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专题08应用文写作
基础
必练
主题01建议信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·合肥一中期末)
假如你是你校学生会主席李华,请你在校报上发表一封倡议书,号召同学们踊跃参加下周日下午两点学校
举办的冬季慢跑活动。内容包括:
1.活动月的:
2活动安排和注意事项;
3.呼吁参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Student Union
Passage 2
(23-24高二上安庆二中期末)
假定你是李华。你们一行20人作为交换生正在英国某一中学进行为期两个月的学习。不料学校食堂提供的
中餐不合你们的口味,而且可供选择的食物品种非常少。请你给这所学校该项目负责老师Gy写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
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2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Gary,
I'm Li Hua,one of the 20 exchange students from China who are studying for two months in your school.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
Passage 3
(23-24高二上·六安一中期末)
假设你是李华,你校英语报将评选杰出体育人,请你依据以下提示推选并以电子邮件的方式发送给报社,
并说明你推选的理由。
推选人物:李宁。
推选理由:
1.多次获得中国、世界最佳运动员,多次获得各种荣誉称号;一共获得了14个世界冠军,106枚国内外体
操比赛金牌;独创多个体操动作并以其名字命名。
2创办“李宁品牌”系列运动服装,非常热心公益事业。
注意
1.词数:80左右。
2.不要逐条翻译以上内容,可适当增加细节。
3.邮件的开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:体操gymnastic;公益事业public service
Dear editor,
I am delighted to learn that you are holding an activity to choose"Outstanding Sportsperson"
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Passage 4
(24-25高二上·六安一中期末)
假定你是李华,当今网络已经把世界变成了真正的“全球村”,请你给某报社写一封信,就“网络对教育的影
响”谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1.网络对教育的影响(利与弊);
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours faithfully,
LiHua
主题02申请/请求信
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假定你是李华,今天是奶奶的生日,但是你要参加一场重要的考试,无法参加她的生日聚会。请你根据以
下提示,写一封电子邮件给奶奶。内容包括:
1.表达问候和感激之情:
2.说明缺席的原因;
3.期待再次见面。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Grandma,
It's a special day,your birthday!
Love,
LiHua
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·安徽黄山期末)
假定你是李华,你们学校开设了中国传统文化实践课。请给你的英国好友Peter写一封邮件,分享你上课的
感受,内容包括:
1.课程内容;
2.个人感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右;2.增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Passage 3
(23-24高二上·准北一中·期末)
假定你是李华,你已经按照外教Vra的要求修改好了你制定的英语角的活动方案。请你写封邮件将方案发
送给老师,并请她审阅批准。
注意:写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:批准approval
Passage 4
(23-24高二上安庆二中期末)
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从实验中学(Experimental Middle School)毕业。你从网站上得知一家电脑公
司要招聘英语实习生(intern),你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信,内容包括:
1.自己的学习情况及英语水平;
2.自己的优势:
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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主题03邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·临泉一中期末)
假定你是高一学生李华,由于网课期间外出机会少,你想邀请爱好太极的外国笔友Pter一起每天早上在线
打太极拳,锻炼身体,增强体质,提高学习效率。请你写一封邮件,邀请他一起锻炼。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:太极(taichi)
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
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Passage 2
(2425高二上·临泉中学期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex对你校下周将举行的校园汉服节(the Hanfu Festival)很感兴趣。请给他写
一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容:
3.邀请参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex.
Yours,
LiHua
进阶
提升
主题01报道
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·滁州中学期末)
1.假定你是某校学生会成员李华,为了迎接来自美国一批高中师生来访,你校在上周五举办了欢迎晚会,
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你校和美国师生进行了精彩的表演。请你给学校英文网站写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.晚会举办的时间和地点;
2.晚会的节目和气氛:
3.给予一些评价。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A welcome evening party
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·皖中联盟期末)
上周六你校邀请了一位肢体语言方面的专家给全校学生开展了一次讲座。请你为校英语报写一篇短文,报
道此次活动,内容包括:
1讲座时间、地点;
2.讲座内容:
3.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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主题02邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·安微马鞍山期末)
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办校园电影节。请你给外教Peter写封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的:
2.活动安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(2425高二上·安徽宣城期末)
假定你是宣城市某高中生李华,你们城市将举行“City Lif®”短视频(VIog)大赛,向海外介绍家乡。请你给
交换生Ryan写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.短视频内容;
2.短视频要求;
3.提交方式。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well.
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主题03演讲稿
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·马鞍山二中·期末)
假设你们年级计划举办一场英语演讲比赛,主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇参
赛演讲稿。
要点:1.喜爱的运动项目;2.喜爱的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.标题及开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Sport
Hello,everyone.
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·安徽五市联考期末)
你校刚刚举办了“是否该进行海洋探索”为主题的辩论赛。请向英语报校园生活栏目投稿,分享此次经历。
内容包括:
1.辩论赛概况;
2.意义或收获。
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专题08 应用文写作
主题01 建议信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·合肥一中·期末)
假如你是你校学生会主席李华,请你在校报上发表一封倡议书,号召同学们踊跃参加下周日下午两点学校举办的冬季慢跑活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动安排和注意事项;
3.呼吁参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
【答案】Dear Students,
With the aim of helping us students release the pressure of study and building up our body, our Student Union decides to organize winter jogging next Sunday.
As scheduled, we will start jogging at 2 o’clock next Sunday afternoon and it lasts 3 hours. The route begins directly in front of the school gate to the city park, where we will have a rest and then head back. As we all know, jogging can be tiring, so wearing comfortable clothes and shoes is essential. In addition, it is recommended that you start to jog slowly in cold weather, and it is important to warm up and cool down properly before and after running.
The jogging will surely be unforgettable. Don’t hesitate to participate, and we will have a wonderful time together.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,号召同学们踊跃参加下周日下午两点学校举办的冬季慢跑活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
舒适的:comfortable→cozy
必不可少的:essential→necessary
此外:In addition→What’s more
重要的:important→significant
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Don’t hesitate to participate, and we will have a wonderful time together.
同义句:Feel free to join and we’ll have a great time together.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The route begins directly in front of the school gate to the city park, where we will have a rest and then head back. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, it is recommended that you start to jog slowly in cold weather, and it is important to warm up and cool down properly before and after running. (运用了虚拟语气和that引导的主语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·安庆二中·期末)
假定你是李华。你们一行20人作为交换生正在英国某一中学进行为期两个月的学习。不料学校食堂提供的中餐不合你们的口味,而且可供选择的食物品种非常少。请你给这所学校该项目负责老师Gary写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Gary,
I’m Li Hua, one of the 20 exchange students from China who are studying for two months in your school.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Gary,
I’m Li Hua, one of the 20 exchange students from China who are studying for two months in your school. Greatly thankful for you having offered us kind help! Deeply sorry to reveal to you two major food-related problems. The lunch served in your school canteen is not to our taste. Either too dry or too sweet! What’s worse, food there lacks variety, the same dishes for days on end! We are consequently suffering from hunger.
Would you please contact the canteen manager about the problem? It couldn’t be better if some Chinese food could be prepared or some changes could be made.
We would be more than grateful if you could help us address the problems.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生项目的学校食堂负责人Gray写信反映学校餐厅提供的食物不符合口味、食物品种少并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的:thankful→appreciative
提供:offer→provide
因此:consequently→therefore
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: We would be more than grateful if you could help us address the problems
同义句: We would appreciate it very much if you could help us address the problems
【点睛】【高分句型1】It couldn’t be better if some Chinese food could be prepared or some changes could be made.(运用了it作形式主语)
【高分句型2】We would be more than grateful if you could help us address the problems. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24高二上·六安一中·期末)
假设你是李华,你校英语报将评选杰出体育人,请你依据以下提示推选并以电子邮件的方式发送给报社,并说明你推选的理由。
推选人物:李宁。
推选理由:
1.多次获得中国、世界最佳运动员,多次获得各种荣誉称号;一共获得了14个世界冠军,106枚国内外体操比赛金牌;独创多个体操动作并以其名字命名。
2.创办“李宁品牌”系列运动服装,非常热心公益事业。
注意:
1. 词数:80左右。
2. 不要逐条翻译以上内容,可适当增加细节。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:体操gymnastic;公益事业public service
Dear editor,
I am delighted to learn that you are holding an activity to choose “Outstanding Sportsperson”.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
I am delighted to learn that you are holding an activity to choose “Outstanding Sportsperson”. I strongly recommend Li Ning.
Li Ning has been named “the greatest athlete” many times in China and in the world, and has earned various honours and titles. When he retired at the age of 26, he had won 14 world championships and 106 gold medals in major competitions across the world. He also created a number of gymnastics movements, which were named after his name.
After retirement, he launched a new brand of sportswear—Li Ning. He is also devoted to public service.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语报将评选杰出体育人,要求考生以电子邮件的方式给报社推选杰出体育人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→kinds of
主要的:major→main
发起:launch→sponsor
献身于:be devoted to→be dedicated to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Li Ning has been named “the greatest athlete” many times in China and in the world, and has earned various honours and titles.
拓展句:Li Ning who has been named “the greatest athlete” many times in China has earned various honours and titles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When he retired at the age of 26, he had won 14 world championships and 106 gold medals in major competitions across the world. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及过去完成时)
【高分句型2】He also created a number of gymnastics movements, which were named after his name. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·六安一中·期末)
假定你是李华,当今网络已经把世界变成了真正的“全球村”,请你给某报社写一封信,就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1.网络对教育的影响(利与弊);
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education. Here, I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one.
The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses. Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs regardless of time and space. As a result, learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easier than ever. The downside is just as noticeable. Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.
Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults. And parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某报社写一封信,就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈考生的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
转换:transform → turn
积极的:positive→ active
困惑:puzzle→ confuse
建议:suggest→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education.
拓展句:The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, which is altering all aspects of our life, especially education.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.(运用了关系代词that、关系副词where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
主题02 申请/请求信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·六安二中·期末)
假定你是李华,今天是奶奶的生日,但是你要参加一场重要的考试,无法参加她的生日聚会。请你根据以下提示,写一封电子邮件给奶奶。内容包括:
1. 表达问候和感激之情;
2. 说明缺席的原因;
3. 期待再次见面。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Grandma,
It’s a special day, your birthday!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Grandma,
It’s a special day, your birthday! Here, I first wish you a happy birthday. Second. I want to take this opportunity to thank you for being such a wonderful person in my life. You have told me thousands of stories that were meant to teach me important lessons about life. I think if it were not for you, I wouldn’t be as confident as I am today. You are my hero!
I’m really sorry for not visiting you due to my exams. But when I visit you next time, I will take you to the restaurant where we ate for your birthday last year. For today, I hope you have a great birthday!
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,今天是奶奶的生日,但是你要参加一场重要的考试,无法参加她的生日聚会。请你根据以下提示,写一封电子邮件给奶奶。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity→chance
重要的:important→significant
认为: think→figure
感激某人:thank sb →be grateful to sb
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句I’m really sorry for not visiting you due to my exams.
拓展句:I’m really sorry that I could not visit you due to my exams.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You have told me thousands of stories that were meant to teach me important lessons about life.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] For today. I hope you have a great birthday!(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·安徽黄山·期末)
假定你是李华,你们学校开设了中国传统文化实践课。请给你的英国好友Peter写一封邮件,分享你上课的感受,内容包括:
1.课程内容;
2.个人感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右;2.增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m writing to share with you my experience of taking the Chinese traditional culture practice class in our school.
The course covers a wide range of topics, including calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony. Through these courses, I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture and its rich heritage. Not only does it enhance my cultural awareness, but it also provides me with a platform to explore and appreciate the beauty of Chinese traditions.
If you have the opportunity, I would love to show you some of the skills I have learned.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假定是李华,你们学校开设了中国传统文化实践课。请给你的英国好友Peter写一封邮件,分享你上课的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
加强:enhance→strengthen
课程:course→lesson
主题:topic→theme
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The course covers a wide range of topics, including calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony. Through these courses, I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture and its rich heritage.
拓展句:The course covers a wide range of topics, including calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony, through which I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture and its rich heritage.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to share with you my experience of taking the Chinese traditional culture practice class in our school. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Not only does it enhance my cultural awareness, but it also provides me with a platform to explore and appreciate the beauty of Chinese traditions. (运用了倒装句)
Passage 3
(23-24高二上·淮北一中·期末)
假定你是李华,你已经按照外教Vera的要求修改好了你制定的英语角的活动方案。请你写封邮件将方案发送给老师,并请她审阅批准。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:批准approval
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【答案】Dear Vera,
How is everything going? I’m writing to ask for your favor regarding the English corner activity plan.
I have modified the activity plan for your English corner activity plan according to the requirements. But I still feel far from satisfactory, which bothers me a lot. Facing so many difficulties, I am eager to get your timely help.
I have written an email and sent the scheme to you. I would be grateful if you could give me your review and approval.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生李华按照外教Vera的要求修改好了英语角的活动方案。请考生写邮件请外教审阅批准。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely →earnestly
修改:modify → alter
方案:scheme →precept
批准:approval→ authorize
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I have modified the activity plan about your English corner activity plan according to the requirements
拓展句: I have modified the activity plan which is about your English corner activity plan according to the requirements
【点睛】【高分句型1】But I still feel far from satisfactory, which bothers me a lot.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Facing with so many difficulties, I am eager to get your timely help.(运用了非谓语动词facing作状语)
Passage 4
(23-24高二上·安庆二中·期末)
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从实验中学(Experimental Middle School)毕业。你从网站上得知一家电脑公司要招聘英语实习生(intern),你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信,内容包括:
1.自己的学习情况及英语水平;
2.自己的优势;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours
LiHua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned from the website that your company needs an English intern. I'm dying for the job and I think I am quite fit for it.
I'm an 18-year-old boy who will graduate from Experimental High School this July. My academic achievement ranks among the top ten in my school. Proficient at English, both written and spoken, I believe I will meet your demands. Besides, having been working for our student union for three years, I have learnt how to cooperate with others well. In addition, as an outgoing and optimistic boy, I'm very popular with my fellow classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
I would be much appreciative if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your earliest reply! Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封求职信,介绍自己的情况和优势。
【详解】词汇积累
渴望得到:be dying for→long for→be thirsty for
满足你的要求:meet your demand→satisfy your need
此外:besides→what’s more
考虑:take…into consideration→ consider
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Proficient at English, both written and spoken, I believe I will meet your demands.
拓展句:I’m proficient at both written and spoken English, so I believe I will meet your demands.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm an 18-year-old boy who will graduate from Experimental High School this July.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, having been working for our student union for three years, I have learnt how to cooperate with others well.(运用了现在分词完成式作状语)
主题03 邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·临泉一中·期末)
假定你是高一学生李华,由于网课期间外出机会少,你想邀请爱好太极的外国笔友Peter一起每天早上在线打太极拳,锻炼身体,增强体质,提高学习效率。请你写一封邮件,邀请他一起锻炼。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:太极(tai chi)
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I heard that you have been taking online classes at home. So have I. Now I would like to invite you to practice tai chi online together with me.
It is a fact that we don’t have enough time to exercise outdoors now. Besides, I know you have developed an interest in tai chi. So I invite you to practice it online with me at 6:30 every morning, which surely benefits us, such as keeping us energetic and helping improve our learning efficiency. I hope that you won’t decline my invitation.
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假定是高一学生李华,由于网课期间外出机会少,你想邀请爱好太极的外国笔友Peter一起每天早上在线打太极拳,锻炼身体,增强体质,提高学习效率。请你写一封邮件,邀请他一起锻炼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
提高:improve→boost
拒绝:decline→turn down
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I heard that you have been taking online classes at home. Now I would like to invite you to practice tai chi online together with me.
拓展句:Learning that you have been taking online classes at home, now I would like to invite you to practice tai chi online together with me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I heard that you have been taking online classes at home. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] So I invite you to practice it online with me at 6:30 every morning, which surely benefits us, such as keeping us energetic and helping improve our learning efficiency. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·临泉中学·期末)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex对你校下周将举行的校园汉服节(the Hanfu Festival)很感兴趣。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容;
3.邀请参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex,
I am happy to inform you that Hanfu Cultural Festival will be held in our school next week. Knowing you are interested in Hanfu , I invite you to join us!
The festival will be held at 2 pm on November 20th on the playground. First, there will be catwalk shows, at which models will show what Hanfu looks like. The event will also invite experts to share the rich culture behind Hanfu. It is a good chance for us to learn about Hanfu.
Hopefully, you will make it to our activity. I'm sure you will have a great time then.
Yours,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex对你校下周将举行的校园汉服节(the Hanfu Festival)很感兴趣。请给他写一封邮件邀请他参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have interest in
参加:join→attend/participate in
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The festival will be held at 2 pm on November 20th on the playground.
拓展句:The festival, which aims to publicize the etiquette of Hanfu and promote Chinese culture, will be held at 2 pm on November 20th on the playground.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Knowing you are interested in Hanfu , I invite you to join us!(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
First, there will be catwalk shows, at which models will show what Hanfu looks like.(运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
主题01 报道
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·滁州中学·期末)
1.假定你是某校学生会成员李华,为了迎接来自美国一批高中师生来访,你校在上周五举办了欢迎晚会,你校和美国师生进行了精彩的表演。请你给学校英文网站写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 晚会举办的时间和地点;
2. 晚会的节目和气氛;
3. 给予一些评价。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A welcome evening party
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【答案】One possible version:
A welcome evening party
Last Friday, some American senior high school students and teachers paid a friendly visit to our school. In order to welcome them, our school held a grand welcome evening party for them. The event, highly expected by us students, took place in the school stadium.
Both students and teachers performed at the party. There was very beautiful singing, skilled dancing, and fascinating dramatic performances such as comic sketches (小品) and crosstalk (相声). The American students and teachers also gave some performances such as singing, dancing and poetry reading. Owing to the lively atmosphere, the audience laughed and shouted. Lots of thunderous applause was heard for each of the shows. All were impressed by the performances.
The American students felt the warm and harmonious atmosphere in our school. This event can promote a good understanding between Chinese and American students and strengthen our friendship with them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生给学校英文网站写一篇欢迎晚会的报道,需介绍晚会举办的时间和地点,描述晚会的节目和气氛,并给予一些评价。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
熟练的:skilled→experienced
有吸引力的:fascinating→intriguing, engrossing
由于:owing to→because of, due to
促进:promote→facilitate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This event can promote a good understanding between Chinese and American students and strengthen our friendship with them.
拓展句:This event, which can promote a good understanding between Chinese and American students, will strengthen our friendship with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to welcome them, our school held a grand welcome evening party for them. (运用了In order to…短语作目的状语)
[高分句型2] The event, highly expected by us students, took place in the school stadium. (运用了过去分词短语highly expected…作后置定语)
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·皖中联盟·期末)
上周六你校邀请了一位肢体语言方面的专家给全校学生开展了一次讲座。请你为校英语报写一篇短文,报道此次活动,内容包括:
1.讲座时间、地点;
2.讲座内容;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Saturday, our school invited a body language expert to deliver a lecture on the importance of using body language correctly to us students in the school hall.
The expert not only introduced us various types of body language, but also taught us how to use them properly. Meanwhile, he provided some interesting demonstrations.
I was fascinated by the expert’s vivid speech. From this experience, I realized the importance of body language and made up my mind to pay attention to it in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英语报写一篇短文,报道上周六学校邀请一位肢体语言方面的专家给全校学生开展的一次讲座活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
邀请:invite→ask
正确地:correctly→rightly
不同的:various→different
同时:meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Saturday, our school invited a body language expert to deliver a lecture on the importance of using body language correctly to us students in the school hall.
拓展句:Last Saturday, our school invited a body language expert to deliver a lecture which was on the importance of using body language correctly to us students in the school hall.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The expert not only introduced us various types of body language, but also taught us how to use them properly. (运用了固定句型not only…but also连接谓语)
【高分句型2】From this experience, I realized the importance of body language and made up my mind to pay attention to it in the future. (运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)
主题02 邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·安徽马鞍山·期末)
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办校园电影节。请你给外教 Peter 写封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动安排。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
In order to enrich students’ extracurricular life and create a diverse learning atmosphere, our school will hold a campus film festival. Knowing you are interested in films, I am writing to invite you to participate.
The film festival will be held in the multifunctional hall of the school and will last for three days starting from next Friday. One film will be screened every evening at 19:00. We will meet the needs of different student groups by playing different types of films.
Welcome to come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Peter 写封邮件,邀请他参加你校将举办的校园电影节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
多种多样的:diverse→various
邀请:invite→ask
开始:start→begin
放映:screen→show
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Knowing you are interested in films, I am writing to invite you to participate.
拓展句:Because I know you are interested in films, I am writing to invite you to participate.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are interested in movies, I am writing to invite you to participate. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】We will meet the needs of different student groups by playing different types of films. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作介词宾语)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·安徽宣城·期末)
假定你是宣城市某高中生李华,你们城市将举行“City Life”短视频(Vlog)大赛,向海外介绍家乡。请你给交换生Ryan写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 短视频内容;
2. 短视频要求;
3. 提交方式。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to extend a warm invitation for you to participate in our city’s “City Life” Vlog Competition.
The video is based on our city’s daily life, featuring fantastic city views, citizens’ lifestyle or introductions to famous cultural heritages, anything that captures the appeal of our city. We encourage creativity and authenticity, so feel free to add your personal touch! As for the requirements, the video should be no longer than 5 minutes and made in MP4 format. Your participation would be a valuable addition to the contest. I am sure your video will provide a fresh and interesting angle on our city life.
If you are considering joining us for this exciting competition, you can visit our school website and submit yours online. Remember the deadline — it is due by Jan. 25. I am eager for your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示给交换生Ryan写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你们城市将举行“City Life”短视频(Vlog)大赛,向海外介绍家乡。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与:participate in → take part in/engage in
有名的:famous → well-known/ renowned
捕捉:capture → catch/seize
考虑:consider → think about/give thought to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for the requirements, the video should be no longer than 5 minutes and made in MP4 format.
拓展句:When it comes to the requirements, the video should be no longer than 5 minutes and made in MP4 format.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The video is based on our city’s daily life, featuring fantastic city views, citizens’ lifestyle or introductions to famous cultural heritages, anything that captures the appeal of our city. (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you are considering joining us for this exciting competition, you can visit our school website and submit yours online. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
主题03 演讲稿
Passage 1
(23-24高二上·马鞍山二中·期末)
假设你们年级计划举办一场英语演讲比赛,主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇参赛演讲稿。
要点:1.喜爱的运动项目;2.喜爱的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.标题及开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Sport
Hello, everyone.
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【答案】Hello, everyone. My favorite sport is swimming and here are my reasons.
First, it’s an affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t expensive. Second, swimming is beneficial to your heart and lungs. In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax. Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.
In conclusion, as a very good workout, swimming can give you peace of mind to continue with your day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇参赛演讲稿,参加年级举办的主题为“我最喜爱的运动”英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有益的:beneficial →of benefit
总之:in conclusion →to conclude
锻炼:workout →exercise
继续:continue →go on
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax.
拓展句:Swimming not only has its physical benefits, but is also an effective way to relax.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t expensive.(运用了even though引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·安徽五市联考·期末)
你校刚刚举办了“是否该进行海洋探索”为主题的辩论赛。请向英语报校园生活栏目投稿,分享此次经历。内容包括:
1.辩论赛概况;
2.意义或收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Unforgettable Debate
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【答案】 An Unforgettable Debate
I took part in a heated debate in the hall of our library last week, which was themed on “Should we explore the sea or not?”
We students have prepared for the debate for a whole week, surfing the Internet, sorting out materials, dividing tasks among members...Everyone interested was excited to be present. I was for the opinion on “We should explore the sea.” After stating our position, giving hard evidence and cooperating with each other, we finally won the fierce argument.
Through the activity, I deepened my understanding of sea exploration and benefited a lot.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。文章要求考生向英语报校园生活栏目投稿,分享学校刚刚举办“是否该进行海洋探索”为主题的辩论赛经历。
【详解】词汇积累
参加:take part in→ participate in/attend
支持:for→ in favor of
表明:state→ express
激烈的:fierce→ intense
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Through the activity, I deepened my understanding of sea exploration and benefited a lot.
拓展句:Due to the fact that I attended the activity, I deepened my understanding of sea exploration and benefited a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I took part in a heated debate in the hall of our library last week, which was themed on “Should we explore the sea or not?”.(使用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]We students have prepared for the debate for a whole week, surfing the Internet, sorting out materials, dividing tasks among members...(使用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·安徽亳州·期末)
假定你是李华,你校英语角要组织以“关注食品安全,守护健康成长”为主题的沙龙活动。请你准备一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 食品与健康的关系;
2. 你的打算及理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and classmates,
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【答案】Dear teachers and classmates,
As an old saying goes, “We are what we eat.” Safe and high-quality food equips us with enough energy to carry out our daily activities, helping us grow healthily. However, food containing too many harmful ingredients will only make us suffer.
To safeguard my health, I have a few plans. To begin with, when choosing food, I’ll be more careful, and make an effort to buy food from reliable sources. In addition, I’ve made up my mind to read books and articles about food safety, so as to enhance my knowledge about it. Moreover, recognizing the power of joint hands, I’ll call on everyone around me to pay more attention to what goes into our mouths.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就学校英语角要组织以“关注食品安全,守护健康成长”为主题的沙龙活动准备一篇发言稿。其内容包括: 食品与健康的关系和你的打算及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
安全的:safe→secure
帮助:help→assist
然而:however→nevertheless
首先:to begin with→first
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: However, food containing too many harmful ingredients will only make us suffer.
拓展句: However, food which contains too many harmful ingredients will only make us suffer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 To begin with, when choosing food, I’ll be more careful, and make an effort to buy food from reliable sources. (运用了状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】Moreover, recognizing the power of joint hands, I’ll call on everyone around me to pay more attention to what goes into our mouths.(运用了现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(23-24高二上·安徽阜阳·期末)
上周六你校学生会邀请外教Mr.Brown 做了主题为“Healthy Growth”的知识讲座,请你为校英文报写一则简报,内容包括:
1.讲座内容;
2. 学生反应。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Saturday, the student union organized a lecture on the theme of “Healthy Growth” by Mr. Brown, our foreign teacher. The event was held in the school auditorium at 2 PM.
Mr. Brown’s lecture was informative and engaging. He discussed various aspects of maintaining a healthy lifestyle, emphasizing the importance of regular exercise, balanced nutrition, and effective stress management. His practical tips for achieving overall well-being left a strong impression.
Students were highly receptive to the lecture, which sparked discussions about integrating healthier habits into our daily lives and making necessary changes. Mr. Brown’s expertise presentation style made this event a valuable experience for everyone in attendance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周六你校学生会邀请外教Mr.Brown 做了主题为“Healthy Growth”的知识讲座,请你为校英文报写一则简报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激发:sparke→motivate
压力:stress→pressure
举行:hold→host
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Last Saturday, the student union organized a lecture on the theme of “Healthy Growth” by Mr. Brown, our foreign teacher. The event was held in the school auditorium at 2 PM.
拓展句:Last Saturday, the student union organized a lecture on the theme of “Healthy Growth” by Mr. Brown, our foreign teacher, which was held in the school auditorium at 2 PM.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He discussed various aspects of maintaining a healthy lifestyle, emphasizing the importance of regular exercise, balanced nutrition, and effective stress management. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Students were highly receptive to the lecture, which sparked discussions about integrating healthier habits into our daily lives and making necessary changes. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
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