Unit 8 课时4 Section 3 Writing（课件）英语沪教版2024八年级上册

该初中英语课件聚焦“理想宠物”议论文写作，核心知识点为议论文“观点-理由-细节-结论”的基本结构。课堂通过短语积累游戏、养宠利弊讨论导入，结合Li Li和Wang Yao的范文分析，搭建从观点提出到理由阐述的写作支架，衔接导入活动与写作实践。 其亮点在于以“人与动物关系”为主题，通过结构化范文模仿（如猫、狗、兔子写作实例）和分步骤训练（计划-写作-检查），提升学生语言表达能力（语言能力）和逻辑思维（思维品质）。提供连接词模板、实战演练等学习支架，学生能掌握议论文写作方法，教师可直接应用于课堂，高效开展写作教学。

Unit 8 Section 3 Writing Pets and us 沪教版2024英语（八年级上） 1 学习目标 I can provide reasons for or against keeping pets. express my opinion on what animal makes the perfect pet. describe the history of keeping pets. understand the relationship between humans and pets. 2 01 新 课 导 入 03 应 用 实 践 06 回 顾 总 结 07 随 堂 小 练 02 学 习 理 解 04 迁 移 创 新 05 考 点 速 递 学习内容 3 新课导入 1 4 hold sth. in one’s arms in short care for take up less space. make great playmates for these reasons bring you lots of happiness. have no choice but to do 照顾 跟你带来许多快乐 占据少量空间 出于这些原因 抱住某物 成为绝佳玩伴 除了……别无选择 总而言之 Play a game! (短语积累） Discussion: look and say Do you like keeping a dog ? What are the advantages of having a pet? cute hold it in your arm It’s really cute and makes a great playmate. It’s nice to hold them in our arms. faithful, bring us joy Help, become responsible The dog is faithful to people and it can bring lots of joy. Looking after the dog can help us become responsible. Do you like keeping a dog ? What are the advantages of having a pet? Why don’t you like keeping a dog ? Give your reason. Pet dogs leave their hair on the floor and need to be washed often. need open spaces Some pet dogs even attack people. attack Keeping dogs needs fresh air and open spaces. We may have different opinions. Is it a good idea to keep pets? How to give opinions? How to give your opinion in a logical way? Think ..... Is it a good idea to keep pet dogs? Emma and Matt give their opinions on this matter. Keeping pet dogs is a good idea. Keeping pet dogs is not a good idea. State your opinion directly! (开门见山，提出观点） Keeping pet dogs is a good idea, says Li Li.（陈述你的理由） Keeping pet dogs is a good idea. There are lots of reasons for this. First, dogs are really cute. It’s nice to hold them in our arms, and it’s wonderful to see them grow up. Second, we can learn responsibility from keeping dogs. We have to feed them, train them and play with them. According to my mum, this helps us become more responsible people. Young people can learn how to care for others by keeping dogs. A dog will love you faithfully and bring you lots of happiness for many years. So I think it’s a good idea to keep pet dogs.（得出结论） hold in arms feed responsible train cute see grow up faithful love faithfully bring happiness play with care for Li Li’s ideas 13 When we want to give opinions in a logical way, we can write an ____________________. argumentation(议论文） What is the type of this passage? argumentation （议论文） What is an argument? An argument is a discussion where people disagree and give reasons for their views. Basic steps: 议论文基本 写作步骤 opinion reasons supporting details/examples conclusion How to write argument? 学习理解 02 16 Writing an opinion article about the perfect pet Writing Club We are holding a writing competition about pets. Write an article about what animal makes the perfect pet and send it to us. 1 Why does Wang Yao think cats are the perfect pets? Read her article and find out the answer. Cats: the perfect pet I think that cats are the perfect pets. Firstly, cats are clean. Their tongues and paws are great cleaning tools. They spend a lot of time cleaning themselves every day. In addition, cats use a litter box to relieve themselves and cover their own waste. Secondly, cats are quiet. They are much quieter than dogs. If you keep a pet cat, it is unlikely that your neighbours will complain that it makes a loud noise. Thirdly, cats are easy to look after. They are happy staying indoors, eating, sleeping, and playing with small toys. Cat owners do not need to walk their cats. For these reasons, I believe that a cat is the perfect pet for anyone. I think that cats are the perfect pets. Firstly, cats are clean. Their tongues and paws are great cleaning tools. They spend a lot of time cleaning themselves every day. In addition, cats use a litter box to relieve themselves and cover their own waste. Secondly, cats are quiet. They are much quieter than dogs. If you keep a pet cat, it is unlikely that your neighbours will complain that it makes a loud noise. Thirdly, cats are easy to look after. They are happy staying indoors, eating, sleeping, and playing with small toys. Cat owners do not need to walk their cats. For these reasons, I believe that a cat is the perfect pet for anyone. Opinion Reasons Supporting details/ examples Conclusion 文章结构分析： 开头：直接亮明核心观点（猫是完美宠物）。 中间：分 3 个并列理由展开论证（干净、安静、易照顾）， 每个理由配具体细节支撑。 结尾：总结前文理由，重申核心观点，呼应开头。 议论文写作特点 观点明确：全文围绕一个核心论点展开，不模糊、不跑偏。 论据充分：每个分论点都有具体事实或细节支撑。 逻辑连贯：用连接词（Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/In addition）串联，结构严谨。 语言简洁：以简单句和基础复合句为主，表达直接，不冗余。 话题分析 如何表达自己观点：议论文 　本单元以“Pets and us”为主题，属于“人与社会”主题语境范畴，聚焦“人与动物的关系及责任”子主题。通过学习宠物相关词汇、表达养宠利弊及探讨人宠关系，引导学生在语言实践中培养对动物的关爱与责任意识。在语言能力培养上，学生掌握描述宠物特征、表达观点及比较宠物习性的词汇与句型。通过模仿王瑶的范文结构（观点+特征+理由），撰写“理想宠物”短文。 开头：直接亮明核心观点（猫是完美宠物）。 中间：列出理由展开论证，每个理由配具体细节支撑。 结尾：总结前文理由，重申核心观点，呼应开头。 注意事项：观点明确，论据充分，逻辑连贯，也可用连接词（Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly /In addition）串联，使结构严谨。语言要简洁 开头：开门见山，亮明观点 写法：直接给出核心论点，不用铺垫，让读者快速知道文章主旨。 示例：原文开头 “I think that cats are the perfect pets.” 直接表明立场。 通用句式：I think/In my opinion/From my point of view, ...; I believe that... 中间：分点论证，细节支撑 写法：分 2-3 个分论点，每个分论点独立成段，加具体细节（例子、事实）。 示例：原文用 Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly 分 3 点，每点后接具体表现（如 “clean” 对应 “clean themselves” “use a litter box”）。 通用连接词： 1.引出第一个分论点 Firstly, ...（首先，……） To begin with, ...（首先，……） First of all, ...（首先，……） 2. 引出后续分论点 Secondly, ...（其次，……） Thirdly, ...（第三，……） What’s more, ...（此外，……） In addition, ...（另外，……） 3. 补充细节 / 举例 For instance, ...（比如，……） That’s because ...（那是因为……） 结尾：总结升华，呼应开头 写法：概括前文分论点，重申核心观点，让结构完整闭环。 示例：原文结尾 “For these reasons, I believe that a cat is the perfect pet...” 总结 理由，呼应开头。 通用句式：For these reasons, ...（基于这些原因，……） In conclusion, ...（总之，……） Therefore, I believe that ...（因此，我认为……） In short, ... is the best choice.（简而言之，…… 是最佳选择） From what I have said, we can know that ... （从我的论述中，我们可以知道……） Basic structure of how to write an argument. 01 03 02 Part 1 The beginning (Introduction: State your opinion) Part 2 Give facts or examples to support your opinion Part 3 (Conclusion: State your opinion again.） The body The ending 应用实践 03 26 2 Write an article about what animal makes the perfect pet Step1 Plan Think about what animal makes the perfect pet and why. Use the tips below to help you plan your article. Tip Remember to include the following sections in your article: Introduction: State your opinion. Body: Give facts or examples to support your opinion. Conclusion: State your opinion again. Step 2 Write Now write your article. You may refer to Wang Yao’s article and the expressions below. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ According to ... Secondly, ... For these reasons, ... In my opinion, ... What’s more, ... I (do not) believe that ... Firstly, ... Finally, ... I (do not) think that ... Dogs make the best pets In my opinion, dogs make the best pets. Firstly, dogs are extremely loyal and friendly. They never leave you alone when you’re sad or tired, and they always greet you with wagging tails when you get home. They become your most reliable and caring friends. Secondly, dogs are brave and helpful. They can guard your home day and night to keep strangers away, and some special dogs even help guide the blind or rescue people in danger. Thirdly, dogs are smart and easy to train. With a little patience and snacks as rewards, they can quickly learn simple commands like "sit", "stay" or "come". Finally, walking dogs every day not only makes them happy but also helps you get more exercise, which is good for your body and mind. For these reasons, I believe that dogs are the best choice for a pet. Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. I stated my opinion in the first and the last paragraphs. I gave at least three reasons to support my opinion and provided examples, such as . I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. 回顾总结 06 31 一、分析学习王瑶的范文，了解议论文的写作特点。 （观点+特征+理由）。 二、用所学的知识撰写“理想宠物”短文。 课堂小练 07 33 一、短语翻译 1.抱住某物 2.照顾，照料 3. 一小部分 4.更为重要的是 5.除了……别无选择 6. 四处自由走的，自由自在 7.无所事事的混日子，懒散度日 8.对……忠诚的 9.出于这些原因 10.根据… hold sth. in one’s arms care for/look after/take care of a small number of what’s more have no choice but to do run free lie around be faithful to …. for these reasons according to ...... 11.养狗 12.成为绝佳的玩伴 13.长大 14.乐意做某事 15.带给你无尽的快乐 16.简而言之 17.而且 18.别无选择 19.引起…注意 20.满怀骄傲 keep dogs make great playmates grow up is pleased to bring you lots of happiness in short What’s more have no choice but to do catch the eye of be full of pride 二、翻译句子 1. 养宠物狗是一个好主意。这有很多原因.(keep pet dogs) Keeping pet dogs is a good idea. There are lots of reasons for this. 2.首先，狗狗真的非常可爱，是绝佳的玩伴。 First, dogs are really cute and make great playmates. 3. 其次，我们可以通过饲养狗来培养责任感。(learn sth. from …) Second, we can learn responsibility from keeping dogs. 4. 据我妈妈所说，这样做能帮助我们成为更有责任心的人。(according to; help sb. do) According to my mum, this helps us become more responsible people. 5.简而言之，我认为养狗是个好主意。 In short, I think it’s a good idea to have a dog. 6.更重要的是，人们住在公寓里是很常见的。他们别无选择但大部分时间都要把狗关在屋里。 What’s more, it’s common for people to live in flats. They have no choice but to keep their dogs inside most of the time. 7.由于所有这些原因，我建议你不要养狗作为宠物 Because of all these reasons, I would advise you not to get a dog as a pet. 8.我选择养鱼作为宠物，因为它们非常适合像我这样忙碌的人。它们很容易照顾，我不必花太多时间照顾它们 I choose to keep fish as pets because they’re perfect for busy people like me. They’re easy to take care of, and I don’t have to spend much time looking after them 9.我喜欢养仓鼠作为我的宠物，因为它是一个很好的伴侣。仓鼠不会占用太多空间。 I love keeping a hamster as my pet because it’s such a wonderful companion. Hamsters don’t take up much space. 10.基于这些原因，我相信猫是任何人的完美宠物。 For these reasons, I believe that a cat is the perfect pet for anyone. 三、实战演练 班里最近开展“最佳宠物”的话题讨论，你认为养兔子最好。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来阐述你的意见和观点。标题和开头已给出，不计入词数。 养兔子的好处 1 兔子很可爱，抱在怀里很舒服。 2 兔子很爱干净，个性温和，不会吠叫和伤人。 3 兔子聪明，会用肢体语言表达喜怒哀乐等情感。 4 兔子体型小，不占空间，基本需求花费也不高。 可用素材： （1）词汇 lovely, pleasant, clean, gentle, bark loudly, hurt, quiet, clever, show one’s feelings, body language, take up, space, expensive （2）句型 Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ... Finally, ... For these reasons, I believe that ... Rabbits make the best pets In my opinion, rabbits make the best pets. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Rabbits make the best pets In my opinion, rabbits make the best pets. Firstly, rabbits are extremely lovely with soft fur. Holding them in your arms feels warm and pleasant, which can always cheer you up when you’re tired. Secondly, they are very clean and gentle. They never bark loudly or hurt people, making them friendly to everyone around. Thirdly, rabbits are clever. They use body language to show happiness, sadness or other feelings. Finally, rabbits are small, so they don’t take up much space at home. Their basic needs like food and a cage aren’t expensive either. For these reasons, I believe that rabbits are the best choice for a pet. Thank you！ 42 $