专题09 书面表达-2025-2026学年沪教版九年级英语上册期中重难点专项训练

2025-2026学年沪教版九年级英语上册期中重难点专项训练 专题09 书面表达 1．Teen Life Magazine 杂志向青少年征稿，请你根据以下图式，结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，描述你的家庭生活，并表达你的观点。 要求：（1）短文应包括图中要点，并适当拓展。（2）词数不少于80词，短文开头已经给出，不计入总字数，文中不得出现个人信息。 My family life Family life is important for us. I would like to __________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jason下学期将以交换生的身份来广州生活学习，为了帮助他更好地了解中国及广州的文化，你打算邀请他暑假来广州并寄宿到你家，请根据以下内容提示写一封信向他介绍一下你的家庭生活，可进行适当发挥。 (注意：字数 80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 ) Family members 家庭成员 爸爸、妈妈、我的妹妹和我 Family rules 家庭规则 1. 早睡早起，锻炼身体； 2. 我要分担家务，比如：洗碗、熨衣服； 3. 周一至周五不能使用电子产品 (electronic products), 周末玩电脑游戏不能超过1小时； ……(请补充1﹣2点) Family activities 家庭活动 ……(请补充2点) Feelings 对家庭的感受 相亲相爱、互相支持 (support each other)； ……(请补充) Dear Jason, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．进入初三以来，你和你的同学都遇到了不少问题，作为班长李华，你收集了同学们遇到的问题，将以邮件的形式发送到校报邮箱。请根据以下表格提示，陈述问题，适当补充细节，并向Aunt Judy寻求帮助和建议。 Students Problems Amy 1. 和父母沟通有困难 2. 父母制定许多规则，让我受不了。比如，…… (至少举一个例子) Peter 1. 压力很大，经常考试不合格，…… 2. 对运动不感兴趣，…… Me (请补充至少一个问题并谈谈自己的感受) 要求： 1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。 要求： Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，跟同学相处不好， 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友 2. ？(补充) 中文难学，不了解中国文化 1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文 2. ？(补充) 1. 回信应包括所有要点； 2. 词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 5．学校的英语广播站正在征集稿件，内容是如果你有向一位伟大的历史人物提问的机会，你会选择谁？请以“My Question to a Great Person”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。内容提示： 1. 你会向哪位伟大的历史人物提问； 2. 你将提一个什么问题以及提问此问题的原因； 3. 这个人对你的影响。 作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题和开头已给出，不计入词数。 My Question to a Great Person History has many great persons. If I had a chance to ask a question to one of them, I would like to ask_________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．深度求索（DeepSeek）是中国领先的人工智能公司，DeepSeek创始人梁文锋的成长故事令人敬佩。请以“The Inspiring Story of Liang Wenfeng”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，在班级“榜样力量”主题班会上分享。 Liang Wenfeng Experiences 1. born, small village, interested in math 2. 2002, study computer science, Zhejiang University 3. challenge, try many times Achievement Create DeepSeek What can we learn? 1. Interest→the best teacher 2.... 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词（作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可根据要点适当拓展。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 The Inspiring Story of Liang Wenfeng Good morning, everyone! Today, I am going to share the story of Liang Wenfeng._____________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．我校第十六届英语文化节“Learn English, Reach Stars”拉开帷幕，为营造良好的英语学习氛围，用英语讲好身边故事，初三年级开展主题为“A Role Model in My Heart”的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的楷模人物。 要点提示： 1）心中楷模的简介； 2)）Ta的成就或事迹； 3）你钦佩或喜欢Ta的理由； 写作要求： 1）须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰； 2）词数：80左右（开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 A Role Model in My Heart My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. ______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 8．为促进学生身心健康成长，深圳市中小学正在全面推行“每天一节体育课”。假定你是学校英语报小记者，请根据以下要点完成一篇新闻报道。 要点：(1)介绍“每天一节体育课”的背景，如落实时间、活动目的等基本信息； (2)概括学校体育课开设情况：①上课频率；②上课形式和内容； (3)总结同学们的感受及看法。 要求：(1)要点齐全，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；(3)条理清晰， 语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；(4)词数80词左右。 参考词汇：每天一节体育课 daily PE class Daily PE Classes at Our School _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是李华，最近你在选择课外活动时与父母产生了分歧——你想参加学校的篮球队，而父母认为训练和比赛会占用你太多学习时间。这让你感到很烦恼。请给学校英语报社的“Agony Aunt”专栏写一封信，分享你的烦恼和做过的尝试，并寻求建议。 写作要求： 1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Agony Aunt, I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 10．你是深圳中学学生李华，你发现很多初三学生不会安排时间，以至于作业写不完，或需要熬夜写作业等。校报邀请你给学弟学妹们写一封建议信，告诉学弟学妹们如何合理安排时间。要点已给出，可以自行发挥增加细节以充实文章。 要点： 1. 学会制定学习计划； 2. 远离手机等电子产品，专注学习； 3. 充分利用好周末时间。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 开头已给出，注意衔接。 How to manage time better As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： My family life Family life is important for us. I would like to tell you something about my family life. There are three people in my family: my mother, my father and I. In order to help me grow healthily, my parents make some family rules. First, we must honest to others. Second, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. My family members keep the tradition to have the gathering every weekend. These activities help us to keep the close relationship. We communicate with each other and share our opinion. I cherish the close and supportive relationships among my family members, which make me feel loved and valued. To improve my family life, I want to spend quality time together with my family members. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步、根据提示，介绍自己的家庭生活是什么样子的； 第三步、介绍你最喜欢家庭生活的哪一点。 第四步、介绍如何改善家庭生活。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to 想要 ②in order to为了 ③such as例如 ④communicate with sb.与某人沟通 [高分句型] ①I cherish the close and supportive relationships among my family members, which make me feel loved and valued.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 2．例文 Dear Jason, I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now I would like to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my  sister and I. In my family, we should follow some rules. I have to go to bed early and get up early. I have to do sports every day. I have to help my mother with the housework, such as washing dishes, ironing clothes and so on. I can’t use electronics from Monday to Friday. On weekends, I can’t play computer games for more than one hour. There are some activities in my family. We have a family game every Friday night. Sometimes we have a picnic in the park on weekends. I think my family members love each other and support each other. So be sure to come to my house. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请补充”的要求，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山表达自己的感受并向对方发出邀请； 第二步，具体介绍自己的家庭情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①get used to习惯于 ②go to bed early and get up early早睡早起 ③such as例如 ④and so on等等 [高分句型] ①To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. (动词不定式作目的状语，宾语和补语) ②I think my family members love each other and support each other. (含有宾语从句的复合句) 3．例文： Dear Aunt Judy, Since entering Junior Three, my classmates and I have problems. I’m writing to ask for your advice. Amy has trouble communicating with her parents. Her parents make many rules she can’t stand, like not letting her hang out with friends at night. Peter is very stressed. He often fails exams and feels upset. He’s not interested in sports, so he seldom exercises. I have too much homework, so I can’t develop my hobbies. I feel anxious. Could you give us some suggestions? Thank you. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称和第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍写信目的； 第二步，陈述艾米、彼得和自己的问题； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing做某事有麻烦 ②hang out闲逛 ③develop my hobbies发展我的爱好 [高分句型] ①Her parents make many rules she can’t stand, like not letting her hang out with friends at night. (定语从句) ②He’s not interested in sports, so he seldom exercises. (so并列句) 4．例文 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to take an active part in class discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find it challenging to learn Chinese and you are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better. I hope these suggestions can help you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章需涵盖所有要点，即Ben面临的问题、针对问题的建议及理由，同时需适当补充内容，使文章更加充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给出，直接进入主题，即描述Ben提到的问题。 第二步，针对Ben提到的“朋友少，跟同学相处不好，感觉孤单”的问题，提出参加学校社团和积极参与课堂讨论及小组活动的建议；针对“中文难学，不了解中国文化”的问题，提出多阅读中文故事、新闻以及观看中文电影和电视节目的建议。 第三步，最后表达希望自己的建议能够对Ben有所帮助的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing sth 做某事有困难 ②get used to 习惯于 ③take an active part in 积极参加 ④help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 ⑤be unfamiliar with 对……不熟悉 [高分句型] ①You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates.（because of 后接动名词短语作原因状语） ②Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.（动名词短语作介词besides的宾语） 5．例文 My Question to a Great Person History has many great persons. If I had a chance to ask a question to one of them, I would ask Lu Xun. Lu Xun is one of the most famous writers in China and he wrote many famous novels. If I could ask a question, I would ask about how to write good articles. Because I am very interested in writing articles, I want him to give me some advice. When I was a child, I didn’t like reading books. But one day, I read a story about Lu Xun. I began to read the novels written by him. Then I became more and more interested in reading. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍向一位伟大的历史人物提问的问题，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍你会向哪位伟大的历史人物提问； 第二步，介绍你将提问一个什么问题以及提问此问题的原因； 第三步，介绍这个人对你的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the+最高级+名词复数：最……的……之一 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③more and more越来越 [高分句型] ①If I could ask a question, I would ask about how to write good articles. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②When I was a child, I didn’t like reading books. (when引导的时间状语从句) 6．例文 The Inspiring Story of Liang Wenfeng Good morning, everyone! Today, I am going to share the story of Liang Wenfeng. He is the founder of DeepSeek, a leading AI company in China. His journey is truly inspiring. Liang Wenfeng was born in a small village. As a child, he loved math and was always curious about how things worked. In 2002, he went to Zhejiang University to study computer science. It was not easy for him, but he never gave up. He faced many challenges but kept trying until he succeeded. His hard work paid off when he created DeepSeek. The company is now a leader in artificial intelligence. His story teaches us two important lessons. First, interest is the best teacher. If we love what we do, we will work harder and achieve more. Second, never be afraid of failure. Keep trying, and you will find success. Let’s learn from Liang Wenfeng’s story and work hard to follow our dreams. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍梁文锋的经历； 第二步，介绍他的成就； 第三步，介绍我们从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①pay off取得回报 ②artificial intelligence人工智能 [高分句型] ①If we love what we do, we will work harder and achieve more. (if引导条件状语从句) ②Keep trying, and you will find success. (祈使句) 7．例文： A Role Model in My Heart My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. Her name is Quan Hongchan, a 17-year-old girl who was born in a poor family in Zhanjiang on March 28, 2007. At the age of seven, she began to receive diving training. Because of her outstanding performance, she won many medals. In 2023 Hangzhou Asian Games and the 2024 Paris Olympics, she tries her best to outdo herself and achieves a remarkable feat again.   I think she sets an excellent example for me and I should learn from her. With her hard work and endless effort, she never gives up however bitter the life is. As a student, I should learn to be responsible and independent to take care of my family. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引入作者身边的好榜样的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容：人物概况、主要事迹等； 第三步，谈谈你的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①At the age of在……岁时 ②because of因为，由于 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Her name is Quan Hongchan, a 17-year-old girl who was born in a poor family in Zhanjiang on March 28, 2007. （定语从句） ②I think she sets an excellent example for me and I should learn from her.（宾语从句） 8．例文 Daily PE Classes at Our School To improve students’ health, primary schools and junior high schools in Shenzhen have had a daily PE class since the beginning of this term. In our school, students also have a PE class every day.       Besides three regular PE classes, students have one music-based exercise class and one sports game class every week. They can join in colourful sports activities, like basketball, table tennis, rope skipping, swimming and kung fu at school. Among them, one of the students’ favourite sports is basketball. Not only can it offer students a chance to communicate with teammates in sports, but it also helps improve their learning efficiency after playing basketball.      “I’m glad that the daily PE classes enrich my school life as well as reduce my stress,” said Liu Xiaojun, an eighth grader. And most students hold the same idea as Liu. They think they are good for their physical and mental health. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇新闻报道； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，条理清晰，语句连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述学校每天一节体育课开设情况； 第二步，介绍一项最受同学们欢迎的体育活动； 第三步，总结同学们的感受及看法。 [亮点词汇] ①join in加入 ②communicate with与……交流 ③learning efficiency学习效率 [高分句型] ①Not only can it offer students a chance to communicate with teammates in sports, but it also helps improve their learning efficiency after playing basketball.（not only...but also句型，倒装句） ②They think they are good for their physical and mental health.（宾语从句） 9．例文 Dear Agony Aunt, I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I have a problem and need your advice. I really want to join our school basketball team. It’s fun and keeps me healthy. But my parents disagree. They think the training and competitions will take too much study time. I feel upset because basketball is important to me. I tried talking to them. I made a plan showing I will finish homework first. But they are still worried. What can I do to make them understand? I need your help.   I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you.   Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的信息，引入主题； 第二步，介绍自己的烦恼和做过的尝试； 第三步，请求对方给予建议。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②make a plan制定计划 [高分句型] I feel upset because basketball is important to me.（because引导的原因状语从句） 10．例文 How to manage time better As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study so that we have trouble in managing our time, resulting in unfinished homework or having to stay up late. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, we are supposed to learn to make a study plan, outline what tasks need to be done each day and allocate specific time slots for different subjects, from which we can be more organized. Moreover, it is helpful for us to keep away from mobile phones and other electronic products when studying, because they are major distractions. Therefore, staying focused on our study materials is also necessary. Last but not least, we can also need to make good use of weekends. Besides finishing homework, we can review what we’ve learned during the week and preview new knowledge. Above all, time management is crucial for your study. I hope these suggestions can be helpful to you and you can do better in your study! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封建议信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，提出现在学生们面临的时间安排问题； 第二步，具体阐述如何合理安排时间，从制定学习计划、远离电子产品、充分利用周末时间等方面进行阐述； 第三步，书写结语，表达对同学们合理安排自己时间，取得进步的美好愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy with sth.忙于做某事 ②stay up late熬夜 ③keep away from远离 ④focus on专注于 [高分句型] ①As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study so that we have trouble in managing our time, resulting in unfinished homework or having to stay up late.（结果状语从句） ②Moreover, it is helpful for us to keep away from mobile phones and other electronic products when studying, because they are major distractions.（it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型、原因状语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $