内容正文:
专题19 应用文写作
目录
考情分析与命题趋势 1
知识体系构建 2
考点精析与突破 3
考点一:书信类应用文(重点) 3
考点二:演讲类应用文(常考点) 5
考点三:征文类应用文(难点) 6
考点四:通知类应用文(常考点) 7
考点五:重难点突破(重点) 8
实战精练与提升 9
一、考试要求
应用文写作是江苏春季高考英语的核心题型之一,占分 20 分,要求词数 80 左右,体裁涵盖告知信、邀请信、建议信、申请信、感谢信、演讲稿、征文、通知等。其核心考查在真实语境中规范、准确、得体地传递信息的能力,具体包括格式规范、要点全面、逻辑连贯、语言得体、表达丰富五大核心能力。二轮复习需突破 格式错误、要点遗漏、语言生硬、逻辑混乱、高级表达缺失五大痛点,通过核心知识拆解+ 格式模板落地+高频句型积累+针对性训练的模式,实现 “格式规范无失误、要点全面无遗漏、逻辑连贯无断层、语言得体无偏差、表达丰富拿高分” 的解题目标,助力学生稳拿基础分、冲刺高分。
考生需做到:
1. 能准确识别应用文体裁(书信、演讲稿、通知等),严格遵循对应格式规范(称呼、问候、正文、结尾、署名、日期);
2. 能全面覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,不遗漏、不冗余,突出核心信息;
3. 能运用恰当的逻辑连接词,使行文条理清晰、语义连贯;
4. 能根据写作目的、对象和场景,选择得体的语言风格(正式 / 非正式、礼貌 / 诚恳);
5. 能灵活运用多样的词汇和句型(简单句与复合句结合、高级词汇替换、固定句型),避免表达单一;
6. 能规避常见语法错误(时态、语态、主谓一致、拼写、标点),保证语言准确性。
二、命题分析
考点
考查内容
命题趋势
体裁分布
告知信、邀请信、建议信、演讲稿、征文、申请信、感谢信、通知
2026年仍以告知信、邀请信、建议信为重点,新增文化交流类应用文
话题分布
学校生活、社会生活、文化交流、健康环保、成长感悟
2026年侧重中国文化输出、校园实践、社会热点等话题
核心考查点
格式规范、要点全面、逻辑连贯、语言得体、表达丰富
2026年更强调语境适配性,语言风格需贴合场景,避免模板化
常见错误点
格式错误、要点遗漏、逻辑词缺失、语言生硬、语法错误
2026年评分对格式规范性、要点完整性、要求更高,错误直接降档
三、评分标准解读
档次
分数区间
核心特征
一档
16-20分
格式规范,要点全面;词汇丰富,句型多样;语法准确,逻辑连贯;语言得体,符合场景
二档
12-15分
格式正确,要点完整;词汇够用,句型较多样;语法基本准确(少许错误不影响理解);逻辑清晰
三档
8-11分
格式基本正确,要点基本完整;词汇有限,句型单一;语法错误较多(影响部分理解);逻辑基本连贯
四档
4-7分
格式有错误,要点遗漏;词汇贫乏,句型单调;语法错误多(影响理解);逻辑不连贯
五档
0-3分
格式严重错误,要点缺失;词汇极少,无法表达;语法错误严重,无法理解
· 考点一:书信类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
书信类是江苏春考应用文的重中之重,涵盖告知信、邀请信、建议信等,核心考查格式规范 + 要点全面 + 语言得体。解题核心是先明确目的,再按模板填充要点,最后优化语言。
二、告知信
①格式模板
Dear ,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to share with you 告知的事件/经历 (开头说明目的).
事件细节1:时间/地点/过程. 事件细节2:关键信息/个人行动. For example, 具体案例.
This experience made me个人感受/收获. I believe 进一步感悟/建议 .
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 开头
I’m writing to inform you of.../ I’m delighted to share with you my recent experience of...
2. 过程
At first... Then... Finally.../ During the activity, we...
3. 感受
I felt a deep sense of satisfaction.../ This experience taught me that...
例题(2024・新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历。
内容包括:
1. 你完成的作品;
2.你的感想。
三、邀请信
①格式模板
Dear ,
How are you? I’m writing to invite you to 活动名称 (开头说明目的).
The activity will be held 时间 at 地点. Its purpose is to 活动目的. During the activity, we will 活动内容1, 活动内容2 and 活动内容3. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Could you please let me know if you can come? Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 邀请
I’m writing to invite you to participate in.../ It would be a great honor if you could join us...
2. 活动细节
The activity is scheduled to start at.../ There will be... such as...
3. 期待回复
Please confirm your attendance at your earliest convenience. / I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.
例题(2023・新高考Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,你校将举办校园读书节活动,邀请外教Ryan参加。请写一封邀请信,
内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 邀请理由。
四、建议信
①格式模板
Dear ,
Hope you are doing well. I heard that 背景或问题, so I’m writing to offer some suggestions (开头说明目的).
First of all, I suggest that you 建议1, because 理由1. What’s more, it would be better if you 建议2, since 理由2. Finally, you could 建议3, which will help you 理由3.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 提出建议
I’d like to suggest that.../ My first suggestion is.../ It’s a good idea to...
2. 说明理由
This is because.../ As a result.../ By doing so...
3. 委婉语气
Perhaps you could.../ I wonder if you could consider...
例题(2023・新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组练习口语,你认为存在问题。请写一封建议信。
内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
· 考点二:演讲类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
演讲稿侧重口语化、有感染力、逻辑清晰,核心考查主题明确+观点鲜明+呼吁有力。解题核心是开头吸引听众,中间分点展开,结尾升华主题。
二、格式模板
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning/afternoon! Today I want to talk about 演讲主题(开头点题).
First of all, 观点1. As we all know, 理由或案例1. What’s more, 观点2. For example, 理由或案例2. Last but not least, 观点3. From my own experience, 理由或案例3.
In conclusion, 总结主题. Let’s 呼吁或行动.
Thank you!
三、常用句型
①开头吸引
Have you ever thought about...? / Today I want to share a story about.../ As an old saying goes...
②分点展开
First and foremost.../ Besides.../ Finally...
③结尾呼吁
Let’s take action to.../ Let’s work together to.../ I believe that with our efforts...
例题(2024・天津卷)
假定你是李华,学校将举办 “低碳生活” 主题演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1. 低碳生活的重要性;
2. 个人可以做的低碳行动。
· 考点三:征文类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
征文侧重主题鲜明 + 内容具体 + 感悟深刻,核心考查结合个人经历 +升华主题。解题核心是 标题亮眼,正文有细节,结尾有感悟。
二、格式模板
标题
正文开头:点题→ 引出经历/观点.
正文中间:分述经历/观点1 + 细节/案例. 经历/观点2 + 细节/案例 . For instance, 具体案例,如个人经历、社会现象.
正文结尾:升华感悟→ 呼应主题. From this, I realize that 感悟 . We should 行动或态度.
三、常用句型
①开头点题
Nowadays, ...has become a hot topic. / I once had an experience that taught me.../ As far as I’m concerned, ...is of great importance.
②细节描述
At that moment.../ I still remember that.../ With the help of...
③结尾升华
In a word.../ Taking everything into account.../ It is...that makes a difference.(强调句)
例题(2024・浙江卷)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报Sports and Health栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
· 考点四:通知类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
通知侧重正式、简洁、信息明确,核心考查时间、地点、事件、要求、联系人五大要素。解题核心是要素齐全,语言正式,格式规范。
二、格式模板
Notice
正文开头:说明通知目的→ To 事件目的, we are going to hold 事件名称.
The event will take place 时间 at 地点. All 参与对象 are required to 要求1. Please 要求2,如带物品、准时参加. Those who are interested can sign up with 联系人 before 截止时间.
For further information, please contact 联系人 at 联系方式.
发出单位,如The Students’ Union
日期,如June 10, 2025(右下角)
三、常用句型
①开头
Notice is hereby given that.../ We are pleased to announce that...
②要求
All participants are expected to.../ It is required that.../ Please be punctual
③联系方式
You can reach us at.../ For inquiries, contact...
例题(2022・江苏模拟)
假定你是学生会主席李华,学校将举办 “传统文化体验日” 活动,请写一则通知。
内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 参与要求;
4. 联系人及方式。
· 考点五:重难点突破
· 解题技巧
一、格式规范突破
易错点:称呼后用冒号、署名用真实姓名、演讲稿结尾署名、通知无落款;
突破方法:牢记体裁和格式对应表,写作前先写格式框架(称呼、结尾、署名),再填正文。
二、要点全面突破
易错点:遗漏题目要求的核心要点(如邀请信未说明时间);
突破方法:审题时用√标注要点(如 1. 作品√ 2. 感想√),正文按标注顺序展开,结尾检查是否全覆盖。
三、 语言得体突破
易错点:给长辈 / 外教用非正式语言,给朋友用过于正式的语言;
突破方法:按对象定风格:正式场合(申请信、通知)用 sincerely、required,非正式场合(给朋友)用 Yours、hope you have fun。
四、逻辑连贯突破
易错点:正文无连接词,段落混乱;
突破方法:牢记 三层逻辑词:开头(First of all)、中间(What’s more)、结尾(In conclusion),每段用1-2个连接词。
五、高级表达突破
易错点:语言生硬,只有简单句;
突破方法:三替换:基础词汇→高级词汇(important→vital)、简单句→复合句(用定语从句或状语从句)、普通句型→固定句型(I think→As far as I’m concerned)。
一、模拟基础练
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华,你校本周末将举办“书画进校园”(Calligraphy and Painting into Campus)传统文化活动。请你给外教Smith写一封邮件,邀请他来参加本周六在校图书馆举办的传统书画艺术展。
内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动的主要内容和形式;
3. 活动目的和意义。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假定你是李华,红星中学高一学生。你校将于本月举办“健康饮食月”系列活动,你将代表你们班进行全校宣讲,内容须包括以下几点:
1. 健康饮食的重要性;
2. 对于健康饮食的建议;
3. 发出号召。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good afternoon, everyone!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
Passage 3
假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
1. 字数不少于100词;
2. 题目已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
假设你是晨光中学学生李津,你校外教 Chris对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,最近市博物馆将要举办中国传统文化系列展,请你给 Chris写封邮件,邀请他一同前往参观某一分展,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.展览介绍(时间;地点;主题;内容;选择这个主题的原因等);
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.从如下主题中选择一个进行介绍: paper cutting 剪纸;Peking Opera 京剧;calligraphy书法;seal cutting篆刻;
2.词数不少于 100,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾以给出,不计入词数。
Dear Chris,
Good news for you!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 5
高中毕业在即,你校英语俱乐部将举行以“Heartfelt Thanks to My Teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。请你准备一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 影响你的具体事例;
2. 给你带来的改变;
3. 你对老师的祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、重难提升练
Passage 1
假定你是李华,市图书馆将在本周末举办“民间艺术讲堂(Folk Art Lecture)”活动。请你给交换生 Peter写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.主要内容。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游,但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 表示歉意并说明理由;
2. 安排他人接机。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1. 短片内容:学校的发展;
2. 放映时间、地点;
3. 欢迎对短片提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
Passage 4
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom打算暑假来北京骑车旅行。请你根据以下信息给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况,并对他的旅行提出建议。
1. 地势平坦,适合骑车;
2. 用护照可以租到公共自行车;
3. 停车、修车都很方便。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:平坦的flat租用rent
Dear Tom,
I am happy to hear about your plan to travel around Beijing by bike. _______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华,上周五你校开展了美化校园环境的劳动活动,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 活动目的和内容;
2. 你的感想;
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题19 应用文写作
目录
考情分析与命题趋势 1
知识体系构建 2
考点精析与突破 3
考点一:书信类应用文(重点) 3
考点二:演讲类应用文(常考点) 7
考点三:征文类应用文(难点) 8
考点四:通知类应用文(常考点) 9
考点五:重难点突破(重点) 11
实战精练与提升 12
一、考试要求
应用文写作是江苏春季高考英语的核心题型之一,占分 20 分,要求词数 80 左右,体裁涵盖告知信、邀请信、建议信、申请信、感谢信、演讲稿、征文、通知等。其核心考查在真实语境中规范、准确、得体地传递信息的能力,具体包括格式规范、要点全面、逻辑连贯、语言得体、表达丰富五大核心能力。二轮复习需突破 格式错误、要点遗漏、语言生硬、逻辑混乱、高级表达缺失五大痛点,通过核心知识拆解+ 格式模板落地+高频句型积累+针对性训练的模式,实现 “格式规范无失误、要点全面无遗漏、逻辑连贯无断层、语言得体无偏差、表达丰富拿高分” 的解题目标,助力学生稳拿基础分、冲刺高分。
考生需做到:
1. 能准确识别应用文体裁(书信、演讲稿、通知等),严格遵循对应格式规范(称呼、问候、正文、结尾、署名、日期);
2. 能全面覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,不遗漏、不冗余,突出核心信息;
3. 能运用恰当的逻辑连接词,使行文条理清晰、语义连贯;
4. 能根据写作目的、对象和场景,选择得体的语言风格(正式 / 非正式、礼貌 / 诚恳);
5. 能灵活运用多样的词汇和句型(简单句与复合句结合、高级词汇替换、固定句型),避免表达单一;
6. 能规避常见语法错误(时态、语态、主谓一致、拼写、标点),保证语言准确性。
二、命题分析
考点
考查内容
命题趋势
体裁分布
告知信、邀请信、建议信、演讲稿、征文、申请信、感谢信、通知
2026年仍以告知信、邀请信、建议信为重点,新增文化交流类应用文
话题分布
学校生活、社会生活、文化交流、健康环保、成长感悟
2026年侧重中国文化输出、校园实践、社会热点等话题
核心考查点
格式规范、要点全面、逻辑连贯、语言得体、表达丰富
2026年更强调语境适配性,语言风格需贴合场景,避免模板化
常见错误点
格式错误、要点遗漏、逻辑词缺失、语言生硬、语法错误
2026年评分对格式规范性、要点完整性、要求更高,错误直接降档
三、评分标准解读
档次
分数区间
核心特征
一档
16-20分
格式规范,要点全面;词汇丰富,句型多样;语法准确,逻辑连贯;语言得体,符合场景
二档
12-15分
格式正确,要点完整;词汇够用,句型较多样;语法基本准确(少许错误不影响理解);逻辑清晰
三档
8-11分
格式基本正确,要点基本完整;词汇有限,句型单一;语法错误较多(影响部分理解);逻辑基本连贯
四档
4-7分
格式有错误,要点遗漏;词汇贫乏,句型单调;语法错误多(影响理解);逻辑不连贯
五档
0-3分
格式严重错误,要点缺失;词汇极少,无法表达;语法错误严重,无法理解
· 考点一:书信类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
书信类是江苏春考应用文的重中之重,涵盖告知信、邀请信、建议信等,核心考查格式规范 + 要点全面 + 语言得体。解题核心是先明确目的,再按模板填充要点,最后优化语言。
二、告知信
①格式模板
Dear ,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to share with you 告知的事件/经历 (开头说明目的).
事件细节1:时间/地点/过程. 事件细节2:关键信息/个人行动. For example, 具体案例.
This experience made me个人感受/收获. I believe 进一步感悟/建议 .
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 开头
I’m writing to inform you of.../ I’m delighted to share with you my recent experience of...
2. 过程
At first... Then... Finally.../ During the activity, we...
3. 感受
I felt a deep sense of satisfaction.../ This experience taught me that...
例题(2024・新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历。
内容包括:
1. 你完成的作品;
2.你的感想。
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to create works inspired by nature. I chose to paint a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the pond, surrounded by pink blossoms and green willows. I spent nearly an hour observing the light and shadow before putting brush to paper.
This class was a wonderful break from busy school life. Being close to nature not only sparked my creativity but also calmed my mind. I realized that art is not just about skills, but about connecting with the world around us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】格式规范:称呼、问候、结尾、署名完整,无错误;要点全面:覆盖作品(水彩画小桥)和感想(激发创造力、贴近自然;语言丰富:用 “surrounded by”“sparked my creativity” 等高级表达,复合句与简单句结合;逻辑连贯:用 “not only...but also...”“realized that...” 衔接,层次清晰。
三、邀请信
①格式模板
Dear ,
How are you? I’m writing to invite you to 活动名称 (开头说明目的).
The activity will be held 时间 at 地点. Its purpose is to 活动目的. During the activity, we will 活动内容1, 活动内容2 and 活动内容3. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Could you please let me know if you can come? Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 邀请
I’m writing to invite you to participate in.../ It would be a great honor if you could join us...
2. 活动细节
The activity is scheduled to start at.../ There will be... such as...
3. 期待回复
Please confirm your attendance at your earliest convenience. / I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.
例题(2023・新高考Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,你校将举办校园读书节活动,邀请外教Ryan参加。请写一封邀请信,
内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 邀请理由。
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
How are you? I’m writing to invite you to our school’s Reading Festival, which will be held next Friday from 2 pm to 5 pm in the school library.
The festival aims to encourage students to love reading. There will be three parts: a book sharing session where students introduce their favorite books, a group discussion on classic English novels, and a small book fair with second-hand books for exchange. As an avid reader and our beloved teacher, your participation will surely inspire us a lot.
Could you please tell me if you are available?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】格式规范:符合对外教的礼貌语气;要点全面:覆盖 时间(下周五 14:00-17:00)地点(图书馆)、内容(分享、讨论、书展)、理由(激励学生);语言得体:用 avid reader, surely inspire us等礼貌且真诚地表达;逻辑清晰:用there will be, as等连接,层次分明。
四、建议信
①格式模板
Dear ,
Hope you are doing well. I heard that 背景或问题, so I’m writing to offer some suggestions (开头说明目的).
First of all, I suggest that you 建议1, because 理由1. What’s more, it would be better if you 建议2, since 理由2. Finally, you could 建议3, which will help you 理由3.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
②常用句型
1. 提出建议
I’d like to suggest that.../ My first suggestion is.../ It’s a good idea to...
2. 说明理由
This is because.../ As a result.../ By doing so...
3. 委婉语气
Perhaps you could.../ I wonder if you could consider...
例题(2023・新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组练习口语,你认为存在问题。请写一封建议信。
内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I’m writing to share my thoughts on the random pairing for oral English practice.
While the idea is great, random pairing may bring some problems. For one thing, students with different language levels may struggle to communicate—advanced students may dominate the conversation, while beginners may feel discouraged. For another, some students may not get along well, which reduces their motivation to practice.
Therefore, I suggest two solutions. First, group students based on their English proficiency so that everyone can speak confidently. Second, allow students to choose partners voluntarily, as familiarity promotes better communication.
I hope my suggestions will be useful. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】格式规范:署名、称呼正确,语气礼貌;要点全面:覆盖 问题(水平差异、相处不睦)和 建议(按水平分组、自愿选搭档);逻辑连贯:用 While...may..., For one thing...For another..., Therefore衔接;语言得体:用share my thoughts, I hope...will be useful等委婉表达,避免生硬。
· 考点二:演讲类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
演讲稿侧重口语化、有感染力、逻辑清晰,核心考查主题明确+观点鲜明+呼吁有力。解题核心是开头吸引听众,中间分点展开,结尾升华主题。
二、格式模板
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning/afternoon! Today I want to talk about 演讲主题(开头点题).
First of all, 观点1. As we all know, 理由或案例1. What’s more, 观点2. For example, 理由或案例2. Last but not least, 观点3. From my own experience, 理由或案例3.
In conclusion, 总结主题. Let’s 呼吁或行动.
Thank you!
三、常用句型
①开头吸引
Have you ever thought about...? / Today I want to share a story about.../ As an old saying goes...
②分点展开
First and foremost.../ Besides.../ Finally...
③结尾呼吁
Let’s take action to.../ Let’s work together to.../ I believe that with our efforts...
例题(2024・天津卷)
假定你是李华,学校将举办 “低碳生活” 主题演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1. 低碳生活的重要性;
2. 个人可以做的低碳行动。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good afternoon! Today I want to talk about Living a Low-Carbon Life, a topic that concerns all of us.
First of all, low-carbon life is vital for protecting our planet. With global warming getting worse, reducing carbon emissions has become an urgent task. Every small step we take can help slow down environmental damage. What’s more, it’s also beneficial to our health. For example, walking or cycling instead of taking cars not only reduces pollution but also keeps us fit.
As students, we can do our part in simple ways. First, we can save electricity by turning off lights and computers when not in use. Second, we can use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Third, we can plant more trees to absorb carbon dioxide.
Let’s start with these small actions and make low-carbon life a habit. Together, we can create a greener and healthier world.
Thank you!
【解析】First of all, low-carbon life is vital for protecting our planet.(分点展开);Let’s start with these small actions and make low-carbon life a habit.(结尾呼吁)。
· 考点三:征文类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
征文侧重主题鲜明 + 内容具体 + 感悟深刻,核心考查结合个人经历 +升华主题。解题核心是 标题亮眼,正文有细节,结尾有感悟。
二、格式模板
标题
正文开头:点题→ 引出经历/观点.
正文中间:分述经历/观点1 + 细节/案例. 经历/观点2 + 细节/案例 . For instance, 具体案例,如个人经历、社会现象.
正文结尾:升华感悟→ 呼应主题. From this, I realize that 感悟 . We should 行动或态度.
三、常用句型
①开头点题
Nowadays, ...has become a hot topic. / I once had an experience that taught me.../ As far as I’m concerned, ...is of great importance.
②细节描述
At that moment.../ I still remember that.../ With the help of...
③结尾升华
In a word.../ Taking everything into account.../ It is...that makes a difference.(强调句)
例题(2024・浙江卷)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报Sports and Health栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
【答案】
Stand up and stretch for Health
In our busy school life, most of us sit for hours in class, which is bad for our health. Today I want to recommend a simple but effective sport for breaks, stretching.
Stretching is easy to do anywhere, even in the classroom. You can stand up, stretch your arms above your head, twist your waist gently, and bend your legs to relax muscles. It takes only 5 minutes, but the benefits are great. First, it relieves fatigue and helps us focus better in the next class. Second, it prevents back pain and stiffness caused by prolonged sitting. Third, it boosts blood circulation, keeping us energetic.
I have been doing stretching during breaks for months, and I feel much more energetic and focused. Let’s stand up and stretch for a healthier school life!
【解析】格式规范:标题居中,大小写正确,正文总分总结构;要点全面:覆盖运动介绍(课间拉伸,简单易做)和理由(缓解疲劳、防背痛、促循环);内容具体:加入个人经历(坚持数月,更有活力),不空谈;语言丰富:用relieves fatigue”“boosts blood circulation等高级表达,复合句与简单句结合。
· 考点四:通知类应用文
· 解题技巧
一、核心解读
通知侧重正式、简洁、信息明确,核心考查时间、地点、事件、要求、联系人五大要素。解题核心是要素齐全,语言正式,格式规范。
二、格式模板
Notice
正文开头:说明通知目的→ To 事件目的, we are going to hold 事件名称.
The event will take place 时间 at 地点. All 参与对象 are required to 要求1. Please 要求2,如带物品、准时参加. Those who are interested can sign up with 联系人 before 截止时间.
For further information, please contact 联系人 at 联系方式.
发出单位,如The Students’ Union
日期,如June 10, 2025(右下角)
三、常用句型
①开头
Notice is hereby given that.../ We are pleased to announce that...
②要求
All participants are expected to.../ It is required that.../ Please be punctual
③联系方式
You can reach us at.../ For inquiries, contact...
例题(2022・江苏模拟)
假定你是学生会主席李华,学校将举办 “传统文化体验日” 活动,请写一则通知。
内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 参与要求;
4. 联系人及方式。
【答案】
Notice
To promote traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a “Traditional Culture Experience Day” next Saturday (June 22nd) from 9 am to 4 pm in the school gymnasium.
The activity includes three parts: paper-cutting workshops, Chinese calligraphy demonstrations, and folk music performances. All students are welcome to participate. Please sign up with your class monitor before June 15th. Participants are advised to wear comfortable clothes and bring a notebook to record experiences.
For further questions, please contact Li Hua at 123456789.
The Students’ Union
June 8, 2025
【解析】格式规范:标题、落款、日期完整,语言正式;要素齐全:覆盖 时间(6 月 22 日 9:00-16:00)、地点(体育馆)、内容(剪纸、书法、民乐)、要求(找班长报名、穿舒适衣服)、联系人(李华,电话 123456789);
语言简洁:多用短句和被动语态,符合通知风格;逻辑清晰:分段落说明,信息一目了然。
· 考点五:重难点突破
· 解题技巧
一、格式规范突破
易错点:称呼后用冒号、署名用真实姓名、演讲稿结尾署名、通知无落款;
突破方法:牢记体裁和格式对应表,写作前先写格式框架(称呼、结尾、署名),再填正文。
二、要点全面突破
易错点:遗漏题目要求的核心要点(如邀请信未说明时间);
突破方法:审题时用√标注要点(如 1. 作品√ 2. 感想√),正文按标注顺序展开,结尾检查是否全覆盖。
三、 语言得体突破
易错点:给长辈 / 外教用非正式语言,给朋友用过于正式的语言;
突破方法:按对象定风格:正式场合(申请信、通知)用 sincerely、required,非正式场合(给朋友)用 Yours、hope you have fun。
四、逻辑连贯突破
易错点:正文无连接词,段落混乱;
突破方法:牢记 三层逻辑词:开头(First of all)、中间(What’s more)、结尾(In conclusion),每段用1-2个连接词。
五、高级表达突破
易错点:语言生硬,只有简单句;
突破方法:三替换:基础词汇→高级词汇(important→vital)、简单句→复合句(用定语从句或状语从句)、普通句型→固定句型(I think→As far as I’m concerned)。
一、模拟基础练
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华,你校本周末将举办“书画进校园”(Calligraphy and Painting into Campus)传统文化活动。请你给外教Smith写一封邮件,邀请他来参加本周六在校图书馆举办的传统书画艺术展。
内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动的主要内容和形式;
3. 活动目的和意义。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to join us for an upcoming event “Calligraphy and Painting into Campus,” which is scheduled this Saturday at our school library.
The event will take place from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m., featuring diverse traditional Chinese calligraphy and painting works. There will be live demonstrations, workshops, and an exhibition of student artworks. Furthermore, you’ll also have the opportunity to try them out yourself!
The purpose of this event is to promote and appreciate the rich traditional culture of China. It’s a great opportunity to understand the significance of these arts and their role in Chinese history.
We’d be honored by your presence. Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Smith写一封邮件,邀请他来参加本周六在校图书馆举办的传统书画艺术展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:event→campaign
各种各样:diverse→various
荣幸的:honored→privileged
欣赏:appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The event will take place from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m., featuring diverse traditional Chinese calligraphy and painting works.
拓展句:The event will take place from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m., which features diverse traditional Chinese calligraphy and painting works.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The event will take place from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m., featuring diverse traditional Chinese calligraphy and painting works. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】It’s a great opportunity to understand the significance of these arts and their role in Chinese history. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,红星中学高一学生。你校将于本月举办“健康饮食月”系列活动,你将代表你们班进行全校宣讲,内容须包括以下几点:
1. 健康饮食的重要性;
2. 对于健康饮食的建议;
3. 发出号召。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good afternoon, everyone!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, a senior one student from Hongxing High School. Nowadays, there is a growing focus on health care. People are pursuing a healthy lifestyle. A healthy diet is one of the most important parts of it.
As the saying goes, bread is the staff of life. Eating healthily and deliciously is the goal we pursue. From my point of view, in order to build healthy eating habits, we should eat more vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Among them, vitamin C and vitamin A are the most important. Too much fat and sugar can lead to obesity, which is harmful to health. Besides, eating more fruits and drinking more water are of great help.
I hope we can live a healthy life.
Let’s take action.
Thanks for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为红星中学高一学生代表,就学校即将举办的“健康饮食月”系列活动进行全校宣讲,内容涵盖健康饮食的重要性、建议及号召。
【详解】1.词汇积累
追求:pursue → chase
观点:point of view → perspective
建立:build → establish
丰富的:rich → abundant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a senior one student from Hongxing High School.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is a senior one student from Hongxing High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Too much fat and sugar can lead to obesity, which is harmful to health.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, eating more fruits and drinking more water are of great help.(运用了动名词短语eating more fruits and drinking more water作主语)
Passage 3
假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
注意:
1. 字数不少于100词;
2. 题目已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to Deal with Academic Pressure
As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. It mainly comes from exams, heavy homework, and fierce competition for college admission.
To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. First, time management can help us prioritize tasks and avoid procrastination. For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. Second, physical activities like jogging or playing basketball can relieve stress by releasing endorphins. Additionally, talking to friends, teachers, or family members about our worries provides emotional support.
In my opinion, mental health is as important as academic success. Schools should offer counseling services, and students need to learn self-care techniques, such as mindfulness or journaling. Remember, a healthy mind is the foundation of achieving long-term goals.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写短文投稿,分析压力来源、提出应对方法并强调心理健康重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
关键的:essential → crucial
基础:foundation → basis
目标:goal → target
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential.
拓展句:Effective strategies are essential so that we can cope with this pressure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
Passage 4
假设你是晨光中学学生李津,你校外教 Chris对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,最近市博物馆将要举办中国传统文化系列展,请你给 Chris写封邮件,邀请他一同前往参观某一分展,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.展览介绍(时间;地点;主题;内容;选择这个主题的原因等);
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.从如下主题中选择一个进行介绍: paper cutting 剪纸;Peking Opera 京剧;calligraphy书法;seal cutting篆刻;
2.词数不少于 100,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾以给出,不计入词数。
Dear Chris,
Good news for you!
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Good news for you! Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition is due to be held in the City Museum from 11 December to 25 December. A wide range of Chinese art forms will be presented, varying from embroidery to calligraphy. Since you’re intrigued by the Chinese paper cutting recently, I sincerely invite you to the exhibition.
As you know, paper cutting is the perfect combination of designing, paining and skills. With the diverse colors and the varied shapes, it enjoys both practical value and appreciation value. In the exhibition, some famous artists and even experts will cut the paper on the spot, and with their help and guidance, you can give it a try in person to make images out of paper. Apart from that, we can also make some friends with the same interest who may help us have a deeper insight into the traditional Chinese culture.
I’m sure it’ll be an unforgettable and rewarding experience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校外教Chris写邮件,邀请他参加市博物馆将要举办的中国传统文化系列展分展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
在……范围变化:vary from→ range from
被迷住的:intrigued→fascinated
帮助:help→assistance
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:In the exhibition, some famous artists and even experts will cut the paper on the spot, and with their help and guidance, you can give it a try in person to make images out of paper.
拓展句:In the exhibition, some famous artists and even experts will cut the paper on the spot, with whose help and guidance, you can give it a try in person to make images out of paper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A wide range of Chinese art forms will be presented, varying from embroidery to calligraphy. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Apart from that, we can also make some friends with the same interest who may help us have a deeper insight into the traditional Chinese culture.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
高中毕业在即,你校英语俱乐部将举行以“Heartfelt Thanks to My Teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。请你准备一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 影响你的具体事例;
2. 给你带来的改变;
3. 你对老师的祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】参考范文:
How time flies! We are going to graduate soon. Standing here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.
Looking back on the past three years, I can't thank her too much. When I entered senior high, I was deeply impressed by her excellent pronunciation and patience. Therefore, I was determined to work hard at English. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me so depressed that I couldn't focus on my study. Having noticed everything, she offered me some constructive advice. It was her constant encouragement that helped me restore confidence and become positive again.
Feeling deeply grateful to her for what she has done for me, I wish her all the best.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你所在校英语俱乐部将举行以“Heartfelt Thanks to My Teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。请你准备一篇英语演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:opportunity→chance
感激:appreciation→gratitude
提供:offer→provide
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Standing here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.
拓展句:When I stand here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher..
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I entered senior high, I was deeply impressed by her excellent pronunciation and patience.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】It was her constant encouragement that helped me restore confidence and become positive again.(运用了强调句式)
二、重难提升练
Passage 1
假定你是李华,市图书馆将在本周末举办“民间艺术讲堂(Folk Art Lecture)”活动。请你给交换生 Peter写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.主要内容。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to invite you to a special event at our city library this weekend. It’s a “Folk Art Lecture”, and I think you’ll find it really interesting.
The event will be held this Saturday at 2:00 p. m. in the main hall of the library. Local artists will introduce different types of Chinese folk art, such as paper cutting, clay figures, and shadow puppets. There will also be live demonstrations.
I believe this is a great chance to learn more about Chinese culture. I’d be very happy if you could come with me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 Peter写一封邮件,邀请他参加“民间艺术讲堂”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→host
高兴:happy→delighted
有趣的:interesting→entertaining
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:It’s a “Folk Art Lecture”, and I think you’ll find it really interesting.
拓展句:It’s a “Folk Art Lecture”, which I think you’ll find really interesting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d be very happy if you could come with me.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this is a great chance to learn more about Chinese culture.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游,但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 表示歉意并说明理由;
2. 安排他人接机。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.
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I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.
Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But don’t worry, I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in.
I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友 David发一封电子邮件表达不能去机场接他的歉意并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保持联系:keep in touch → stay connected
照顾:take care of → tend to
预定的:booked → reserved
推荐:recommend → suggest
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you.
拓展句:Since we have kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1. 短片内容:学校的发展;
2. 放映时间、地点;
3. 欢迎对短片提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
【答案】例文
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English movie about our school will be shown on our campus. I’d like to inform you of some details as follows.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2: 00 to 4: 00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Welcome to join us and enjoy it! I dare say you will gain a lot from it.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会名义撰写通知,告知师生观看介绍学校发展的英文短片《Growing Together》的时间地点,并欢迎提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
杰出的:outstanding → remarkable
通知:inform → notify
参加:take part in → participate in
获得:gain → acquire
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
拓展句:What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, in which you can enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2: 00 to 4: 00 in the afternoon on June 9th.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom打算暑假来北京骑车旅行。请你根据以下信息给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况,并对他的旅行提出建议。
1. 地势平坦,适合骑车;
2. 用护照可以租到公共自行车;
3. 停车、修车都很方便。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:平坦的flat租用rent
Dear Tom,
I am happy to hear about your plan to travel around Beijing by bike. _______________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】[参考范文]
Dear Tom,
I am happy to hear about your plan to travel around Beijing by bike. It is a good city for cycling because it is flat, and therefore it is convenient for riding bikes. And you don’t have to buy a new bike since you can rent one in Beijing with your passport. Moreover, you can always find a mechanic in the city if your bike breaks down on the road. Parking lots are everywhere, too. Before you start a day’s ride, I suggest you spend some time preparing for it, and you may want to take a map with you in case you get lost. I hope you can enjoy your cycling experience in Beijing, and above all, keep safe. Let me know if there’s anything else I can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,为计划来北京骑行的美国朋友Tom介绍骑行条件并提出实用建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
方便:convenient → handy
购买:buy → purchase
建议:suggest → recommend
安全:safe → secure
2. 句式拓展
原句:Parking lots are everywhere, too.
拓展句:Parking lots are everywhere, too, which have significantly brought convenience to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a good city for cycling because it is flat, and therefore it is convenient for riding bikes.(运用了“because”引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Before you start a day’s ride, I suggest you spend some time preparing for it, and you may want to take a map with you in case you get lost.(运用了“before”引导时间状语从句以及“in case”引导条件状语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,上周五你校开展了美化校园环境的劳动活动,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 活动目的和内容;
2. 你的感想;
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m excited to share a truly rewarding experience with you. Last Friday, our school organized a labour activity to beautify our school environment and promote our labour awareness. Every student enthusiastically participated in the activity. We cleaned classrooms until they took a new look, collected scattered trash across the playground, and planted some small trees and flowers around campus.
Though physically exhausted, I was mentally rewarded with great satisfaction and quiet pride as I gazed at our beautiful campus. Through the activity, we not only realize the significance of our labour, but also attach more importance to environmental consciousness. I feel proud to be part of such a meaningful event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,分享上周五学校开展的美化校园环境的劳动活动经历,内容包括活动目的和内容以及个人感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
促进:promote→ boost
热情地:enthusiastically→ passionately
意识到:realize→ become aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Friday, our school organized a labour activity to beautify our school environment and promote our labour awareness.
拓展句:Last Friday, our school organized a labour activity, whose aim was to beautify our school environment and promote our labour awareness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We cleaned classrooms until they took a new look, collected scattered trash across the playground, and planted some small trees and flowers around campus.(运用了until引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Though physically exhausted, I was mentally rewarded with great satisfaction and quiet pride as I gazed at our beautiful campus.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
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