专题09 书面表达（期末真题汇编，吉林专用）八年级英语上学期

专题10 书面表达 主题01 人与社会——意见 /建议 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市长春外国语学校·期末） 假设你是Mike，你朋友Jack在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到紧张和郁闷。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信，给他提一些建议，帮助他克服困难，轻松愉快地学习和生活。 提示： 1. 每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候； 2. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通； 3. 关于如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活提一至两条建议。 要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校和自己的真实名字； 2. 语句连贯、通顺，60-70词。已给出部分，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省吉林市第五中学·期末） 假如你是Susan，你的朋友Leo最近心情不好，他觉得自己很努力在学习，成绩却不理想，另外，他还觉得孤独缺少朋友，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，针对他的问题提出你的建议。 要求：   1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 2.语句通顺，符合逻辑，内容可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实人名或班级。 Dear Leo, I’m sorry to hear that ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Susan 主题02 人与社会——计划 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市宽城区·期末） 人们常说：“帮助他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的寒假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文，介绍你的寒假计划及你对帮助他人的看法。 Places Activities community (社区) center help the old, sing songs... community park (s) pick up rubbish (垃圾) , clean the snow... … … 要求：1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ； 4. 词数不少于 80词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市南关区·期末） 回首过去，你可能有烦恼有不足；展望未来，你也一定会有计划有打算。请你回顾这一年的生活，谈一谈你的烦恼或不足，并且说一说新的一年你将如何改进。 要点： 1. 叙述你经历的一件事 (可从身体健康、人际关系、自我提升等方面任选一个角度) 2. 新的一年你将如何改进? 要求： 1. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，不少于80词。 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 人与自我——梦想 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市公主岭市·期末） 规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等真实信息。 2.词数80-100词，标题和短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.字迹工整，语言准确，逻辑清晰。 My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市第五十五中学校·期末） 每个人都有自己的理想，有的想成为一名老师，有的想成为一名医生，有的想成为一名科学家等等。请以I want to be...为题写一遍短文，谈谈你的想法。 要求：1.书写认真，字迹清晰。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题01 人与自我——健康 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省吉林市船营区吉林七中大学区·期末） 决心是内心深处的驱动力。有了决心，我们才能在漫长的征程中保持专注与执着，将计划从纸上蓝图转化为现实成就，塑造出更强大、更坚定的自我，开启不断成长与蜕变的大门。请以“Making resolutions is important”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括： （1）下决心的重要性； （2）下决心的益处； （3）简述你自身经历中与下决心相关的一个事例； （4）发起关于下决心的倡议。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数80~100； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Making resolutions is important ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市榆树市慧望初级中学·期末） 根据省教育厅最新的新闻发布会，将冰雪运动纳入中考体育测试选项。此发布一出，引起了许多人的热议，人们认为，从健康角度，有助于让学生提高身体素质，培养运动习惯；从文化方面，能弘扬冰雪文化，提升城市形象，吸引更多的游客。而且，寒假的第一周为雪假，旨在让学生更能亲近自然，体验冰雪运动的乐趣。 从你的角度，以How to Spend the One-week Snow Holiday为题，请你谈一谈，你会怎样利用这为期一周的雪假。 写作要求： 1. 词数在80左右，包含所有要点，可以适当扩展。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 人与社会——个人经历 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市经开区·期末） “经一事，长一智。”人生，就是在经历中成长，在成长中经历。请结合自己的学习和生活，分享一段自己遇到问题及解决问题的经历，请以“Learning from the experience”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求：（1）讲述一段自身的经历； （2）分享感悟、感想； （3）适当增加细节，行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市二道区·期末） 在我们身边，总有一些人能让我们成为更好的自己。请以“________ brings out the best in me”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求： (1)结合自己的经历； (2)你的成长或感悟； (3)适当增加细节，行文连贯； (4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 人与社会——情感 Passage 1 （2015九年级·江苏泰州·初中毕业升学考试） 中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。 你的烦恼 你的做法 个头不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己 父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人 学习压力大，课外活动少 ……（自主发挥，至少两点） 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you! Passage 2 （23-24八年级上·吉林省长春市南关区东北师大附中明珠学校·期末） 感恩是一种精神财富，也是一种品德情怀。在你成长的路上，有太多的人在你身后默默地支持与付出。我校开展主题为“成长路上，感恩有他（她）”的征文活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇英语短文谈谈你最想感激的人及原因，并表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 要求： 1. 无须翻译作文材料； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达 主题01 人与社会——意见 /建议 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市长春外国语学校·期末） 假设你是Mike，你朋友Jack在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到紧张和郁闷。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信，给他提一些建议，帮助他克服困难，轻松愉快地学习和生活。 提示： 1. 每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候； 2. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通； 3. 关于如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活提一至两条建议。 要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校和自己的真实名字； 2. 语句连贯、通顺，60-70词。已给出部分，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. But I think talking to someone helps a lot. First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it. Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Last, it’s best to smile at yourself and never keep problems to yourself. Yours, Mike 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候； 第二步，就面对的问题或烦恼给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with sb. 与某人交流 ②cut ... in half  把……切成两半 ③take part in 参加 [高分句型] ①First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.（动名词作主语） Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省吉林市第五中学·期末） 假如你是Susan，你的朋友Leo最近心情不好，他觉得自己很努力在学习，成绩却不理想，另外，他还觉得孤独缺少朋友，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，针对他的问题提出你的建议。 要求：   1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 2.语句通顺，符合逻辑，内容可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实人名或班级。 Dear Leo, I’m sorry to hear that ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Susan 【答案】例文： Dear Leo, I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling down. About your study, you should remember that hard work often pays off, so don’t give up. Maybe you can change a better learning method. For example, try to review what you’ve learned regularly and seek help from teachers or classmates if needed. As for feeling lonely, join school clubs or activities where you can meet people with similar interests. Making friends takes time, but you will find people who care about you. Stay positive and keep reaching out. I’m here for you. Yours, Susan 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据题干中Leo提到的问题给出建议，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，表达对对方的苦恼很遗憾； 第二步，从“学习，交友”等方面给出建议； 第三步，最后再次表达支持。 [亮点词汇] ① hard work努力工作 ② give up放弃 ③ pay off得到回报 ④ care about关心 [高分句型] ① About your study, you should remember that hard work often pays off, so don’t give up.（宾语从句） ② Making friends takes time, but you will find people who care about you.（定语从句） 主题02 人与社会——计划 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市宽城区·期末） 人们常说：“帮助他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的寒假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文，介绍你的寒假计划及你对帮助他人的看法。 Places Activities community (社区) center help the old, sing songs... community park (s) pick up rubbish (垃圾) , clean the snow... … … 要求：1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ； 4. 词数不少于 80词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming, I’ll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs for them and tell them some interesting stories. Next, I’m going to visit the sick people at our community hospital. I’ll look after them carefully and talk with them. Then, I also plan to pick up the rubbish and clean the snow with my friends in our community park. And I will water flowers in the park, too. What’s more, I’ll go to our community school. I plan to help the kids with their lessons and play games with them as well. I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给的提示要点，介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，为下文介绍具体的服务计划作铺垫； 第二步，逐一介绍自己的计划安排； 第三步，最后表达自己对于这个假期的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①look after 照顾 ②What’s more 此外 ③plan to do sth. 计划做某事 ④help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer. (宾语从句) Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市南关区·期末） 回首过去，你可能有烦恼有不足；展望未来，你也一定会有计划有打算。请你回顾这一年的生活，谈一谈你的烦恼或不足，并且说一说新的一年你将如何改进。 要点： 1. 叙述你经历的一件事 (可从身体健康、人际关系、自我提升等方面任选一个角度) 2. 新的一年你将如何改进? 要求： 1. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，不少于80词。 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In the past, I was deeply confused about making friends. When I entered a new school, everyone seemed to have found their groups quickly, but I was left standing alone. During lunch breaks, I often sat by myself, watching my classmates chat and laugh. I felt really lonely. It was a cycle of longing to connect but being too afraid to take the first step. In the future, to solve this problem, I plan to start with small talk, like asking about the homework or complimenting someone on their new shoes. I’ll show my smile and make eye contact with others, which I know are important in making a good impression. I am also going to join clubs or school activities, and share interests with people there. By joining the club or the basketball team, I can meet people who like the same things as I do and build friendships based on common interests. In a word, where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I can surely succeed. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：本文主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：从自身出发叙述自己经历的一件事，适当添加细节，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己过去经历的事情以及感受； 第二步，展望新的一年如何改进； 第三步，最后对自己的改进表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends交朋友 ②by oneself独自 ③share...with sb和某人分享 [高分句型] ①By joining the club or the basketball team, I can meet people who like the same things as I do and build friendships based on common interests.(who引导定语从句) ②I believe I can surely succeed.(宾语从句) 主题03 人与自我——梦想 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市公主岭市·期末） 规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等真实信息。 2.词数80-100词，标题和短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.字迹工整，语言准确，逻辑清晰。 My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think a doctor is a very noble profession. They can save people’s lives and help them get rid of pain and illness. I want to be a doctor who can make a difference in people’s lives and bring hope to those in need. In my imagination, I will wear a white coat and work diligently to diagnose and treat patients. I will listen to their concerns and try my best to provide the best medical care. To achieve my dream, I know I need to study hard and acquire a lot of knowledge. I will focus on my studies in science and medicine. I believe that with perseverance and hard work, I can realize my dream. In addition, I hope to create a warm and friendly working environment. I will treat my patients with kindness and respect. I am looking forward to the day when I become a doctor and fulfill my dream. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的梦想； 第二步，介绍自己理想的工作地方及如何实现梦想； 第三步，总结全文，尽全力实现自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①get rid of摆脱 ②make a difference有影响 ③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①To achieve my dream, I know I need to study hard and acquire a lot of knowledge. (to do 表目的) ②I believe that with perseverance and hard work, I can realize my dream. (宾语从句) Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市第五十五中学校·期末） 每个人都有自己的理想，有的想成为一名老师，有的想成为一名医生，有的想成为一名科学家等等。请以I want to be...为题写一遍短文，谈谈你的想法。 要求：1.书写认真，字迹清晰。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a teacher From a young age, I have admired the way teachers inspire and educate their students. Teachers play an important role in shaping the future by teaching knowledge and good values. I believe that teaching is not just about study lessons, but also about life lessons. As a teacher, I want to help my students discover their potential and guide them in becoming the best version of themselves. To realize this dream, I will focus on improving my communication skills and gaining knowledge in different subjects. I would like to make a positive influence on my students’ lives and contribute to society. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，表达理想职业是教师； 第二步：叙述自己选择这一理想的原因； 第三步：讲述实现这一理想的具体措施和个人愿景。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 ②focus on 专注于 ③make a positive influence on 对……产生积极影响 [高分句型] ①I believe that teaching is not just about study lessons, but also about life lessons.（宾语从句） ②To realize this dream, I will focus on improving my communication skills and gaining knowledge in different subjects.（不定式作目的状语） 主题01 人与自我——健康 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省吉林市船营区吉林七中大学区·期末） 决心是内心深处的驱动力。有了决心，我们才能在漫长的征程中保持专注与执着，将计划从纸上蓝图转化为现实成就，塑造出更强大、更坚定的自我，开启不断成长与蜕变的大门。请以“Making resolutions is important”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括： （1）下决心的重要性； （2）下决心的益处； （3）简述你自身经历中与下决心相关的一个事例； （4）发起关于下决心的倡议。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数80~100； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Making resolutions is important ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Making resolutions is important As an eighth-grader, this year I’ve realized that making resolutions is an important part of personal growth. I’ve decided to focus on two main areas: study and health. Firstly, I want to improve my grades. I know that success in school is crucial for my future, so I’ve decided to be more organized and proactive with my studies. I plan to create a daily study schedule and stick to it. Secondly, I’m committed to improving my health. Last year. I was in poor health. I plan to go to the gym with my friends after school. I also plan to eat healthier food such as fruits and vegetables in my diet. I believe that if we stick to our resolutions, we will become better students. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”为主；   ③提示：写作应包括给出的内容要点，适当补充，使文章内容充实；适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。   [写作步骤]   第一步，说明下决心的重要性；   第二步，阐述自己要下决心的事情；   第三步，发起关于下决心的倡议。   [亮点词汇]   ①focus on专心，注意   ②crucial关键的 ③stick to坚持 [高分句型]   ①I know that success in school is crucial for my future, so I’ve decided to be more organized and proactive with my studies. (宾语从句)   ②I believe that if we stick to our resolutions, we will become better students. (宾语从句和状语从句) Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市榆树市慧望初级中学·期末） 根据省教育厅最新的新闻发布会，将冰雪运动纳入中考体育测试选项。此发布一出，引起了许多人的热议，人们认为，从健康角度，有助于让学生提高身体素质，培养运动习惯；从文化方面，能弘扬冰雪文化，提升城市形象，吸引更多的游客。而且，寒假的第一周为雪假，旨在让学生更能亲近自然，体验冰雪运动的乐趣。 从你的角度，以How to Spend the One-week Snow Holiday为题，请你谈一谈，你会怎样利用这为期一周的雪假。 写作要求： 1. 词数在80左右，包含所有要点，可以适当扩展。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Spend the One-week Snow Holiday With the news that ice and snow sports will be included in the high school entrance exam, there has been a lot of discussion about it. It is thought that, on the one hand, it is good for students’ health because it helps them get fitter and develop the habit of exercise. On the other hand, it can also make the city more popular and attract more tourists by getting people interested in ice and snow sports. During this snow holiday, I plan to fully enjoy the winter wonderland. I will try different ice and snow activities like ice skating and skiing, and build snowmen. I will also spend time with my family and friends, doing fun winter activities and making memories that will last. In short, this is a great idea that encourages healthy living, learning about other cultures, and spending time with family. I can’t wait to enjoy the snow holiday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，介绍将冰雪运动纳入中考体育测试引发的热议； 第二步，具体阐述热议的观点，以及自己如何利用一周的雪假； 第三步，表达对于雪假的看法和期待。 [亮点词汇] ①include包含，包括 ②on the one hand ... on the other hand一方面……另一方面 ③plan to do sth. 计划做某事 ④wonderland奇境 ⑤spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ⑥in short简而言之 [高分句型] ① With the news that ice and snow sports will be included in the high school entrance exam, there has been a lot of discussion about it. (同位语从句) ② It is thought that, on the one hand, it is good for students’ health because it helps them get fitter and develop the habit of exercise. (主语从句，原因状语从句) 主题02 人与社会——个人经历 Passage 1 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市经开区·期末） “经一事，长一智。”人生，就是在经历中成长，在成长中经历。请结合自己的学习和生活，分享一段自己遇到问题及解决问题的经历，请以“Learning from the experience”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求：（1）讲述一段自身的经历； （2）分享感悟、感想； （3）适当增加细节，行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Learning from the experience I used to struggle with speaking English. I was too shy to talk in English in public. As a result, my communication skills in English were poor and my grades suffered. To overcome this, I took action. I started practicing in front of the mirror every day and joined an English corner. At first, it was tough and I made many errors, but I didn’t give up. I kept practicing and kept learning from my mistakes. Gradually, I became more confident and was able to express myself more clearly. This experience taught me that we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. By facing challenges and working hard, we can grow and improve. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，不遗漏要点，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己曾经遇到的问题； 第二步，介绍解决问题的过程； 第三步，表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常 ②struggle with与……斗争 ③as a result结果 ④take action采取行动 ⑤gradually逐渐地 [高分句型] ① At first, it was tough and I made many errors, but I didn’t give up. (并列句) ② This experience taught me that we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. (宾语从句) Passage 2 （24-25八年级上·吉林省长春市二道区·期末） 在我们身边，总有一些人能让我们成为更好的自己。请以“________ brings out the best in me”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求： (1)结合自己的经历； (2)你的成长或感悟； (3)适当增加细节，行文连贯； (4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My father brings out the best in me My father always loves me and tries to help me. When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books. No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.   【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：先把题目补全，再结合自己的经历围绕主题进行写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，说明谁让你成长为更好的自己； 第二步，结合经历，描述具体的事例，讲述这个人如何让你展现出最好的自己； 第三步，讲述自己的感悟与成长。 [亮点词汇] ①day by day日复一日 ②the importance of learning学习的重要性 ③become interested in doing sth对做某事感兴趣 ④grow up长大[高分句型] ①I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. (so…that引导结果状语从句) ②No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. (no matter what引导让步状语从句) 主题03 人与社会——情感 Passage 1 （2015九年级·江苏泰州·初中毕业升学考试） 中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。 你的烦恼 你的做法 个头不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己 父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人 学习压力大，课外活动少 ……（自主发挥，至少两点） 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself. My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well. I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。 写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。 【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。 Passage 2 （23-24八年级上·吉林省长春市南关区东北师大附中明珠学校·期末） 感恩是一种精神财富，也是一种品德情怀。在你成长的路上，有太多的人在你身后默默地支持与付出。我校开展主题为“成长路上，感恩有他（她）”的征文活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇英语短文谈谈你最想感激的人及原因，并表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 要求： 1. 无须翻译作文材料； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Thank you, my mother I would like to share my personal experience and express my gratitude for my mother. My mother is an excellent woman who is always there for me throughout my life. She offers her time and energy to make sure that I have a comfortable life. She supports me in every decision I make, encourages me during difficult times, and celebrates all of my happy moments. Through her actions rather than words alone, she taught me valuable life lessons. In conclusion, her love has shaped who I am. I will continue treasuring every moment spent with her while trying my best to make her proud. 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；   ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，表明写作意图。点明你想要感激的人。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从感激他（她）的原因、表达你对他（她）的感激之情开展写作，涵盖所提示的要点。   第三步，书写结语。   [亮点词汇] ① personal experience 自身经历   ② gratitude 感激 ③ make sure 确保   ④ rather than 而不是 ⑤ in conclusion 总之 [高分句型]   ① In conclusion, her love has shaped who I am.（who引导的宾语从句）   ② I will continue treasuring every moment spent with her while trying my best to make her proud.（while引导的时间状语从句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $