内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Mom, what’s this?” my little daughter in the living room called and pointed to an instrument box. “Oh, it’s my flute(长笛),” I said and opened it. There was the old silver flute that I played years ago. “Play it, Mom.” my daughter asked excitedly.
“Oh, I don’t know whether I’ve forgotten how to play it,” I said. Then, I was lost in thought. The flute carried me back to the days when I was thirteen. That year, because of my dad’s new job, in the middle term. I moved to a new school and left my old friends. Besides, I was a socially awkward girl. So in the new school, I became very lonely and bored.
Two weeks after I went there, the school band was wanting new members. I extremely wished to join it. I loved music. Joining the band could help change my boring school life. And I could meet people with the same hobby, which would be much easier for me to make new friends. But to join the band, each member needed to buy an instrument and take lessons to learn it. My family was on a tight budget at that time. So I didn’t think my parents would support my wish. Besides, I didn’t want to put further financial pressure on my parents.
That day, I arrived home after school, tired and sad. It was another tough day. My dad was reading the newspaper on the sofa “Hi,” he said. “Hi, Dad,” I answered softly. “What’s the matter?” he questioned, finding there was something wrong with me. “Nothing, Dad,” I replied. “Come over here,” he said, asking me to sit down beside him.
He looked at me as I sat down. Then, he talked with me, wishing to know what was troubling me. Still, I didn’t want to tell him about my loneliness at my new school and my big wish to join the band. However, after he kept asking. I finally told him. Not wanting him to feel stressed, I added I could ultimately deal with my problem without joining the band.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Just as I finished my words, my dad dropped the paper and stood up.__________________ ______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Then, my dad and I walked out of the store, with me carrying the beautiful flute.
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1. 原文故事:
一支长笛把作者的思绪带回了13岁那年。那年作者刚转到新学校,但因为性格内向而交不到朋友。由于喜欢音乐,作者想加入学校乐队并期待借此机会交到新朋友。但作者加入乐队的话需要买乐器,由于家境不好,这让作者犯难。虽然在父亲的追问下,作者说出了自己的愿望,但为了不让他感到有压力,作者说可以自己解决问题。
2.段落续写
①根据第1段首句 Just as I finished my words, my dad dropped the paper and stood up.可知,第1段可描写父亲同意给作者买长笛,以及父女俩去买长笛的场景。
②根据第2段首句Then, my dad and I walked out of the store, with me carrying the beautiful flute.可知,第2段可描写作者参加了乐队并交到了新朋友,以及作者女儿的话使作者停止回忆.
3.续写线索
父亲站起来→父亲同意买长笛→作者和父亲一起挑选长笛→作者拿着漂亮的长笛走出商店→作者交到新朋友→女儿继续要求作者演奏长笛→作者吹长笛→作者的感悟
4. 范文:
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Just as I finished my words, my dad dropped the paper and stood up. He patted me on the shoulder, saying in a firm voice, "Your wish isn’t a burden , kid. Let’s get the instrument you love." Hearing his words, I felt a great sense of warmth welling up in my heart, and I could barely hold back tears. With the afternoon breeze brushing our cheeks gently, we walked to a music store downtown. Among the various instruments on the shelves, a silver flute caught my eye the moment we entered. But when I glanced at the price tag, my throat tightened. Nervous, I tugged lightly at Dad’s sleeve and whispered, "Dad, it’s too expensive..." "It suits you," Dad said. He picked up the flute, handed it to the shopkeeper, and paid without hesitation.
Paragraph 2
Then, my dad and I walked out of the store, with me carrying the beautiful flute. My fingers brushed its cool surface, a broad smile spreading across my face. Hardly had I arrived home when I couldn’t wait to practise it. The next day, I took the flute to the school and managed to join the band. It wasn’t long before I made many new friends who shared the same hobby. Laughter and music filled my days, and loneliness faded away. Now, holding this old silver flute again with my daughter watching eagerly beside me,I realized it wasn’t merely a metal instrument but Dad’s silent love that turned my lonely, gray days in the new school into bright, joyful ones.
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