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专题09 书面表达
记叙文 (人与自我)
Passage 1
(24-25七上·云南昆明·期末)
亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新篇章。请以“My School Life”为题,根据下面提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:1.What do you think of your school life?
2.What do you do at school every day?
3.What’s your favorite subject and who is your favorite teacher? why?
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.语言通顺,表意准确,条理清晰,书写规范。
3.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
My School Life
My school life is wonderful and colorful.
Every day, I have many interesting things to do at school. I usually have six classes a day. I also join the sports club after school. I often play football with my classmates. My favorite subject is English because it’s fun and useful. I like speaking English with my classmates. My favorite teacher is my Chinese teacher, Miss Li. She is kind and patient. She always helps us with our studies.
I enjoy my school life very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的学校生活是什么样的;
第二步,介绍每天在学校做什么;
第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的科目和老师以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①after school放学后
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because it’s fun and useful. (原因状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七上·云南大理·期末)
升入初中已经一学期了,假如你是Linda,请从校园环境、喜欢的学科、老师及同学相处等方面,给你的朋友Cindy写一封信,介绍你的学校生活。
要求:
1.根据以上提示,写一封信。
2.词数60词左右。
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。否则以零分计。如涉及校名,统一使用 Guangming Middle School。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Cindy,
It’s been a semester since I started junior high school at Guangming Middle School. I wanted to share my new school life with you.
Our campus is big and green with lots of trees. I really enjoy my Science class; experiments are so fun! My teachers are kind and patient, who help me a lot in my study. I’ve made many friends and we all get along very well.
I miss you and hope you’re doing well.
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括“校园环境、喜欢的学科、老师及同学相处”等方面,考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节,使信件内容丰富且生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。在开头简短地寒暄后,说明写信的目的是为了介绍自己的学校生活;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。 校园环境;喜欢的学科;老师及同学相处:描述与老师的关系;
第三步,书写结语。表达对Cindy的思念。
[亮点词汇]
①started junior high school 开始上初中
②enjoy 喜欢
③kind and patient 和蔼且耐心
④get along 相处
[高分句型]
①It’s been a semester since I started junior high school at Guangming Middle School.(It is...that...强调句型的一种变体,强调时间状语)
②My teachers are kind and patient, who help me a lot in my study.(who引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词teachers)
Passage 3
(24-25七上·云南西双版纳·期末)
My Favorite Day
提示:一周七天中你最喜欢哪天?你在这一天里都做些什么事?请以“My Favorite Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于 60;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文:
My Favorite Day
My favorite day of the week is Saturday. On this day, I usually get up early in the morning and go for a run in the park with my father. After breakfast, I help my mother with housework. In the afternoon, I like to go to the library to read books. I enjoy reading novels and stories about history. In the evening, I watch TV with my family or play games with my friends. We often have a lot of fun together. Saturday is a relaxing and enjoyable day for me, and I look forward to it every week.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作内容要回答提示中的问题,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明自己最喜欢哪一天;
第二步,按时间顺序具体介绍这一天的活动;
第三步,结尾点题,总结喜欢这一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①get up 起床
②watch TV 看电视
③look forward to 盼望
[高分句型]
①After breakfast, I help my mother with housework.(help...with...句型)
② I enjoy reading novels and stories about history.(enjoy doing sth句型)
Passage 4
(24-25七上·云南昆明五华区·期末)
My Happy School Life
提示:亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。转眼间,同学们在中学的第一个学期即将结束。请以“My Happy School Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的中学校园生活。内容包括介绍你的学习生活和课外活动,并谈谈你的感受。可适当进行拓展。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80个;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;否则以零分计;
3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,可以适当增加细节;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Happy School Life
My school life is truly happy. Let me tell you something about it.
There are some modern buildings and beautiful gardens in our school. The playground is big and we often play sports with our classmates there. The teachers here are kind and patient. We have a lot of subjects at school. My favorite subject is math because my math teacher is really nice and fun. He makes the classes interesting. After class, I often enjoy different activities. I join the sports club and I often play basketball and run with my friends. It is really relaxing. There are also art clubs and music clubs at our school. We can learn some new things there. They make our life colorful.
My school life is rich and colorful. I believe I can make some good friends here and learn a lot here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、介绍自己的学习生活和课外活动,如:学校设施、学科、学校人员、俱乐部等;
第三步、谈谈自己的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. about sth.告诉某人某事
②play sports做运动
③a lot of很多
④play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is math because my math teacher is really nice and fun.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I believe I can make some good friends here and learn a lot here.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 5
(23-24七上·云南昭通·期末)
提示:假如你是王林,是一名中学生,今天是星期天,你不需要去上学。请你根据表格中提供的信息,以“My Happy Sunday”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己一天的活动。
7:00
get up
7:30
have breakfast
8:30
do my homework
10:30
do some shopping with my mother
12:00
have lunch
14:00
go to the zoo with friends
17:30
have dinner with friends
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于40个;
2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My Happy Sunday
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【答案】例文
My Happy Sunday
My name is Wang Lin. It’s Sunday today. I don’t need to go to school. I get up at seven o’clock and then I have breakfast at half past seven. After breakfast, I do my homework for two hours. At half past ten, I do some shopping with my mother. At 12:00, I have lunch at home. At two o’clock in the afternoon, I go to the zoo with my friends. We see many animals there. Then we have dinner together at half past five. I have a happy day today.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作的要点提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点,可适当增加细节,注意用词,使作文内容意思流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,表明时间及不需要上学的原因;
第二步,结合所给提示,按照时间顺序来介绍自己一天的活动;
第三天,表达对这一天的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① need to do sth. 需要做某事
② get up 起床
[高分句型]
I get up at seven o’clock and then I have breakfast at half past seven. (and连接两个并列句)
Passage 6
(24-25七上·云南昆明东川区·期末)
时间过得真快,不知不觉一学期快要结束了,你已成为一名中学生好几个月了,你的中学生活一定丰富多彩,请结合你的校园、学习科目、课外活动、学校生活等以“My School Life”为题,介绍一下你的校园生活,并谈谈你的真实感受。
要求:
1)语言流畅、书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。
2)文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用姓名,请用Mike, Mary等名字,校名统一使用Xinhua Middle School。
3)书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
4)抄袭试卷中相关材料的,抄袭部分不给分。
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【答案】例文
My School Life
I would like to tell you something about the life in my school. It has been one year since I came to the school.
My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. We always help each other. I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends. In school, I study English, mathematics, Chinese, physical education, biology, geography, and so on. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. Mr. Li is my math teacher. He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. I like music room. Because I love dancing. Dancing is relaxing.
I like my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,短文必须包含写作要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的校园;
第二步,介绍自己的老师和同学;
第三步,介绍自己的学习科目。
[亮点词汇]
①each other互相
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①It has been one year since I came to the school. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework.(though引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25七上·云南昆明官渡区·期末)
One of My School Days 提示:新学期,你成为了一名中学生,体验了不一样的学校生活。请以“One of My School Days”为题目,写一篇英语作文,介绍你上学的一天。
要求:
1.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80个;
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
One of My School Days
I have just started my new school year as a middle school student. Let me share one of my school days with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. After having breakfast, I go to school by bike. My classes start at 8:00. In the morning, we have four lessons including Chinese, Maths, English, and History. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages.
In the afternoon, we have three more lessons. After school, I often go to the library to read books or finish my homework. I go back home at around 5:30 p.m. I feel a bit tired but very happy because I have learned a lot of new things.
I enjoy my school life very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍上学的上午日常时间安排;
第二步,接着介绍下午的日常活动;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②in the morning早上
③go back home回家
④a lot of很多
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 8
(23-24七上·云南昆明盘龙区·期末)
My Favorite Day at School
提示:上学的日子既忙碌又快乐。从周一到周五,总有你比较喜欢的一天。你为什么会喜欢这一天呢?或许在学校里有你喜欢的老师和学科,或许有你喜欢的午餐和美食,又或许有你喜欢的课外活动……,这些都会让你喜欢在学校的时光。请你以My Favorite Day at School为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你喜欢的一个上学日及感受。
要求:
1. 词数不少于 60个;
2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写工整;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Day at School
My favorite day is Friday. I would like to introduce it to all of you.
In the morning, I have an English class, which is my favorite subject. The reason why I love it is that I think English is not only interesting but also good for my future job. In the afternoon, I have a biology class. I am also interested in it because I can learn more about nature. As for the school activities, I enjoy playing basketball, for it can make me excited and relaxed.
This is my favorite day. I like Friday because I think it is a busy but meaningful day. What about you?
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的一个上学日;
第二步,具体叙述喜欢的原因;
第三步,最后表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不但……而且……
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③What about……呢
[高分句型]
①In the morning, I have an English class, which is my favorite subject(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②The reason why I love it is that I think English is not only interesting but also good for my future job.(why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句以及省略that的宾语从句)
③I am also interested in it because I can learn more about nature.(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 9
(23-24七上·云南昆明市嵩明·期末)
My Middle School Life
提示:你成为初中生已经一个学期了,你适应初中生活了吗?你喜欢学校里的老师同学、活动及课程吗?请以“My Middle School Life”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的初中生活。
要求:1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m from Class One, Grade Seven. I’m very happy in Chongqing No.1 Secondary School. Our school is big and clean. There are many trees in the school. All the teachers are kind and friendly. We have many subjects at school. My favorite subject is music because it is interesting. I usually have it on Thursday afternoon. My favorite sport is soccer. I like to play soccer with my friends after school every day. At school, we have School Day, a school trip, a sports meeting and a music festival this term. This is my life in middle school, busy but interesting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“My Middle School Life”为题,按照提示写出自己的初中生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出自己的年级及描写自己的学校;
第二步,描述自己的同学、老师、课程活动;
第三步,写出自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①music festival音乐节
②after school放学后
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is music because it is interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 10
(23-24七上·云南保山市腾冲·期末)
提示:进入初中的这一个学期里,你一定有很多个开心的周末,你的周末通常是怎么度过的呢?请以“My Happy Sunday”为题,写一篇英语短文描述一个你快乐的星期天。主要描述你在这一天的生活和活动内容,比如什么时候起床、吃早餐;做些什么活动;有什么感受等等。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,如需使用名字,请用Mike,Gina等英文名,校名统一用Guangming Middle School,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题上无效。
My Happy Sunday
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【答案】例文
My Happy Sunday
I’m Mike. I’m 13 years old. I’m a junior high school student. I love my school life very much. I’m very happy on Sundays.
Let me tell you why. I usually get up at 7 o’clock on Sunday morning. Then I read books from 7:00 to 9:00. At about 9:10, I have breakfast with my parents at home. After breakfast, I often go shopping with my mother. She often buys food and clothes for me. In the afternoon, my father often takes me to the zoo. I can see pandas, monkeys, tigers and elephants. They are cute and I like them.
I’m happy on Sundays. I love my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己早上几点起床、吃早饭;
第二步,介绍这一天的活动;
第三步,最后表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① get up起床
② from...to...从……到……
③ buy sth for sb为某人买某物
[高分句型]
They are cute and I like them.(and并列句)
说明文 (人与自我)
Passage 11
(23-24七上·云南曲靖·期末)
Healthy Eating Habits
提示: 学会健康饮食,享受美好生活。你一日三餐吃什么?你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗? 请以“Healthy Eating Habits”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要求:
1. 抄写题目,短文词数不少于50词;
2. 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名,否则以零分计;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上,如在试题卷上作答,一律不得分。
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【答案】例文
Healthy Eating Habits
My name is Sam. I am a healthy boy with some healthy eating habits because it is very important for us students to keep healthy. I drink milk every morning because my mother says it’s good for my health. For lunch, I usually have rice or noodles. For dinner, I drink some porridge, and after dinner I eat some fruit. I never eat junk food because it is unhealthy.
I think my eating habits are very healthy. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating healthy food is good for the development of our teenagers.
In order to keep healthy, let’s eat healthy food and avoid eating junk food.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍自己有健康的饮食习惯;
第二步,具体介绍自己的饮食习惯;
第三步,书写结语,阐述自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②in order to为了
③in this way用这种方法
④be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①I drink milk every morning because my mother says it’s good for my health. (because引导原因状语从句)
②eating healthy food is good for the development of our teenagers. (动名词作主语)
应用文 (人与自我)
Passage 12
(23-24七上·云南文山州文山市·期末)
亲爱的同学们,下学期学校学生会将要招募新成员啦!请根据提示信息,以“I”为题,用英文做自我介绍,让我们深入了解你,期待你的加入!
写作要求:
1. 提示信息:年龄、性别、家庭情况、饮食习惯、爱好等,可适当发挥。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,短文词数不少于60个;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分;
5. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的,抄袭部分不得分。
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【答案】例文
I
Hello, everyone! I’m Cindy. I am a nice girl. Now let me tell you something about me.
I am a student from No. 1 middle school. I am 13 years old. I have a happy family. My parents are teachers. They love me very much. I have healthy eating habits. I like milk and eggs for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I always eat rice, chicken, green vegetable and some fruit. I like playing sports. I can play basketball well. I think it’s easy and interesting for me. I want to be a good basketball player.
This is me. Do you like me?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的个人信息”;以及“加入学生会,可以适当补充自己的优势”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己,总起全文。
第二步,接着介绍自己的详细信息,爱好等。
第三步,收尾,并点题。
[亮点词汇]
①interesting有趣的
②eating habits饮食习惯
[高分句型]
①I think it’s easy and interesting for me.(宾语从句)
记叙文 (人与自我)
Passage 1
(23-24七上·云南昆明九县区·期末)
父爱如山,母爱如海,在你的成长过程中,介绍一下你父亲或母亲的基本情况。
要求:
1. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁。词数不少于40个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。如需使用姓名,请都用Tom(Lucy)英文名。校名统一用 Kunming Middle School;
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
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【答案】范文:
My father
My father is a teacher. He is the most respectful person in the world. He is outgoing and energetic. He likes reading and doing exercise every day, and he never smokes or drinks. Once when I was seriously ill in hospital, he took good care of me. After 10 days, thanks to his great care, I recovered but he fell ill. Father’s Day is coming. And I’ll make greater progress in return.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏题干的要求,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我的父亲”来引出下文中对父亲的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、性格和对我的爱”三方面入手,重点介绍我的父亲;
③第三步,书写结语。表达对父亲的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of 照顾
②thanks to 幸亏,由于
③make progress 取得进步
④in return 作为回报
[高分句型]
Once when I was seriously ill in hospital, he took good care of me.(when引导的时间状语.......)
Passage 2
(23-24七上·云南昭通镇雄·期末)
提示:家是我们心灵的港湾,家人是我们人生路上的坚强后盾。请以“My Family”为题用英语写一篇短文介绍你的家人。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60词;
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文写在答题卡上。
My Family
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【答案】例文
My Family
There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I. My father is thirty-nine years old. He is tall. He has small eyes and a big nose. He is a doctor and works in a hospital. He likes playing basketball. My mother is thirty-eight. She has long hair and big eyes. She teaches Chinese in a junior high school. She is a good teacher. Her students like her very much. She likes singing songs. I’m a student of Grade Seven. I am short. My mother and I are in different schools. We have a pet dog. It’s white and very cute. My parents often take me to the park on Sundays. We have a picnic with our friends there. We can fly a kite and sing some songs there. We often have a good time.
I have a happy family. My parents love me and I love them, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文主要是介绍自己家人的相关情况,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍父母和自己的相关情况;
第三步,介绍自己和家人的周末活动;
第四步,表达对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②take sb. to sp.带某人去某地
③have a picnic野餐
④have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I. (there be结构)
②My parents love me and I love them, too. (and连接的并列句)
Passage 3
(23-24七上·云南昆明官渡区·期末)
提示:家是宁静的港湾,家是永远的依靠。在这个世界上,家庭是最小的单位,却拥有最强大的力量。你的家庭是什么样的呢?请以“My Family”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你的家庭和家庭成员。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My Family
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【答案】例文
My Family
I’m Amy. I’m thirteen years old. I am a middle school student. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He is thirty-eight years old. He likes reading. My mother is a teacher. She is thirty-six years old. Her hobby is swimming. My sister Ling Ling is only three years old. She is very cute. We are a happy family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“My Family”为题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的信息;
第二步,介绍家人的信息;
第三步,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in my family在我家里
②a happy family一个幸福的家庭
[高分句型]
There are four people in my family.(There be句型)
说明文 (人与自我)
Passage 4
(23-24七上·云南昆明市西山区·期末)
提示:初中生活丰富多彩,每位同学都会遇到自己最喜欢的人或事物。请以“My Favorite ________”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你最喜欢的人或事物,以及你喜欢的原因。
要求:
1. 请先将题目补全后,再作答;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个,
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名了,否则以零分记。如需使用名字,请用Mike, Gina等英文名字,校名统一使用Guangming Middle School;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My Favorite ________
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【答案】例文
My favorite book
Reading can make our life colourful. My favorite book is Anne of the Green Gables.
I have read it over 10 times. It is one of the best-selling books for children of all time. I like it for many reasons. Firstly, the main character Anne is such a brave and optimistic girl who can turn all her troubles into something good. And I wish I could be like her. Secondly, the story has been filmed into many TV shows and movies, they are fantastic! Lastly, it helps me better understand western culture and learn English better.
This book makes me become more and more interested in reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢什么;
第二步,介绍喜欢这本书的原因;
第三步,介绍它对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① turn...into...把……变成……
② become interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
① Firstly, the main character Anne is such a brave and optimistic girl who can turn all her troubles into something good.(who引导的定语从句)
② And I wish I could be like her.(省略that的宾语从句)
应用文 (人与自我)
Passage 5
(24-25七上·云南昆明盘龙区·期末)
假如你是腾飞,你收到了一封来自英国笔友Bill的电子邮件,请你根据邮件内容用英文给Bill回一封电子邮件。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80个;
2. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;内容可适当扩充;
3. 在答题卡上填写To,From后面的信息以及称呼,落名并按四个要点来回复;
4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
5. 将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
To: Tengfei@student com
From: Bill@happymail com
Dear Fei,
How are you these days? I know you study in a Chinese middle school. What’s your favorite subject? What club do you join? What do you like to do after school? The Chinese New Year is coming. How do you celebrate it every year?
Write soon!
Yours,
Bill
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【答案】例文
Dear Bill,
I’m doing well these days. It’s great to hear from you! My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers. I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends. It’s a wonderful way to relax and express myself. After school, I usually like to play basketball with my classmates. It’s both fun and a good exercise.
As for the Chinese New Year, my family and I celebrate by having a big dinner together. We exchange red envelopes and visit relatives. The streets are decorated with lanterns, and there are often fireworks. It’s a joyous time filled with traditions and happiness.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Tengfei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回答自己最近如何;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的科目、加入了什么俱乐部以及课后做的事情;
第三步,最后介绍自己如何庆祝新年。
[亮点词汇]
① love doing sth喜欢做某事
② as for至于
③ filled with充满
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers(原因状语从句)
②I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends(定语从句)
说明文:人与自然
Passage 6
(23-24七上·云南昭通市昭阳区·期末)
My Favorite Animal
提示:你最喜欢的动物是什么?它有什么特点?请以“My Favorite Animal”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的动物及其特点。
要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is the cat. Cats are small, soft, and very quiet. They have sharp claws and bright eyes. Cats can be very friendly. They like to play with toys and enjoy sitting on laps. What I love most is when they purr; it’s very calming. Cats are also very clean animals because they wash themselves. They’re good pets because they don’t need to be walked like dogs. Cats are fun to watch and easy to love. That’s why they are my favorite.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,开门见山介绍自己喜欢的动物是什么;
第二步,介绍该动物的特点;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do需要做……
②friendly 友好的
[高分句型]
1 That’s why they are my favorite.(表语从句)
说明文:人与自我
Passage 7
(23-24七上·云南玉溪市峨山·期末)
随着“双减”政策的实施,学校开设的课程和活动越来越丰富,时间安排也越来越合理,请以“My School”为题用英语写一篇小短文,介绍一下你们学校的课程和活动安排。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
My School
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【答案】例文:
My School
Our school has been actively implementing the “Double Reduction” policy, which has led to a more diverse range of courses and activities.
In terms of curriculum, our school offers a wide variety of subjects. Besides the traditional core subjects, we also have specialized courses such as music, art, physical education and information technology. As for extracurricular activities, our school provides numerous options to enrich our campus life. We have clubs and societies covering various fields, including literature, music, sports and science. Moreover, we have sports events like the school sports day, where students participate in various athletic competitions.
In conclusion, the diverse courses and activities, along with the reasonable schedule, are nurturing our all-around development and making our school life more vibrant and fulfilling.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:考生应紧扣主题My School进行写作,从开设的课程,活动安排进行描写,可适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,说明“双减”政策后,课程和活动更加多样化;
第二步,具体阐述,从学校开设的课程和活动安排两方面介绍;
第三步,书写结语,多样化的课程和活动使我们的学校生活更加充满活力和充实。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of就……而言
②a variety of多种多样的
③all-around development全面发展
[高分句型]
①Our school has been actively implementing the “Double Reduction” policy, which has led to a more diverse range of courses and activities. (非限制性定语从句)
②Moreover, we have sports events like the school sports day, where students participate in various athletic competitions.(非限制性定语从句)
半开放作文 (人与自然/人与自我)
Passage 8
(24-25七上·云南昆明嵩明·期末)
请以“My Favorite ______”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你所喜爱的人、书、运动或动物等,以及喜欢的原因。
要求:
1. 请先将题目补充完整,根据题目写一篇短文,字数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卷上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
I have a lovely dog, and it’s my favorite animal. It’s black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It’s two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的动物,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么;
第二步,介绍喜欢的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play with和……玩
②at home在家
[高分句型]
①It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. (时间状语从句)
②What a lovely dog! (感叹句)
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记叙文(人与自我)
Passage 1
(24-25七上·云南昆明期末)
亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新篇章。请以“My School Life”为题,根据下面提示写一
篇英语短文。
提示:l.What do you think of your school life?
2.What do you do at school every day?
3.What's your favorite subject and who is your favorite teacher?why?
要求:
1文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2语言通顺,表意准确,条理清晰,书写规范。
3.词数80左右。
Passage 2
(2425七上·云南大理·期末)
升入初中己经一学期了,假如你是Linda,请从校园环境、喜欢的学科、老师及同学相处等方面,给
你的朋友Cindy写一封信,介绍你的学校生活。
要求:
1根据以上提示,写一封信。
2.词数60词左右。
3语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
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4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。否则以零分计。如涉及校名,统一使用Guangming Middle School。
Passage 3
(2425七上·云南西双版纳期末)
My Favorite Day
提示:一周七天中你最喜欢哪天?你在这一天里都做些什么事?请以“My Favorite Day'”为题,用英语
写一篇短文。
要求:1.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
Passage 4
(24-25七上·云南昆明五华区·期末)
My Happy School Life
提示:亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。转眼间,同学们在中学的第一个学期即将结
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束。请以“My Happy School Life'”为题,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的中学校园生活。内容包括介绍你的学
习生活和课外活动,并谈谈你的感受。可适当进行拓展。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80个:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;否则以零分计:
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,可以适当增加细节:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试卷上无效。
Passage 5
(23-24七上·云南昭通期末)
提示:假如你是王林,是一名中学生,今天是星期天,你不需要去上学。请你根据表格中提供的信息,
以“My Happy Sunday'”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己一天的活动。
7:00
get up
7:30
have breakfast
830
do my homework
10:30
do some shopping with my mother
12:00
have lunch
14:00
go to the zoo with friends
17:30
have dinner with friends
要求:
1根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于40个:
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2语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,可适当发挥;
3文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计:
4请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My Happy Sunday
Passage 6
(24-25七上·云南昆明东川区·期末)
时间过得真快,不知不觉一学期快要结束了,你已成为一名中学生好几个月了,你的中学生活一定丰
富多彩,请结合你的校园、学习科目、课外活动、学校生活等以“My School Life'”为题,介绍一下你的校园
生活,并谈谈你的真实感受。
要求:
1)语言流畅、书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。
2)文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用姓名,请用Mike,Mary等名字,校名统一使用Xinhua Middle
School
3)书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
4)抄袭试卷中相关材料的,抄袭部分不给分。
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Passage 7
(24-25七上·云南昆明官渡区·期末)
One of My School Days提示:新学期,你成为了一名中学生,体验了不一样的学校生活。请以“One of My
School Days'”为题目,写一篇英语作文,介绍你上学的一天。
要求:
1.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80个;
2文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
Passage 8
(23-24七上·云南昆明盘龙区期末)
My Favorite Day at School
提示:上学的日子既忙碌又快乐。从周一到周五,总有你比较喜欢的一天。你为什么会喜欢这一天呢?
或许在学校里有你喜欢的老师和学科,或许有你喜欢的午餐和美食,又或许有你喜欢的课外活动..,这
些都会让你喜欢在学校的时光。请你以My Favorite Day at School为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你喜欢的
一个上学日及感受。
要求:
1.词数不少于60个;
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2.文章中不得出现真实姓名;
3.卷面整洁,书写工整:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
Passage 9
(23-24七上·云南昆明市嵩明期末)
My Middle School Life
提示:你成为初中生已经一个学期了,你适应初中生活了吗?你喜欢学校里的老师同学、活动及课程吗?
请以y Middle School Life'”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的初中生活。
要求:1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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Passage 10
(23-24七上·云南保山市腾冲期末)
提示:进入初中的这一个学期里,你一定有很多个开心的周末,你的周末通常是怎么度过的呢?请以
“My Happy Sunday'”为题,写一篇英语短文描述一个你快乐的星期天。主要描述你在这一天的生活和活动内
容,比如什么时候起床、吃早餐;做些什么活动;有什么感受等等。
要求:
1.根据所给题目写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,如需使用名字,请用Mike,Gina等英文名,校名统一用Guangming Middle
School,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题上无效。
My Happy Sunday
说明文(人与自我)
Passage 11
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Healthy Eating Habits
提示:学会健康饮食,享受美好生活。你一日三餐吃什么?你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗?请以Healthy
Eating Habits”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要求:
1.抄写题月,短文词数不少于50词:
2.语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范,卷面整洁:
3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名,否则以零分计:
4.短文必须写在答题卡上,如在试题卷上作答,一律不得分。
应用文(人与自我)
Passage 12
(23-24七上·云南文山州文山市期末)
亲爱的同学们,下学期学校学生会将要招募新成员啦!请根据提示信息,以“T”为题,用英文做自我
介绍,让我们深入了解你,期待你的加入:
写作要求:
1.提示信息:年龄、性别、家庭情况、饮食习惯、爱好等,可适当发挥。
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,短文词数不少于60个,
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4.短文必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分;
5.抄袭试题中阅读部分的,抄袭部分不得分。
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记叙文(人与自我)
Passage 1
(23-24七上·云南昆明九县区·期末)
父爱如山,母爱如海,在你的成长过程中,介绍一下你父亲或母亲的基本情况。
要求:
1.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁。词数不少于40个:
2.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。如需使用姓名,请都用Tom(Lucy)英文名。校名统一用Kunming Middle
School;
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
Passage 2
(23-24七上·云南昭通镇雄期末)
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提示:家是我们心灵的港湾,家人是我们人生路上的坚强后盾。请以My Family'”为题用英语写一篇
短文介绍你的家人。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60词:
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3请将短文写在答题卡上。
My Family
Passage 3
(23-24七上·云南昆明官渡区·期末)
提示:家是宁静的港湾,家是永远的依靠。在这个世界上,家庭是最小的单位,却拥有最强大的力量。
你的家庭是什么样的呢?请以“My Family'”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你的家庭和家庭成员。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My Family