内容正文:
期中考试“背多分”材料——活动报道模板及其高考真题中的应用
【第一段:1句话】
Aiming to do sth., our school/ the students’ union held...(活动名称)+时间、地点, which turned out to be a great success.
例句:
(1) Aiming to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection(为了提升学生们的环保意识), our school held a handicraft competition to make various artworks made up of used materials, which turned out to be a great success.
(2) Aiming to spread the traditional Chinese culture(为了传播中国传统文化), the student union launched a poetry recitation event last Sunday, which turned out to be a great success.
(3) Aiming to foster creativity and imagination(为了培养创造力和想象力), the art school organized a painting competition, which turned out to be a great success.
【第二段:1个总起句+3个小分句】
【第1句】Some details about this activity are as follows.
【第2、3、4句】
按照时间顺序介绍活动
介绍三项具体的活动内容
介绍两项具体的活动内容
At the beginning, … /Before starting out, …
Then, …
At the end of the activity, …
First of all, …
In addition, / Besides, …
Last but not least, / Finally, …
On the one hand, …
On the other hand, …
【第三段:2句话】
【第1句】The activity was highly spoken of, because it not only…, but also….
例句:
【文化艺术类】
The activity was highly spoken of, because it not only broadened my horizons/ showcased many wonderful masterpieces, but also gave us a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
【体育运动类】
例句:The activity was highly spoken of, because it not only built up our body, but also helped improve our mood.
【户外活动类】
例句:The activity was highly spoken of, because it not only got us close to nature, but also gave us relaxation from heavy schoolwork.
【第2句】All in all, this activity was really a valuable and educational/ meaningful experience.
【高考真题】
(2023浙江1月卷)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:1. 活动的过程;2. 收获与感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【中档作文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Aiming to help students learn about local plants, the Students’ Union organized the "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" activity last weekend on the school campus, which turned out to be a great success.(注:划线部分为活动报道通用模板)
Some details about this activity are as follows. First of all, a biology teacher gave a lecture on common plants’ names and characteristics. In addition, we walked around the campus in groups to observe and identify plants with guidebooks. Last but not least, everyone shared their findings in a small discussion.
The activity was highly spoken of, because it not only enriched our botanical knowledge, but also made us appreciate the beauty of nature around us. All in all, this activity was really a valuable and meaningful experience.
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【高分作文】 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Aimed to raise our awareness about the significance of plants in our daily lives, an unforgettable activity named “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” held by the Students’ Union was launched last Sunday, which turned out to be a hit. (首段看门见山点题—活动目的、对象、时间、地点,总评)(非谓语+高级词汇+定语从句)
As scheduled, we were given a presentation first by a knowledgeable professor about how to identify various plants depending on their characteristics. One of the highlights of the event was when we saw the enchanting maple trees, awesome old pine trees and pleasant carnations. What impressed us most was a massive old pine tree, which served as an ideal shelter for insects. (中段交代活动的详细过程—突出植物主题和认识)(高级词汇+各种从句)
Overall, the activity was literally a valuable and educational experience. Not only did we get acquainted with the plants surrounding us, but also we gained deeper insight into how to preserve them. (尾段点明收获与意义,段首主题句妙)(高级词汇+倒装句)
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