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重难点手册高中英语选择性必修第一册RJ
要点11
accurate ad.精确的;准确的
单句写作
教材语境>It's difficult to make accurate prediction about the
例11-1(2023·全国新高考1
卷阅读D·改编)他做的实验表
effects on the environment..对环境的影响很难做出准确的预测。
明,在某些情况下,大量独立估
be accurate in/at在…方面准确
计的平均值可能相当准确。
搭配
The experiment he conducted
to be accurate准确地说
showed that in some cases,the
We haven't yet had an accurate timetable to publish these
average of a large number of
independent estimates
books..我们还没有出版这些书的准确时间表。
Journalists are not always accurate in what they write.
例11-2把天气和风力预报的
准确性的时间尺度从几个小时
新闻工作者的报道并不总是准确的。
提高到几天。
辨析accurate与exact
Improve the
on time scales
“准确的”,强调审慎、
from hours to days.
Accurate records must be kept at all
例11-3干个体经营的要准确
小心地做到与事实相
记录账目,这十分重要。
accurate
times.
符,同某一客观标准
It is vital that you
任何时候都必须保存准确的记录。
when you are
一致,侧重精确度
self-employed.
【答案】
“确切的”,强调完全Idon't know the exact terms of the
11-1 could be quite accurate
exact
符合标准、事实或真
agreement.
11-2 accuracy of weather and
相,无丝毫差错
我不知道该协议的确切条款。
wind forecasts
11-3 keep accurate records
单元写作指导
写正反观点对比类议论文
话题:社会热点问题
体裁:议论文
话题词块
in addition.'what's more/further more此外
话题本身
in a word in short总之;简而言之
even worse更糟糕的是
when it comes to当谈论到…
on the other hand另一方面
become increasingly popular变得越来越流行
on the contrary相反
play an important part role in ..
在…中扮演重要角色
常用表达
be of vital importance极其重要
1.引出话题
衔接词
(1)Recently,we had a heated discussion
firstly ..secondly ..thirdly ..
about whether...or not.
第一…第二…第三…
(2)People hold/have different opinions/
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attitudes towards…
审题谋篇
(3)The opinion concerning/on the hot topic
体裁:议论文
林裁和主题
varies from person to person.
主题:有关“制脸支付”的讨论
2.陈述双方观点
人称:以第一、人称为主
(1)A majority of people approve
of'
人称和时态
时态:以般现在时为主
support agree to the idea that ..
(2)Some people are in favour of ..
第一段:介绍“刷险支付”的情况
However,some hold a different view.
文章大纲
筇一段:列举同学的不同看法
第段:表明自已的看法
(3)There are many advantages of
…
遣词造句
First,...Second,...Third,...
1.词块翻译
(4)However,just as a popular saying
①越来越流行
goes,“Every coin has two sides.”It still has
言
②优点与缺点
these negative aspects.
③支持
3.表达个人观点
④人脸识别
(1)In my opinion/In my view,..
⑤导致:造成(后果)
(2)Personally (speaking),I think ..
⑥至于,关于
(3)As for me/As far as I am concerned/
(答案见“优秀范文”粗体词块)】
From my point of view,...
2.句子写作
典型例题
①顾客不需要携带手机或银行卡,这使得
假定你是李华,你校英文报社正在就“刷脸
支付更加方便。
支付”这一话题征文,上周五你们班也就该话题
进行了激烈的讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文投
稿,内容包括:
1.介绍讨论的情况:
②人脸识别还没有达到100%的准确率,
2.发表自己的看法。
这可能会导致支付风险。
注意:
1.写作词数为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:刷脸支付face-scanning payment
③随着人脸识别技术的发展,刷脸支付一
定会越来越可靠。
(答案见“优秀范文”画线句)
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优秀范文
Nowadays,face-scanning payment is becoming increasingly popular among customers,but it
has both advantages and disadvantages.Recently,we have had class discussion about it.
Some students are for face-scanning payment.First,the payment can be completed quickly.
Second,customers don't have to carry a mobile phone or a bank card,making payment more
convenient.However,others argue that facial recognition hasn't achieved an accuracy of
100%,which might lead to pavement risks.Additionally,customers'personal information
might be revealed illegally.
As for me,I am in favor of it.With the development of facial recognition technology,face-
scanning payments will definitely become more and more reliable.
读后续写攻略
C
用“负一转一正”的情节轮廓,宏观把握故事走向
读后续写,本质上是一种“故事续写”,必然有矛盾(负),这些矛盾可以归为人与自然、人与社
会和人与自我三大类矛盾,找到这个矛盾,就找到了故事的起点。故事的转折(转),是为了解决之
前的矛盾,是之前积累的矛盾、冲突或负面情绪的集中释放。这个转折也正是故事的高潮。正能
量(正)的结局即故事的终点。高考作为选拔性考试,当然也会包括对价值观的考查,因此续写文
章的主题应该是积极的,结局最好也是积极的。
典型例题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2o25·八省联考)I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel..A
nearby theater was showing a documentary about several local animal shelters that were helping
to save abandoned dogs across the country.I love animals,and I felt an urge to go to this
fundraising event.However,none of my co-workers would go with me,and I was worried about
walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room,but as soon as I got back to my
room,I felt restless and bored.The theater where the event was taking place was only about
five blocks from the hotel,and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous.So,
I decided to brave it.I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted.I managed to find the
street the theater was on,but when I turned the corner,I stopped in shock.In front of the
theater were a group of bikers-very big,tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people.However,in this case,
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I was a woman all alone,in a strange neighborhood,at night,and there were twenty or so very
large men-all wearing insignia()that indicated they were in some sort of club-standing
before me.Warning bells began to sound in my head,and my heart was pounding.Was I at the
right theater?Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening.
Nevertheless,I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that
crowd of bikers.I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater.Hopefully,the bikers
would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I hurried into the theater,only to find there were even more bikers inside.
UNIT
When the film began,I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
内容解读
递送宣传材料,让主人公逐渐意识到他们并非
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在费
威胁,而是热心的活动参与者。
城参加会议期间,看到酒店附近的一家剧院有
第二段(矛盾冲突解决,以正能量结尾)
场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映
由第二段首句“电影开始时,我意识到这些骑手
及筹款活动,作者因喜爱动物想去参加,却在剧
来自一个动物救援组织。”可知,第二段可描写
院外看到一群看起来身强体壮的摩托骑手,犹
电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动
豫后还是进入剧院,希望电影结束时骑手们已
的表现,以及中场休息时骑手们与作者的友好
离开。
互动,体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差,突显温
思路点拨
暖主题,引发作者的情感共鸣。可用具体的纪
第一段(通过表象让矛盾冲突出现)由第
录片细节展现骑手们救助流浪狗的场景,引出
段首句“我匆匆走进剧院,却发现里面有更多
主人公的感悟或启发。总结部分突出主题:消
的骑手。”可知,第一段可描写作者进入剧院后,
除偏见,强调爱心无界和对动物救助的重视。
面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安,以及所采取
参考词汇及句式
的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动,比如找
1.动作
靠角落的座位、抓紧手提包、频繁观察骑手等,
clutch紧握;抱紧
表现作者当时的紧张心理。重点描述主人公进
glance around环顾四周
入剧院后的反应及对剧院内更多骑手的观察。
peek at偷看
故事的转折可以设计骑手们的行为和氛围缓解
wipe away tears擦眼泪
了主人公的紧张情绪,例如微笑、友好的交谈或
come over to sb.来到某人面前
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2.心理
时不时地,我会偷瞄一下那些骑手,想看看
heart sinks心情沉重
他们在那儿做什么。
feel ashamed of对…感到惭愧
(2)As the documentary unfolded,showing
be truly grateful that对…真心感恩
the plight of the abandoned dogs,I saw many of
3.高分句子
the bikers wiping away tears.
(1)Every now and then,I peeked at the
随着纪录片剧情的展开,呈现了流浪狗的
bikers,wondering what they were doing here.
苦难,我看见许多骑手都在擦眼泪。
优秀范文
I hurried into the theater,only to find there were even more
bikers inside.They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every
corner of the place.My heart sank even further.I quickly found
0动作描写,“trying to make
an empty seat in the back row,trying to make myself as
myself as inconspicuous as
possible”是现在分词短语作
inconspicuous as possible.I clutched my bag tightly,
伴随状语,表现了“我”的忐
constantly glancing around,praying that nothing bad would
忑不安。
happen.Every now and then,I peeked at the bikers,
②动作描写和心理描写,
"constantly glancing around,
wondering what they were doing here.Were they going to
praying that nothing bad
cause trouble?The tension in the air was palpable,and I
would happen”中两个并列的
现在分词短语作状语。
regretted my decision to come alone.
目动作描写,as引导时间状语
When the film began,I realized that the bikers were an
从句,“wondering what they
animal rescue group.They had come to support the fundraiser
were doing there”是现在分
词作状语,what引导的宾语
for the local animal shelters.As the documentary unfolded,
从句作wondering的宾语。
showing the plight of the abandoned dogs,I saw many of the
bikers wiping away tears.They were as moved as I was by the
heartwarming and heartbreaking stories.During the intermission,
④heartwarming、heartbreaking
some of them even came over to me,smiling kindly and asking if
这两个词在结构上对称,且
均带有情感色彩。
I was enjoying the film.Their tough exteriors hid big,soft
⑤“tough”和“soft”形成强烈反
hearts.I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful
差,体现了骑手们的善良,也
that I had decided to come.We spent the rest of the evening
从侧面表现了“我”的惊讶和
羞愧。
sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
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