内容正文:
热点06 校园欺凌
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
广西苍梧县石桥中学的校园欺凌事件
一段拍摄于宿舍的手机视频,让广西苍梧县石桥中学的校园欺凌事件在2025年9月5日晚引爆网络。画面中多名八年级女生对一名同学连续实施打骂,而这样的场景竟在9月3日、4日中午重复上演。当舆论还在追问"学校为何未能及时发现"时,当地政府9月7日的处置通报创造了历史——首次依据《预防未成年人犯罪法》对9名施暴者启动矫治教育程序,同时校长等4人被停职。这起案件犹如一面多棱镜,折射出当前校园暴力治理的深层矛盾:当施暴者也是未成年人时,我们该如何在惩戒与挽救之间找到平衡?
石桥中学的欺凌事件呈现出典型的三重特征:群体性、持续性和隐蔽性。涉事的9名八年级女生分两次在宿舍实施欺凌,这个本应受教师监管的空间却成了暴力温床。视频传播后,舆论关注的焦点迅速从个案本身转向制度漏洞——为何施暴者能连续两天在固定时段作案?校方日常巡查机制形同虚设的质疑声浪中,当地政府9月9日追加通报给出了回应:除对施暴学生送专门学校矫治外,更罕见地启动了教育系统内部问责,校长、副校长及班主任均被停职检查。
【题材解析】
一、命题趋势预测
1、话题热度持续
校园欺凌作为社会热点问题,近年频繁出现在中考作文题库中(如2025年江苏专版、2024年豆丁网预测题等)。预计2026年可能以议论文、书信、演讲稿等形式出现,结合具体情境(如目击欺凌事件、呼吁解决方案)展开。
2、命题形式复合化
可能要求多文体结合,例如:
邮件+建议:给笔友写信描述欺凌事件并寻求建议;
演讲稿+倡议:以“拒绝校园欺凌”为主题,提出行动倡议;
图表分析+观点阐述:结合欺凌数据图表,分析现状并提出措施。
3、思辨性增强
题目可能要求考生辩证分析,例如:
探讨欺凌的根源(如家庭教育缺失、网络匿名性);
对比不同应对方式的利弊(如沉默 vs. 直接对抗)。
二、高频考点与内容要点
1、核心内容框架
危害分析:心理创伤(焦虑、自卑)、学业影响、校园氛围恶化;
应对措施:
个人层面:保持冷静、及时求助(老师/家长)、记录证据;
学校层面:加强道德教育、建立举报机制;
社会层面:完善法律、开展反欺凌宣传活动;
呼吁行动:倡导友善校园文化,强调“旁观者责任”。
2、高频词汇与句型
关键词:bullying, victim, bystander, psychological trauma, verbal/physical abuse, anti-bullying policies;
亮点句式:
"Bullying not only harms victims physically but also leaves deep psychological scars."
"It is everyone’s duty to foster a safe and inclusive campus environment."
"If left unaddressed, bullying can escalate into more serious violence."
三、写作策略与评分重点
1、结构优化建议
开头:用数据/现象引入主题(如"Recent surveys show that 15.6% of students experience bullying...");
主体:分点论述危害与措施,使用逻辑连接词(Firstly, Moreover, Therefore);
结尾:呼吁行动,升华主题(如"Let’s join hands to build a harmonious campus!")。
2、评分关键点
内容完整性:覆盖题目所有要点,适当拓展(如结合真实案例);
语言准确性:避免语法错误,使用高级词汇(如"harmonious"替代"peaceful");
逻辑连贯性:段落间过渡自然,观点明确。
四、备考建议
1、积累素材
整理与欺凌相关的同义表达(如"stand up against" vs. "fight against");
背诵范文中的功能句(如建议句型、数据引用句)。
2、模拟训练
限时完成不同文体写作(如15分钟完成80词书信);
通过互评修改,重点检查逻辑漏洞和语法错误。
3、跨文化视角
结合国际案例(如欧美反欺凌政策),提升论述深度。
五、风险规避
避免敏感表达:不渲染暴力细节,聚焦解决方案;
拒绝模板化:结合具体情境个性化表达(如用亲身经历引出观点)。
六、总结
2026年校园欺凌类作文将延续“问题分析+解决措施”的框架,但更注重思辨性与语言表达的灵活性。考生需通过多维度训练,提升逻辑架构与文化敏感度,以应对可能的变化。
【典型范文】
A
最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点,你们班也开展了相关讨论。请根据以下要点以“Say NO to School-bullying”为题,为学校网站写一篇英语文章。
内容包括:
1. 欺凌行为的危害;
2. 提出至少两条建议,号召一起努力阻止校园暴力。
要求:
1.内容包括以上要点,可适当增加细节;
2.词数 80-100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Say NO to School-bullying
Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again._____________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
当前,校园欺凌(school bullying)正成为人们关注的热点问题,请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。
内容须包括以下要点:
1. 校园欺凌引发社会的广泛关注;
2. 如何自我保护:
(1)第一次被欺负时要勇敢说“不”;
(2)受到欺负及时告知老师和家长;
(3)其他建议。
参考词汇:bully v. 欺负;n. 欺负,霸凌者
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Recently, the word of “School Bullying” has got tons of attention. ____________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
近年来校园欺凌事件频频发生,为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力,某中学围绕校园欺凌(bully v.)问题召开主题班会。
假定你是班长李华,以 How to protect ourselves in school 为标题写一篇短文,主要包括如下内容:
1. 校园欺凌对我们的影响。
2. 要求每个学生都学习相关知识。
3. 遇到校园欺凌时要冷静处置;及时告诉老师和家长;在校要友好待人,遵守校规……
4. 请求大家团结起来,校园会变得更美好。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加 2—3 分;
4. 80 词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How can we protect ourselves at school?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, _________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.
【拓展训练】
A
近年来,校园欺凌 (school bullies) 事件频频发生,为了提高同学们的自我防范意识和保护能力,某英文报社将举行以“How to protect ourselves in school”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识,写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点:
1. 目前学校中的一些校园欺凌现象;
2. 校园欺凌对我们的影响;
3. 如何预防校园欺凌。(不少于三点做法)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能提及真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数80左右,开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
How to protect ourselves in school
These year, school bullies happen in almost every school.___________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
为配合扫黑除恶专项整治工作,杜绝校园欺凌,打造和谐安定校园,作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示:1.尊敬老师(respect the teachers),努力学习。
2.与同学融洽相处(get on well with),互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架,不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度(follow the school rules),不下河洗澡,不携带管制刀具(restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人,遇险应报警。
要求:1.语句通顺,语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词,内容可适当发挥。
3.作文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus._________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,以"How do you behave at school?"为题写一篇短文。
要点:
1)请简要描述两幅图片;
2)如果你受到欺负时,你该如何应对(至少 2 点);
3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象,谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点)。
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称;
3)100 词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
(1 (2
参考词汇:beat, kick, respect, harmonious(和谐的), stop bullying (欺凌)
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,___________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can see a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and stronger student is asking for money from others. This is called school bullying.
If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. In this way, I can keep myself safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me. I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, we'd better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble. Let's stop bullying and build a harmonious school.
D
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,以"How to behave(表现) at school?"为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 简要描述两幅图片,并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少2点);
2. 作文中不得出现真实校名和姓名;
3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beat, kick, laugh at, respect(尊重), harmonious(和谐的)
How to Behave at School?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,_____________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
E
某英语杂志社正在征稿,请以“Stay Away from School Bullying”为题写一篇关于远离校园欺凌的文章向杂志社投稿。
内容要点:
1.校园欺凌主要发生在学生之间,通常指强大的一方欺负弱小的一方;
2.校园欺凌包括逼迫别人做事,如:买东西、抄作业、欺负其他同学等;
3.当我们遇到校园欺凌的时候,我们要主动向老师、父母等寻求帮助;
4.校园欺凌对学生的影响很长远,我们不能当欺凌者,避免成为受害者;
5.我们与同学之间要友好相处,互相帮助,让校园生活更加美好。
提示词:欺负:bully 欺凌者:bully 受害者:victim
要求:
1)词数80—100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数:
2)短文必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Stay Away from School Bullying
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
F
校园欺凌事件屡有发生,而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑,不敢去学校,甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:
1)What can you see in the picture?
2)What do you think of school bullying?
3)What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?
要求:
1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2、词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:mental health problems(心理问题)bullies(仗势欺人者)
In the picture, I can see_______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
G
校园安全很重要。为了使学生能够更好地了解安全知识,遵守校园规则,学会自我保护,学校特举办校园安全演讲比赛。请你结合以下表格内容,用英语写一篇演讲稿。要求:
1) 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2) 80词左右 (开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数);
3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: campus校园 stairs楼梯 chase追赶 bully欺凌
Dos
Don’ts
understand safety knowledge
run up and down stairs
follow safety rules
chase or fight
keep to the right
bully classmates
learn to protect ourselves
talk to strangers
protect personal information
break traffic rules
...
...
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Good morning! Today, I am glad to stand here and talk about campus safety. As students, we should pay enough attention to campus safety.
Firstly,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Secondly, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Finally, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s make our campus safe and peaceful.
Thank you for your attention.
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热点06 校园欺凌
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
广西苍梧县石桥中学的校园欺凌事件
一段拍摄于宿舍的手机视频,让广西苍梧县石桥中学的校园欺凌事件在2025年9月5日晚引爆网络。画面中多名八年级女生对一名同学连续实施打骂,而这样的场景竟在9月3日、4日中午重复上演。当舆论还在追问"学校为何未能及时发现"时,当地政府9月7日的处置通报创造了历史——首次依据《预防未成年人犯罪法》对9名施暴者启动矫治教育程序,同时校长等4人被停职。这起案件犹如一面多棱镜,折射出当前校园暴力治理的深层矛盾:当施暴者也是未成年人时,我们该如何在惩戒与挽救之间找到平衡?
石桥中学的欺凌事件呈现出典型的三重特征:群体性、持续性和隐蔽性。涉事的9名八年级女生分两次在宿舍实施欺凌,这个本应受教师监管的空间却成了暴力温床。视频传播后,舆论关注的焦点迅速从个案本身转向制度漏洞——为何施暴者能连续两天在固定时段作案?校方日常巡查机制形同虚设的质疑声浪中,当地政府9月9日追加通报给出了回应:除对施暴学生送专门学校矫治外,更罕见地启动了教育系统内部问责,校长、副校长及班主任均被停职检查。
【题材解析】
一、命题趋势预测
1、话题热度持续
校园欺凌作为社会热点问题,近年频繁出现在中考作文题库中(如2025年江苏专版、2024年豆丁网预测题等)。预计2026年可能以议论文、书信、演讲稿等形式出现,结合具体情境(如目击欺凌事件、呼吁解决方案)展开。
2、命题形式复合化
可能要求多文体结合,例如:
邮件+建议:给笔友写信描述欺凌事件并寻求建议;
演讲稿+倡议:以“拒绝校园欺凌”为主题,提出行动倡议;
图表分析+观点阐述:结合欺凌数据图表,分析现状并提出措施。
3、思辨性增强
题目可能要求考生辩证分析,例如:
探讨欺凌的根源(如家庭教育缺失、网络匿名性);
对比不同应对方式的利弊(如沉默 vs. 直接对抗)。
二、高频考点与内容要点
1、核心内容框架
危害分析:心理创伤(焦虑、自卑)、学业影响、校园氛围恶化;
应对措施:
个人层面:保持冷静、及时求助(老师/家长)、记录证据;
学校层面:加强道德教育、建立举报机制;
社会层面:完善法律、开展反欺凌宣传活动;
呼吁行动:倡导友善校园文化,强调“旁观者责任”。
2、高频词汇与句型
关键词:bullying, victim, bystander, psychological trauma, verbal/physical abuse, anti-bullying policies;
亮点句式:
"Bullying not only harms victims physically but also leaves deep psychological scars."
"It is everyone’s duty to foster a safe and inclusive campus environment."
"If left unaddressed, bullying can escalate into more serious violence."
三、写作策略与评分重点
1、结构优化建议
开头:用数据/现象引入主题(如"Recent surveys show that 15.6% of students experience bullying...");
主体:分点论述危害与措施,使用逻辑连接词(Firstly, Moreover, Therefore);
结尾:呼吁行动,升华主题(如"Let’s join hands to build a harmonious campus!")。
2、评分关键点
内容完整性:覆盖题目所有要点,适当拓展(如结合真实案例);
语言准确性:避免语法错误,使用高级词汇(如"harmonious"替代"peaceful");
逻辑连贯性:段落间过渡自然,观点明确。
四、备考建议
1、积累素材
整理与欺凌相关的同义表达(如"stand up against" vs. "fight against");
背诵范文中的功能句(如建议句型、数据引用句)。
2、模拟训练
限时完成不同文体写作(如15分钟完成80词书信);
通过互评修改,重点检查逻辑漏洞和语法错误。
3、跨文化视角
结合国际案例(如欧美反欺凌政策),提升论述深度。
五、风险规避
避免敏感表达:不渲染暴力细节,聚焦解决方案;
拒绝模板化:结合具体情境个性化表达(如用亲身经历引出观点)。
六、总结
2026年校园欺凌类作文将延续“问题分析+解决措施”的框架,但更注重思辨性与语言表达的灵活性。考生需通过多维度训练,提升逻辑架构与文化敏感度,以应对可能的变化。
【典型范文】
A
最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点,你们班也开展了相关讨论。请根据以下要点以“Say NO to School-bullying”为题,为学校网站写一篇英语文章。
内容包括:
1. 欺凌行为的危害;
2. 提出至少两条建议,号召一起努力阻止校园暴力。
要求:
1.内容包括以上要点,可适当增加细节;
2.词数 80-100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Say NO to School-bullying
Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again._____________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Say NO to School-bullying
Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem .
School-bullying can cause severe physical injuries to the victims, leaving them with both immediate pain and potential long-term health problems. We should try every effort to prevent school-bullying from happening. First, if we meet with school-bulling, we should not answer violence with violence, because it will result in more fighting. Instead, we should tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well and protect us from the bad guys. More importantly, the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents .
All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying .
【难度】0.4
【知识点】青少年问题、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据班会讨论,指明校园欺凌的危害,提出阻止校园欺凌的建议,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明校园欺凌再次成为焦点,自己班级针对校园欺凌进行了一次主题班会,引出下文;
第二步,说明校园欺凌的危害,给出关于阻止校园欺凌的建议,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,号召大家一起抵制校园欺凌,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①try every effort to do sth. 尽一切努力做某事
②prevent sth. from doing 阻止某事发生
③deal with 处理,应对
[高分句型]
①First, if we meet with school-bulling, we should not answer violence with violence, because it will result in more fighting.(原因状语从句)
②School-bullying can cause severe physical injuries to the victims, leaving them with both immediate pain and potential long-term health problems.(现在分词作状语)
B
当前,校园欺凌(school bullying)正成为人们关注的热点问题,请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。
内容须包括以下要点:
1. 校园欺凌引发社会的广泛关注;
2. 如何自我保护:
(1)第一次被欺负时要勇敢说“不”;
(2)受到欺负及时告知老师和家长;
(3)其他建议。
参考词汇:bully v. 欺负;n. 欺负,霸凌者
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Recently, the word of “School Bullying” has got tons of attention. ____________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Recently, the word of “School Bullying” has got tons of attention. It has raised a heated discussion among people from all ages. As students, it’s crucial to understand how we can protect ourselves from such incidents.
To protect ourselves, we need to be brave. If someone bullies us for the first time, we should say “No!” loudly. If the bullying continues, we must tell our teachers and parents immediately. They can help us solve the problem. Also, we can make friends with classmates who are kind and stand up for each other.
In conclusion, self-protection is important in today’s environment. By being aware, speaking up, and seeking help, we can effectively keep ourselves from the bad effects of school bullying.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、青少年问题、自我保护
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,讲述校园欺凌引发社会的广泛关注;
第二步,从“说出来,寻求帮助和交好友”等方面介绍如何自我保护;
第三步,总结全文,再次强调自我保护的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①for the first time初次,第一次
②stand up for支持,捍卫
③in conclusion总而言之
④speak up大声说
[高分句型]
①As students, it’s crucial to understand how we can protect ourselves from such incidents.(it作形式主语;how引导的宾语从句)
②If someone bullies us for the first time, we should say “No!” loudly.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③Also, we can make friends with classmates who are kind and stand up for each other.(who引导的定语从句)
C
近年来校园欺凌事件频频发生,为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力,某中学围绕校园欺凌(bully v.)问题召开主题班会。
假定你是班长李华,以 How to protect ourselves in school 为标题写一篇短文,主要包括如下内容:
1. 校园欺凌对我们的影响。
2. 要求每个学生都学习相关知识。
3. 遇到校园欺凌时要冷静处置;及时告诉老师和家长;在校要友好待人,遵守校规……
4. 请求大家团结起来,校园会变得更美好。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加 2—3 分;
4. 80 词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How can we protect ourselves at school?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, _________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.
【答案】
How can we protect ourselves at school?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school. So we will learn how to protect ourselves at school.
Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should keep calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should ask our teachers and parents for help as soon as possible or we can call the police in time. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any rude behavior. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Finally, following school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】青少年问题
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头,呼应短文结尾;要求我们对“校园欺凌”这个事件展开,并联系实际,发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主;要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中,不能遗漏要点;可以根据表达需要适当发挥,使文章内容更加充实、完整,但需要注意合理性,要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。
【拓展训练】
A
近年来,校园欺凌 (school bullies) 事件频频发生,为了提高同学们的自我防范意识和保护能力,某英文报社将举行以“How to protect ourselves in school”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识,写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点:
1. 目前学校中的一些校园欺凌现象;
2. 校园欺凌对我们的影响;
3. 如何预防校园欺凌。(不少于三点做法)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能提及真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数80左右,开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
How to protect ourselves in school
These year, school bullies happen in almost every school.___________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to protect ourselves in school
These year, school bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school. So we will learn how to protect ourselves at school.
Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should keep calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should ask our teachers and parents for help as soon as possible or we can call the police in time. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any rude behavior. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Finally, following school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies. Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying.
I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】青少年问题、自我保护
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍在学校应该如何保护自己”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍主题是校园欺凌 ;
第二步,根据题干要点,描述学校的欺凌现象以及如何保护自己等要点;
第三步,号召大家一起行动起来反对校园欺凌,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②in time及时
[高分句型]
①Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies.(倒装句)
②Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying.(祈使句)
B
为配合扫黑除恶专项整治工作,杜绝校园欺凌,打造和谐安定校园,作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示:1.尊敬老师(respect the teachers),努力学习。
2.与同学融洽相处(get on well with),互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架,不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度(follow the school rules),不下河洗澡,不携带管制刀具(restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人,遇险应报警。
要求:1.语句通顺,语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词,内容可适当发挥。
3.作文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus._________________
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【答案】
It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus. It’s good for our life and study. As students, we should do something to create a harmonious and stable campus.
Firstly, we should respect the teachers and study hard. Secondly, we should get on well with our classmates, and we should help each other. Thirdly, we should not fight with others or steal others’ things. What’s more, we must follow the school rules. We can’t swim in the rivers or take restricted knives to school. Lastly, we should not meet the strangers alone. And we should call the police when we are in danger.
It’s our duty to keep our campus harmonious and stable. Let’s start from today.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、青少年问题
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示,写一篇作文关于解决校园欺凌、打造和谐安定校园。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称行文。写作时涵盖要点,不要遗漏,内容可适当发挥,适当使用连词使文章更加连贯。最后力求语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
C
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,以"How do you behave at school?"为题写一篇短文。
要点:
1)请简要描述两幅图片;
2)如果你受到欺负时,你该如何应对(至少 2 点);
3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象,谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点)。
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称;
3)100 词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
(1 (2
参考词汇:beat, kick, respect, harmonious(和谐的), stop bullying (欺凌)
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,___________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can see a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and stronger student is asking for money from others. This is called school bullying.
If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. In this way, I can keep myself safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me. I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, we'd better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble. Let's stop bullying and build a harmonious school.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、青少年问题
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作,请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,以"How do you behave at school?"为题写一篇短文。要点:1)请简要描述两幅图片;2)如果你受到欺负时,你该如何应对(至少 2 点);3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象,谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点)。2.例文点评:例文采用第一人称,时态采用一般将来时为主;本文所给材料比较详细,考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并可适当发挥。在写作时,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语: a group of students;asking for;protect myself;keep myself safe;so tha;instead of fighting;instead of fighting。
句型:宾语从句If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.目的状语此句Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.原因状语从句I won’t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
D
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,以"How to behave(表现) at school?"为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 简要描述两幅图片,并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少2点);
2. 作文中不得出现真实校名和姓名;
3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beat, kick, laugh at, respect(尊重), harmonious(和谐的)
How to Behave at School?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,_____________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
How to Behave at School?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, a group of students are laughing at a poor boy because he failed in the exam. In Picture Two, two girls are beating their classmate.
How rude they are! We should say no to such things. As a student, I think we should respect each other and be friendly to others. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help our classmates when they are in trouble. Let’s play a role in building a harmonious school.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】教育
【详解】这篇作文要求我们观察图片,根据图片所示的内容,以How to Behave at School为题目,写一篇文章。首先我们应仔细观察图片,图片中给我们展示了校园中的一些不好的现象,即校园欺凌,有武力上的,也有精神上的。我们应先把图片中的内容简要阐述一下,然后针对校园欺凌这一现象发表自己的看法,并谈一谈自己在学校应该如何做。这样我们的文章就有了大体的内容和结构,写作时注意不要遗漏要点,并分段叙述,这样比较有条理,层次比较清晰。通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时态来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。单词、句型、语法要合乎英语的表达习惯,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。而是从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的单词和短语,以简单句为主,使句式准确,然后再点缀一些高级词汇、短语和较复杂的句式,调整文章节奏,使文章的表达更加流畅、连贯。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。短文分两段,第一段中作者描写了图片中展示的内容,作者观察仔细,描述得也非常准确,虽然是简单的两句话,但意思非常明确。第二段中作者对校园欺凌这种现象发表了自己的看法,并提出建议,我们在学校应该如何表现。这一部分的内容非常充实,所提建议也很合理。这种分段叙述使文章条理清晰,结构安排合理。短文中使用了正确的语法,句式表达符合英语的表达习惯,且文章中使用了较丰富的句型和短语,如In Picture One, a group of students are laughing at a poor boy because he failed in the exam.、How rude they are!、As a student, I think we should respect each other and be friendly to others. 、If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. 、Besides, we should help our classmates when they are in trouble.等。
E
某英语杂志社正在征稿,请以“Stay Away from School Bullying”为题写一篇关于远离校园欺凌的文章向杂志社投稿。
内容要点:
1.校园欺凌主要发生在学生之间,通常指强大的一方欺负弱小的一方;
2.校园欺凌包括逼迫别人做事,如:买东西、抄作业、欺负其他同学等;
3.当我们遇到校园欺凌的时候,我们要主动向老师、父母等寻求帮助;
4.校园欺凌对学生的影响很长远,我们不能当欺凌者,避免成为受害者;
5.我们与同学之间要友好相处,互相帮助,让校园生活更加美好。
提示词:欺负:bully 欺凌者:bully 受害者:victim
要求:
1)词数80—100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数:
2)短文必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Stay Away from School Bullying
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Stay Away from School Bullying
School bullying mainly occurs among students, usually refers to the strong side bullying the weak side. Bullies force others to do things, such as buying things, copying homework, bullying other students. It is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school. So we will learn how to protect ourselves at school.
Firstly, when we are in the trouble of it, we should ask our teachers and parents for help as soon as possible or we can call the police in time. Secondly, we can’t be the bully and avoid being the victim. We should get along well with our classmates and help each other. Finally, following school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】学校人员、青少年问题、自我保护、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍什么是校园霸凌;
第二步,重点介绍如何保护自己;
第三步,书写结语。号召大家制止校园霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①force sb. to do sth.强迫某人做某事
②such as例如
③as soon as possible尽快
④get along well with sb.与某人相处融洽
⑤make an effort努力
[高分句型]
①Firstly, when we are in the trouble of it, we should ask our teachers and parents for help as soon as possible or we can call the police in time. (时间状语从句)
②I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future. (宾语从句)
F
校园欺凌事件屡有发生,而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑,不敢去学校,甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:
1)What can you see in the picture?
2)What do you think of school bullying?
3)What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?
要求:
1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2、词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:mental health problems(心理问题)bullies(仗势欺人者)
In the picture, I can see_______________________________________________________
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【答案】
In the picture, I can see two girls are bullying one girl. Bullying often occurs in schools.
In my opinion, school bullying is a serious problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying? If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、校园安全
【详解】1.题干解读:观察所给图片,根据所给提示和要求写一篇有关校园欺凌方面的短文,文中必须包含所给提示要点,可适当发挥,但短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
2.写作指导:本文主要是发表观点,提出处理方法,所以时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。写作时,可先描述图片中的现象,再发表自己的观点以及处理方法。保证内容完整、行文连贯、表达准确、书写规范。
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校园安全很重要。为了使学生能够更好地了解安全知识,遵守校园规则,学会自我保护,学校特举办校园安全演讲比赛。请你结合以下表格内容,用英语写一篇演讲稿。要求:
1) 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2) 80词左右 (开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数);
3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: campus校园 stairs楼梯 chase追赶 bully欺凌
Dos
Don’ts
understand safety knowledge
run up and down stairs
follow safety rules
chase or fight
keep to the right
bully classmates
learn to protect ourselves
talk to strangers
protect personal information
break traffic rules
...
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Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Good morning! Today, I am glad to stand here and talk about campus safety. As students, we should pay enough attention to campus safety.
Firstly,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Secondly, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Finally, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s make our campus safe and peaceful.
Thank you for your attention.
【答案】
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Good morning! Today, I am glad to stand here and talk about campus safety. As students, we should pay enough attention to campus safety.
Firstly, it’s our duty to understand safety knowledge. Following safety rules can keep us away from danger. For example, when we walk on the street, we must keep to the right and avoid breaking the traffic rules.
Secondly, to make sure we’re safe, we can neither run up and down stairs, nor chase or fight. Moreover, it’s a shame to bully classmates. We should get along well with each other.
Finally, learning to protect ourselves is the most necessary. Don’t talk to strangers when we’re alone. What’s more, we’d better realize the importance of personal information and try to protect it.
Let’s make our campus safe and peaceful.
Thank you for your attention.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】安全守则、自我保护
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态:时态为一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏,可适当添加要点
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍要遵守规则,如不违反交通规则等;
第二步,介绍校园秩序,如不在楼梯上奔跑,不追逐打闹等;
第三步,介绍自我保护,如保护个人信息,不跟陌生人交谈等。
[亮点词汇]
① keep sb away from 远离……
②avoid doing sth 避免……
③get along well with... 与……和睦相处
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s our duty to understand safety knowledge.(it 作形式主语)
②to make sure we’re safe, we can neither run up and down stairs, nor chase or fight. (动词不定式作目的状语,neither...nor...句型)
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