北京市朝阳区2025-2026学年高三上学期期中质量检测英语试题写作范文学案

该高中英语导学案围绕“校园文化建设”创意征集邮件回复展开，包含五篇写作范文及词汇、句型解析，引导学生掌握建议类邮件的结构与表达，从基础词汇替换（如propose替代suggest）到高分句型（如“One good idea is to...”）搭建学习支架，衔接书面表达的基础与提升。 资料突出语言能力培养（词汇多样性、句型模板）和思维品质发展（创意设计与理由逻辑），范文提供具体可行的文化建设方案，附带翻译助理解，好单词、句型部分明确提分点，便于学生模仿应用，提升学习能力，高效掌握书面表达技巧。

北京市朝阳区2025~2026学年度第一学期期中质量检测高三英语写作范文 书面表达题目： 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim的学校正在组织“校园文化建设”(Shaping School Culture)的创意征集活动。Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就创意内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复， 内容包括: 1. 你的建议; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours , Li Hua (1) 范文一： Dear Jim,​ I’m glad to hear about your school’s activity and have two suggestions for you.​ First, you can propose setting up a school culture corner. Students can bring small items from their own cultures or interests such as books, photos and handcrafts. This helps show the diversity of campus culture and lets everyone learn from each other. Besides, organizing regular student culture sharing sessions is a good idea. Students can talk about their cultural traditions or hobbies in a relaxed way. It promotes communication and deepens mutual understanding among classmates. These ideas are easy to carry out and can make school culture richer. Hope they help you!​ Yours,​ Li Hua 1. 好单词​ · glad (adj.) 高兴的；愉快的​ · activity (n.) 活动​ · suggestion (n.) 建议​ · propose (v.) 提议；建议（可替代 suggest，体现表达多样性，写作提分点）​ · set up (短语) 建立；设立​ · culture (n.) 文化​ · corner (n.) 角落； · item (n.) 物品；物件​ · interest (n.) 兴趣；爱好​ · such as (短语) 例如​ · handcraft (n.) 手工艺品​ · help (v.) 帮助；有助于​ · show (v.) 展示；体现​ · diversity (n.) 多样性；差异​ · campus (n.) 校园​ · learn from (短语) 向…… 学习​ · besides (adv.) 此外；而且​ · organize (v.) 组织；安排​ · regular (adj.) 定期的；有规律的​ · sharing (n.) 分享​ · session (n.) 会议；（此处指 “分享会”）​ · talk about (短语) 谈论；讲述​ · tradition (n.) 传统​ · relaxed (adj.) 放松的；轻松的​ · way (n.) 方式；方法​ · promote (v.) 促进；推动​ · communication (n.) 沟通；交流​ · deepen (v.) 加深；深化​ · mutual (adj.) 相互的；彼此的​ · understanding (n.) 理解；了解​ · classmate (n.) 同班同学​ · easy (adj.) 容易的；简单的​ · carry out (短语) 实施；执行​ · make (v.) 使；让​ · richer (adj.) 更丰富的（rich 的比较级） 2. 写作句子结构 · 结构：First, you can propose doing...Students can bring...such as... · 翻译：首先，你可以提议做…… 学生可以带来…… 例如……​ · 例句：First, you can propose holding a book fair. Students can bring their favorite books such as storybooks and science books.​ · 例句翻译：首先，你可以提议举办一场书展。学生可以带来他们喜欢的书，例如故事书和科普书。​ · 结构：Besides, organizing...is a good idea. Students can talk...in a...way.​ · 翻译：此外，组织…… 是个好主意。学生可以用…… 的方式谈论……​ · 例句：Besides, organizing a English talk is a good idea. Students can talk about their travel experiences in a free way.​ · 例句翻译：此外，组织一场英语交流会是个好主意。学生可以用自由的方式谈论他们的旅行经历。​ · 结构：These ideas are easy to carry out and can make...richer.​ · 翻译：这些想法容易实施，还能让…… 更丰富。​ · 例句：These ideas are easy to carry out and can make our after-school life richer.​ · 例句翻译：这些想法容易实施，还能让我们的课余生活更丰富。 3. 全文翻译​ 亲爱的吉姆：​ 听说你们学校要举办这个活动，我很高兴，也想给你提两个建议。​ 首先，你可以提议设立一个校园文化角。学生们可以带来体现自己文化背景或兴趣爱好的小物件，比如书籍、照片和手工艺品。这有助于展现校园文化的多样性，也能让大家互相学习。此外，定期组织学生文化分享会也是个好主意。学生们可以用轻松的方式聊聊自己的文化传统或兴趣爱好，这能促进同学间的沟通，加深彼此的理解。​ 这些想法实施起来很简单，还能让校园文化更丰富。希望它们能帮到你！​ 此致​ 李华 (2) 范文二： Dear Jim,​ I’m happy to know about your school’s activity and want to share two ideas with you.​ One good idea is to create a campus culture theme wall. Students can draw pictures of their cultural elements or campus stories on it. This helps display different cultures clearly and builds a warm cultural atmosphere in school. Another suggestion is to hold cross-grade culture mutual help activities. Older students can teach younger ones traditional games or cultural knowledge. It lets students connect better and pass on interesting culture.​ These ideas are simple to do and can make your school culture more lively. Hope they work for you!​ Yours,​ Li Hua 1. 好单词​ · happy (adj.) 高兴的​ · know about (短语) 了解到​ · share (v.) 分享​ · idea (n.) 想法；创意​ · create (v.) 创建；制作​ · theme (n.) 主题​ · draw (v.) 绘画​ · cultural elements (短语) 文化元素​ · campus stories (短语) 校园故事​ · display (v.) 展示​ · clearly (adv.) 清晰地​ · build (v.) 营造；建立​ · warm (adj.) 温暖的​ · atmosphere (n.) 氛围​ · hold (v.) 举办​ · cross-grade (adj.) 跨年级的​ · mutual help (短语) 互助​ · older students (短语) 学长学姐​ · younger ones (短语) 学弟学妹​ · traditional games (短语) 传统游戏​ · connect (v.) 联系；沟通​ · better (adv.) 更好地​ · pass on (短语) 传承；传递​ · simple (adj.) 简单的​ · lively (adj.) 生动的；活跃的​ · work for (短语) 对…… 有用 2. 写作句子结构 · 结构：One good idea is to do...Students can...This helps...​ · 翻译：一个好创意是做…… 学生可以…… 这有助于……​ · 例句：One good idea is to set up a book sharing corner. Students can put their favorite books there. This helps everyone read more.​ · 例句翻译：一个好创意是设立读书分享角。学生可以把自己喜欢的书放在那里。这有助于大家读更多书。​ · 结构：Another suggestion is to hold...Older students can...It lets... · 翻译：另一个建议是举办…… 学长学姐可以…… 这能让……​ · 例句：Another suggestion is to hold a craft show. Older students can teach younger ones to make paper cuts. It lets them learn traditional skills.​ · 例句翻译：另一个建议是举办手工作品展。学长学姐可以教学弟学妹剪纸。这能让他们学习传统技能。​ · 结构：These ideas are simple to do and can make...more lively.​ · 翻译：这些创意做起来很简单，还能让…… 更活跃。​ · 例句：These ideas are simple to do and can make our class life more lively.​ · 例句翻译：这些创意做起来很简单，还能让我们的班级生活更活跃。 3. 全文翻译​ 亲爱的吉姆：​ 得知你们学校要举办这个活动，我很开心，想和你分享两个创意。​ 一个好创意是打造一面校园文化主题墙。学生可以在墙上画下自己熟悉的文化元素或校园故事，这能清晰地展示不同文化，还能在学校里营造出温暖的文化氛围。另一个建议是开展跨年级文化互助活动，学长学姐可以教学弟学妹传统游戏或文化知识，这能让学生们更好地建立联系，还能传承有趣的文化。​ 这些创意做起来很简单，还能让你们的校园文化更有活力。希望它们对你有帮助！ 此致​ 李华 (3) 范文三： Dear Jim,​ I’m glad to hear about your school’s activity and have two new ideas to share.​ One useful idea is to design a campus culture check-in activity. Mark spots with cultural meaning around the school, like the art wall or old trees. Students can take photos there and share stories behind the spots. This lets more people notice the school’s cultural details and feel proud of it. Another good plan is to hold a class culture show week. Each class can display their unique things, such as handwritten posters or group poems. It helps show different class styles and strengthens class unity.​ These ideas are easy to organize and will make your school culture more colorful. Hope they help!​ Yours,​ Li Hua 1. 好单词​ · glad (adj.) 高兴的​ · hear about (短语) 听说​ · new (adj.) 新的​ · share (v.) 分享​ · useful (adj.) 有用的​ · design (v.) 设计​ · check-in (n.) 打卡 · activity (n.) 活动​ · mark (v.) 标记​ · spot (n.) 地点；场所​ · cultural meaning (短语) 文化意义​ · around (prep.) 围绕；在…… 周围​ · art wall (短语) 艺术墙​ · old trees (短语) 古树​ · take photos (短语) 拍照​ · story (n.) 故事​ · behind (prep.) 在…… 背后​ · notice (v.) 注意到​ · detail (n.) 细节​ · feel proud of (短语) 为…… 感到自豪​ · plan (n.) 计划；方案​ · hold (v.) 举办​ · class culture show week (短语) 班级文化展示周​ · each (adj.) 每个​ · display (v.) 展示​ · unique (adj.) 独特的​ · handwritten posters (短语) 手写海报​ · group poems (短语) 小组诗歌​ · style (n.) 风格​ · strengthen (v.) 加强；增强​ · class unity (短语) 班级凝聚力​ · organize (v.) 组织​ · colorful (adj.) 丰富多彩的 2. 写作句子结构 · 结构：One useful idea is to design...Mark...Students can...This lets... · 翻译：一个实用的创意是设计…… 标记…… 学生可以…… 这能让……​ · 例句：One useful idea is to design a reading month. Mark book corners in each floor. Students can read and share feelings. This lets more people love reading.​ · 例句翻译：一个实用的创意是设计读书月。在每一层标记读书角。学生可以阅读并分享感受。这能让更多人热爱阅读。​ · 结构：Another good plan is to hold...Each class can...It helps...​ · 翻译：另一个好方案是举办…… 每个班级可以…… 这有助于……​ · 例句：Another good plan is to hold a sports day. Each class can show their team games. It helps improve team spirit.​ · 例句翻译：另一个好方案是举办运动会。每个班级可以展示他们的团队项目。这有助于提升团队精神。​ · 结构：These ideas are easy to organize and will make...more colorful.​ · 翻译：这些创意容易组织，还能让…… 更丰富多彩。​ · 例句：These ideas are easy to organize and will make our school life more colorful.​ · 例句翻译：这些创意容易组织，还能让我们的校园生活更丰富多彩。 3. 全文翻译​ 亲爱的吉姆：​ 听说你们学校要举办这个活动，我很高兴，有两个新创意想和你分享。​ 一个实用的创意是设计校园文化打卡活动。在学校里标记有文化意义的地点，比如艺术墙或古树。学生可以在这些地方拍照，并分享地点背后的故事。这能让更多人留意到学校的文化细节，为学校感到自豪。另一个好方案是举办班级文化展示周，每个班级可以展示自己的特色物品，比如手写海报或小组诗歌。这有助于展现不同班级的风格，增强班级凝聚力。​ 这些创意容易组织，还能让你们的校园文化更丰富多彩。希望对你有帮助！​ 此致​ 李华 (4) 范文四： Dear Jim,​ I’m happy to know about your school’s activity and want to share two practical ideas.​ One practical idea is to hold campus culture lunch meetings. During lunchtime, students can sit together and talk about their hometown foods or traditional stories. This allows everyone to learn about different cultures in a natural way, without extra time spent. Another idea is to set up a class culture radio time. Each class takes turns sharing their class stories or slogans on the school radio. It spreads class culture to the whole school and builds a closer campus community.​ These ideas fit daily school life well and will make your school culture warmer. Hope they work for you!​ Yours,​ Li Hua 1. 好单词​ · happy (adj.) 高兴的​ · know about (短语) 了解到​ · practical (adj.) 实用的​ · share (v.) 分享​ · hold (v.) 举办​ · campus culture lunch meetings (短语) 校园文化午餐会​ · during (prep.) 在…… 期间​ · lunchtime (n.) 午餐时间​ · sit together (短语) 坐在一起​ · talk about (短语) 谈论​ · hometown (n.) 家乡​ · food (n.) 食物​ · traditional stories (短语) 传统故事​ · allow (v.) 允许；使能够​ · learn about (短语) 了解​ · different (adj.) 不同的​ · natural (adj.) 自然的​ · way (n.) 方式​ · without (prep.) 没有​ · extra (adj.) 额外的​ · time spent (短语) 花费的时间​ · set up (短语) 设立；安排​ · class culture radio time (短语) 班级文化广播时段​ · take turns (短语) 轮流​ · slogan (n.) 口号​ · school radio (短语) 校园广播​ · spread (v.) 传播​ · whole (adj.) 整个的​ · build (v.) 建立；营造​ · closer (adj.) 更紧密的（close 的比较级）​ · campus community (短语) 校园共同体​ · fit (v.) 适合；契合​ · daily (adj.) 日常的​ · warmer (adj.) 更温暖的（warm 的比较级） 2. 写作句子结构​ · 结构：One practical idea is to hold...During...Students can...This allows...​ · 翻译：一个实用的创意是举办…… 在…… 期间，学生可以…… 这能让……​ · 例句：One practical idea is to hold a book talk. During break time, students can share their favorite books. This allows everyone to find more good books.​ · 例句翻译：一个实用的创意是举办读书分享会。在课间，学生可以分享自己喜欢的书。这能让大家找到更多好书。​ · 结构：Another idea is to set up...Each class takes turns...It spreads... · 翻译：另一个创意是设立…… 每个班级轮流…… 这能传播……​ · 例句：Another idea is to set up a class news corner. Each class takes turns posting their class news. It spreads interesting things to all students.​ · 例句翻译：另一个创意是设立班级新闻角。每个班级轮流张贴自己的班级新闻。这能把有趣的事传播给所有学生。​ · 结构：These ideas fit...well and will make...warmer.​ · 翻译：这些创意很契合…… 还能让…… 更温暖。​ · 例句：These ideas fit our class life well and will make our class atmosphere warmer.​ · 例句翻译：这些创意很契合我们的班级生活，还能让班级氛围更温暖。 3. 全文翻译​ 亲爱的吉姆：​ 得知你们学校要举办这个活动，我很开心，想和你分享两个实用的创意。​ 一个实用的创意是举办校园文化午餐会。午餐时间，学生可以坐在一起，聊聊家乡美食或传统故事。这能让大家用自然的方式了解不同文化，不用额外花费时间。另一个创意是设立班级文化广播时段，每个班级轮流在校园广播里分享自己的班级故事或口号。这能把班级文化传播到全校，还能营造更紧密的校园共同体氛围。 这些创意很契合学校日常生活，还能让你们的校园文化更温暖。希望它们对你有帮助！​ 此致​ 李华 (5) 范文五： Dear Jim, I’m happy to hear about your school’s upcoming event. Here are two fresh ideas you might find useful. First, you could suggest holding a Campus Culture Practice Day. Students can join in small cultural activities, such as creating traditional crafts or presenting displays of local culture. This allows them to gain hands-on experience rather than just listening in class. Second, another great plan is to encourage each class to improve its Class Culture Corner. They could add group photos, class goal cards, or some handmade items. This will strengthen the sense of belonging and make the classroom environment more lively. These ideas are simple to carry out and will surely enrich your school’s cultural life. Hope my suggestions are helpful! Yours, Li Hua 1. 好单词​ · happy (adj.) 高兴的 · hear about (短语) 听说 · upcoming (adj.) 即将到来的 · event (n.) 活动 · fresh (adj.) 新的 · useful (adj.) 有用的 · suggest (v.) 建议 · hold (v.) 举办 · campus culture practice day (短语) 校园文化实践日 · join in (短语) 参与 · cultural activities (短语) 文化活动 · create (v.) 创造 · traditional crafts (短语) 传统手工艺 · present (v.) 展示 · local culture (短语) 本土文化 · gain (v.) 获得 · hands-on experience (短语) 亲身实践 · rather than (短语) 而不是 · encourage (v.) 鼓励 · improve (v.) 改善 · class culture corner (短语) 班级文化角 · group photos (短语) 集体照 · class goal cards (短语) 班级目标卡片 · handmade items (短语) 手工作品 · strengthen (v.) 加强 · sense of belonging (短语) 归属感 · classroom environment (短语) 班级环境 · simple (adj.) 简单的 · enrich (v.) 丰富 · cultural life (短语) 文化生活 2. 写作句子结构​ · 结结构：First, you could suggest holding… Students can join in… This allows them to… · 翻译：首先，你可以建议举办……学生可以参与……这能让他们…… · 例句：First, you could holding an English Corner. Students can join in group discussions. This allows them to practice speaking in a relaxed setting. · 例句翻译：首先，你可以建议举办英语角。学生可以参与小组讨论。这能让他们在轻松的环境中练习口语。 · 结构：Second, another great plan is to encourage each class to… They could add… This will strengthen… · 翻译：其次，另一个好计划是鼓励每个班级……他们可以添加……这将加强…… · 例句：Second, another great plan is to encourage each class to set up a reading corner. They could add books and posters. This will strengthen the reading atmosphere. · 例句翻译：其次，另一个好计划是鼓励每个班级设立一个阅读角。他们可以添加书籍和张贴海报。这将加强阅读氛围。 · 结构：These ideas are simple to carry out and will surely enrich… · 翻译：这些想法实施起来简单，而且一定会丰富…… · 例句：These ideas are simple to carry out and will surely enrich our club activities. · 例句翻译：这些想法实施起来简单，而且一定会丰富我们的社团活动。 3. 全文翻译​ 亲爱的吉姆： 听说你们学校即将举办活动，我很高兴。这里有两个新的想法，也许对你有用。 首先，你可以建议举办一个“校园文化实践日”。学生可以参与一些小型文化活动，例如制作传统手工艺品或展示本土文化。这能让他们通过亲身实践来学习，而不只是在课堂上听讲。其次，另一个很好的计划是鼓励每个班级改造“班级文化角”。他们可以添加集体照片、班级目标卡片或一些手工作品。这将增强班级归属感，并让班级氛围更加活跃。 这些想法实施起来很简单，也一定能丰富你们学校的文化生活。希望我的建议能帮到你！ 此致 李华 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $