the dog.
4. 过了一会儿,狗似乎走开了,所以我们迅速朝幼儿园走去。
,the dog seemed to walk away,so the kindergarten.
Paragraph 2:I told Mom what had happened. 我把所发生的事告诉了妈妈。
1. 当我向她描述整个故事时,说实话,我还是感到有点害怕,因为那只长而锋利的又长又凶猛的狗出现在我的脑海里。
When I the whole story , , because that big and fierce dog with long sharp teeth .
2. 听到我的描述,妈妈对我竖起了大拇指,把我抱在怀里,用温柔的声音说道:“你现在是成年人了,而不是小男孩,我为你感到骄傲。”
,my mom , and ,“You are an adult now a boy and .”
3. 在被妈妈称赞后,我的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
after .
4. 从那时起,那变成了我的职责来保证Sara能顺利地去上幼儿园,我相信我能做得很好。
, assure(保证)me Sara gets kindergarten all right and .
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校对版
Paragraph 1:I was trying to make my voice sound calm. 我试图让我的声音听起来平静下来。
1. 感到害怕和紧张,我用温柔而坚定的声音对Sara说:“不要害怕!我和你在一起。”
Feeling frightened/scared and nervous, I said to Sara in a soft but determined voice,“Don't be afraid!I am here with you.”
2. 虽然在那一刻我的双腿有点颤抖,但我知道我必须勇敢地去面对目前的情况,为萨拉树立一个好榜样。
Although I was a little sacred with my legs trembling at that moment,I knew I must be brave to face the present situation and set a good example for Sara.
3. 看到那只大而凶猛的狗慢慢地向我们走来,我立刻紧握着她的手,我们准备站着一动不动并一言不发,以免吸引狗的注意。
Seeing the big and fierce dog walking/approaching to us slowly,I immediately held her hand tightly and we were ready to stand still without saying a word to avoid catching the attention of the dog.
4. 过了一会儿,狗似乎走开了,所以我们迅速朝幼儿园走去。
After a while,the dog seemed to walk away,so we walked quickly towards the kindergarten.
Paragraph 2:I told Mom what had happened. 我把所发生的事告诉了妈妈。
1. 当我向她描述整个故事时,说实话,我还是感到有点害怕,因为那只长而锋利的又长又凶猛的狗出现在我的脑海里。
When I described the whole story to her,to be honest,I still felt a little scared because that big and fierce dog with long sharp teeth appeared in my mind.
2. 听到我的描述,妈妈对我竖起了大拇指,把我抱在怀里,用温柔的声音说道:“你现在是成年人了,而不是小男孩,我为你感到骄傲。”
Hearing my description/words,my mom gave me a thumbs-up,gathered me into her arms and said in a soft voice,“You are an adult now instead of a boy and I am so proud of you.”
3. 在被妈妈称赞后,我的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
A big and wide smile appeared on my face after being praised by my mom.
4. 从那时起,那变成了我的职责来保证Sara能顺利地去上幼儿园,我相信我能做得很好。
From then on,it became my duty to assure(保证)me Sara gets kindergarten all right and I believed I could do it well.
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参考范文
Paragraph 1:我试图让我的声音听起来平静下来。感到害怕和紧张,我用温柔而坚定的声音对Sara说:“不要害怕!我和你在一起。”虽然在那一刻我的双腿有点颤抖,但我知道我必须勇敢地去面对目前的情况,为萨拉树立一个好榜样。看到那只大而凶猛的狗慢慢地向我们走来,我立刻紧握着她的手,我们准备站着一动不动并一言不发,以免吸引狗的注意。过了一会儿,狗似乎走开了,所以我们迅速朝幼儿园走去。(94)
I was trying to make my voice sound calm.Feeling frightened/scared and nervous, I said to Sara in a soft but determined voice,“Don't be afraid!I am here with you.” Although I was a little sacred with my legs trembling at that moment,I knew I must be brave to face the present situation and set a good example for Sara.Seeing the big and fierce dog walking/approaching to us slowly,I immediately held her hand tightly and we were ready to stand still without saying a word to avoid catching the attention of the dog.After a while,the dog seemed to walk away,so we walked quickly towards the kindergarten.(94)
Paragraph 2:我把所发生的事告诉了妈妈。当我向她描述整个故事时,说实话,我还是感到有点害怕,因为那只长而锋利的又长又凶猛的狗出现在我的脑海里。听到我的描述,妈妈对我竖起了大拇指,把我抱在怀里,用温柔的声音说道:“你现在是成年人了,而不是小男孩,我为你感到骄傲。”在被妈妈称赞后,我的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。从那时起,那变成了我的职责来保证Sara能顺利地去上幼儿园,我相信我能做得很好。
I told Mom what had happened.When I described the whole story to her,to be honest,I still felt a little scared because that big and fierce dog with long sharp teeth appeared in my mind.Hearing my description/words,my mom gave me a thumbs-up,gathered me into her arms and said in a soft voice,“You are an adult now instead of a boy and I am so proud of you.”A big and wide smile appeared on my face after being praised by my mom.From then on,it became my duty to assure(保证)me Sara gets kindergarten all right and I believed I could do it well.(100)
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