2024全国新高考I卷读后续写讲评 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，深度对接高考评价体系，覆盖情节逻辑构建、情感线索发展、语言得体表达三大核心考点，通过2024新高考全国I卷真题分析，明确情节合理性（占比45%）、情感真实性（30%）、语言准确性（25%）的考点权重，归纳补全段落、逻辑衔接等常考题型，构建完整备考框架。 课件亮点在于“真题解构+冲突链分析+素养融合”策略，以2024全国I卷“Gunter助人”文本为载体，运用“5W1H要素提炼法”梳理故事冲突（如无现金支付、取款机故障），引导学生通过“冲突解决—情节推进—情感升华”路径构建合理续写内容，培养语言能力与思维品质。提供多版范文对比、衔接设计模板（如Link1人物反应、Link2承诺兑现），助力学生掌握动作链描写、直接引语运用等技巧，教师可依托冲突分析表和评分要点精准指导，提升复习效率。

Continuation Writing 2024新高考全国I卷 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare, we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "'We made it, "he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message, "Out of order. Sorry."   Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 2 中文译文 在寒冷、湿润且难忘的九月一个晚上，我遇到了Gunter。我原计划飞往维也纳，然后乘巴士前往布拉格参加一个会议。由于一场大风暴，我的航班延误了一个半小时。我在前往布拉格的最后一班巴士发车前30分钟降落在维也纳。我一下飞机就疯狂地穿过机场大楼，毫不犹豫地跳进了排在最前面的一辆出租车。此刻我遇到了Gunter，我告诉他要去的地方，但他说他没听说过那个巴士站。我以为是我的发音有问题，于是我又慢慢地解释了一遍，但他看起来还是很困惑。当我几乎要放弃时，Gunter掏出他的小手机给一个朋友打了电话。经过了一场似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈讨论后，Gunter挂掉电话，启动了车。最后，我们只剩下两分钟的时间，终于驶进了巴士站。幸运的是，还有一长队人在等着上巴士。Gunter将出租车停在了巴士后面，转过身来，脸上带着大大的笑容对我说：“我们成功了。”就在那时，我突然意识到我的钱包里一点现金都没有。我向他露出了一个歉意的微笑，拿出我的葡萄牙银行卡。他试了几次，但卡机就是不配合。当我看到巴士队伍逐渐减少时，无助的感觉涌上心头。此时，Gunter指向了巴士站候车厅的入口。那里有一台取款机。我跳下车，疯狂地跑向取款机，插入我的卡，结果却看到了这样一条信息：“机器故障，抱歉。” 第一段：我跑回到Gunter那里，告诉了他这个坏消息。            第二段：四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我如约给Gunter打了电话。 1.delayed 延迟 2.touch down 着陆；降落 3.departure 出发；离开 4.rank 等级；队列 5.fished out 取出 6.a heated discussion 一场激烈讨论 7.board the bus 上车 8. flash an apologetic smile 向...投去充满道歉的微笑 9.did not play along 没有配合 10.wash over (情绪）突然袭来 11.thinning out 变稀疏 12.popped my card in 把卡插入 Words and phrases Reading & Searching 六要素 when who where what why how 主要人物 故事 时间 故事 地点 事 件 原 因 情 节 人物性格特征 注意事件 地点变化 一个核心人物对应一个核心事件 矛盾问题 情节和情感同时发展 Read & Search for elements（5W1H） characters： I the taxi driver (Gunter) 2. narrative perspective: first-person ( I ) 3. time： a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September 4. place： in Vienna —— at a bus station ; continuation part : at the bus station 5.what： Beginning Climax Ending I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I jumped into the first taxi on the rank on arrival. The driver Gunter tried every means to help me make it to the bus station. Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. I had no cash to pay him and the two card machines went wrong. The bus was about to set off. 6. Read for the plot development Read for the plot and emotion development I was in a hurry to catch the ___________ to Prague due to the delayed flight. I jumped into a taxi whose driver was _________ and arrived at the bus station with no ________. The ____________ and _____________ didn't work but the the bus queue was thinning out. the last bus Gunter cash card machine cash machine anxious embarrassed frustrated and helpless Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. grateful and touched Lucky and fulflled The theme of this article is concentrated on the kindness and trust between strangers. Additionally, keeping promises is also highlighted. Read for the theme Read for the theme I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare, we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "'We made it, "he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message, "Out of order. Sorry."   Analyze conflicts Conflict 1: I tried to catch the last bus to Prague solution1: jumped into the first taxi on the rank Conflict 2: Gunter didn’t hear my destination clearly. solution 2: Gunter got help from his friend and started his car. Conflict 3: I had no cash to pay the taxi fee . solution 3: I used my bankcard. Conflict 4: The card machine and the cash machine went wrong . Conflict 5: The bus was about to start/ set off . Solution4: ? Solution5: ? Read for Language features “ We made it,’’ he said. “ Out of order. Sorry.’’ Writing I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. _____________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.___ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Link1: How did Gunter react? What did he said to me? Body: How did I feel? What did Gunter do? With no cash, how could I take the bus to Prague? Link2: What did I promise? Link3: What did Gunter say ? How did Gunter feel? Body: What did I do? How did I feel? Theme: What lesson did the experience demonstrate（v.展现）? 14 Design link1 Breathless and sweaty, I stole a secret look at the bus, sighing with a sinking heart as I would definitely miss the bus because of my silly mistake. Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. “对不起，银行的提款机坏了，我拿不出现金。”我尴尬地解释道，脸上火辣辣的(burn)。 "Sorry, the bank machine is out of order, so I can't take the cash out. " I explained embarrassedly, with my face burning. 我气喘吁吁、满头大汗，偷偷看了一眼那辆公交车，心中充满失落感，不禁叹了口气，因为自己犯了个愚蠢的错误，肯定要错过这班车了。 15 Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Design link2 Link2: With the bus about to start, after saying numerous sorry and thanks to Gunter, I asked him to leave me his phone number promising I would call him after the important conference in Prague and pay him the taxi fee. Thanks to Gunter’s understanding and generosity, I made it to Prague and attended the conference on schedule. 16 Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Design link3 Link3A: It was just too wonderful to hear his warm and friendly voice over the phone, which filled my heart with mixed emotions. Apparently, he was over the moon when he got an unexpected call from me . 17 Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Design link3 Link3B: No sooner had he blurted out “hello” than his familiar, warm and reassuring voice came into my ears. Undoubtedly, when I explained my intention, he sounded more astounded than happy as if he couldn’t believe what he heard on the phone. 18 Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Design ending EndingA: （人与人之间美好的信任） What happened on that cold, wet and unforgettable September evening served as a beautiful reminder of how trust can bring people closer together. EndingB: （我的一诺千金） I proved to the generous , warm-hearted taxi driver that I am a man of integrity and Gunter deserved to be repaid and respected. 19 Para2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Design ending EndingC: （奇妙际遇，成就奇缘） The unforgettable encounter between Gunter and me formed a close bond/ friendship. The unforgettable experience would stick in my memory for ever, which taught me that mutual trust(相互信任） is the seed that blossoms into deep and lasting connections. 20 polish your writing then share with the class! Evaluation I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Breathless and sweaty, I stole a secret look at the bus, sighing with a sinking heart. Definitely, I would miss the bus because of my silly mistake. It was too terrible to picture the coming disaster of not being able to attend the conference. Never in my wildest dream had I imagined that my inability to pay him didn’t bother him at all. Instead, he fished out some cash, rushed to buy me a bus ticket and urged me to board the bus to Prague. Overwhelmed with an enormous sense of gratitude , I was moved to tears. After saying thanks to Gunter, I asked him for his phone number, promising I would pay him the taxi fee. Thanks to Gunter’s understanding and generosity, I made it to Prague and attended the conference on schedule. One Possible Version Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. No sooner had he blurted out “hello” than his familiar, warm and reassuring voice came into my ears. Undoubtedly, when I explained my intention, he sounded more astounded than happy as if he couldn’t believe what he heard on the phone. We arranged to meet on the taxi rank of the Vienna airport, where I took his taxi and had a remarkable encounter with this humble but amazing taxi driver. As his car approached me, he invited me in, a wide smile blossoming on his face. I jumped into his car, expressed my heartfelt gratitude and eventually paid off my previous debt. What happened on that cold, wet and unforgettable September evening served as a beautiful reminder of how trust can bring people closer together. One Possible Version I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Hardly had he heard my words when he frowned and sank into thought. Silence and embarrassment enveloped the air. Noticing the bus quene thinning out, I was tossed to a whirlpool of anxiety and hopelessness for fear that I might miss the bus. Just as I was at a loss what to do, Gunter broke the silence, patted me on my shouder and said “You’d better catch the bus.” , wearing a friendly and blooming smile. Never had I imagined that a stranger could be so kind and considerate. As the bus was about to start, I asked him for his phone number, expressing numerous gratitude and promising to pay the due taxi fee. Thanks to Gunter’s understanding and generosity, I made it to Prague and attended the conference as scheduled/ as planned. One Possible Version Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. It was not long before he answered the phone. Seized by great excitement and delight, I informed him that I planned to give back the cash. Several minutes later, the same station witnessed our encounter. I dipped into my pocket and gave the bus fee to him. Had it not been for his help, I would not have attended the conference successfully. “Please accept my gratitude.” Hearing my sincere voice, he flashed me a big smile, “ It is just a piece of cake.” Cold as the weather was, I felt a warm current welling up in my heart. This unforgettable experience would be forever stuck in my mind, warming my soul and serving as a reminder of the kindness and consideration of a stranger. One Possible Version One Possible Version One Possible Version $