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Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land旅游
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:旅游
写作词汇短语:
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1.be located in/at/between ... 位于……
2.make a trip to ... 去……旅行
3.a feast for eyes 视觉盛宴
4.the good weather and breathtaking scenery
宜人的天气和令人惊叹的景色
5.an attractive place 一个吸引人的地方
6.from the view of ... 从……的观点来看
7.be open to the public 对公众开放
8.catch sight of 看到
9. get close to nature 接近大自然
10.make a journey 旅行
11.have a good time 玩得愉快
12.a dream trip 梦想之旅
13.traffic congestion 交通拥挤
14.places of interest 名胜
15.be known as 作为……而出名
17.be the home of/be home to ... 是…之乡/乐土
18.enjoy the reputation of ... 有……美誉
写作句型:
1. 我想和你分享一个最有趣的经历。I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.
2. 我参观了...它以...而闻名Last week/month/year, I paid a visit to..., which is famous for...
3. 它坐落于...It lies/is located/situated in...
4. 风景太美了, 游客都都屏住了呼吸。The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
5. 黄山,又称黄山,是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,位于中国安徽省。游客可以在令人惊叹的小径上徒步旅行,欣赏山脉、云层和日出的壮丽景色。
The Yellow Mountains, also known as Huangshan, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site located in China's Anhui province. Visitors can hike the stunning trails and enjoy breathtaking views of the mountains, clouds, and sunrise.
6. 桂林一游使我大饱眼福。The tour of Guilin glutted my eyes.
7. 九寨沟的风景吸引了全世界的游客。 The scenery of Jiuzhaigou Valley appeals to visitors from all over the world.
8. The Terracotta Army Museum in Xi'an, Shaanxi province, is an archaeological marvel of thousands of life-size terracotta warriors and horses that were buried with the first emperor of China. Visitors can explore the museum and learn about ancient Chinese history.
位于陕西省西安市的兵马俑博物馆是一个考古奇迹,它有数千个真人大小的兵马俑和马,这些俑和中国第一个皇帝葬在一起。游客可以探索博物馆,了解中国古代历史。
9. 无论你去哪里, 都有很多活动可供选择。Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
10. 它已成为世界上最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。 It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.
11. 通过这次旅行,我意识到尊重当地风俗和文化的重要性。
Through this trip, I realized the importance of respecting local customs and culture.
12. 周游世界的经历开阔了我的视野,丰富了我的生活。
The experience of hiking around the world broadened my horizon and enriched my life.
13. 中国有句话:“读万卷书不如行万里路。”
As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."
14. 总而言之,这次旅行既有意义又有教育意义,我们都玩得很开心。
All in all, the trip was so meaningful and educational that we all enjoyed it.
模拟真题示例:
(2025·黑龙江大庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Eric打算制作一段题为“Travel in China”的网络短视频,现给你发来邮件征询拍摄景点。请你给他回复邮件,推荐一处标志性景点。
内容包括:
1.景点介绍:
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
举一反三:
(24-25高二下·湖北·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jim是一名历史爱好者。为了帮助他进一步了解中国历史,你决定邀请他参观青铜博物馆(Bronze Museum)。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 参观时间;
2.博物馆简介;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best,
Li Hua
1.(25-26高二上·贵州黔南·开学考试)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris打算来贵州旅游,让你推荐一个旅游胜地。请你给Chris回信,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.(25-26高二上·安徽淮南·开学考试)假定你是李华,有一位英国友人 Jennifer即将来淮采风,咨询作为旅游达人的你有关你家乡的地理、历史、饮食文化等方面内容。请对她进行回复,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.相关内容
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇: military fort 军事要塞 culinary delight 美食佳肴
Dear Jennifer,
I’m Li Hua, a well-traveled teenager.
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Warmest regards,
Li Hua
3.(24-25高二下·湖南岳阳·期末)假定你是李华,近日在社交媒体上刷到外国旅游博主Peter打算来岳阳旅游,希望网友给他推荐当地美食。请你给他回帖,内容包括:
1. 推荐的美食;
2. 推荐的理由。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hi Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards.
Li Hua
4.(24-25高二下·黑龙江牡丹江·期末)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Emma计划来中国旅游,希望你推荐一个值得一游的城市。请根据以下要求写一封邮件:
1. 推荐的城市名称;
2. 推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Emma,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
5.(24-25高二下·吉林长春·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚结束北京之旅,参观了紫禁城(The Forbidden City)后仍意犹未尽,发邮件问除了紫禁城,中国还有什么能展现独特文化魅力的地方?请你用英文回复邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍该景点:
2. 说明推荐的理由:
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(24-25高二下·河南南阳·期末)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Richard计划暑假和家人来你居住的城市旅游,他想提前了解一下情况。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.城市的基本情况(位置、景点等);
2.期待他们的到来。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(23-24高二下·吉林通化·阶段练习)你校正在组织英语作文大赛。请你以“The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart”为题,就你身边的某个景点,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 你心中最难忘的景点;
2. 难忘的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart
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8.(24-25高二下·福建莆田·期中)假设你是李华,你在广州留学的英国朋友Peter打算到莆田进行为期一周的旅游,给你发邮件询问去莆田的交通方式及莆田的景点,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐从广州到莆田的交通工具;
2. 推荐莆田的两三个景点及理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
$Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land旅游
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:旅游
写作词汇短语:
1.
2
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1.be located in/at/between ... 位于……
2.make a trip to ... 去……旅行
3.a feast for eyes 视觉盛宴
4.the good weather and breathtaking scenery
宜人的天气和令人惊叹的景色
5.an attractive place 一个吸引人的地方
6.from the view of ... 从……的观点来看
7.be open to the public 对公众开放
8.catch sight of 看到
9. get close to nature 接近大自然
10.make a journey 旅行
11.have a good time 玩得愉快
12.a dream trip 梦想之旅
13.traffic congestion 交通拥挤
14.places of interest 名胜
15.be known as 作为……而出名
17.be the home of/be home to ... 是…之乡/乐土
18.enjoy the reputation of ... 有……美誉
写作句型:
1. 我想和你分享一个最有趣的经历。I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.
2. 我参观了...它以...而闻名Last week/month/year, I paid a visit to..., which is famous for...
3. 它坐落于...It lies/is located/situated in...
4. 风景太美了, 游客都都屏住了呼吸。The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
5. 黄山,又称黄山,是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,位于中国安徽省。游客可以在令人惊叹的小径上徒步旅行,欣赏山脉、云层和日出的壮丽景色。
The Yellow Mountains, also known as Huangshan, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site located in China's Anhui province. Visitors can hike the stunning trails and enjoy breathtaking views of the mountains, clouds, and sunrise.
6. 桂林一游使我大饱眼福。The tour of Guilin glutted my eyes.
7. 九寨沟的风景吸引了全世界的游客。 The scenery of Jiuzhaigou Valley appeals to visitors from all over the world.
8. The Terracotta Army Museum in Xi'an, Shaanxi province, is an archaeological marvel of thousands of life-size terracotta warriors and horses that were buried with the first emperor of China. Visitors can explore the museum and learn about ancient Chinese history.
位于陕西省西安市的兵马俑博物馆是一个考古奇迹,它有数千个真人大小的兵马俑和马,这些俑和中国第一个皇帝葬在一起。游客可以探索博物馆,了解中国古代历史。
9. 无论你去哪里, 都有很多活动可供选择。Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
10. 它已成为世界上最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。 It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.
11. 通过这次旅行,我意识到尊重当地风俗和文化的重要性。
Through this trip, I realized the importance of respecting local customs and culture.
12. 周游世界的经历开阔了我的视野,丰富了我的生活。
The experience of hiking around the world broadened my horizon and enriched my life.
13. 中国有句话:“读万卷书不如行万里路。”
As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books."
14. 总而言之,这次旅行既有意义又有教育意义,我们都玩得很开心。
All in all, the trip was so meaningful and educational that we all enjoyed it.
模拟真题示例:
(2025·黑龙江大庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Eric打算制作一段题为“Travel in China”的网络短视频,现给你发来邮件征询拍摄景点。请你给他回复邮件,推荐一处标志性景点。
内容包括:
1.景点介绍:
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
How thrilled I am to hear about your “Travel in China” project! I highly recommend the Great Wall in Beijing as your filming site.
Stretching over 13,000 miles, the Great Wall is a UNESCO World Heritage site and a symbol of China’s ancient engineering brilliance. Built over centuries, it shows the breathtaking views and the intelligence of Chinese people to the world.
This landmark is perfect for your video due to its visual grandeur and cultural significance. Not only does it highlight China’s long history but also attracts global audiences with its timeless beauty. Plus, filming during sunrise or sunset would add magical depth to your footage.
Wishing you an amazing shoot!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Eric回复邮件推荐一处标志性景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动:thrilled→excited
吸引:attract→appeal to
令人惊叹的:amazing→marvelous
因为:due to→because of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Stretching over 13,000 miles, the Great Wall is a UNESCO World Heritage site and a symbol of China’s ancient engineering brilliance.
拓展句:The Great Wall, which stretch over 13,000 miles is a UNESCO World Heritage site and a symbol of China’s ancient engineering brilliance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Stretching over 13,000 miles, the Great Wall is a UNESCO World Heritage site and a symbol of China’s ancient engineering brilliance.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Not only does it highlight China’s long history but also attracts global audiences with its timeless beauty.(运用了倒装句)
举一反三:
(24-25高二下·湖北·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jim是一名历史爱好者。为了帮助他进一步了解中国历史,你决定邀请他参观青铜博物馆(Bronze Museum)。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 参观时间;
2.博物馆简介;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Hi Jim,
I hope you’re doing well! I’d like to invite you to visit the Bronze Museum with me this Saturday at 2 pm.
The Bronze Museum showcases a wide range of ancient bronze artifacts that show the amazing craftsmanship and rich cultural heritage of China. It offers fascinating insights into the historical significance of these items, which played an important role in ancient China. I think you’ll find it both educational and inspiring.
Please let me know if you can join me. I’m really looking forward to sharing this experience with you!
Best,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给留学生朋友 Jim 写邮件,邀请其参观青铜博物馆,内容需包含参观时间、博物馆简介及期待回复。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参观:visit →pay a visit to
展示:showcase → display
各种各样的:a wide range of → a variety of
重要性:significance → importance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to invite you to visit the Bronze Museum with me this Saturday at 2 pm.
拓展句:I am wondering whether you would like to join me in visiting the Bronze Museum this Saturday at 2 p.m.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The Bronze Museum showcases a wide range of ancient bronze artifacts that show the amazing craftsmanship and rich cultural heritage of China.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】It offers fascinating insights into the historical significance of these items, which played an important role in ancient China.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
1.(25-26高二上·贵州黔南·开学考试)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris打算来贵州旅游,让你推荐一个旅游胜地。请你给Chris回信,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m absolutely delighted to know you’re planning a trip to Guizhou! Among all the amazing spots here, I highly recommend Huangguoshu Waterfall—it’s a real gem you shouldn’t miss.
As China’s largest waterfall, it’s breathtakingly grand. When you stand by its side, you’ll be wrapped in cool mist and stunned by the thunderous sound of water crashing down. The nearby karst mountains and crystal-clear streams add more beauty to the scene. What’s more, taking a boat to get up close lets you experience its magic in a whole new way. You’ll also find local snacks like spicy tofu nearby to try!
I truly hope you’ll have an unforgettable and wonderful time exploring Guizhou.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Chris回信,推荐贵州的一个旅游胜地。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
使震惊:stunn→astonish
令人惊叹的:amazing→marvelous
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As China’s largest waterfall, it’s breathtakingly grand.
拓展句:As it is China’s largest waterfall, Huangguoshu Waterfall is breathtakingly grand.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m absolutely delighted to know you’re planning a trip to Guizhou! (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作know的宾语)
【高分句型2】When you stand by its side, you’ll be wrapped in cool mist and stunned by the thunderous sound of water crashing down. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
2.(25-26高二上·安徽淮南·开学考试)假定你是李华,有一位英国友人 Jennifer即将来淮采风,咨询作为旅游达人的你有关你家乡的地理、历史、饮食文化等方面内容。请对她进行回复,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.相关内容
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇: military fort 军事要塞 culinary delight 美食佳肴
Dear Jennifer,
I’m Li Hua, a well-traveled teenager.
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Warmest regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jennifer,
I’m Li Hua, a well-traveled teenager. I’m thrilled to welcome you to Huai’an! Sitting along the Grand Canal, my hometown boasts a rich history as a key military fort and transport hub. Here you’ll have a chance to visit famous sites like the Zhou Enlai Memorial Hall and Wu Cheng’en Former Residence.
Don’t miss our culinary delights! Huai’an cuisine, part of Huaiyang-style cooking, features delicate dishes like braised lion’s head meatballs and Huai’an fried rice. Having a taste of them will make you fall in love with them at once.
Hope you’ll have fun!
Warmest regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Jennifer写一封信,介绍家乡的地理、历史、饮食文化等,欢迎她来旅游。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
机会:chance→opportunity
参观:visit→pay a visit to
立刻:at once→right now/immediately
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为复合句
原句:Huai’an cuisine, part of Huaiyang-style cooking, features delicate dishes like braised lion’s head meatballs and Huai’an fried rice.
拓展句:Huai’an cuisine, which is part of Huaiyang-style cooking, features delicate dishes like braised lion’s head meatballs and Huai’an fried rice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sitting along the Grand Canal, my hometown boasts rich history as a key military fort and transport hub.(使用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Having a taste of them will make you fall in love with them at once. (使用了动名词作主语)
3.(24-25高二下·湖南岳阳·期末)假定你是李华,近日在社交媒体上刷到外国旅游博主Peter打算来岳阳旅游,希望网友给他推荐当地美食。请你给他回帖,内容包括:
1. 推荐的美食;
2. 推荐的理由。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hi Peter,
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Best regards.
Li Hua
【答案】Hi Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a local from Yueyang. Excited to hear that you’re planning a trip to our city and eager to try local delicacies, I’m keen to share some of my top recommendations.
First, Yueyang Silver Fish is a must-try. These delicate fish are tender and boneless, making them perfect snacks. What can’t be missed is our crayfish, which are typically prepared in spicy sauce, giving them a special and finger-licking flavor. Additionally, try our smoked pork, made with traditional methods. If you like smoked bacon, you’ll definitely crave more.
I hope you have an amazing culinary adventure in Yueyang!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外国旅游博主Peter回帖,向他推荐岳阳的当地美食并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
推荐:recommendation → suggestion
美味的:delicious → tasty
传统的:traditional → conventional
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:These delicate fish are tender and boneless, making them perfect snacks.
拓展句:These delicate fish are so tender and boneless, which makes perfect snacks.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What can’t be missed is our crayfish, which are typically prepared in spicy sauce, giving them a special and finger-licking flavor.(运用了what引导的主语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句以及现在分词短语作结果状语)
【高分句型2】If you like smoked bacon, you’ll definitely crave more.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.(24-25高二下·黑龙江牡丹江·期末)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Emma计划来中国旅游,希望你推荐一个值得一游的城市。请根据以下要求写一封邮件:
1. 推荐的城市名称;
2. 推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Emma,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emma,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to China. I’d like to recommend Beijing, the capital city.
Beijing is not only rich in historical and cultural heritages but also a vibrant metropolis full of modern charm. You can visit the Forbidden City, which was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, and the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders of the world. Moreover, there are many delicious local foods like Peking Duck.
I believe you’ll have a great time here.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给新西兰笔友Emma写一封邮件,推荐一个值得一游的中国城市并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激动的,兴奋的:thrilled → excited
推荐:recommend → suggest
充满活力的:vibrant → dynamic
遗产:heritage → legacy
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to recommend Beijing, the capital city.
拓展句:I’d like to recommend Beijing, which is the capital city of China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Beijing is not only rich in historical and cultural heritages but also a vibrant metropolis full of modern charm. (运用了not only...but also...并列结构)
[高分句型2] You can visit the Forbidden City, which was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, and the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders of the world. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I believe you’ll have a great time here. (运用了省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
5.(24-25高二下·吉林长春·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚结束北京之旅,参观了紫禁城(The Forbidden City)后仍意犹未尽,发邮件问除了紫禁城,中国还有什么能展现独特文化魅力的地方?请你用英文回复邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍该景点:
2. 说明推荐的理由:
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m delighted you enjoyed the Forbidden City! For a completely different cultural experience, I highly recommend the Terracotta Warriors in Xi’an. This UNESCO World Heritage site features thousands of life-sized clay soldiers guarding China’s first emperor since 210 BCE.
Unlike the Forbidden City’s imperial architecture, these remarkable figures showcase ancient China’s military might and artistic sophistication. Each warrior’s unique facial expression reveals incredible craftsmanship. The site’s archaeological significance makes it one of China’s most valuable cultural treasures.
I’m certain you’ll be amazed by this historical wonder. Wishing you another fascinating cultural discovery in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
How wonderful that you appreciated the Forbidden City! For a contrasting cultural perspective, may I suggest the Classical Gardens of Suzhou? These exquisite UNESCO-listed gardens, dating back to the 6th century, embody China’s traditional scholar aesthetics.
While the Forbidden City represents imperial power, Suzhou gardens demonstrate the Chinese philosophy of harmony between man and nature. Their delicate pavilions, winding paths and carefully arranged rocks create peaceful retreats that inspired poets and painters for centuries.
I’m sure you’ll find their timeless beauty enchanting. Wishing you further wonderful explorations in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点,介绍景点、说明推荐理由并表达祝愿。
【详解】(范文1)1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
推荐:recommend → suggest
显著的:remarkable → extraordinary
展示:showcase→ exhibit
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m delighted you enjoyed the Forbidden City!
拓展句:I’m delighted, because you enjoyed the Forbidden City!
【点睛】【高分句型1】Heritage site features thousands of life-sized clay soldiers guarding China’s first emperor since 210 BCE.(运用了现在分词guarding作定语)
【高分句型2】I’m certain you’ll be amazed by this historical wonder.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
6.(24-25高二下·河南南阳·期末)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Richard计划暑假和家人来你居住的城市旅游,他想提前了解一下情况。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.城市的基本情况(位置、景点等);
2.期待他们的到来。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard,
I’m excited that you and your family are visiting this summer. My city in southern China mixes modern life with history, perfect for family trips. Summer here are warm but the weather is changeable, so taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
For top spots, I recommend Green Lake Park(great for family boat rides), the 500-year-old Wisdom Temple with beautiful gardens, and the Night Market with tasty local foods like dumplings. The City Museum has fun activities, too.
Looking forward to seeing you and your family. Ask me anything.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Richard写一封邮件,向他介绍自己居住城市的基本情况并期待Richard一家的到来。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
参观:visit→pay a visit
明智的:wise→advisable
美味的:tasty→delicious
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Summer here are warm but the weather is changeable, so taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
拓展句:Summer here are warm but the weather is so changeable that taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited that you and your family are visiting this summer.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】My city in southern China mixes modern life with history, perfect for family trips.(运用了形容词作状语)
7.(23-24高二下·吉林通化·阶段练习)你校正在组织英语作文大赛。请你以“The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart”为题,就你身边的某个景点,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 你心中最难忘的景点;
2. 难忘的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart
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【答案】 The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart
The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart is Great Wall.
When I stepped on the Great Wall for the first time at the age of ten, I was stunned by the grandness of it. It was hard to believe that it had been built by the hands of working people two thousand years ago. Looking at the way it winds across north China like a dragon, I couldn’t help but admire the wisdom of ancient Chinese people, and I felt proud to be Chinese.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校正在组织英语作文大赛这一情况,以“The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart”为题,就你身边的某个景点,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
景点:attraction→ scenic spot
被……震惊:was stunned by→ was astonished by
钦佩:admire→ appreciate
智慧:wisdom→ intelligence
2.句式拓展
扩写句子
原句:The most unforgettable iconic attraction in my heart is Great Wall.
扩写句:Among the countless popular iconic attractions that I’ve visited, the most unforgettable one in my heart is the Great Wall.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I stepped on the Great Wall for the first time at the age of ten, I was stunned by the grandness of it.(运用了When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Looking at the way it winds across north China like a dragon, I couldn’t help but admire the wisdom of ancient Chinese people, and I felt proud to be Chinese.(运用了现在分词作状语)
8.(24-25高二下·福建莆田·期中)假设你是李华,你在广州留学的英国朋友Peter打算到莆田进行为期一周的旅游,给你发邮件询问去莆田的交通方式及莆田的景点,请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐从广州到莆田的交通工具;
2. 推荐莆田的两三个景点及理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to hear about your trip to Putian! For transportation, taking a direct flight from Guangzhou is highly recommended. Though slightly more expensive, it saves your precious time (only 1.5 hours) and ensures a comfortable journey.
When exploring Putian, do visit Meizhou Island, the sacred birthplace of Mazu culture, where breathtaking coastal scenery merges with spiritual heritage. Another highlight is Jiulihu Waterfall, famed for its crystal-clear lakes and poetic rock formations, often compared to a miniature Guilin. These sites perfectly capture Putian’s cultural and natural charm.
Wish you an unforgettable adventure!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二:(基于人教版选择性必修二教材句式,82词):
Dear Peter,
Delighted to hear you’re visiting Putian! A direct flight from Guangzhou is your best choice, combining efficiency and comfort. Though slightly costly, it ensures you arrive refreshed for exploration. (句式来源:B2U1 “Journey Across a Vast Land” 中交通方式评价)
Putian is home to cultural wonders. Start with Meizhou Island, where Mazu culture originated. Walking along its coastline, you’ll marvel at temples standing against vast blue seas—a perfect blend of faith and nature(仿写B2U1 “The Rewards of Travel” 中文化景观描述). Next, Jiulihu Waterfall, a landscape of emerald pools and cliffs, offers scenes straight from a Chinese painting(仿写B2U3 “Discover the Beauty of Chinese Gardens” 中自然描写).
Wishing you a journey as inspiring as the destinations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,针对英国朋友Peter打算到莆田旅游询问交通方式及景点一事进行回复,内容需包含推荐的交通方式和莆田的两三个景点及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推荐:recommend → suggest
珍贵的:precious → valuable
神圣的:sacred → holy
迷人的:breathtaking → fascinating
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For transportation, taking a direct flight from Guangzhou is highly recommended.
拓展句:For transportation, it is highly recommended that you take a direct flight from Guangzhou, which can save you a lot of time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When exploring Putian, do visit Meizhou Island, the sacred birthplace of Mazu culture, where breathtaking coastal scenery merges with spiritual heritage. (运用了省略的时间状语从句和关系副词where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Another highlight is Jiulihu Waterfall, famed for its crystal clear lakes and poetic rock formations, often compared to a miniature Guilin. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
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