突破14：征文 倡议 -（配套Word）【高考快车道】2026年高考英语大一轮总复习

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了征文/倡议类写作核心考点，涵盖“篇首背景-篇中内容-篇尾号召”结构模块、句式模板及话题词汇，按“语料储备-真题解析-实战应用”递进架构组织，通过真题审题任务和实战写作任务驱动，引导学生自主构建写作知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于“诊断-建模-应用”三阶自主学习设计，开篇设置学生习作与范文对比诊断表，学生结合教师点评自主发现结构重复、语法错误等问题，利用句式建模模块和话题词汇表积累素材提升语言能力，通过审题构思框架训练思维品质。帮助学生形成个性化写作策略，教师可依据学情精准指导，支持因材施教。

突破14:征文/倡议 语料储备 【句式建模】 1.篇首——说明背景 ①为了减轻学习压力,降低严重健康问题的风险,我呼吁学生在休息时间锻炼身体。 In an attempt to relieve study pressure and reduce the risk of serious health problems, I ’d like to call on students to work out during break time.  ②如今,越来越多的学生由于熬夜而缺乏足够的睡眠,这是由于繁重的课业或对智能手机的沉迷造成的。 Nowadays, an increasing number of students lack enough sleep due to staying up late, which results from heavy schoolwork or addiction to smart phones.  2.篇中——倡议内容 ①良好睡眠的重要性怎么强调都不过分。它不仅可以增强我们的身体,还有助于培养平和的心态,使我们在身体和精神上受益。 The importance of good sleep can never be emphasized too much.Not only can it strengthen our body, but also contribute to a peaceful mindset, benefiting us physically and mentally.  ②解决方案如下。我建议青少年每天远离电子设备一两个小时,专注于阅读、运动等。 Solutions are here to stay.I advise adolescents to stay away from electronic devices for one or two hours each day, focusing on reading, sports and the like.  ③此外,每当我们看到地上的垃圾时,我们都有义务把它捡起来。 Besides, it is our obligation to pick up the litter on the ground whenever we see it.  3.篇尾——号召行动 ①现在是时候采取行动,改变我们的环境了。你的贡献很重要。 It is high time that we took action right now and made a difference to our environment.Your contributions do count.  ②行动胜于言语。让我们从这一刻开始,过上健康的生活。 Action speaks louder than speech.Let ’s get started from this moment to lead a healthy life.  【话题词汇】 常用词汇 话题示例 相关表达 (1)advocate/advocacy(提倡) (2)importance/significance(重要性) (3)promote/improve/promotion/improvement(促进) (4)reflect/reflection(反思) (5)joint effort(共同努力) (6)cooperation/collaboration(合作) (7)take action(采取措施) (8)make a contribution to(对……有影响) (9)shoulder the responsibility(肩负责任) (10)be dedicated to(致力于) 假定你是校学生会主席李华,时值春暖花开,万物复苏,请你围绕“走进春天,锻炼身体”这一主题,在校英文报上发一封倡议书,要点如下:1.倡议的目的;2.具体内容。 (1)呼吁学生定期锻炼appeal to students to take exercise on a regular basis (2)帮助锻炼我们的身体help build up our body (3)保持我们的心理健康maintain our mental health (4)降低抑郁和焦虑的几率lower the chance of depression and anxiety (5)和朋友一起做一些团体运动do some group sports with friends (6)毫无疑问,应该立即采取措施改变现状。It ’s no doubt that immediate measures should be taken to change the present situation. 你校将以“节约粮食,减少浪费”为主题举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.浪费粮食的现象;2.节约粮食的做法;3.节约粮食的倡议。 (1)导致大量食物浪费result in a huge waste of food (2)鼓励点适量的食物be encouraged to order a proper amount of food (3)对食物不要太挑剔not be too particular about food (4)提高我们珍惜食物、反对浪费食物的意识raise our awareness of treasuring food and fighting against wasting food (5)强烈建议订购小份strongly advocate ordering smaller portions 重温真题 (2022·全国甲卷) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括: 1.海洋的重要性; 2.保护海洋的倡议。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Our oceans, our responsibility June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. ___________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题与构思】 本次写作任务是一篇倡议书。应该采用正式的书面用语,以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。 内容结构方面,可将文章分为三段。 第一段 总结海洋的作用;或者以目前存在的海洋污染现象严重引入,呼吁大家重视对海洋的保护 第二段 介绍海洋的重要性,要从不同的角度下笔,如海洋孕育了多样的生命,海洋拥有丰富的资源,海洋为人类提供了生计和旅游资源等 第三段 提出保护海洋的建议、措施,并在文章最后进行呼吁 【经典范文】 Our oceans, our responsibility June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.Admittedly, at no time should we underestimate the power of oceans. To begin with, the ocean plays a significant role on our blue planet.On the one hand, accounting for about 70% of the Earth ’s surface, it is a cradle for diverse creatures, which enriches the biodiversity and balances ecosystem.On the other hand, boasting valuable and sufficient natural resources, the ocean promotes the development of local fishing and travelling industry.So indispensable is it that we should shoulder our responsibility to conserve it. Initially, laws and restrictions are expected to come into effect so as to regulate human activities.As for individuals, everyone ought to become an Ocean Guardian dedicated to advancing Marine Conservation such as saying NO to single-use plastics, joining in beach clean-up campaigns and purchasing only sustainable sea products. Action speaks louder than words.For the prosperous future of our generations, now is the time to take measures! 【学生习作】 Our oceans, our responsibility June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.The Ocean which covers more than 70% of the Earth is not only the cradle of all lives but also an unexplored treasury with infinite resources.Most importantly, the ocean holds a variety of creatures that enrich the biodiversity and offer livelihood to the residents. Put simply, it ’s high time that we should take action to protect the indispensable region of our planet.The multiple methods ranging from regulating our behaviour to enhancing the awareness of protection.Moreover, it ’s essential to take steps in advocating marine protection to our young generation by making educational documentary or garbage-collecting activities. Marine protection requires every individual ’s effort so as to make a contribution to a cleaner and sustainable ocean.Every drop of water counts! 教师点评 [得分]11分 优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整; 2.语言恰当,较好地达到了倡议的目的。 缺点:1.缺少一个首段引入; 2.要点重复,如第一段的“the cradle of all lives”和“holds a variety of creatures”; 3.语言表达错误。第二段的句子出现语法错误,原句缺少谓语动词,应改为“There are multiple methods ranging from regulating our behaviour to enhancing the awareness of protection.”; 4.句子间的逻辑关系混乱。第二段的最后一句和前一句不是递进的关系,使用“Moreover”作为连词不合适,最后一句应该是前一句建议的具体表现; 5.第三段的make a contribution to不符合该语境,造成病句。可以改正为 so as to achieve a crystal-clear and sustainable ocean, marine protection requires our joint efforts. 【修改与升级】 Our oceans, our responsibility June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. With the ocean pollution becoming increasingly more and more serious, the setup of this special day is aimed at raising people ’s awareness of ocean conservation. The ocean, which covers 70 percent of our planet, is not only the cradle of all lives but also an unexplored treasury with infinite resources.It serves as the foundation for much of the world ’s economy from tourism, fisheries to international shipping. Put simply,it ’s high time that we should take action to protect such an indispensable region of our mother nature.There are multiple methods ranging from enhancing the awareness of marine protection to regulating human activities such as making educational documentaries or arranging garbage-collection activities.Obviously, the achievement of a crystal-clear and sustainable ocean requires our joint effort.Every drop of water counts. 教师点评 [得分]14分 优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整,语言恰当,言之有理,很好地达到了倡议的目的; 2.文章结构合理,主次分明。首段结合题目中世界海洋日的背景,开启话题。第二段从生物多样性,丰富的资源,以及对人类经济生活的影响三个不同的角度展开阐述海洋的重要性。第三段以“it ’s high time...”(是时候该做什么)句型作为总起句,符合倡议的口吻。并继续列举具体的措施,从思想和行动上呼吁人们保护海洋。最后两句作为本文的结束,再次发出明确的倡议,Every drop of water counts.“每个人的努力都很有意义。” 3.要点比重分配合理、内容充实,并恰当地使用了从句、with复合结构等高分表达,锦上添花。 实战演练 针对校园最近散落不少垃圾,学校将举行“垃圾不落地”为主题的倡议活动。假定你校学生会主席,请你以学生会的名义给全体同学写一封倡议书,内容包括: 1.倡议的原因; 2.具体做法; 3.呼吁大家爱护环境。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear teachers and students, ____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students ’ Union 【参考范文】 Dear teachers and students, Recently, there has been more and more rubbish in our school.In order to beautify our campus, our school is to launch a campaign entitled “NO Littering on the Ground”. In the first place, we are supposed to avoid throwing rubbish onto the ground and cultivate a habit of throwing rubbish into the designated/ appointed bins.Besides, it is our obligation to pick up the litter on the ground whenever we see it.Most importantly, it is highly suggested that remind each other of the importance of maintaining a clean and beautiful school environment. It is high time that we took action right now and made a difference to our environment.Your contributions do count. Students ’ Union - 8 - 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $