专题10 书面表达（期末真题汇编，天津专用）九年级英语上学期

专题10 书面表达 主题01 短文投稿 （24-25学年九年级上·河北区·期末） 65．假如你是李华，本期你校英文报中的Famous People栏目将要介绍我国著名的短跑运动员苏炳添，现面向广大学生征稿。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 1. 1989年8月29日出生于广东省中山市。 2. 小时候喜欢跑步，于2009年加入国家队。 3. 在2018年雅加达亚运会男子100米比赛中夺得金牌。 4. 在2020年东京奥运会上，成为首位进入奥运百米决赛的中国人。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：2018年雅加达亚运会 the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games 2020年东京奥运会 the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games 奥运100米决赛 Olympic 100-metre final 要求： 1. 词数：80—100。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题2 邮件与书信 （24-25学年九年级上·武清区·期末） 86．假如你是李华，去年暑假参观了三星堆博物馆。请你用英语给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你的所见所闻。 （1）你和父母一起去了三星堆博物馆。 （2）博物馆位于四川，你们乘飞机到达。 （3）博物馆8: 30开馆，当天有许多的参观者。 （4）你看到了不同种类的展品，最喜欢的是青铜雕像。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：Sanxingdui Museum三星堆博物馆      bronze figure statue 青铜雕像 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 主题03 发言稿 （24-25学年九年级上·部分区·期末） 86．英语课上，老师要求你们讨论自己身边发生的事情，并在全班同学面前发表自己的看法。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 要点提示如下： （1）上周六晚上，你的好朋友李华去参加了朋友的生日派对； （2）李华和朋友们在一起唱歌、玩游戏，他很开心； （3）可是整晚李华父母都很担心； （4）深夜回到家，李华无任何歉意，倒头就睡了； （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：80-100词； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls, I’m happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about one thing which happened to my friend, Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 主题04 记叙文 （24-25学年九年级上·西青·期末） 66．元旦假期你和几个好朋友去参观了天津体育博物馆，请根据以下提示写一篇日记记录这次经历。 (1) 博物馆位于民园广场3层。 (2) 了解了天津与奥运会的故事。 (3) 看到很多天津优秀的运动员获得的好成绩。 (4) 在那拍摄了很多照片，并把它们发布到了学校网站。 (5) 这次经历给我带来的感受…… 参考词汇: 天津体育博物馆 Tianjin Sports Museum 民园广场 Minyuan Square 运动员 athlete 要求： (1) 词数: 80-100词左右。 (2) 开头已给出，不计入总数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025                                            Sunny During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题01 短文投稿 （24-25学年九年级上·河西区·期末） 66．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，学校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 注意：（1）词数80-100； （2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 主题 绿色城市，健康生活 做法 骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境。 你的观点 ……（至少2条） The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25学年九年级上·红桥区·期末） 66．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感受。 (1) 屠呦呦1930年出生在宁波，她因发现青蒿素而闻名； (2) 青蒿素能有效对抗疟疾——种很严重的疾病； (3) 历经190次失败后，她在中草药中发现了青蒿素，这种药已拯救了数百万人的生命； (4) 2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； (5) 你认为…… 参考词汇：草药herb  青蒿素qinghaosu  疟疾malaria  有效地effectively  对抗fight  诺贝尔生理学或医学奖Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 要求：    (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tu Youyou Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25学年九年级上·南开区·期末） 66．蒋裕燕，游泳运动员，巴黎残奥会闭幕式中国体育代表团旗手。根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，讲讲蒋裕燕的故事，并分享你的感受。 蒋裕燕出生于2004年。四岁时，一场交通事故夺走了她的右臂和右腿。2011年，妈妈把蒋裕燕送到体校开始学习游泳。 起初，蒋裕燕在水中无法保持平衡。经过刻苦训练，她进步很大。在巴黎残奥会上，她一人获得7枚金牌。 蒋裕燕说：“是游泳给了我勇气和人生的动力。” 参考词汇：balance 平衡 ；motivation 动力 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Today I’d like to talk about Jiang Yuyan, a swimmer, who was the flag bearer of China for the closing ceremony of the Paris Paralympic Games. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 记叙文 （24-25学年九年级上·滨海新区·期末） 66．当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人应该从我们身边的小事做起。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文。（1）李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； （2）上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾； （3）李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人； （4）他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天； （5）李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； （6）你认为…… 参考词汇：社区志愿者community volunteer    和……聊天chat with 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Grandma Li is an old woman, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达 主题01 短文投稿 （24-25学年九年级上·河北区·期末） 65．假如你是李华，本期你校英文报中的Famous People栏目将要介绍我国著名的短跑运动员苏炳添，现面向广大学生征稿。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 1. 1989年8月29日出生于广东省中山市。 2. 小时候喜欢跑步，于2009年加入国家队。 3. 在2018年雅加达亚运会男子100米比赛中夺得金牌。 4. 在2020年东京奥运会上，成为首位进入奥运百米决赛的中国人。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：2018年雅加达亚运会 the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games 2020年东京奥运会 the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games 奥运100米决赛 Olympic 100-metre final 要求： 1. 词数：80—100。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He was born on 29th August, 1989, in Zhongshan, Guangdong. When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day. In 2009, he joined the national team. And after that, he won lots of competitions. He won a gold medal in the men’s 100-metre race at the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games. At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final. I think he is a sports hero. Although he is over 30, he still continues running. I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当增加细节，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍苏炳添的基本信息； 第二步，具体阐述苏炳添的参赛经历及所获奖项； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①practice doing sth.练习做某事 ②so... that如此……以致于 ③learn from向……学习 ④so that以便于 [高分句型] ①When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.（so... that引导的结果状语从句） ③Although he is over 30, he still continues running.（although引导的让步状语从句） ④I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 主题2 邮件与书信 （24-25学年九年级上·武清区·期末） 86．假如你是李华，去年暑假参观了三星堆博物馆。请你用英语给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你的所见所闻。 （1）你和父母一起去了三星堆博物馆。 （2）博物馆位于四川，你们乘飞机到达。 （3）博物馆8: 30开馆，当天有许多的参观者。 （4）你看到了不同种类的展品，最喜欢的是青铜雕像。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：Sanxingdui Museum三星堆博物馆      bronze figure statue 青铜雕像 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, I visited the Sanxingdui Museum with my parents. It is located in Sichuan, and we took a plane to get there. The museum opens at 8:30 in the morning, and there were many visitors that day. We saw different kinds of exhibits. My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times. I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. I hope you can visit it one day too. Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in坐落于 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times. (定语从句) ②I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. (宾语从句) 主题03 发言稿 （24-25学年九年级上·部分区·期末） 86．英语课上，老师要求你们讨论自己身边发生的事情，并在全班同学面前发表自己的看法。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 要点提示如下： （1）上周六晚上，你的好朋友李华去参加了朋友的生日派对； （2）李华和朋友们在一起唱歌、玩游戏，他很开心； （3）可是整晚李华父母都很担心； （4）深夜回到家，李华无任何歉意，倒头就睡了； （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：80-100词； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls, I’m happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about one thing which happened to my friend, Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls, I’m happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about one thing which happened to my friend, Li Hua. Li Hua attended a friend’s birthday party last Saturday night. He sang and played games with his friends together. He had a great time. However, his parents were worried throughout the night. Li Hua didn’t return home until late at night, and he didn’t show any sign of apology. Instead, he went straight to sleep. I think that it’s important for us to understand the concerns of our parents and to communicate with them more. In this way, we can have a better understanding of each other and avoid misunderstandings. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：一般过去时与一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分享好朋友李华的经历； 第二步，发表自己感想。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with和……交流 ②a better understanding of对……更好的理解 [高分句型] ①Li Hua didn’t return home until late at night, and he didn’t show any sign of apology.（not…until句型） 主题04 记叙文 （24-25学年九年级上·西青·期末） 66．元旦假期你和几个好朋友去参观了天津体育博物馆，请根据以下提示写一篇日记记录这次经历。 (1) 博物馆位于民园广场3层。 (2) 了解了天津与奥运会的故事。 (3) 看到很多天津优秀的运动员获得的好成绩。 (4) 在那拍摄了很多照片，并把它们发布到了学校网站。 (5) 这次经历给我带来的感受…… 参考词汇: 天津体育博物馆 Tianjin Sports Museum 民园广场 Minyuan Square 运动员 athlete 要求： (1) 词数: 80-100词左右。 (2) 开头已给出，不计入总数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025                                            Sunny During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025                                                                                                                                   Sunny During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to visit the Tianjin Sports Museum with some good friends. The museum is located on the third floor of Minyuan Square. It was an amazing experience. At the museum, we learned about the stories of Tianjin and the Olympic Games. We saw many achievements of excellent Tianjin athletes. They have won many competitions and brought honor to our city. We felt very proud of them.We took many photos at the museum. I uploaded them to the school website after we came back. I want to share these great moments with my classmates. This visit was very meaningful to me. I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship. I will work harder and never give up, just like those great athletes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文，为日记。 ②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。 ③人称：以第一人称书写。 ④提示:根据提示问题介绍自己这次的旅游经历，注意要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍出行的地点，时间，人物。 第二步，介绍具体的活动内容; 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about了解 ②feel proud of为……感到自豪 ③take photos拍照 [高分句型] I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship.(使用not only...but also...句型。) 主题01 短文投稿 （24-25学年九年级上·河西区·期末） 66．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，学校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 注意：（1）词数80-100； （2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 主题 绿色城市，健康生活 做法 骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境。 你的观点 ……（至少2条） The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment. In my opinion, I will try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone should play a part in protecting the environment. I hope our city will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题：说明建设绿色城市的重要性及必要性； 第二步，描述做法：骑车出行减少污染；垃圾入箱保持整洁；多种树木保护环境； 第三步，个人观点：附加2条以上建议，如节约用水，使用节能电器等。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do最好做某事 ②turn off关闭 [高分句型] ①I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope our city will become better and better.（宾语从句） （24-25学年九年级上·红桥区·期末） 66．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感受。 (1) 屠呦呦1930年出生在宁波，她因发现青蒿素而闻名； (2) 青蒿素能有效对抗疟疾——种很严重的疾病； (3) 历经190次失败后，她在中草药中发现了青蒿素，这种药已拯救了数百万人的生命； (4) 2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； (5) 你认为…… 参考词汇：草药herb  青蒿素qinghaosu  疟疾malaria  有效地effectively  对抗fight  诺贝尔生理学或医学奖Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 要求：    (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tu Youyou Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo in 1930. She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight against malaria, a very serious disease. After 190 failures, she succeeded in discovering it in Chinese herbs. The medicine has saved millions of lives. In 2015, she became the first woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. I think we should learn from her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给要点进行写作，适当补充，注意时态，要求语法正确、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍屠哟哟的个人经历； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for 因……而出名 ②succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 ③a great contribution to 对……的巨大贡献 [高分句型] I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. （宾语从句，原因状语从句） （24-25学年九年级上·南开区·期末） 66．蒋裕燕，游泳运动员，巴黎残奥会闭幕式中国体育代表团旗手。根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，讲讲蒋裕燕的故事，并分享你的感受。 蒋裕燕出生于2004年。四岁时，一场交通事故夺走了她的右臂和右腿。2011年，妈妈把蒋裕燕送到体校开始学习游泳。 起初，蒋裕燕在水中无法保持平衡。经过刻苦训练，她进步很大。在巴黎残奥会上，她一人获得7枚金牌。 蒋裕燕说：“是游泳给了我勇气和人生的动力。” 参考词汇：balance 平衡 ；motivation 动力 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Today I’d like to talk about Jiang Yuyan, a swimmer, who was the flag bearer of China for the closing ceremony of the Paris Paralympic Games. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Today I’d like to talk about Jiang Yuyan, a swimmer, who was the flag bearer of China for the closing ceremony of the Paris Paralympic Games. Jiang Yuyan was born in 2004. At the age of four, a traffic accident took away her right arm and right leg. In 2011, her mother sent her to a sports school to start learning swimming. At first, Jiang Yuyan couldn’t keep her balance in the water. But through hard training, she made great progress. In the Paris Paralympic Games, she won seven gold medals all by herself. Jiang Yuyan said, “It is swimming that gives me the courage and the motivation of my life.” Her story really inspires me. It makes me understand that no matter what difficulties we meet, as long as we have strong will and work hard, we can achieve our goals and shine brightly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为 “一般过去时” 和 “一般现在时” ； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意分享自己的感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述蒋裕燕的故事； 第二步，分享自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of 在……岁时 ②take away 带走 ③at first 起初 ④make great progress 取得巨大进步 ⑤as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①It is swimming that gives me the courage and the motivation of my life.（强调句） ②It makes me understand that no matter what difficulties we meet, as long as we have strong will and work hard, we can achieve our goals and shine brightly.（宾语从句；状语从句） 主题02 记叙文 （24-25学年九年级上·滨海新区·期末） 66．当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人应该从我们身边的小事做起。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文。（1）李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； （2）上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾； （3）李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人； （4）他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天； （5）李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； （6）你认为…… 参考词汇：社区志愿者community volunteer    和……聊天chat with 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Grandma Li is an old woman, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors. Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. There was no one around taking care of her. So Li Jin and community volunteers went to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit. In the hospital, some helped the old woman wash clothes, the others chatted with her. Grandma Li was very happy and felt much better. From my point of view, if everyone gives a hand to someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful and nicer. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； 第二步，具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾；李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人；他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天；李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； 第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己对老龄化现象的见解。 [亮点词汇] ①be ill生病的 ②take care of照顾 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ④chat with sb与某人聊天 ⑤From my point of view就我而言 ⑥give a hand to sb帮助某人 ⑦be in trouble处于困境中 [高分句型] ①Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone.(who引导的定语从句) ②There was no one around taking care of her.(there be句型) ③From my point of view, if everyone gives a hand to someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful and nicer.(if引导的条件状语从句和who引导的定语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $