Unit 1 读后续写-【重难点手册】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版）

用重难点手册高中英语选择性必修第一册R」， 单元写作指导 写人物介绍类文章 话题：介绍自己敬佩的人 体裁：记叙文 话题词块 成就和评价 基本信息 be one of the best/most important figures in .. 出生背景： 是…（领域）最杰出重要的人物之一 be born in/into a poor/rich family in... set a good example to,为…树立榜样 make great contributions to .. 出生于…的一个贫穷/富有的家庭 对…做出巨大贡献 live lead/have a happy/hard life be regarded known/considered as... 过着幸福艰苦的生活 被认为是… make a living at an early age早早谋生 speak,think highly of对…评价很高 特长和爱好： receive the respect and admiration from .. have a gift//talent for对…有天赋 受到…的尊重和敬仰 be good at擅长… be interested in对…感兴趣 常用表达 be crazy/passionate about热衷于. 1.引出介绍的人物 教育经历： be admitted to/into.被…录取 (1)The person I admire/respect most is... major in主修… (2)When it comes to the person I respect graduate from从…毕业 most,there is no doubt . go abroad for further study出国深造 (3)...,who is considered to be is regarded get a bachelor's/master's doctor's degree in... as ...is the person I admire most. 获得…（专业）的本科/硕士博士学位 2.介绍人物生平 经历和事迹 (1)He/She managed to go to university and work on.从事… win a scholarship. devote oneself to(doing)sth.投身于（做）某事 (2)He/She made great contributions to .. do sth.with great determination and perseverance and was awarded with the Nobel Prize. 以极大的决心和毅力做某事 (3)He/She devoted his/her whole life to the fight for…为…而斗争 field of… make up one's mind to do sth.决心做某事 3.介绍人物成就和影响力 overcome many difficulties/challenges (1)He/She is considered acknowledged as 克服许多困难：挑战 one of the smartest people who ever lived. try one's best to do sth.尽最大的努力做某事 (2)What makes him so extraordinary is not 28 UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT only his great contributions to ...but also his 遣词造句 commitment to what he loves and his loyalty to 1.词块翻译 the country and the people. ①被誉为 (3)His/Her heroic story spread all over the ②将一生奉献于 country.world. ③消除 典型例题 ④过着十分简朴的生活 (2025·湖北武汉问津联盟高二期末)你校 ⑤去世 3 正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“The Person I ⑥贡献与奉献 Admire'”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： (答案见“优秀范文”粗体词块) 1.人物简介； 2.句子写作 2.敬佩的原因。 ①我最敬佩的人是袁隆平，他被誉为“杂交 注意： 水稻之父”。（定语从句） 1.写作词数为80个左右； 2.短文题目与首句已给出，不计入总词数： 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Person I Admire There are many respectable people around ②这位伟大的科学家于1930年9月7日 us 在北京出生。 ③他的父母给了他精神上和经济上的支持。 审题谋篇 体威：记叙义 休裁和主趣 正题：介绍位山己敬佩的人 ④正是他的友善和责任感让我敬佩他。 人称：以第人称为主 (强调句型) 人称和时态 时态：以股过去时为主 第一段：指出九已最做佩的人并简单介绍 文章大纲 第一段：说明敬佩这个人的原因 第段：对自已敬佩的人作出整休评价 (答案见“优秀范文”画线句) 29 翻重难点手册高中英语选择性必修第一册R, 优秀范文 The Person I Admire There are many respectable people around us.And the person I admire most is Yuan Longping,who is honored as the "father of hybrid rice".Without him and his team,there would still be millions of people having to face the threat of hunger.He devoted his whole life to his country and people and even to the world. The great scientist was born in Beijing on September 7th,1930.During his early years, his parents gave him great support mentally and financiallyo to pursue science.He devoted his whole life to the field of agriculture.The hybrid rice that he created with his team helped the whole world get rid of hunger. Though being a top scientist in the world,Yuan Longping lived a very simple life.He liked playing majiang and the violin in his spare time like many others.It is his kindness and sense of responsibility that make me admire him.Yuan passed away in 2021.However,his contribution and devotion will always be remembered by people both in China and around the world. 读后续写攻略 搭建续写支架，构思合理情节 读后续写要求考生依据原文材料的内容和所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与给定 材料有逻辑衔接、情节与结构完整的短文，从而构成一个完整的故事。通常一个完整的故事，需要 把时间、地点、人物、情感等用一条主线索串连起来一这就是情节。由浅入深，设置一系列“问题 链”支架，从而形成严密而有节奏的“读一思一问”过程。根据人物的所说、所听、所见、所嗅、所感、 所做，把握故事情节的发展脉络，合理推理，构思段落情节。 典型例题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2025·l月浙江高考)Kevin was pretty bored.His mother was at work,and his father had been away on business.Therefore,he was left in the care of Mrs.Hill,an old lady who lived next door.His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy.He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things.Mrs.Hill was asleep.Kevin sighed()and hoped something exciting would happen.Suddenly,a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs.Hill's front window faced Mr.and Mrs.Green's house across the street.The couple had both gone to work,so it was strange that someone was over there.Kevin stared at the man at their front door.Suddenly,the man jumped through an open window into the house.With his heart in his mouth,Kevin grabbed Mrs.Hill's home phone and called the police. 30 UNIT1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something.He rushed out of Mrs.Hill's house and crossed the street quickly.Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree,he jumped in through the window."Stop right there!You must leave right now!"he called out,holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second,but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. "Hey,kid,put that down.It was my home.My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here,"he explained,trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment,the sounds of a police car echoed()in the air.The man stood up in a panic,then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out.Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened.They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs.Hill's house.Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing."What if he has told the truth?"he thought to himself.The man's words sounded pretty convincing. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右 2.请按如下格式作答。 When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them. Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 内容解读 看到一个男子闯人。 故事的主角Kevin,一个l2岁的小男孩， 3.Kevin报警，并决定亲自采取行动，拿起 因为父母都不在家，被邻居Hl夫人家照顾。 树枝闯入Green家试图阻止男子。 故事发生在Hill夫人的家以及街对面的Green 4.男子解释说他曾住在这里，回来找父亲 夫妇家。Kevin发现了一个可疑男子闯入 的手表。 Green夫妇家，这引发了他与可疑男子之间的 5.警察赶到，男子被逮捕。 直接冲突。事件发生的顺序如下： 6.Kevin回到Hill夫人家，开始怀疑自己 l.Kevin在Hill夫人家感到无聊，希望发 是否做错了。 生点激动人心的事。 思路点拨 2.他注意到街对面Green夫妇家有动静， 第一段续写Kevin与Green夫妇交谈的 31 用重难点手册高中英语选择性必修第一册RJ 内容，应围绕解释误会、询问手表情况展开，如 2.语言 Kevin表达自己的疑惑和歉意，Green夫妇说 stammer结结巴巴地说 明房子的情况及是否认识闯入者等。注意语言 assure sb. 向某人保证 要符合人物身份和情感。 3.反应 具体步骤：(I)Kevin会怎样和Green夫妇解 one's eyes widen in shock某人惊讶得瞪 释？（如：鼓起勇气敲门，然后结结巴巴地说） 大了眼睛 (2)Green夫妇听完后会做些什么？（如：非 quickly regain one's calmness很快恢复了 常惊讶，然后在Kevin的引导下，他们来到了那 平静 块地板前，打开地板，发现里面真的有一块手表) astonishment吃惊 (3)弄清事情后，他们决定做什么？（如： determination决心 Green先生拿起手表，要去警察局解释一切) relief释然；宽慰 第二段续写去警局的经过，可描述警察 4.心理 的反应、对手表的处理结果等，推动故事合理发 can't help but reflect on sth.忍不住回想某事 展，如：警察调查手表来源，最终澄清事实， stand up for what is right坚持做正确 Kevin从中获得成长感悟。 的事 具体步骤：(1)警察听了他们的解释会做些 5.高分句子 什么？（认真地听完，然后称赞Kevin,并说会 (1)Mustering up all his courage,Kevin 认真调查这件事情) knocked on the door. (2)事情解决后，Kevin会有怎样感受？ Kevin鼓起勇气，敲了敲门。 (非常轻松，如释重负》 (2)Guided by Kevin's trembling finger, (3)经过这件事情，Kevin会有怎样感悟？ they made their way to the spot where Kevin (即使害怕，也要坚持做正确的事) had seen the man trying to lift the floorboard. 参考词汇及句式 在Kevin颤抖的手指的指引下，他们来到 1.动作 了Kevin看见男人撬地板的地方。 muster up all one's courage鼓起全部勇气 (3)To their astonishment,there lay a watch. knock on the door敲门 令他们吃惊的是，那儿有一只手表。 make one's way to the spot where+句子 (4)The officer listened attentively,his eyes 去某人做某事的地方 narrowing in thought. hand sth.tosb.把…递给… 警官认真地听着，眼睛眯着思考。 listen attentively聚精会神地听 (5)With a deep sigh,Kevin felt a wave of give sb..'s shoulder a hearty pat热情地拍 relief wash over him. 某人的肩膀 深深地叹了一口气，Kevin感到一阵释然 with a deep sigh深深地叹了口气 涌上心头。 32 UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 优秀范文 When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them.Mustering up all his courage,Kevin knocked on the ①心理描写，现在分词短语作 状语。 door.The sound of footsteps approached,and the door creaked open to reveal Mr.and Mrs.Green."Mr.Green,something UNIT happened while you were away,Kevin stammered,explaining that he had witnessed someone breaking into their house.Mr. Green's eyes widened in shock,but he quickly regained his ②动作描写，“Guided by Kevin's calmness.Guided by Kevin's trembling finger,they made their trembling finger'”是过去分词 way to the spot where Kevin had seen the man trying to lift the 短语作状语；“where Kevin floorboard.Mr.Green knelt down and carefully opened it.To had seen the man trying to lift the floorboard'”是定语从 their astonishment,there lay a watch."We have to go to the 句，修饰spot。 police station and tell them everything,Mr.Green said,his ③完全倒装句，本句的正常语 voice filled with determination. 序为“a watch lay there'”。 Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police station.Handing the watch to an officer,Mr.Green explained the situation.The officer listened attentively,his eyes narrowing in thought."You did the right thing,Kevin. ④本句用了比喻的修辞手法，把 The matter would be looked into thoroughly,the officer “释然”的感受比作“波浪”，把 assured them,giving Kevin's shoulder a hearty pat.With a deep “过去的几小时”这一抽象的 事物比作具体的有重量的物 sigh,Kevin felt a wave of relief wash over him,the weight of the 品。“the weight of the past past few hours melting away.As they left the station,Kevin few hours melting away”为 couldn't help but reflect on the day's events.He realized that 独立主格结构。 standing up for what was right,even when it was scary,was worth every moment of fear and uncertainty.His courage had made a difference,and that was a feeling he would cherish forever. 33