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专题08应用文写作
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主题01介绍信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·安徽安庆期末)
1.假定你是李华,外教Flix对学校组织的研学活动很感兴趣。请你给他写封电子邮件介绍一下相关情况,
内容包括:
1.时间和地点:
2.内容和意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Felix.
I'd like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥一中期末)
假定你是李华,在你校体育节到来之际,校英语报征文,希望大家撰文介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动,
请你据此写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
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1.你最喜欢的运动项目;2.你喜欢这项运动的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor.
I'm Li Hua and I'm writing to introduce my favorite sport.
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 3
(23-24高一上·安徽宣城期末)
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Mk即将来你校作交换生,请你给他写一封邮件,结合自己的经历简单介绍
一下这里的校园生活。内容包括:
1.课程安排;
2.社团活动:
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.不要出现个人信息;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 4
(23-24高一上·宿州十三校期末)
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Jaso对汉语很感兴趣,写信向你询问中国汉字的历史和学习汉语的方法。
请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.中国汉字的历史和地位;2.学习汉语的方法。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason.
How is everything going?
Yours,
LiHua
主题02邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·安微六安期末)
为庆祝新中国成立七十五周年(the75 th anniversary),你们学校即将举办校园歌唱大赛(Campus Singing
Competition)。假如你是李华,请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件,邀请他参加观看。
内容包括:
(①)汇演时间和地点;
(2)汇演的内容。
注意:(1)词数100词左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Passage 2
(24-25高一上·安微蚌埠期末)
假定你是李华,上周日观看了全市的大众组业余选手马拉松赛,你萌生了晨跑锻炼的想法。请给你校酷爱
跑步的外教M.Brown写一封邮件,邀请他一起晨跑,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.告知安排(晨跑的时间、地点);
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:大众组马拉松赛Mass Participation Marathon
Dear Mr.Brown,
Yours,
LiHua
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主题03征文活动
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·安微毫州期末)
假定你是李华,你校将举办以Live in harmony with wildlife”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参赛,
内容包括:
1.野生动物所处困境及原因;
2.措施及呼吁。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning,everyone!
Today,I'm honored to stand here and talk about"Live in harmony with wildlife".
Thank you!
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥六中期末)
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办以Something I have done for my parents为主题的征文活动。请你写一
篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.事件描述,
2.体验或感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 3
(23-24高一上·安微阜阳期末)
你们学校的英文报纸新增了“感恩角”专栏,正在面向全校征稿,请你以“我最感谢的人”为内容写一篇短文投
稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.你们的交往;
3.对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
主题04建议信
Passage 1
(2425高一上·安微宣城期末)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Linda因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的嘲笑,为此她感到非常苦恼,写
信向你求助,请你给她写一封回信。
内容包括:1给予安慰;
2.提供建议。
字数要求:80-100词左右。
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Dear Linda.
Yours,
LiHua
进阶提升
主题01建议信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·六安一中期末)
1.假定你是李华,你的笔友BuCe最近沉迷于抖音无法自拔,向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1表示理解和关心;
2.沉迷抖音的危害;
3你的建议及理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词汇:抖音Tik Tok
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Passage 2
(23-24高一上·安微合肥期末)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Juy最近总是感觉身体不适,来信询问你如何保持身体健康。请你根据
以下要点,鼓励她改善身体现状。要点包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
主题02申请信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上毫州二中期末)
假如你是高一学生李华,你校英语阅读社English Reading Club)正在招募(recruit)新成员,你非常渴望
加入。请你用英语写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.加入英语阅读社的原因;
3.希望获准。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
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2请按照以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua,a freshman in our school.
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥一中期末)
假定你是李华,得知由于国际交流的需要,你校的校史馆正在招募英文讲解员,请你向负责人Hay老
师写一封申请信。要点如下:
1.写信目的
2.个人优势
3能做的事情
参考词汇:commentator讲解员注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Harry,
Yours,
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主题03通知
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·淮北一中.期末)
假定你是校英语报记者李华,今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动,请你就此次活动写一篇新闻报
道,内容包括:
1.活动目的:
2.活动过程:
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:地震应急疏散演练earthquake emergency evacuation drill
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·安微庐江期末)
近期你校将举办一场“用英文讲好中国故事(Tell Good Chinese Stories in English)的英文演讲比赛,请你
代表学生会在学校公众号上用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1.比赛目的:
2.比赛信息:
3.欢迎报名。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;可适当增加细节。
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专题08 应用文写作
主题01 介绍信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·安徽安庆·期末)
1.假定你是李华,外教Felix对学校组织的研学活动很感兴趣。请你给他写封电子邮件介绍一下相关情况,内容包括:
1.时间和地点:
2.内容和意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Felix,
I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Felix,
I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
The activity took place at a nearby city last weekend. During the study tour, we had the chance to visit a variety of exhibitions and learn more about history and culture. We also attended some talks led by experts.
The study tour not only made us have a better understanding of the subjects we studied in class but also developed our thinking skills. It was a great experience that opened up our minds.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Felix写封电子邮件介绍学校组织的研学活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:activity→event
机会:chance→opportunity
各种各样的:a variety of→various
培养:develop→foster
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
拓展句:I’d like to share with you a recent study tour, which was organized by our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the study tour, we had the chance to visit a variety of exhibitions and learn more about history and culture. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] It was a great experience that opened up our minds. (运用了that引导定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥一中·期末)
假定你是李华,在你校体育节到来之际,校英语报征文,希望大家撰文介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动,请你据此写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的运动项目;2.你喜欢这项运动的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor.
I’m Li Hua and I’m writing to introduce my favorite sport.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor.
I’m Li Hua and I’m writing to introduce my favorite sport. Among all the sports, I like basketball the most. I like it for several reasons.
First, it is easy to do. I don’t need special equipment or skills. All I need is a ball and a pair of comfortable shoes. Second, it can build up my body and help me keep fit. While playing it, I burn the extra fat and strengthen my muscles. Third, it teaches the importance of teamwork. In order to win the game, I have learned to share and work with my partners.
Such is my favorite sport.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。校英语报征文,希望大家撰文介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动,要求考生写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
舒适的:comfortable→cosy
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
重要性:importance→significance
与……合作:work with→team up with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, it can build up my body and help me keep fit.
拓展句:Second, not only can it build up my body, but it also helps me keep fit.
【点睛】[高分句型1] All I need is a ball and a pair of comfortable shoes. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] While playing it, I burn the extra fat and strengthen my muscles. (运用了状语从句的省略)
Passage 3
(23-24高一上·安徽宣城·期末)
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Mike即将来你校作交换生,请你给他写一封邮件,结合自己的经历简单介绍一下这里的校园生活。内容包括:
1. 课程安排;
2. 社团活动;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 不要出现个人信息;
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m Li Hua. Knowing that you will come to China to study as an exchange student in our school next term, I’m so glad to introduce our school life to you.
We live a busy life here with 9 subjects to learn in Senior One. In Senior Two, apart from Chinese, Maths, and English, we are offered various options according to the new reform. As for me, Maths and Chemistry are quite easy and enjoyable, because interest makes a difference.
In addition, what makes our school special lies in its colorful clubs. The one that may fascinate you most is the Chinese Calligraphy, where you can enjoy the unique traditional art form and cultivate your mind.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合自己的经历,向即将来你校作交换生的外国朋友Mike简单介绍一下你校的校园生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
各种各样的:various→a variety of
在于:lie in→consist in
欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We live a busy life here with 9 subjects to learn in Senior one.
拓展句:We live a busy life here, because we have 9 subjects to learn in Senior one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, what makes our school special lies in its colorful clubs. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】The one that may fascinate you most is the Chinese Calligraphy, where you can enjoy the unique traditional art form and cultivate your mind. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
(23-24高一上·宿州十三校·期末)
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Jason对汉语很感兴趣, 写信向你询问中国汉字的历史和学习汉语的方法。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.中国汉字的历史和地位;2.学习汉语的方法。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
How is everything going?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jason,
How is everything going? I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese characters in your e-mail. It’s my pleasure to tell you the history of Chinese characters and how to learn them.
Chinese is one of the languages with the longest histories and high development levels in the world. In recent years, the developed countries have attached great importance to Chinese. If you want to learn Chinese characters, it will be a good idea to watch TV in Chinese, learn and sing Chinese songs, which will help a lot.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对汉语很感兴趣的外国笔友Jason写一封信,告知对方中国汉字的历史和地位以及学习汉语的方法。
【详解】高兴的:glad→delighted
感兴趣:be interested in→show interest in
想要:want→would like
帮助:help→aid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s my pleasure to tell you the history of Chinese characters and how to learn them.
拓展句:It’s my pleasure to tell you the history of Chinese characters and how you can learn them well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese characters in your e-mail.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to learn Chinese characters, it will be a good idea to watch TV in Chinese, learn and sing Chinese songs, which will help a lot.(运用了if引导的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
主题02 邀请信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·安徽六安·期末)
为庆祝新中国成立七十五周年(the 75th anniversary),你们学校即将举办校园歌唱大赛(Campus Singing Competition)。假如你是李华,请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件,邀请他参加观看。
内容包括:
(1)汇演时间和地点;
(2)汇演的内容。
注意:(1)词数100词左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
To celebrate the 75th anniversary of the founding of New China, our school will hold a Campus Singing Competition. I sincerely invite you to watch it.
The competition will be held in the school hall at 3 p.m. next Friday. Students will sing a wide variety of patriotic songs, which not only show their love for the country but also demonstrate their wonderful singing skills. You’ll surely be deeply impressed by the passionate atmosphere.
I believe it will be a great event. I sincerely hope you can come and join us. Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给留学生Eric写一封邮件,邀请他参加观看学校即将举办的校园歌唱大赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely
各种各样的:a variety of→ various
展示:demonstrate→ show
热情的:passionate→ enthusiastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To celebrate the 75th anniversary of the founding of New China, our school will hold a Campus Singing Competition.
拓展句:Since it wants to celebrate the 75th anniversary of the founding of New China, our school will hold a Campus Singing Competition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students will sing a wide variety of patriotic songs, which not only show their love for the country but also demonstrate their wonderful singing skills.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope you can come and join us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·安徽蚌埠·期末)
假定你是李华,上周日观看了全市的大众组业余选手马拉松赛,你萌生了晨跑锻炼的想法。请给你校酷爱跑步的外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,邀请他一起晨跑,内容包括:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 告知安排(晨跑的时间、地点);
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:大众组马拉松赛 Mass Participation Marathon
Dear Mr. Brown,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. Last Sunday, I watched the Mass Participation Marathon in our city, which inspired me to start morning runs for fitness. Knowing your passion for running, I thought it would be great if we could run together. We could meet at the school track at 6:30 am every weekday. It’s a beautiful spot to start the day with some exercise and fresh air.
Looking forward to your reply and the possibility of running alongside you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给酷爱跑步的外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,邀请他一起晨跑,内容需涵盖发出邀请、告知晨跑安排并期待回复等内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激励:inspire → encourage
酷爱,热情:passion → enthusiasm
地点:spot → place
期待:look forward to → anticipate
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句:
原句:We could meet at the school track at 6:30 am every weekday. It’s a beautiful spot to start the day with some exercise and fresh air.
拓展句:We could meet at the school track at 6:30 am every weekday, which is a beautiful spot to start the day with some exercise and fresh air.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Sunday, I watched the Mass Participation Marathon in our city, which inspired me to start morning runs for fitness.(使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing your passion for running, I thought it would be great if we could run together.(使用了现在分词短语作状语、省略引导词that的宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句)
主题03 征文活动
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·安徽亳州·期末)
假定你是李华,你校将举办以“Live in harmony with wildlife”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 野生动物所处困境及原因;
2. 措施及呼吁。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to stand here and talk about “Live in harmony with wildlife”.
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Thank you!
【答案】Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to stand here and talk about “Live in harmony with wildlife”.
Live in harmony with wildlife, which is really appealing! However, our planet’s wildlife is dying out at an alarming rate. Species are becoming extinct every day due to illegal hunting, habitat loss and pollution. How heartbreaking this is!
Fortunately, it’s never too late to mend! It’s high time that we took measures to help our struggling friends! The government should make laws to prevent people from hunting and buying animal products. Wildlife reserves can be built as shelters for the animals. As students, we can join organizations and raise people’s awareness by delivering speeches and making posters.
Wildlife and humans are interconnected. We’re not trying to save the animals. Actually, we’re trying to save ourselves. Let’s act now!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛,要求考生以“Live in harmony with wildlife”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的:appealing → attractive
由于:due to → because of
幸运地:fortunately→ luckily
实际上:actually → in fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Species are becoming extinct every day due to illegal hunting, habitat loss and pollution.
拓展句:Species that are affected by illegal hunting, habitat loss, and pollution are becoming extinct every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Live in harmony with wildlife, which is really appealing! (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As students, we can join organizations and raise people’s awareness by delivering speeches and making posters.(运用了动名词短语作宾语)
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥六中·期末)
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办以 Something I have done for my parents为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 事件描述;
2. 体验或感受。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
Something I Have Done for My Parents
As a grateful child, I recently did something special for my parents. One Sunday, I woke up early and prepared a delicious breakfast for them. It was the first time I had cooked for them, and I was nervous but excited.
As they savored the food, I saw the warmth and happiness in their eyes. They thanked me and hugged me tightly. That simple act of kindness brought our family closer and filled me with joy. It was a small gesture, but it meant the world to them. I realized the simple things we do can bring immense happiness to our loved ones.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生假定是李华,你校英文报正在举办以 Something I have done for my parents为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
紧张:nervous→stressed
快乐:happiness→joy
美味:delicious→tasty
感谢:grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They thanked me and hugged me tightly.
拓展句:They were so touched that they thanked me and hugged me tightly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As they savored the food, I saw the warmth and happiness in their eyes. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I realized the simple things we do can bring immense happiness to our loved ones. (运用了省略关系词的定语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·期末)
你们学校的英文报纸新增了“感恩角”专栏,正在面向全校征稿,请你以“我最感谢的人”为内容写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.你们的交往;
3.对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】范文
The person I thank most
When it comes to my favorite person, I would say my English teacher, Mr. Sun. He is in his twenties now. His lessons are so lively that all of us find great fun in learning English. It is because of his encouragement that I have got enough confidence in speaking English. He is the person I will remember for good. How lucky I am to be his student! He is not only my teacher but also my friend. Thank him from the very bottom of my heart!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最感谢的人”为内容写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
乐趣:fun→joy
因为:because of→thanks to
生动:lively→vivid
记住:remember→keep in mind
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:His lessons are so lively that all of us find great fun in learning English.
拓展句:All of us find great fun in learning English because his lessons are lively.
【点睛】[高分句型1] How lucky I am to be his student! (运用了感叹句)
[高分句型2] It is because of his encouragement that I have got enough confidence in speaking English. (运用了强调句)
主题04 建议信
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·安徽宣城·期末)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Linda因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的嘲笑,为此她感到非常苦恼,写信向你求助,请你给她写一封回信。
内容包括:1.给予安慰;
2.提供建议。
字数要求:80-100词左右。
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Linda,
I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been teased about your weight. But please know, your worth isn’t defined by your appearance.
When it comes to such a situation, there are a few things you can consider. First and foremost, it’s essential to focus on your own feelings and ignore the negative comments. What’s more, developing healthy habits can make a big difference, such as joining a sports team or taking up a physical activity you enjoy. This not only helps with weight loss but also boosts your mood and self-esteem.
I hope you find these ideas useful. Can’t wait to hear about your good news!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Linda回信,就她因为肥胖问题而遭到同学的嘲笑的事给予安慰,并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
嘲笑:tease→make fun of
重要:essential→vital
忽略:ignore→neglect/overlook
促进:boost→improve
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:When it comes to such a situation, there are a few things you can consider.
拓展句:There are a few things you can consider, which can help you handle such a situation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been teased about your weight. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First and foremost, it’s essential to focus on your own feelings and ignore the negative comments. (运用了“it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正主语”结构)
主题01 建议信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·六安一中·期末)
1.假定你是李华,你的笔友Bruce最近沉迷于抖音无法自拔,向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和关心;
2.沉迷抖音的危害;
3.你的建议及理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词汇:抖音Tik Tok
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【答案】Dear Bruce,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from Tik Tok addiction. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about Tik Tok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study. Therefore, I think it is a must for you to take action. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess. Besides, you had better make more friends through face-to-face communication.
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给寻求帮助的笔友Bruce写回信,告知他沉迷抖音的危害,并给出自己的建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遗憾的:sorry→regretful
受……之苦: suffer from→ be subjected to
实际上:actually→as a matter of fact/in practice/in effect/in fact
对……着迷,发狂:get crazy about→be addicted to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about Tik Tok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.
拓展句:Actually, it is common to see an increasing number of teenagers, who get crazy about Tik Tok and spend a lot of time, watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about Tik Tok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.(运用了主语从句,现在分词形式作伴随状语,非限制性定语从句)
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·安徽合肥·期末)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Judy最近总是感觉身体不适,来信询问你如何保持身体健康。请你根据以下要点,鼓励她改善身体现状。要点包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Judy,
I am really sorry to know that you have been suffering from poor health these days. In response to your request in the last letter, I am glad to offer my advice.
First of all, a balanced diet is of prime importance, considering how obsessed you are with sweet food. It is urgent that you eat more fresh vegetables and fruit and avoid food high in fat and sugar. Besides, daily exercise is equally important. Stick to it, and you will definitely get in better shape. Furthermore, it is said that you will have a healthier heart with at least 7 hours of sleep every night. So, do get enough sleep! One more thing: stay positive and smile more.
Hope what is mentioned above can be of help. Look forward to your recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Judy写信鼓励她改善身体状况,并就她询问的如何保持身体健康提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
紧急的:urgent →pressing
痴迷于:be obsessed with →be attracted to
此外:besides →what’s more
足够的:enough →adequate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句:In response to your request in the last letter, I am glad to offer my advice.拓展句: I am glad to offer my advice, which is in response to your request in the last letter.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Stick to it, and you will definitely get in better shape.(运用了“祈使句+and+陈述句”结构)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, it is said that you will have a healthier heart with at least 7 hours of sleep every night.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
主题02 申请信
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·亳州二中·期末)
假如你是高一学生李华,你校英语阅读社 (English Reading Club)正在招募(recruit) 新成员,你非常渴望加入。请你用英语写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 加入英语阅读社的原因;
3. 希望获准。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按照以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a freshman in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a freshman at our school. Learning that the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
Reading classics can not only give me a deep insight into history and culture, but also broaden my horizons. The club, therefore, becomes what I’m eager to join. For one thing, challenging to read books in the original will definitely improve my English level. For another, I can make more like-minded friends, participate in its activities and contribute my ideas. Understanding the responsibilities that come with membership, I assure you of my commitment and active participation.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语阅读社 (English Reading Club)正在招募(recruit) 新成员这一情况,你非常渴望加入,用英语写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
拓宽:broaden→ widen
渴望做某事:be eager to do→ desire to do
提高,增强:improve→ enhance
参加:participate in→ taking part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
拓展句:Because I learn the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Understanding the responsibilities that come with membership, I assure you of my commitment and active participation.(运用了that引导定语从句和现在分词形式作状语。)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.(运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句。)
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·合肥一中·期末)
假定你是李华,得知由于国际交流的需要,你校的校史馆正在招募英文讲解员, 请你向负责人Harry老师写一封申请信。要点如下:
1.写信目的
2.个人优势
3.能做的事情
参考词汇:commentator 讲解员注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Harry,
Hearing that you are looking for a part-time English commentator, I am writing to apply for the position.
First of all, having studied English for about ten years, I have a good command of English and I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. Secondly, since I grew up here, I am quite familiar with the history and traditions of our cities, as well as our school. Furthermore, as a kind and brave and outgoing girl, I can get along well with different people. I am sure foreigners will be satisfied with my thoughtful and excellent service.
I would deeply appreciate it if you could give me the precious chance to serve as a commentator. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生向负责给校史馆招募英文讲解员的负责人Harry老师写一封申请信,自荐自己说明自己的优势。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻找:look for → search for
擅长:have a good command of → be expert at
流利地,熟练地:fluently → skillfully
与……相处好:get along well with → get on well with
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:First of all, having studied English for about ten years, I have a good command of English and I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently.
拓展句:First of all, as I have studied English for about ten years, I am expert at English and I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
First of all, having studied English for about ten years, I have a good command of English and I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
I am sure foreigners will be satisfied with my thoughtful and excellent service. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
主题03 通知
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·淮北一中·期末)
假定你是校英语报记者李华,今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动,请你就此次活动写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:地震应急疏散演练earthquake emergency evacuation drill
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【答案】To make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake, our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today.
Before the drill started, our teachers gave us some basic and useful instructions on what to do during an earthquake. When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order. Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster.
This drill is really meaningful and helpful, from which we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动”一事写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organize→conduct
聚集:gather→get together
意味深长的:meaningful→significant
有序的:in order→in an orderly manner
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake, our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today.
拓展句:Our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today, which aimed to make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This drill is really meaningful and helpful, from which we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·安徽庐江·期末)
近期你校将举办一场“用英文讲好中国故事”(Tell Good Chinese Stories in English)的英文演讲比赛,请你代表学生会在学校公众号上用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 比赛信息;
3. 欢迎报名。
注意:写作词数应为 80 左右;可适当增加细节。
NOTICE
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Student Union
【答案】NOTICE
In order to help students improve their English and raise their interest in Chinese culture, our school will hold an English speech contest “Tell Good Chinese Stories in English” in the school auditorium at 3 p.m. next Friday. We will set first, second and third prizes. All grades are welcome to participate, and each class leader is expected to turn in the list of participants this week. Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to sign up for the event.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知,通知学校将举办的一场“用英文讲好中国故事”的英文演讲比赛的有关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
竞赛:contest→competition
参加:participate→take part
班长:class leader→monitor
任何……的人:anyone who→whoever
2.句式拓展
单句变复合句
原句:We will set first, second and third prizes.
拓展句:We will set first, second and third prizes, which will encourage the enthusiasm of all participants.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to help students improve their English and raise their interest in Chinese culture, our school will hold an English speech contest “Tell Good Chinese Stories in English” in the school auditorium at 3 p.m. next Friday. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to sign up for the event. (运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24高一上·安徽蚌埠·期末)
假如你是李华。上周,你校学生会组织了“冬日暖衣(Warm Clothes For Winter)”活动,为贫困山区儿童献爱心。请你为校英语报写一篇相关报道。内容如下:
1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动意义。
注意:1. 词数100 词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Warm Clothes, Warm Heart
Last week, the Student Union in our school organized an activity named “Warm Clothes for Winter” to show love and care to the children in the poverty-stricken mountainous areas.
Nearly all the students took an active part in this special activity, donating clothes, gloves and so on to help the less fortunate live through the freezing winter. The activity was welcomed by both the students and the poor children far away.
Unquestionably, students find such an activity quite rewarding. Not only do they know that they have improved the lives of others, but also they feel a strong sense of achievement. It is giving that makes the difference.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学生会组织的“冬日暖衣(Warm Clothes For Winter)”活动写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:activity→event
地区:area → region/district
参加:take part in→join in
当然:Unquestionably→ Certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nearly all the students took an active part in this special activity, donating clothes, gloves and so on to help the less fortunate live through the freezing winter.
拓展句:Nearly all the students took an active part in this special activity, in which they donated clothes, gloves and so on to help the less fortunate live through the freezing winter.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, the Student Union in our school organized an activity named “Warm Clothes for Winter” to show love and care to the children in the poverty-stricken mountainous areas.(运用了非谓语动词named “Warm Clothes for Winter”作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Not only do they know that they have improved the lives of others, but also they feel a strong sense of achievement. (运用了not only置于句首的倒装句)
主题04 告知信
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·安徽六安二中·期末)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。在寒假即将到来之际,你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你的假期计划,请你给他回信,根据以下要点介绍你所规划的假期生活。
form a good living habit arrange time properly develop interests and hobbies
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How are you? The winter holiday is coming.
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Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How are you? The winter holiday is coming. I’d like to share my plan with you.
During the holiday, I will form a good living habit, trying not to stay up late. I will also arrange time properly to improve myself. For example, I will do more reading. In addition, it is a good time for me to develop my interests and hobbies, such as singing and playing basketball. Apart from that, I plan to be a volunteer in my community. In a word, my winter holiday is bound to be rich and colorful!
How about your holiday life? Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours truly,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom回信,介绍你所规划的寒假假期生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
假期:holiday→vacation
在……期间:during →for the duration of
例如:for example→for instance
另外:in addition→additionally
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The winter holiday is coming.
拓展句:The winter vacation is approaching.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During the holiday, I will form a good living habit, trying not to stay up late.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】In addition, it is a good time for me to develop my interests and hobbies, such as singing and playing basketball.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语,动名词作宾语)
Passage 2
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假定你是李华, 你的美国朋友Charles将来中国过春节并了解到将会收到中国亲友的压岁钱(lucky money)。因此, 他来信想了解压岁钱这一中国春节习俗。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 压岁钱的寓意;
2. 收压岁钱的礼仪。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Charles,
Aware that you will come to China and are interested in the culture of lucky money, I’m happy to tell you something about it.
Lucky money, given to children by their elders as a way to express good wishes, holds a deep symbolic meaning in Chinese culture. In addition, the red envelopes believed to drive away evil spirits symbolize prosperity and happiness.
When children receive lucky money, there are certain good manners to follow. Children should greet their elders respectfully with phrases like “Happy New Year”. They should also take the envelope with both hands and say “Thank you” to show gratitude and respect towards their elders.
Overall, lucky money is an important part of Chinese New Year celebrations. I hope you will enjoy the Spring Festival in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生美国朋友Charles写一封回信,向他介绍压岁钱这一中国春节习俗。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
另外:In addition→What’s more
感激:gratitude→thanks
总之:Overall→All in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Lucky money, given to children by their elders as a way to express good wishes, holds a deep symbolic meaning in Chinese culture.
拓展句:Lucky money, which is given to children by their elders as a way to express good wishes, holds a deep symbolic meaning in Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Lucky money, given to children by their elders as a way to express good wishes, holds a deep symbolic meaning in Chinese culture.(运用了过去分词given充当后置定语)
【高分句型2】In addition, the red envelopes believed to drive away evil spirits symbolize prosperity and happiness.(运用了过去分词believed充当定语修饰名词短语red envelopes)
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