内容正文:
热点04 校园安全
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
上海交通大学火灾警示
近日,上海交大信息中心发生火灾,这一事件再次敲响了校园消防安全的警钟。火灾无情,它不仅给学校的财产带来了重大损失,更可能威胁到师生的生命安全。因此,我们必须高度重视校园消防安全,采取切实有效的措施,确保每一位师生都能在安全的环境中学习与生活。
2025年9月19日下午,上海交通大学闵行校区的网络信息中心突发火灾。现场弥漫着大量黑色浓烟,但有学生称火势已被及时控制。在起火建筑周围50米范围内,空气中弥漫着刺鼻的气味,令人担忧。据一位知情学生透露,此次火灾可能起源于信息中心的高压配电间。
【题材解析】
一、命题方向预测
1、核心主题聚焦
场景化考查:可能围绕校园、家庭或公共场所的火灾场景,要求考生描述应急措施(如逃生路线、灭火器使用)或提出安全建议。
技术结合:或涉及智能消防设备(如烟雾报警器、自动喷淋系统)的使用说明,体现科技与安全的结合。
2、题型可能性
应用文:如消防演练后的演讲稿(参考2024年安徽中考“Fire Safety Day”活动总结);
说明文:介绍灭火器操作步骤或火灾逃生指南(类似2024年四川雅安“如何自我保护”题型);
书信/邮件:向国际笔友普及中国校园消防规范(参考2014年安徽暑期安全规则写作)。
二、高频考点梳理
1、核心词汇与句式
关键词:fire extinguisher(灭火器)、evacuation route(逃生路线)、smoke alarm(烟雾报警器)、emergency exit(紧急出口)、first aid(急救)。
2、功能句式:
建议类:It is essential to.../ You should...
步骤描述:First, ... Second, ... Finally, ...
警示类:Never use elevators during a fire./ Avoid overcrowding in staircases.
3、评分标准侧重点
内容完整性:需覆盖火灾预防、应急处理、逃生技巧等维度;
逻辑连贯性:使用连接词(e.g., Moreover, Additionally)增强段落衔接;
语言准确性:避免中式英语(如“take the lift”应为“use the elevator”)。
三、备考策略建议
1、素材积累
模板句式:
Fire safety is everyone’s responsibility. Remember to...
In case of fire, remain calm and follow these steps:
数据引用:
如“According to a survey, 60% of fire accidents occur due to electrical faults”。
2、实战演练
仿写训练:参考安徽中考范文结构(活动目的→操作步骤→个人体会);
限时写作:模拟10分钟内完成80-100词短文,强化语言精炼度。
易错点规避
时态混淆:描述常规措施用一般现在时,具体演练过程用一般过去时;
术语错误:区分 firefighter(消防员)与 fire engine(消防车)。
四、高分范文示例
题目:Write a passage about how to use a fire extinguisher.
范文片段:
Last week, our school organized a fire safety training. The instructor taught us the ASS method:
Pull the safety pin, Aim at the base of the fire, Squeeze the handle, and Sweep side to side.
This simple technique can prevent small fires from spreading. Remember, never attempt to extinguish large flames without professional help.
五、趋势总结
2026年消防安全部分可能更注重实践性与互动性,例如要求考生设计逃生路线图或录制消防知识短视频的脚本。建议考生关注社会热点(如高层建筑火灾、电动车充电安全),并积累相关表达。
【典型范文】
A
假设你是李辉,上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的;
2. 灭火器的使用方法;
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. _________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
每年的三月二十六日是全国中小学生安全教育日。寒假即将来临,为了进一步增强中小学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某英文报将举行以消防安全为主题的征文活动。内容包括:你们学校多久举行一次消防演习(a fire drill),在演习中你们应该怎么做,以及你认为消防演习有什么好处。
提示词语:
enhance safety awareness(增强安全意识);instructions(吩咐,指导);
assigned routes(指定路线);emergency events(突发事件);self-protection(自我保护)
提示问题:
How often do you have a fire drill in your school?
What should you do during the fire drill?
What do you think of the fire drill?
I’m glad to talk something about fire drills. Life is valuable. We should take it seriously.____
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了消防安全教育活动,你的笔友Jim对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。
Date
November 9th
Place
on the playground
Activities
* have a fire drill (演练)
* watch firefighters put out the fire
* take a lesson on how to protect ourselves from fires
1.cover our faces
2....
3....
Feelings
…
参考词汇:fire extinguisher (灭火器)
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad that you take an interest in our school fire drill last Friday. ___________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you? Did you take part in such an activity? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展训练】
A
假如你是李华,是天津益中学校九年级的学生。十一月是你校的安全教育月,学校将在''全国消防日''举办消防疏散演练。请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲, 介绍拨打火警 电话''119''的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习,积极参与,听从指挥。
要点:
拨打火警电话''119''注意事项:
1 要记清火警电话''119''。
2 电话接通以后,要准确报出失火的地址,在说不清楚具体地址时,要说出地理位置,周 围明显建筑物或道路标志。
3 将自己的姓名、电话告诉对方,以便联系。
4 打完电话后,立即派人到路口等候消防车,引导消防车迅速赶到火灾地点。
倡议:
请同学们要认真对待消防演习,积极参与,听从指挥。
参考词汇:
地理位置:locationn.明显的:distinct adj.道路标志:landmark n.消防车: fire enginen.
消防演习:fire drills指挥,指令: instructions n. 消防安全:fire control
要求:
1)词数:80-120 个
2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
I'm so honored to be here to give a speech.As we know, fire control plays an important part on campus.How do we call 119 if there is a fire?________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
B
为提高学生的消防安全意识,增强自防自救能力,你班开展了“致敬火焰蓝,消防零距离”主题活动,上周五老师带领同学们走进消防站参观学习。请你根据下面提示,以“A visit to the fire station”为题,用英语写一篇短文分享你的经历与收获。
提示:
1. 一位消防员给同学们解释了各种消防安全标志的意思,教同学们如何使用消防器材以及在火灾中如何保证安全;
2. 参观消防站与消防车;
3. 观看消防员训练;
4. 试穿消防员制服;
5. 收获与感想:……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括提示中的要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺;
3. 100词左右。
提示词:消防站 fire station;消防员 fireman(可数);消防车 fire truck(可数);
消防安全标志 fire safety sign(可数);火,火灾 fire;消防器材fire-fighting equipment(不可数);
A visit to the fire station
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大问题。假设你是一名老师,要对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
2. 书写工整,语句通顺、连贯,词数80左右。
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D
近期,学校正开展“‘911’消防安全教育专题”活动,倡议大家制作有关消防安全的主题宣传海报。你认为这样的活动非常有意义,并发邮件给你的英国朋友Tom,与他分享你对消防安全的看法和对海报设计的想法。请根据以下图示,写一篇不少于80词的英语邮件。
提示:
1.要点齐全,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.邮件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Recently, my school has called on students to design a theme poster which arouses students’ attention to the fire safety. I’d like to share my ideas about the poster with you. _________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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热点04 校园安全
备考2026年中考英语新课标(核心素养)同步大师课堂之书面表达统统过
【热点预测】
上海交通大学火灾警示
近日,上海交大信息中心发生火灾,这一事件再次敲响了校园消防安全的警钟。火灾无情,它不仅给学校的财产带来了重大损失,更可能威胁到师生的生命安全。因此,我们必须高度重视校园消防安全,采取切实有效的措施,确保每一位师生都能在安全的环境中学习与生活。
2025年9月19日下午,上海交通大学闵行校区的网络信息中心突发火灾。现场弥漫着大量黑色浓烟,但有学生称火势已被及时控制。在起火建筑周围50米范围内,空气中弥漫着刺鼻的气味,令人担忧。据一位知情学生透露,此次火灾可能起源于信息中心的高压配电间。
【题材解析】
一、命题方向预测
1、核心主题聚焦
场景化考查:可能围绕校园、家庭或公共场所的火灾场景,要求考生描述应急措施(如逃生路线、灭火器使用)或提出安全建议。
技术结合:或涉及智能消防设备(如烟雾报警器、自动喷淋系统)的使用说明,体现科技与安全的结合。
2、题型可能性
应用文:如消防演练后的演讲稿(参考2024年安徽中考“Fire Safety Day”活动总结);
说明文:介绍灭火器操作步骤或火灾逃生指南(类似2024年四川雅安“如何自我保护”题型);
书信/邮件:向国际笔友普及中国校园消防规范(参考2014年安徽暑期安全规则写作)。
二、高频考点梳理
1、核心词汇与句式
关键词:fire extinguisher(灭火器)、evacuation route(逃生路线)、smoke alarm(烟雾报警器)、emergency exit(紧急出口)、first aid(急救)。
2、功能句式:
建议类:It is essential to.../ You should...
步骤描述:First, ... Second, ... Finally, ...
警示类:Never use elevators during a fire./ Avoid overcrowding in staircases.
3、评分标准侧重点
内容完整性:需覆盖火灾预防、应急处理、逃生技巧等维度;
逻辑连贯性:使用连接词(e.g., Moreover, Additionally)增强段落衔接;
语言准确性:避免中式英语(如“take the lift”应为“use the elevator”)。
三、备考策略建议
1、素材积累
模板句式:
Fire safety is everyone’s responsibility. Remember to...
In case of fire, remain calm and follow these steps:
数据引用:
如“According to a survey, 60% of fire accidents occur due to electrical faults”。
2、实战演练
仿写训练:参考安徽中考范文结构(活动目的→操作步骤→个人体会);
限时写作:模拟10分钟内完成80-100词短文,强化语言精炼度。
易错点规避
时态混淆:描述常规措施用一般现在时,具体演练过程用一般过去时;
术语错误:区分 firefighter(消防员)与 fire engine(消防车)。
四、高分范文示例
题目:Write a passage about how to use a fire extinguisher.
范文片段:
Last week, our school organized a fire safety training. The instructor taught us the ASS method:
Pull the safety pin, Aim at the base of the fire, Squeeze the handle, and Sweep side to side.
This simple technique can prevent small fires from spreading. Remember, never attempt to extinguish large flames without professional help.
五、趋势总结
2026年消防安全部分可能更注重实践性与互动性,例如要求考生设计逃生路线图或录制消防知识短视频的脚本。建议考生关注社会热点(如高层建筑火灾、电动车充电安全),并积累相关表达。
【典型范文】
A
假设你是李辉,上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的;
2. 灭火器的使用方法;
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. _________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、个人经历
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是看图作文;
②时态:一般过去时,一般现在时
③提示:结合图示信息,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”,点明活动的目的;
第二步,具体介绍灭火器的使用方法;
最后,表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。
[亮点词汇]
①draw one’s attention 吸引某人的注意
②pick up 捡起
③pull off 拔出
④as soon as 一……就……
⑤put out 扑灭
[高分句型]
①When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly.(when引导时间状语从句)
②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire.(as soon as引导时间状语从句)
B
每年的三月二十六日是全国中小学生安全教育日。寒假即将来临,为了进一步增强中小学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某英文报将举行以消防安全为主题的征文活动。内容包括:你们学校多久举行一次消防演习(a fire drill),在演习中你们应该怎么做,以及你认为消防演习有什么好处。
提示词语:
enhance safety awareness(增强安全意识);instructions(吩咐,指导);
assigned routes(指定路线);emergency events(突发事件);self-protection(自我保护)
提示问题:
How often do you have a fire drill in your school?
What should you do during the fire drill?
What do you think of the fire drill?
I’m glad to talk something about fire drills. Life is valuable. We should take it seriously.____
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I’m glad to talk something about fire drills. Life is valuable. We should take it seriously. In order to further enhance the safety awareness of the students and improve their abilities of self-protection, our school has a fire drill once a term. Here are some tips during the fire drill.
When you hear the fire alarm, move quickly but don’t run. Cover your mouth with a cloth and leave your school things in the classroom. Follow your teacher’s instructions and go outside the classroom in an orderly way. Remember don’t take the lift. Don’t run. Walk along the stairs and follow the assigned routes to the playground. Stay in the area! Wait for your teacher to call your name and be sure that you’re safe. At last, don’t go back into the school buildings until your teacher tells you that it’s safe.
For the activity, I think it’s useful and important for us to experience such a drill. Because it not only tells us how to deal with the emergency events but also greatly improves our sense of safety and the ability of self-protection.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】方法/策略、安全守则、自我保护、校园安全
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文属于话题作文写作,写作时按说明文的格式来写。写作时承接短文开头,按照题目要点依次说明。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称、第二人称和第三人称来写,说明学校组织消防学习活动时采用第一人称,在说明演习中如何做时采用第二人称,对演习进行评价时采用第一人称和第三人称来写;文章主要采用一般现在时。在描述演习时如何做的部分,可采用祈使句句式,按照步骤依次描述,注意保证条理清晰。
C
假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了消防安全教育活动,你的笔友Jim对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。
Date
November 9th
Place
on the playground
Activities
* have a fire drill (演练)
* watch firefighters put out the fire
* take a lesson on how to protect ourselves from fires
1.cover our faces
2....
3....
Feelings
…
参考词汇:fire extinguisher (灭火器)
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad that you take an interest in our school fire drill last Friday. ___________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you? Did you take part in such an activity? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad that you take an interest in our school fire drill last Friday. It was held on November 9th on the playground. First, we had a fire drill. Then, we watched firefighters put out the fire with fire extinguishers. Their actions were amazing. After that, we took a lesson on protecting ourselves from fire. We learned to cover our face, keep low to the ground, and call 119 at once when there’s a fire. I think the activity is meaningful. It not only makes me understand the importance of fire safety but also know how to protect myself.
How about you? Did you take part in such an activity? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【难度】0.4
【知识点】哲理感悟、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用作文,为书信;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达对Jim对这次活动感兴趣的喜悦;
第二步,具体描述活动过程;
第三步,分享活动的意义以及自己对消防安全重要性的认识;
第四步,结束信件表示期待Jim的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① fire drill 消防演习
② put out 扑灭
③ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I’m glad that you take an interest in our school fire drill last Friday. (that引导的宾语从句)
②We learned to cover our face, keep low to the ground, and call 119 at once when there’s a fire. (when引导的时间状语从句)
【拓展训练】
A
假如你是李华,是天津益中学校九年级的学生。十一月是你校的安全教育月,学校将在''全国消防日''举办消防疏散演练。请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲, 介绍拨打火警 电话''119''的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习,积极参与,听从指挥。
要点:
拨打火警电话''119''注意事项:
1 要记清火警电话''119''。
2 电话接通以后,要准确报出失火的地址,在说不清楚具体地址时,要说出地理位置,周 围明显建筑物或道路标志。
3 将自己的姓名、电话告诉对方,以便联系。
4 打完电话后,立即派人到路口等候消防车,引导消防车迅速赶到火灾地点。
倡议:
请同学们要认真对待消防演习,积极参与,听从指挥。
参考词汇:
地理位置:locationn.明显的:distinct adj.道路标志:landmark n.消防车: fire enginen.
消防演习:fire drills指挥,指令: instructions n. 消防安全:fire control
要求:
1)词数:80-120 个
2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
I'm so honored to be here to give a speech.As we know, fire control plays an important part on campus.How do we call 119 if there is a fire?________________________________________
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】
I'm so honored to be here to give a speech. As we know, fire control plays an important part on campus. How do we call 119 if there is a fire? First of all, remember the fire alarm number "119" . Second, After the phone is connected, report the address of the fire accurately. When you are not clear about the specific address, you should say the location, surrounding distinct buildings or landmark. Third, tell your name and telephone number to the other party so that you can get in touch. Finally, after the call, immediately send someone to the intersection to wait for fire engine, and guide the fire truck to the fire site quickly.
Please take the fire drill seriously, actively participate in it and obey the instructions. It is necessary to master fire control.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】急救、意见/建议
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇倡议书,假如你是李华,请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲,介绍拨打火警电话“119”的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习,积极参与,听从指挥。文中从四个方面介绍了拨打火警电话“119”注意事项。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第二人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般现在时态,写作时注意承接开头,可以适当用一些连词,短语或句型;使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也符合语法结构,内容包括每一个要点提示,可适当发挥注意语言的逻辑性。
B
为提高学生的消防安全意识,增强自防自救能力,你班开展了“致敬火焰蓝,消防零距离”主题活动,上周五老师带领同学们走进消防站参观学习。请你根据下面提示,以“A visit to the fire station”为题,用英语写一篇短文分享你的经历与收获。
提示:
1. 一位消防员给同学们解释了各种消防安全标志的意思,教同学们如何使用消防器材以及在火灾中如何保证安全;
2. 参观消防站与消防车;
3. 观看消防员训练;
4. 试穿消防员制服;
5. 收获与感想:……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括提示中的要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺;
3. 100词左右。
提示词:消防站 fire station;消防员 fireman(可数);消防车 fire truck(可数);
消防安全标志 fire safety sign(可数);火,火灾 fire;消防器材fire-fighting equipment(不可数);
A visit to the fire station
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【答案】
A visit to the fire station
Last Friday, our class visited the fire station to learn about fire safety. A fireman first explained the meanings of different fire safety signs and taught us how to use fire-fighting equipment. He also showed us how to stay safe during a fire.
Then, we toured the fire station and saw several shiny fire trucks. After that, we watched the firemen training hard. They climbed ladders quickly and sprayed water powerfully. The most exciting part was trying on the fireman’s uniform. It was heavy but made me feel like a real hero!
This visit taught me the importance of fire safety. Now I know how to protect myself and help others in danger. I truly appreciate the bravery of firefighters!
【难度】0.4
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍消防员讲解消防知识;
第二步,介绍观看消防站与消防车、观看消防员训练以及试穿消防员制服等经历;
第三步,介绍自己的收获与感想。
[亮点词汇]
①stay safe保持安全
②try on试穿
③in danger处于危险之中
[高分句型]
①He also showed us how to stay safe during a fire. (“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
C
根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大问题。假设你是一名老师,要对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
2. 书写工整,语句通顺、连贯,词数80左右。
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
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【答案】
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
It is necessary for students to know how to protect themselves in a fire. And here come the methods.
First, we should keep calm and find the exit quickly. You’d better walk the stairs instead of taking the lift. Second, we should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it. Next, we should cover our noses with a wet cloth or a wet towel because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poison gas. Finally, we should try our best to get out of the fire as quickly as possible.
I think these methods are very useful for us.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】自我保护
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
② 时态:主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明在火场中保护自己很重要,引出下文保护自己的方法;
第二步,详细介绍在火场中保护自己的方法;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep calm保持冷静
②instead of而不是
③cut off the electricity切断电源
④as quickly as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①It is necessary for students to know how to protect themselves in a fire. And here come the methods. (“It is+形容词+for sb to do sth”结构)
②Next, we should cover our nose with a wet cloth or a wet towel because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poison gas. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I think these methods are very useful for us. (省略that的宾语从句)
D
近期,学校正开展“‘911’消防安全教育专题”活动,倡议大家制作有关消防安全的主题宣传海报。你认为这样的活动非常有意义,并发邮件给你的英国朋友Tom,与他分享你对消防安全的看法和对海报设计的想法。请根据以下图示,写一篇不少于80词的英语邮件。
提示:
1.要点齐全,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.邮件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Recently, my school has called on students to design a theme poster which arouses students’ attention to the fire safety. I’d like to share my ideas about the poster with you. _________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Recently, my school has called on students to design a theme poster which arouses students’ attention to the fire safety. I’d like to share my ideas about the poster with you.
First, the basic safety rules are of great importance, which should be included in your poster. Second, following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its importance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Third, adding a few suggestions about safety awareness is necessary. In addition, it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
Do you agree with my opinions? I am looking forward to you reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【难度】0.15
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇电子邮件。向朋友Tom分享自己对设计有关消防安全海报的想法。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段分享自己对此海报的看法和意见;最后一段询问对方是否同意自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
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