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高中英语读后续写高级句型素材及其在高考真题中的英语 ——以高考真题《母亲节的惊喜早餐》为例 高中英语读后续写高级句型素材 1. 情感描写句——使用情感万能句 Sb. felt a great sense of ＋情绪名词＋ welling up in sb.’ s heart and surging through sb． 表示“某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌” 表示情绪的名词： ①表示高兴：delight高兴/ joy高兴/ relief欣慰 ②表示激动：excitement兴奋/ surprise/ amazement惊讶 ③表示伤心、失望： sorrow悲伤/ grief悲伤/ disappointment失望/ depression/ frustration沮丧/ sadness哀伤/ annoyance烦恼 ④表示害怕：fear/ scare/ fright/ horror/ terror ⑤表示生气：anger/ rage愤怒 ⑥表示忧虑：anxiety / worry / concern着急/ tension紧张 ⑦其他类：guilt内疚/ shame羞耻/ satisfaction满足/ regret后悔/ confusion 困惑/ tiredness/ exhaustion疲惫/ embarrassment尴尬/ gratitude感激/ relief如释重负 例句1：Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾、奔涌。 Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her. 例句2: Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾、奔涌。 Jessica felt a great sense of delight welling up in her heart and surging through her. 2. 情感描写句——使用独立主格（with+）n + doing, .... 例句：泪水顺着我的脸颊滑落，模糊了我的视线，我被扔进了悲伤和痛苦的深渊。 Tears streaming down my face and blurring my vision, I was thrown into the abyss（深渊）of grief and sorrow. 3. 细节描写句 （1）doing A，主语＋谓语 B，doing C 例句：她怒火中烧，用那双令人恐惧的眼睛瞪着我，大喊道：“你真是太疯狂了。” Burning with anger, she glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling/ shouting, “You’ re so crazy.” （2）Having done A..., 主语＋谓语B 已经…，某人… 例句：已经排队等了三个小时，他被告知票卖光了。 Having queued/ waited for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out. （3) done A, 主语＋谓语B, doing C 例句：受到老师的鼓励，Lucy举起手，小声说，我想试一试。 Encouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I want to have a try.” （4）使用 with 复合结构 例句1：Jenny 缓缓向前走去，双腿颤抖，心跳加速。 Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast. 例句2：她紧张地走进面试房间，双手颤抖，满脑子都是担忧。 She entered the interview room nervously, with her hands shaking and her mind filled with worries. （5）使用倒装句 so…that…句型 例句1：我震惊得睁大眼睛，目瞪口呆。 So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open. 例句2：我太紧张了，脑子一片空白。 So nervous was I that my mind went blank.       4. 过渡衔接句——使用时间状语从句、定语从句或形容词作状语 如when / while / as / before / after引导的时间状语从句 例句1：当我到达那里时，我走到门口敲了敲门。（时间状语从句） When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked. 例句2：那个女孩站在那，盯着食物看，又冷又饿。（形容词作状语） The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry. 5. 所感/所悟句 ... might go away, but ... endures. 例句：从这个故事，我学会了艰难或许存在，但是那份坚持下去的勇气始终持续。 From this experience / story, l learned that hardship might exist, but the courage to keep going endures. 6. 结尾句：表达难忘 例句：那一天/那个经历太难忘了，以至于我永远都会记得。 That day/ experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 高考真题 【真题再现】 1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE      The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.      The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.      Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【答案】 Paragraph 1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He had been woken up by the slight commotion and smiled softly at the messy kitchen and the twins’ dejected faces. “Don’ t lose heart—mothers cherish efforts more than perfection,” he said, rolling up his sleeves to help. With his guidance, Jeff cleaned the stove carefully while Jenna prepared fresh rice for porridge. Having adjusted the fire to the right temperature, they fried the bread slices until golden brown, and the porridge simmered gently with a fragrant aroma. A great sense of relief welled up in the twins’ hearts as they watched the breakfast take shape. Paragraph 2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. With the tray in their hands, they walked quietly to the bedside, their eyes shining with excitement. When Mother opened her eyes and saw the steaming French toast and porridge, she let out a soft gasp of surprise. “Happy Mother’ s Day!” the twins shouted in unison. So touched was she that tears streamed down her cheeks as she took a bite. The breakfast might not have been perfect, but the love behind it made it the most delicious meal she had ever tasted. This precious morning was so unforgettable that it would stay in her memory forever, reminding her of the pure love from her children. 【翻译】 第一段 当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，父亲出现了。之前的一点动静把他吵醒了，看着乱糟糟的厨房和双胞胎垂头丧气的样子，他温柔地笑了。“别灰心——妈妈们看重的是心意，而不是完美，”他一边说，一边卷起袖子准备帮忙。在父亲的指导下，杰夫仔细清理了灶台，詹娜则重新准备了煮粥用的大米。调好合适的火候后，他们把面包片煎至金黄，粥也在锅里慢慢熬着，散发出阵阵香气。看着早餐逐渐成型，双胞胎的心里涌起一股强烈的欣慰感。 第二段 双胞胎端着早餐上楼，叫醒了妈妈。他们双手托着托盘，轻手轻脚地走到床边，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。妈妈睁开眼，看到冒着热气的法式吐司和粥时，惊喜地轻轻吸了一口气。“母亲节快乐！”双胞胎齐声喊道。妈妈感动极了，泪水顺着脸颊滑落，她咬了一口早餐。这份早餐或许并不完美，但其中蕴含的爱意，让它成为了妈妈吃过的最美味的一餐。这个珍贵的早晨如此令人难忘，将永远留在她的记忆中，时刻提醒着她来自孩子们的纯真爱意。 【分析】 读后续写答案与高级句型对应分析 1. 句子：He had been woken up by the slight commotion and smiled softly at the messy kitchen and the twins’ dejected faces. - - 所用高级句型：“细节描写句——Having done A..., 主语＋谓语B”的变形（此处用“had been done”表被动完成，逻辑与“Having done”一致，均为“先发生某动作，再发生主句动作”） - - 具体用法：先交代“父亲被动静吵醒”这一前提动作（had been woken up by the slight commotion），再描述主句动作“微笑看着厨房和双胞胎”（smiled softly at...），通过动作先后顺序的衔接，让场景更具连贯性，符合“先有前提，再有后续行为”的细节描写逻辑。 2. 句子：With his guidance, Jeff cleaned the stove carefully while Jenna prepared fresh rice for porridge. - - 所用高级句型：“细节描写句——使用with复合结构” - - 具体用法：用“With his guidance”（在他的指导下）这一with复合结构，简洁交代出双胞胎后续行动的背景条件，避免句子冗长；同时结合“while”表对比，清晰呈现杰夫和詹娜分工协作的场景，符合“with复合结构+主句”的细节补充模式，让句子层次更分明。 3. 句子：Having adjusted the fire to the right temperature, they fried the bread slices until golden brown, and the porridge simmered gently with a fragrant aroma. - - 所用高级句型：“细节描写句——Having done A..., 主语＋谓语B” - - 具体用法：先描述“调好火候”这一准备动作（Having adjusted the fire...），再衔接主句“煎面包、粥慢熬”的核心场景（they fried... and the porridge simmered...），通过“Having done”体现动作的先后逻辑（先调火候，再烹饪），让烹饪过程的描写更有条理，符合细节描写中“动作连贯”的要求。 4. 句子：A great sense of relief welled up in the twins’ hearts as they watched the breakfast take shape. - - 所用高级句型：“情感描写句——Sb. felt a great sense of ＋情绪名词＋ welling up in sb.’s heart and surging through sb．”（此处省略“felt”，直接用“情绪名词+welling up”，核心结构一致） - - 具体用法：用“a great sense of relief”（强烈的欣慰感）作为情绪名词短语，搭配“welled up in the twins’ hearts”（在双胞胎心中升腾），精准刻画双胞胎看到早餐成型时的情感变化，符合“情绪名词+welling up”的情感描写框架，让情感表达更具象、有画面感。 5. 句子：With the tray in their hands, they walked quietly to the bedside, their eyes shining with excitement. - - 所用高级句型：“细节描写句——使用with复合结构”及“情感描写句——使用独立主格（with+）n + doing” - - 具体用法：前半部分“With the tray in their hands”（双手托着托盘）用with复合结构交代双胞胎的动作状态；后半部分“their eyes shining with excitement”（眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒）用独立主格结构补充外貌与情感细节，通过“动作状态+情感外貌”的双重细节描写，让双胞胎上楼送早餐的场景更生动，符合“with复合结构+独立主格”的细节叠加模式。 6. 句子：When Mother opened her eyes and saw the steaming French toast and porridge, she let out a soft gasp of surprise. - - 所用高级句型：“过渡衔接句——使用时间状语从句（when引导）” - - 具体用法：用“when”引导时间状语从句（When Mother opened her eyes and saw...），交代“妈妈看到早餐”这一触发场景，再衔接主句“发出惊喜的喘息”（she let out a soft gasp of surprise），通过时间状语从句实现“场景触发+反应”的逻辑衔接，让妈妈的反应更具合理性，符合“when从句+主句”的过渡衔接框架。 7. 句子：So touched was she that tears streamed down her cheeks as she took a bite. - - 所用高级句型：“细节描写句——使用倒装句so…that…句型” - - 具体用法：将“so touched”（如此感动）置于句首，引发部分倒装（So touched was she），再用“that”引导结果状语从句（that tears streamed down...），通过倒装结构强调妈妈的感动程度，让情感表达更强烈，符合“so+形容词+be动词+主语+that从句”的倒装句型要求。 8. 句子：The breakfast might not have been perfect, but the love behind it made it the most delicious meal she had ever tasted. - - 所用高级句型：“所感/所悟句 ... might go away, but ... endures”（此处“might not have been perfect”与“...might go away”逻辑一致，均表“某事物有不足，但核心价值永存”） - - 具体用法：前半句承认早餐的不完美（The breakfast might not have been perfect），后半句强调背后的爱意（but the love behind it made it...），通过“不足+核心价值”的对比，传递“心意比完美更重要”的感悟，符合“先提不足，再突出核心价值”的所感所悟句逻辑。 9. 句子：This precious morning was so unforgettable that it would stay in her memory forever, reminding her of the pure love from her children. - - 所用高级句型：“结尾句：表达难忘（so...that...句型）”及“细节描写句——doing A，主语＋谓语 B，doing C” - - 具体用法：前半部分“so unforgettable that it would stay in her memory forever”（如此令人难忘，将永远留在她的记忆中）用“so...that...”句型强化“难忘”的程度，符合结尾句“突出记忆深刻”的要求；后半部分“reminding her of the pure love...”（时刻提醒着她来自孩子们的纯真爱意）用现在分词作伴随状语，补充“难忘”的意义，让结尾既有情感升华，又有细节延伸，符合“核心句+伴随状语”的结尾结构。 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $